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《2025年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》 专题03 2025浙江1月卷读后续写及满分语料10类40句 (真假小偷) 原卷版 【读后续写六年高考考情】 年份 卷别 主题 话题 类型 2025 浙江1月卷 人与社会/自我 勇寻真相并且学会共情的重要性 生活故事类 八省联考卷 人与社会/动物 铁汉柔情让我感动流浪犬守护者 关爱动物类 2024 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与自我 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 校园生活类 九省联考卷 人与自然 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 关爱动物类 2023 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 写作竞赛类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 关爱动物类 2022 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 越野比赛类 浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 助人为乐类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友 校园生活类 2021 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 家庭亲情类 浙江6月卷 人与自我 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 生活故事类 2020 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 个人成长类 浙江7月卷 人与自然 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 关爱动物类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 关爱动物类 【读后续写竞赛类话题思维导图】 ( 点 1 ： 位于续写 第一段段首 ，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点 2 ： 位于续写 第一段段尾 ，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点 3 ： 位于续写 第二段段首 ，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点 4 ： 续写 结尾 主旨 升华 ，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 ) 【读后续写竞赛类话题满分策略】 【读后续写真题深度解读】 【原题呈现】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye. 段落大意：介绍 凯文 所处情境，父母不在家，由邻居照顾，他无聊时窗外出现动静。 情节：凯文 的母亲上班，父亲出差，他由 Mrs. Hill 照顾，Mrs. Hill 睡着，凯文 无聊叹气，突然窗外的一个动静吸引了他的目光。 情感：初始状态是无聊烦闷，看到窗外动静后转变为好奇与期待，渴望有新奇事情发生。 Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police. 段落大意：凯文 发现街对面异常情况并报警。 情节：凯文 通过窗户看到街对面格林夫妇家有人从窗户进入，而主人都去上班他觉得怪异，便报警。 情感：由好奇转为紧张与警惕，因察觉到潜在危险而担忧，意识到事情的严重性。 情感：由好奇转为紧张与警惕，意识到事情严重性。 Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands. 段落大意：凯文为阻止男子逃脱，持树枝冲进屋内。 情节：凯文 担心男子在警察到来前带着东西逃走，于是迅速从 Mrs. Hill 家跑出，捡起砍倒树上的树枝，从窗户跳进格林夫妇家，向男子发出制止。 情感：在紧张氛围下鼓起勇气，表现出勇敢果断，充满正义感，想要维护正义，阻止可疑行为。 The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard. 段落大意：男子作出解释，引发凯文的疑惑。 情节：男子听到凯文制止后先是愣住，解释说房子曾是自己家，想找回父亲手表，试图撬起地板。 情感：原本坚定制止男子的态度，内心产生疑惑。 At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man. 段落大意：警察到来男子被抓，凯文说明情况。 情节：男子惊慌失措，从窗户跳出逃走，凯文向警察讲述事情经过，警察追捕并成功逮捕男子。 情感：完成协助警察的行为后情绪平稳，但脑海中在思考之前与男子的冲突，对事件结果有所关注。 Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth?” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing. 段落大意：凯文 回家后对自己的行为产生怀疑。 情节：凯文反复思索男子的话，不确定是否做对。 情感：陷入纠结与自我怀疑之中，不确定自己行动是否合理，对事情的真相和自己的判断感到迷茫。 Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye. Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police. Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands. The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard. At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man. Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth?” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. 【步步为赢】 一、文本解读 （一）故事梗概 文章讲述了 12 岁的 Kevin 在父母不在家，由邻居 Mrs. Hill 照顾时的经历。Mrs. Hill 睡着后，Kevin 看到街对面 Green 夫妇家有个男人从窗户进入。由于 Green 夫妇都去上班了，Kevin 觉得异常，便打电话报警。之后，他还拿着树枝冲进屋内试图阻止男子。男子称房子曾是他家，想找回父亲的手表。警察到来时，男子惊慌逃走，Kevin 向警察说明了情况。但 Kevin 对自己的行为产生了怀疑，担心男子说的是真话。 （二）人物分析 Kevin：12 岁男孩，父母教导他成为一个好孩子，平时虽遵守规矩，但内心有时渴望冒险。在看到异常情况时，勇敢地采取行动，先是报警，后又独自闯入屋内与男子对峙，然而事后对自己的行为产生了不确定性的思考，体现出他既有勇敢的一面，又有心思细腻、会反思的性格特点。 闯入男子：行为可疑，从窗户进入无人的房子，但声称房子曾是自己家，父亲的手表遗留在屋内，他的解释真假难辨，给故事增添了悬念。 （三）文本线索 明线：Kevin 发现男子闯入 Green 夫妇家，报警并与之对峙，男子逃走后 Kevin 的内心困惑。 暗线：男子闯入房子的真实目的，这一悬念贯穿故事始终，推动着情节的发展。 二、写作步骤 （一）分析所给段落开头 “When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.”