Unit2 Section Ⅳ Writing——写一篇读后感-【正禾一本通】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第二册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版2019）

Unit 2 Improving yourself 主题语境：人与自我——不断完善自我认知、提升自我管理能力 Section Ⅳ　 Writing—写一篇读后感 目录/CONTENTS 教考衔接——教材词汇练续写 表达——即境活用 双写培优 02 01 表达——即境活用 双写培优 A woodcutter turned to an old man when he couldn't cut down as many trees as he used to, although he tried even harder. Knowing the woodcutter had not sharpened his axe for a long time, the old man advised him to sharpen it at once. In the fast­paced world we live in, everyone seems to be so busy that we don't have time to continuously improve our skills. Only by constantly improving ourselves can we reach our full potential. 教考衔接——教材词汇练续写 never switching on the light distract his attention from computer games 本单元的写作任务是写一篇读后感。读后感是读了一本书、一篇文章、一首诗、一段话或者几句名言后，把具体的感受或得到的启示以书面形式展现出来的文章。读后感往往包含两方面内容：对所读内容的概述和阅读后的体会。写作时应力求做到“读”能抓住重点，“感”能表达自己的思考和感受。 【写作指导】 Ⅰ．谨记写作范式 Ⅱ．积累话题素材 [常用词汇] ①an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历 ②remind sb.of sth． 使某人想起某事 ③look back on the past 回想往事 ④make a good impression on sb． 给某人留下良好的印象 ⑤benefit sb．throughout life 让某人终身受益 ⑥show one's determination 表达某人的决心 ⑦be true of 对……适用 ⑧a valuable lesson 宝贵的教训 [出彩佳句] 1．故事概要 ①There was a time when many people lived a hard life, without anything to eat or wear． 曾经有一段时期人们过着缺吃少穿的困苦生活。 ②The little girl went through the forest，waded through the river，and found her mother． 那个小女孩穿过森林，趟过小河，找到了自己的母亲。 ③The crow thought that taking a bath every day would make him as white as a swan．He came to the river and kept bathing． 乌鸦以为天天洗澡就能够变得像天鹅一样雪白。它来到河边不停地洗澡。 2．对你的启迪 ④What impresses us most is that we should never give up easily． 给我们印象最深的是，我们永远不应该轻易放弃。 ⑤This story reminds me that sometimes, in order to work more efficiently, we need to take a step back and analyse our methods． 这个故事提醒我，有时，为了更有效地工作，我们需要后退一步，分析我们的方法。 ⑥Remember only by constantly improving ourselves can we reach our full potential． 记住，只有不断提高自己，我们才能充分发挥自己的潜力。 【实战演练】 请阅读下面材料并用英语写一篇读后感，要点包括： 1．故事大意； 2．对你的启迪。 A woodcutter carried his axe (斧子) and set out to work．On his first day, he cut down 18 trees and was praised by his boss．The next day, he worked harder, but could only cut down 15 trees．On the third day, he tried even harder, but only cut down 10 trees．Day after day, he was cutting down fewer and fewer trees．He felt quite confused and turned to an old man． “Do you often sharpen your axe？” the old man asked． “I have no time to sharpen it．I have been very busy cutting down trees，” the woodcutter replied． “Sharpen it at once，” the old man said． Then the woodcutter followed the old man's advice and sharpened his axe．To his surprise, he found he could cut down trees much faster and with less effort than before． 注意：词数80左右。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Step 1　审题谋篇·定框架 定人称 以第一、三人称为主 定时态 以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 定框架 第一部分：故事概要 第二部分：对你的启迪 Step 2　要点翻译·用佳句 1．一个伐木工人不能像以前那样砍伐那么多的树，尽管他更加努力。 A woodcutter couldn't cut down , although he tried even harder． 2．他向一位老人寻求解决办法。 He for the solution． as many trees as he used to turned to an old man [升级]请用主从复合句连接句1和句2。 3．老人知道伐木工人很久没有磨斧头了，就劝他马上磨。 When he knew the woodcutter had not sharpened his axe for a long time, the old man ． [升级]用现在分词短语作状语改写句3。 4．伐木工人照做了，于是他的工作变得非常容易，他对此很惊讶。 The woodcutter and was amazed at how much easier his work became． advised him to sharpen it at once did what he was told 5．在我们生活的这个快节奏的世界里，每个人似乎都很忙。 In the fast­paced world , everyone seems to be very busy． 6．我们没有时间不断提高自己的技能。 We don't our skills． [升级]请用主从复合句连接句5和句6。 7．只有不断提高自己，我们才能充分发挥自己的潜力。 We can only by constantly improving ourselves． [升级]用倒装句式改写句7。 we live in have time to continuously improve reach our full potential Step 3　连句成篇·达美文 A woodcutter turned to an old man when he couldn't cut down as many trees as he used to, although he tried even harder．Knowing the woodcutter had not sharpened his axe for a long time, the old man advised him to sharpen it at once．The woodcutter did what he was told and was amazed at how much easier his work became． The same is true of our life．In the fast­paced world we live in, everyone seems to be so busy that we don't have time to continuously improve our skills, so we become less efficient．Remember only by constantly improving ourselves can we reach our full potential． 动作 描写 ①motivate v．激发，激励 ②occupy v．占用，占去(时间) ③distract v．分散(注意力)，使分心 ④spit v．吐口水，吐唾沫 ⑤promote v．促进，增进 ⑥clarify v．澄清，讲清楚，阐明 ⑦access n．接触的机会 vt．进入；到达 ⑧equip v．使有知识和技能，使能够胜任 ⑨throw in the towel 认输 ⑩rely on 依靠，依赖 人物 描写 ①considerate adj．替他人着想的 ②constantly adv．经常地 ③objectively adv．客观地 ④in contrast to 与……形成对比 To promote his study [语段情景用]　一名青少年整天沉迷于电脑游戏，对上学毫无兴趣，也拒绝与家人沟通，叛逆厌学现象越来越严重。 The day before yesterday I heard a story about a boy who was busy (用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇：1． )in playing computer games all the day．Every day from dawn to night，he locked himself in his room，2． (从不开灯)．There was nothing that could 3． (分散他对电脑游戏的注意力)．He never went out until he had to buy 4． (necessity)，let alone going to school．For this reason，his mother cried 5． (constant)．6． (为了促进他的学习)，his father took away his computer．Therefore，no access occupied necessities constantly 7． the computer was given to him in his family．However，he 8． (依赖) the computer so much that he went to Internet cafes to play．Unfortunately，his health broke down after playing computer games without food，water or rest for three days．From this matter，we can learn that we should encourage (用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇：9． ) teenagers to look on the computer as a tool and use it appropriately． to relied on motivate $$