内容正文:
Section Ⅲ Integrated skills——给未来的人写一封信
[文体感知]
本文要求给未来的人写一封信,写信的目的主要介绍自己所处时代的状况,另外由此可以设想未来,但语气不宜过于肯定。
[写作素材]
1.The development of science and technology makes our life more comfortable and convenient.
科学技术的发展使我们的生活更加舒适和方便。
2.Modern telecommunication shortens the distance between people and makes communication much easier.
现代电信缩短了人们之间的距离,使沟通更容易。
3.Internet is widely used now not only for collection of abundant information but also for correspondence.
互联网现在被广泛使用,不仅用于收集丰富的信息,而且用于通信。
4.Email,the most effective communication device now,is becoming very popular.
电子邮件,现在最有效的通讯工具,正变得非常流行。
5.Telephone and mobile phone make contact more convenient than before.
电话和手机使联系比以前更方便。
6.The journey to outer space and other planets is not a dream any more.
到外太空和其他行星的旅行不再是一个梦想。
7.I hope that in your time, life will be more convenient.
希望在你的时代,生活会更方便。
[典题示例]
假定你是李华,在国际科学与和平周到来之际,校刊英语栏目举行征文比赛,请你以“写给未来的朋友”为题写一篇征文稿,内容包括:
1.写信的目的;
2.介绍科技发展现状;
3.你的愿望。
注意: 1.词数80左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
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Yours,
Li Hua
第一步 学会审题谋篇
写作类型
应用文
人称时态
第一人称为主和一般现在时
写作要点
1.写作目的;
2.详细描述地球上当前的科技状态;
3.提出期望。
第二步 保基础分——会写基本句
1.国际科学与和平周即将到来。
International Week of Science and Peace is_approaching.
2.我写信是想告诉你地球上科学技术的现状。
I'm_writing_to_tell_you_the current state of science and technology on earth.
3.人工智能正在深入到各个方面,它正在帮助我们完成很多工作。
AI is going deep into all aspects,and it_is_helping_us_to_complete_lots_of_work.
4.这项工作以前是不能做的。
The work could_not_be_done_before.
5.我希望在你的时代,生活将会更加方便,人们可以在许多星球之间自由旅行。
I hope that in your time,life_will_be_more_convenient_and people can travel freely between many planets.
第三步 创设亮点——试写高级句
6.用with复合结构合并句1和2,并对句1进行词汇升级。
With_International_Week_of_Science_and_Peace_around_the_corner,I'm_writing_to_tell_you_the_current_state_of_science_and_technology_on_earth.
7.用定语从句合并句3和句4。
AI_is_going_deep_into_all_aspects,and_it_is_helping_us_to_complete_lots_of_work_that_could_not_be_done_before.
第四步 衔接成篇得高分
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[参考范文]
Dear friends,
With International Week of Science and Peace around the corner,I'm writing to tell you the current state of science and technology on earth.
Nowadays,we use machines or robots for almost everything.AI is going deep into all aspects,and it is helping us to complete lots of work that could not be done before.Our spacecraft can reach the moon and Venus. Our underwater vehicles can reach every place under the sea.
I hope that in your time,life will be more convenient and people can travel freely between many planets. How fascinating it will be!
Yours,
Li Hua
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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