此开头暗示接下来 Kevin 会向 Green 夫妇讲述事情经过，可能会提及男子的说法，同时引出 Green 夫妇对这件事的反应，为后续情节发展奠定基础。 “Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.” 表明 Kevin 和 Mr. Green 找到了手表，这意味着前面的情节中会有关于寻找手表的内容，而带着手表去警局又会引发与警方的进一步互动，推动故事走向结局。 （二）确定续写情节方向 基于第一段开头，考虑 Green夫妇听到 Kevin讲述后的反应，他们可能对男子的说法有不同看法，或许能提供一些关于男子的信息，比如男子是否真的曾是房子主人，这有助于解开 Kevin 心中的疑惑。 从第二段开头可知，要先描述找到手表的过程，这可能涉及到 Kevin 和 Mr. Green 在房子里的探索，找到手表后去警局，在警局可能会有新的发现，比如警察确认男子的身份和其话语的真实性，从而得出最终的故事结局。 （三）构思关键情节和细节 在 Kevin 与 Green 夫妇交流的情节中，可描述 Green 夫妇的表情、动作和语言，如 Mr. Green 皱着眉头思考，Mrs. Green 惊讶地捂住嘴巴等细节，增强故事的生动性。 对于寻找手表的过程，可详细描写 Kevin 和 Mr. Green 在房子里的动作，如翻找地板、查看角落等，以及他们的对话，如 Kevin 询问 Mr. Green 是否确定这里曾是男子的家等。在警局部分，可描写警察的反应，如警察看到手表后严肃的神情，通过电脑查询信息时的专注等细节。 三、情节构建 （一）第一段续写情节 Kevin 向 Green 夫妇详细讲述了事情的经过，包括男子的一举一动以及他声称房子曾是自己家且要找父亲手表的说法。Green 夫妇听后，Mr. Green 皱着眉头陷入沉思，过了一会儿，他缓缓说道，这房子之前确实卖给过一家人，那家有个儿子，和 Kevin 描述的男子年龄相仿。Mrs. Green 则惊讶地捂住嘴巴，眼中满是疑惑。Kevin 听了 Green 夫妇的话，心中更加纠结，他提议和 Mr. Green 一起去房子里找找看是否真有手表，Mr. Green 同意了。 （二）第二段续写情节 Kevin 和 Mr. Green 来到房子里，开始仔细翻找。他们在男子试图撬起的地板下，终于发现了一块老式手表。拿着手表，他们立刻前往警局。警察接过手表，仔细端详后，通过系统查询，确认了男子正是房子原主人的儿子，他近期因经济困难，想找回这块有纪念意义且能换些钱的手表。Kevin 得知真相后，心中的石头落了地，他虽然因误会男子感到有些不好意思，但也为自己的勇敢和坚持真相的行为感到自豪。警察表扬了 Kevin 的勇敢和细心，Green 夫妇也对 Kevin 的行为赞不绝口。最终，Kevin 带着愉快的心情回到 Mrs. Hill 家，等待父母归来，迫不及待地想和他们分享这段特别的经历。 四、参考答案 【读后续写真题满分语料】 满分语料一、无灵主语（时间、地点、情感、自然现象、动作行为类名词作主语） 1. 1.他们一进门，凯文就冲了过去。 2. 2.当格林先生点头表示理解时，凯文如释重负。 3. 3.凯文惊讶地睁大了眼睛，一种解脱和尴尬交织的感觉涌上心头。 4. 4.一种复杂的内疚感和解脱感涌上凯文的心头，他怀疑自己的快速判断是否过于草率。 满分语料二、动作链（A and B型，A, B and C 型） 5. 5.凯文冲到门口，打开门，领格林先生先生进去。 6. 6. 格林先生先生拿起手表，仔细地看了看，摇了摇头。 7. 7.凯文走近格林夫妇，讲述了他所目睹的一切。 8. 8.警察表扬了凯文的勇敢和智慧，并接受手表作为证据。 满分语料三、独立主格结构/with复合结构 9. 9.凯文捂着嘴，抓起希尔太太家里的电话，报了警。 10. 10.格林先生聚精会神地听着，当凯文描述这名男子的说法时，他的眼睛眯着。 11. 11.凯文凝视着广阔的天空，一种深深的满足感涌上心头。 12. 12.“我们必须去警察局，”格林先生说，他的声音充满了坚定。 13. 13.手表握在手里，凯文走进警察局，他的疑虑像晨雾一样挥之不去。 满分语料四、非谓语短语（作主语、宾语、状语、定语、宾语补足语等） 14. 14.格林先生叹了一口气，把它捡起来，陪凯文去警察局。 15. 15.犹豫了一会儿，凯文把手表递给警官，手指微微颤抖。 16. 16.原来“窃贼”是手表的主人，所以这名男子被警方释放了。 17. 17.他们设法抬起地板，却发现一块用红手帕包着的手表躺在那里。 18. 18.警察表扬了凯文的勇敢，说他的敏捷思维帮助他们抓住了罪犯。 满分语料五、形容词/副词开头 19. 19.他紧张但坚定地详细叙述了整个事件。 20. 20.心怀感激之情，格林先生补充道：“你保护了我们的家园，也揭开了一段历史。” 21. 21.感谢凯文的勇敢，格林先生先生建议他们去警察局澄清误会。 满分语料六、特殊句式（倒装+强调+省略） 22. 22.地板下有一个旧盒子，里面有一块积满灰尘的手表。 23. 23.直到那时，他才意识到，勇敢不是确定性，而是面对模糊的勇气。 满分语料七、介词短语位于句首 24. 24.凯文深深地叹了口气，感觉过去几个小时的重负渐渐消失了。 25. 25.他们毫不犹豫地急忙检查地板下是否有手表。 26. 26.获释后，那人拍了拍凯文的背，咯咯地笑着说：“你做得对。” 27. 27.在回家的路上，凯文松了一口气，因为他学会了勇气、责任和反思。 28. 28.令他们惊讶的是，木板下面有一个隐藏的小隔间，里面放着一块旧金表。 满分语料八、简洁对话/直接引语 29. 29.“但是为什么要闯进来买块手表呢？”凯文耸耸肩，感到很困惑。 30. 30.“他说他以前住在这里，正在找他父亲的手表，”凯文补充道。 31. 31.凯文感到比以往任何时候都更加困惑，他建议道：“我们能去房子里找手表吗？” 满分语料九、主从复合句 32. 32.凯文回来时，警察已经逮捕了这名男子。 33. 33.虽然他为误判那个人而感到尴尬，但他为自己有勇气寻求真相而感到自豪。 34. 34.很明显，这名男子的父母曾经住在这里，这块手表显然是他父亲的。 35. 35.警官们证实这块手表确实很值钱，属于该男子已故的父亲。 满分语料十、主题升华句 36. 36.真相并不像看上去那么简单，但勇敢地行动可以带来正确的答案。 37. 37.正是这种独特的经历提醒了凯文他的行为和勇气的价值。 38. 38.格林先生先生表达了他的感激之情，他说：“谢谢你照顾我们的邻居。” 39. 39.有时候，勇敢不是无所畏惧，而是不顾恐惧做正确的事。 40. 40.凯文带着自豪感和成就感离开了警察局，他知道自己做了正确的事。 【读后续写名校好题调研】 1．（24-25高二上·河南商丘·期末）从受害者到守护者：王女士的反诈骗之路 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mrs. Wang, who is 72 years old, lives in a quiet neighborhood. She has been single for the past five years and is known for her warm smile and the way she takes care of her garden. The day ended as peacefully as it has for many years, but she didn’t know that her peace was about to be broken by a phone call that would change her life a lot. The phone rang, and Mrs. Wang answered with her customary warmth, “Hello, dear, how can I assist you?” On the other end of the line was a man, his voice full of authority and urgency. Introducing himself as “Officer Li” from the Public Security Bureau (局), he claimed that Ms. Wang’s bank account had been stolen and that her immediate cooperation was essential to prevent major losses. Mrs. Wang’s heart raced uncontrollably as the caller detailed how her personal information was used to take her savings. He directed her to transfer (转移) 50,000 yuan from her account to a “secure” account number he provided. His voice was urgent, hard to ignore. Worried about her savings, Mrs. Wang agreed after a moment’s hesitation. She went to the bank, her hands shaking as she took out the money. The bank teller saw she was upset and asked if she was okay. Nervous and embarrassed, Mrs. Wang made an excuse about a family emergency and left in a hurry. That day, she transferred the money as she was told, feeling lost and scared. It wasn’t until the following morning, over a cup of tea with her neighbor, that Mrs. Wang’s experience began to sound very familiar. Her neighbor, with a concerned expression, informed her about the recent scams (欺诈) targeting the elderly in their community. When Mrs. Wang realized that this unfortunate event had happened to her, her face turned pale. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Heartbroken, Mrs. Wang made her way to the local police station to report the scam. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mrs. Wang was very sad, but she decided to do something. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（24-25高二上·湖南邵阳·阶段练习）意外的守护者：警察如何改变我的一生 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的文章。 It was 1978. I was eight, and it was my birthday. I was told to make a list of two or three friends who’d enjoy the water theme park in nearby Tampa, Florida. Since we didn’t have any spare money, the trip would be a packed lunch and no extras. I didn’t care - I was getting a special treat! The great day arrived, and my mother, younger brother, three friends, and I piled into our old beat-up car. We headed out of town on the 90-minute ride to the amusement park for a day of sun and fun. About halfway to the water park, the car started running badly and the “check engine” light came on. My mom pulled the car over. We were stuck. An hour passed as we waited for someone to stop and help. A police officer stopped to see if we were all right and called a tow truck (拖车) to pick up the car. On the way to the service station, Mom told the officer that we had been headed to the water park for my birthday treat. The officer dropped us off and left after giving me a short ride in the police car as a birthday present. At the service station, the mechanic explained the water pump (水泵) needed to be replaced. The cost, plus the tow, would be $135. Mom started crying and pulled me aside. She explained we wouldn’t have enough money to go anywhere but home, and we’d have to save up to go somewhere else for my birthday later. I was disappointed but tried not to show it, knowing even at that age that we didn’t have much money. We tried to make the best of the day, the six of us having a picnic at the service station with the cake Mom had baked. Eventually, the mechanic called Mom into the office, saying the repairs were completed but he had to make a phone call before we could leave. He told Mom to have a seat and wait. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Twenty minutes later, the police officer came with a wrapped present. