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Section Ⅳ Writing——写一则展览通知
本单元的写作任务是写一则展览通知。通知分为书面通知和口头通知。通知一般用于公布即将发生的事情,如宣布举行比赛,举办讲座、画展、晚会,召开研讨会等。写通知的关键是明确地告知读者活动的必要信息,如时间、地点、活动内容、报名方式及其他细节等。写作架构通常如下:
【素材积累】
一、常用词汇
①appreciation n. 欣赏,鉴赏
②promote v. 促进;提升
③various adj. 各种各样的
④intention n. 意图
⑤present v. 呈现,展示
⑥opportunity n. 机会
⑦schedule n. 时间表;日程表
⑧on show/exhibition/display 在展览,在展出
⑨be recognised as... 被公认是……
in advance 提前
⑪around the corner 即将到来
⑫have a better understanding of 更好地理解
二、必备句式
①A notice is given that some activities will be carried out to celebrate Labor Day from April 27 to 29,according to our school schedule.
4月27日至29日,根据学校安排,我校将开展劳动节相关活动,特此通知。
②May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.
大家注意一下。我要宣布一件事。
③Attention,please!I have something important to tell you.
请注意!我有重要的事要告诉你们。
④The significance of this event is to promote traditional Chinese culture.
这项活动的重要性在于弘扬中国传统文化。
⑤All the students are requested to attend the meeting to be held in the meeting room on the third floor at 6:30 this Wednesday.
所有的学生都要参加这周三6:30在三楼会议室举行的会议。
⑥By the exhibition,we can broaden our view and gain knowledge of Chinese culture.
通过这次展览,我们能够开阔视野,了解关于中国文化的知识。
⑦Please get everything ready ahead of time.Don't be late.
请提前做好准备,不要迟到。
⑧Those who are interested in the activity are welcome.
欢迎那些对这项活动感兴趣的人。
⑨I am sure you will have a good time there.
我相信你在那里会玩得很开心的。
【典例研析】
假如你是李华,是某个美术俱乐部的负责人,请你写一则展览通知,告知俱乐部成员要去参观一个中国画画展的事情。通知的内容需包含以下信息:
1.展览的时间、地点;
2.展览的内容;
3.观看展览时的注意事项。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.题目已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
An Art Exhibition Announcement
Step 1 审题谋篇·定框架
定人称
以第三人称为主
定时态
以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
定框架
第一段:引入话题;
第二段:介绍画展的时间、地点、内容;
第三段:表达期望或祝愿。
Step 2 要点翻译·用佳句
1.我要宣布一件事。
I have an announcement to make.
2.展览最值得欣赏的亮点是一幅名画。
The highlight most worthy of being appreciated on exhibition is one famous painting.
3.这幅画是唐寅创作的。
The painting was created by Tang Yin.
[升级] 用过去分词短语作后置定语合并句2和句3
The highlight most worthy of being appreciated on exhibition is one famous painting created by Tang Yin.
4.唐寅被公认是中国有史以来最伟大的画家之一。
Tang Yin is recognised as one of the greatest artists China has ever known.
5.我们还会欣赏其他画家的作品。
We will enjoy some other painters' works.
6.他们的作品也非常有趣。
Their works are also very interesting.
[升级] 用非限制性定语从句合并句5和句6
We will enjoy some other painters' works, which are also very interesting.
7.展览将于上午8:30之后停止入场。
No one will be admitted to/into the exhibition after 8:30 a.m.
8.希望你们能学到很多东西并玩得开心。
I hope you'll learn much and have a good time/enjoy yourselves.
Step 3 连句成篇·达美文
An Art Exhibition Announcement
Attention,please!I have an announcement to make.
We will go to see a Chinese painting exhibition next Sunday.The highlight most worthy of being appreciated on exhibition is one famous painting created by Tang Yin,who is recognised as one of the greatest artists China has ever known.We will enjoy some other painters' works,which are also very interesting.No photos or food and drink are allowed in the exhibition.
Please wait at the school gate at 7:00 a.m.No one will be admitted to the exhibition after 8:30 a.m.Please be on time!I hope you'll learn much and have a good time.
人物
描写
①reputation n.名誉;名声
②noble n.贵族成员;出身高贵的人 adj.崇高的;宏伟的;高贵的
③rank n.地位;级别;行列 vt.& vi.把……分等级;使排成行
④outer adj.外表的;外边的;外围的
⑤humble adj.谦逊的;虚心的;卑微的
⑥bronze n.青铜;深红褐色 adj.青铜色的;深红褐色的
⑦set apart from 使与众不同;使突出;使优于……
⑧be fond of 喜爱;喜欢
⑨be worthy of 值得
动作
描写
①purchase vt.购买;采购 n.购买;购买的东西
②emerge vi.& vt.出现;浮现;暴露
③convey vt.表达;传递(思想、感情等);传送
④criticise vi.& vt.批评;指责;评价
⑤decline n.(数量、价格、质量等的)减少;下降;衰落
vi.& vt.减少;下降;衰落;谢绝
⑥guarantee vt.保证;确保;肯定……必然发生 n.保证;保修单;担保物
⑦bring...to life 赋予……生命;使……鲜活起来
[语段情景用] 尝试用本单元词汇完成续写片段
班长是一个谦逊又可靠的男孩,脸上经常浮现出灿烂的笑容。他独特的品质让他与众不同,因此获得了许多赞誉。他喜欢弹钢琴,但这并不影响他的学习。几乎每次考试他都名列全班第一。他富有创造力,有幽默感,总能保证课堂上气氛活跃、学生有积极性。即使有人违反班规,他也从不会当众批评他/她。简言之,我们的班长配得上他的声望。我们都想打心底里向他表达深深的敬意。
Our monitor is 1.a humble and reliable boy, a bright smile 2.often emerging on his face.His unique qualities 3.set him apart from others, thus gaining him lots of praise.4.He's fond of playing the piano, but this doesn't affect his study.5.He ranks first in our class in almost every examination.He is creative and has a sense of humour, 6.which can always guarantee that the classroom is brought to life and the students are motivated.Even if someone breaks the class regulations, 7.he will never criticize him/her in public.In brief, our monitor 8.is worthy of his reputation.All of us want 9.to convey our deep respect to him from the bottom of our hearts.
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