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With great gratitude, Mom tried to give the $135 back to the officer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 / 10 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 《2025年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》 专题03 2025浙江1月卷读后续写及满分语料10类40句 (真假小偷) 解析版 【读后续写六年高考考情】 年份 卷别 主题 话题 类型 2025 浙江1月卷 人与社会/自我 勇寻真相并且学会共情的重要性 生活故事类 八省联考卷 人与社会/动物 铁汉柔情让我感动流浪犬守护者 关爱动物类 2024 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与自我 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 校园生活类 九省联考卷 人与自然 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 关爱动物类 2023 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 写作竞赛类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 关爱动物类 2022 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 越野比赛类 浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 助人为乐类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友 校园生活类 2021 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 家庭亲情类 浙江6月卷 人与自我 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 生活故事类 2020 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 个人成长类 浙江7月卷 人与自然 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 关爱动物类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 关爱动物类 【读后续写竞赛类话题思维导图】 ( 点 1 ： 位于续写 第一段段首 ，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点 2 ： 位于续写 第一段段尾 ，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点 3 ： 位于续写 第二段段首 ，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点 4 ： 续写 结尾 主旨 升华 ，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 ) 【读后续写竞赛类话题满分策略】 【读后续写真题深度解读】 【原题呈现】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye. 段落大意：介绍 凯文 所处情境，父母不在家，由邻居照顾，他无聊时窗外出现动静。 情节：凯文 的母亲上班，父亲出差，他由 Mrs. Hill 照顾，Mrs. Hill 睡着，凯文 无聊叹气，突然窗外的一个动静吸引了他的目光。 情感：初始状态是无聊烦闷，看到窗外动静后转变为好奇与期待，渴望有新奇事情发生。 Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police. 段落大意：凯文 发现街对面异常情况并报警。 情节：凯文 通过窗户看到街对面格林夫妇家有人从窗户进入，而主人都去上班他觉得怪异，便报警。 情感：由好奇转为紧张与警惕，因察觉到潜在危险而担忧，意识到事情的严重性。 情感：由好奇转为紧张与警惕，意识到事情严重性。 Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands. 段落大意：凯文为阻止男子逃脱，持树枝冲进屋内。 情节：凯文 担心男子在警察到来前带着东西逃走，于是迅速从 Mrs. Hill 家跑出，捡起砍倒树上的树枝，从窗户跳进格林夫妇家，向男子发出制止。 情感：在紧张氛围下鼓起勇气，表现出勇敢果断，充满正义感，想要维护正义，阻止可疑行为。 The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard. 段落大意：男子作出解释，引发凯文的疑惑。 情节：男子听到凯文制止后先是愣住，解释说房子曾是自己家，想找回父亲手表，试图撬起地板。 情感：原本坚定制止男子的态度，内心产生疑惑。 At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man. 段落大意：警察到来男子被抓，凯文说明情况。 情节：男子惊慌失措，从窗户跳出逃走，凯文向警察讲述事情经过，警察追捕并成功逮捕男子。 情感：完成协助警察的行为后情绪平稳，但脑海中在思考之前与男子的冲突，对事件结果有所关注。 Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth?” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing. 段落大意：凯文 回家后对自己的行为产生怀疑。 情节：凯文反复思索男子的话，不确定是否做对。 情感：陷入纠结与自我怀疑之中，不确定自己行动是否合理，对事情的真相和自己的判断感到迷茫。 【原题呈现】 Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye. Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police. Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands. The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard. At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man. Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth?” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. 【步步为赢】 一、文本解读 （一）故事梗概 文章讲述了 12 岁的 Kevin 在父母不在家，由邻居 Mrs. Hill 照顾时的经历。Mrs. Hill 睡着后，Kevin 看到街对面 Green 夫妇家有个男人从窗户进入。由于 Green 夫妇都去上班了，Kevin 觉得异常，便打电话报警。之后，他还拿着树枝冲进屋内试图阻止男子。男子称房子曾是他家，想找回父亲的手表。警察到来时，男子惊慌逃走，Kevin 向警察说明了情况。但 Kevin 对自己的行为产生了怀疑，担心男子说的是真话。 （二）人物分析 Kevin：12 岁男孩，父母教导他成为一个好孩子，平时虽遵守规矩，但内心有时渴望冒险。在看到异常情况时，勇敢地采取行动，先是报警，后又独自闯入屋内与男子对峙，然而事后对自己的行为产生了不确定性的思考，体现出他既有勇敢的一面，又有心思细腻、会反思的性格特点。 闯入男子：行为可疑，从窗户进入无人的房子，但声称房子曾是自己家，父亲的手表遗留在屋内，他的解释真假难辨，给故事增添了悬念。 （三）文本线索 明线：Kevin 发现男子闯入 Green 夫妇家，报警并与之对峙，男子逃走后 Kevin 的内心困惑。 暗线：男子闯入房子的真实目的，这一悬念贯穿故事始终，推动着情节的发展。 二、写作步骤 （一）分析所给段落开头 “When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.”此开头暗示接下来 Kevin 会向 Green 夫妇讲述事情经过，可能会提及男子的说法，同时引出 Green 夫妇对这件事的反应，为后续情节发展奠定基础。 “Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.” 表明 Kevin 和 Mr. Green 找到了手表，这意味着前面的情节中会有关于寻找手表的内容，而带着手表去警局又会引发与警方的进一步互动，推动故事走向结局。 （二）确定续写情节方向 基于第一段开头，考虑 Green夫妇听到 Kevin讲述后的反应，他们可能对男子的说法有不同看法，或许能提供一些关于男子的信息，比如男子是否真的曾是房子主人，这有助于解开 Kevin 心中的疑惑。 从第二段开头可知，要先描述找到手表的过程，这可能涉及到 Kevin 和 Mr. Green 在房子里的探索，找到手表后去警局，在警局可能会有新的发现，比如警察确认男子的身份和其话语的真实性，从而得出最终的故事结局。 （三）构思关键情节和细节 在 Kevin 与 Green 夫妇交流的情节中，可描述 Green 夫妇的表情、动作和语言，如 Mr. Green 皱着眉头思考，Mrs. Green 惊讶地捂住嘴巴等细节，增强故事的生动性。 对于寻找手表的过程，可详细描写 Kevin 和 Mr. Green 在房子里的动作，如翻找地板、查看角落等，以及他们的对话，如 Kevin 询问 Mr. Green 是否确定这里曾是男子的家等。在警局部分，可描写警察的反应，如警察看到手表后严肃的神情，通过电脑查询信息时的专注等细节。 三、情节构建 （一）第一段续写情节 Kevin 向 Green 夫妇详细讲述了事情的经过，包括男子的一举一动以及他声称房子曾是自己家且要找父亲手表的说法。Green 夫妇听后，Mr. Green 皱着眉头陷入沉思，过了一会儿，他缓缓说道，这房子之前确实卖给过一家人，那家有个儿子，和 Kevin 描述的男子年龄相仿。Mrs. Green 则惊讶地捂住嘴巴，眼中满是疑惑。Kevin 听了 Green 夫妇的话，心中更加纠结，他提议和 Mr. Green 一起去房子里找找看是否真有手表，Mr. Green 同意了。 （二）第二段续写情节 Kevin 和 Mr. Green 来到房子里，开始仔细翻找。他们在男子试图撬起的地板下，终于发现了一块老式手表。拿着手表，他们立刻前往警局。警察接过手表，仔细端详后，通过系统查询，确认了男子正是房子原主人的儿子，他近期因经济困难，想找回这块有纪念意义且能换些钱的手表。Kevin 得知真相后，心中的石头落了地，他虽然因误会男子感到有些不好意思，但也为自己的勇敢和坚持真相的行为感到自豪。警察表扬了 Kevin 的勇敢和细心，Green 夫妇也对 Kevin 的行为赞不绝口。最终，Kevin 带着愉快的心情回到 Mrs. Hill 家，等待父母归来，迫不及待地想和他们分享这段特别的经历。 四、参考答案 When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He explained everything, from the man jumping through the window to the police arresting him. The Greens listened carefully, with a doubtful expression on their faces. Kevin then described how the man had been trying to move the floorboard. “He claimed his father’s watch was hidden beneath it,” he added. Mrs. Green looked surprised. “Let’s go check,” she said. It took a little while, but Mr. Green managed to lift the board. To everyone’s astonishment, there it was—an old watch, just as the man had described. Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The officer confirmed it matched the man’s description. “We’ll need to investigate further, but it looks like his story checks out,” he said. Kevin felt a wave of relief wash over him. The officer thanked them for their help and promised to keep them updated. As they left the station, Kevin looked at Mr. Green and said, “I guess I did the right thing after all.” Mr. Green patted him on the shoulder with a smile, saying, “You did more than just right, Kevin. You were brave.” 【读后续写真题满分语料】 满分语料一、无灵主语（时间、地点、情感、自然现象、动作行为类名词作主语） 1. The instant they stepped inside, Kevin rushed over to them. 1.他们一进门，凯文就冲了过去。 2. A wave of relief washed over Kevin as Mr. Green nodded in understanding. 2.当格林先生点头表示理解时，凯文如释重负。 3. Kevin's eyes widened in surprise, a mix of relief and embarrassment flooding over him. 3.凯文惊讶地睁大了眼睛，一种解脱和尴尬交织的感觉涌上心头。 4. A complex sense of guilt and relief flooded over Kevin, wondering if his swift judgment had been too hasty. 4.一种复杂的内疚感和解脱感涌上凯文的心头，他怀疑自己的快速判断是否过于草率。 满分语料二、动作链（A and B型，A, B and C 型） 5. Kevin rushed to the door, opened it, and led Mr. Green inside. 5.凯文冲到门口，打开门，领格林先生先生进去。 6. Mr. Green took the watch, examined it carefully, and shook his head. 6. 格林先生先生拿起手表，仔细地看了看，摇了摇头。 7. Kevin approached the Green couple and recounted what he had witnessed. 7.凯文走近格林夫妇，讲述了他所目睹的一切。 8. The police praised Kevin for his bravery and wisdom, and accepted the watch as evidence. 8.警察表扬了凯文的勇敢和智慧，并接受手表作为证据。 满分语料三、独立主格结构/with复合结构 9. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police. 9.凯文捂着嘴，抓起希尔太太家里的电话，报了警。 10. Mr. Green listened intently, his eyes narrowing as Kevin described the man's claim. 10.格林先生聚精会神地听着，当凯文描述这名男子的说法时，他的眼睛眯着。 11. Kevin gazed at the expansive sky, a profound sense of fulfillment washing over him. 11.凯文凝视着广阔的天空，一种深深的满足感涌上心头。 12. “We have to go to the police station,” Mr. Green said, his voice filled with determination. 12.“我们必须去警察局，”格林先生说，他的声音充满了坚定。 13. The watch clutched in his hand, Kevin stepped into the police station, his doubts lingering like morning fog. 13.手表握在手里，凯文走进警察局，他的疑虑像晨雾一样挥之不去。 满分语料四、非谓语短语（作主语、宾语、状语、定语、宾语补足语等） 14. Having let out a heavy sigh, Mr. Green picked it up and accompanied Kevin to the police. 14.格林先生叹了一口气，把它捡起来，陪凯文去警察局。 15. Hesitating for a moment, Kevin handed the watch to the officer, his fingers trembling slightly. 15.犹豫了一会儿，凯文把手表递给警官，手指微微颤抖。 16. It turned out that the "burglar" was the owner of the watch, so the man was released by the police. 16.原来“窃贼”是手表的主人，所以这名男子被警方释放了。 17. They managed to lift the floorboard, only to find a watch wrapped in a red handkerchief lying there. 17.他们设法抬起地板，却发现一块用红手帕包着的手表躺在那里。 18. The police praised Kevin for his bravery, saying that his quick thinking had helped them catch the criminal. 18.警察表扬了凯文的勇敢，说他的敏捷思维帮助他们抓住了罪犯。 满分语料五、形容词/副词开头 19. Nervous but determined, he recounted the entire incident in detail. 19.他紧张但坚定地详细叙述了整个事件。 20. Grateful, Mr Green added, "You protected our home—and uncovered a piece of history too."  20.心怀感激之情，格林先生补充道：“你保护了我们的家园，也揭开了一段历史。” 21. Grateful for Kevin's bravery, Mr. Green suggested they see the police station to clear up the misunderstanding. 21.感谢凯文的勇敢，格林先生先生建议他们去警察局澄清误会。 满分语料六、特殊句式（倒装+强调+省略） 22. Under the floorboard was an old box with a dusty watch in it. 22.地板下有一个旧盒子，里面有一块积满灰尘的手表。 23. Only then did he realize that bravery wasn’t about certainty, but the courage to face ambiguity. 23.直到那时，他才意识到，勇敢不是确定性，而是面对模糊的勇气。 满分语料七、介词短语位于句首 24. With a deep sigh, Kevin felt the weight of the past few hours melting away. 24.凯文深深地叹了口气，感觉过去几个小时的重负渐渐消失了。 25. Without hesitation, they hurried to check if there was a watch under the floorboard. 25.他们毫不犹豫地急忙检查地板下是否有手表。 26. Upon his release, the man patted Kevin on the back, chuckling, “You did the right thing." 26.获释后，那人拍了拍凯文的背，咯咯地笑着说：“你做得对。” 27. On his way home, Kevin felt relieved that he had learned about courage, responsibility, and reflection. 27.在回家的路上，凯文松了一口气，因为他学会了勇气、责任和反思。 28. To their surprise, there was a small hidden compartment under the board, and inside it lay an old, gold watch. 28.令他们惊讶的是，木板下面有一个隐藏的小隔间，里面放着一块旧金表。 满分语料八、简洁对话/直接引语 29. “But why break in for a watch?” Kevin shrugged, feeling confused. 29.“但是为什么要闯进来买块手表呢？”凯文耸耸肩，感到很困惑。 30. “He said he used to live here and was looking for his father’s watch,” Kevin added. 30.“他说他以前住在这里，正在找他父亲的手表，”凯文补充道。 31. Feeling more confused than ever, Kevin suggested, “Could we go and look for the watch in the house?” 31.凯文感到比以往任何时候都更加困惑，他建议道：“我们能去房子里找手表吗？” 满分语料九、主从复合句 32. By the time Kevin returned, the police had already arrested the man. 32.凯文回来时，警察已经逮捕了这名男子。 33. Although he was embarrassed for misjudging the man, he was proud of his courage to seek the truth. 33.虽然他为误判那个人而感到尴尬，但他为自己有勇气寻求真相而感到自豪。 34. It became evident that the man's parents once lived here and the watch was unmistakably his father's. 34.很明显，这名男子的父母曾经住在这里，这块手表显然是他父亲的。 35. The officers were able to confirm that the watch was indeed valuable and belonged to the man’s late father. 35.警官们证实这块手表确实很值钱，属于该男子已故的父亲。 满分语料十、主题升华句 36. The truth isn’t as simple as it seems, but acting with courage can lead to the right answers. 36.真相并不像看上去那么简单，但勇敢地行动可以带来正确的答案。 37. It was this unique experience that reminded Kevin of the value of his behavior and courage. 37.正是这种独特的经历提醒了凯文他的行为和勇气的价值。 38. Mr. Green expressed his gratitude, saying, “Thank you for looking out for our neighborhood.” 38.格林先生先生表达了他的感激之情，他说：“谢谢你照顾我们的邻居。” 39. Sometimes, bravery is not about being fearless, but about doing the right thing despite the fear. 39.有时候，勇敢不是无所畏惧，而是不顾恐惧做正确的事。 40. Kevin left the police station with a sense of pride and achievement, knowing that he had done the right thing. 40.凯文带着自豪感和成就感离开了警察局，他知道自己做了正确的事。 【读后续写名校好题调研】 1．（24-25高二上·河南商丘·期末）从受害者到守护者：王女士的反诈骗之路 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mrs. Wang, who is 72 years old, lives in a quiet neighborhood. She has been single for the past five years and is known for her warm smile and the way she takes care of her garden. The day ended as peacefully as it has for many years, but she didn’t know that her peace was about to be broken by a phone call that would change her life a lot. The phone rang, and Mrs. Wang answered with her customary warmth, “Hello, dear, how can I assist you?” On the other end of the line was a man, his voice full of authority and urgency. Introducing himself as “Officer Li” from the Public Security Bureau (局), he claimed that Ms. Wang’s bank account had been stolen and that her immediate cooperation was essential to prevent major losses. Mrs. Wang’s heart raced uncontrollably as the caller detailed how her personal information was used to take her savings. He directed her to transfer (转移) 50,000 yuan from her account to a “secure” account number he provided. His voice was urgent, hard to ignore. Worried about her savings, Mrs. Wang agreed after a moment’s hesitation. She went to the bank, her hands shaking as she took out the money. The bank teller saw she was upset and asked if she was okay. Nervous and embarrassed, Mrs. Wang made an excuse about a family emergency and left in a hurry. That day, she transferred the money as she was told, feeling lost and scared. It wasn’t until the following morning, over a cup of tea with her neighbor, that Mrs. Wang’s experience began to sound very familiar. Her neighbor, with a concerned expression, informed her about the recent scams (欺诈) targeting the elderly in their community. When Mrs. Wang realized that this unfortunate event had happened to her, her face turned pale. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Heartbroken, Mrs. Wang made her way to the local police station to report the scam. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mrs. Wang was very sad, but she decided to do something. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】 Heartbroken, Mrs. Wang made her way to the local police station to report the scam. There, a kind officer, with a tone of deep sympathy, explained to her that due to the advanced methods of the scammers, the chances of recovering her money were slim. He said there were so many scams targeting the elderly that they were actively campaigning against them. He gently advised her to be more careful in the future and always check with her family or the authorities when something seemed strange. Mrs. Wang was very sad, but she decided to do something. She wanted to help others in her community. She started giving talks at community centers and libraries, telling her own story to warn others of scams. Even though her voice sometimes shook, she was strong and wanted to make sure no one else would have the same bad experience. By teaching others, Mrs. Wang found a new way to live and a way to fight against scams. 【导语】本文是以王太太接到诈骗电话为线索，主要讲述的是72岁的独居老人王太太如何被冒充公安局官员的骗子误导，担心自己的银行账户被盗用，在紧迫和焦虑的情绪下按照骗子指示转账50,000元，事件后，通过与邻居交谈才意识到自己遭遇了针对老年人的骗局的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“心碎的王太太前往当地警察局报案。”可知，第一段可描写到警局后警局的人怎么做的，结合第二段的提示，警察应该是没有帮助她找回自己的钱。 ②由第二段首句内容“王太太感到非常难过，但她决定采取行动。她希望能够帮助社区里的其他人。”可知，第二段可描写王太太在社区如何做宣传的以及宣传的价值和意义。 2.续写线索：报警——得到安慰——劝告——在社区做宣传——找到生活的意义 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①追回：recovering/get back/retrieve ②核实：check/verify ③颤抖：shook/tremble 情绪类 ①深切同情的语气：a tone of deep sympathy/ a voice full of compassion 【点睛】[高分句型1] He said there were so many scams targeting the elderly that they were actively campaigning against them. (运用了“so…that…”引导的结果状语从句) [高分句型2] She started giving talks at community centers and libraries, telling her own story to warn others of scams. (运用了现在分词短语作状语) [高分句型3] Even though her voice sometimes shook, she was strong and wanted to make sure no one else would have the same bad experience. (运用了even though引导的让步状语从句) 2．（24-25高二上·湖南邵阳·阶段练习）意外的守护者：警察如何改变我的一生 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的文章。 It was 1978. I was eight, and it was my birthday. I was told to make a list of two or three friends who’d enjoy the water theme park in nearby Tampa, Florida. Since we didn’t have any spare money, the trip would be a packed lunch and no extras. I didn’t care - I was getting a special treat! The great day arrived, and my mother, younger brother, three friends, and I piled into our old beat-up car. We headed out of town on the 90-minute ride to the amusement park for a day of sun and fun. About halfway to the water park, the car started running badly and the “check engine” light came on. My mom pulled the car over. We were stuck. An hour passed as we waited for someone to stop and help. A police officer stopped to see if we were all right and called a tow truck (拖车) to pick up the car. On the way to the service station, Mom told the officer that we had been headed to the water park for my birthday treat. The officer dropped us off and left after giving me a short ride in the police car as a birthday present. At the service station, the mechanic explained the water pump (水泵) needed to be replaced. The cost, plus the tow, would be $135. Mom started crying and pulled me aside. She explained we wouldn’t have enough money to go anywhere but home, and we’d have to save up to go somewhere else for my birthday later. I was disappointed but tried not to show it, knowing even at that age that we didn’t have much money. We tried to make the best of the day, the six of us having a picnic at the service station with the cake Mom had baked. Eventually, the mechanic called Mom into the office, saying the repairs were completed but he had to make a phone call before we could leave. He told Mom to have a seat and wait. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Twenty minutes later, the police officer came with a wrapped present. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With great gratitude, Mom tried to give the $135 back to the officer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】 Twenty minutes later, the police officer came with a wrapped present. He walked up, handed me the present, and wished me a happy birthday. Before I responded, he paid the mechanic for the repairs and tow. It was at that moment that I realized why the mechanic told Mom to wait. He was requested to do so by the police officer who promised to return to pay him. After carefully inspecting the repaired vehicle, the officer said to Mom, “I’m sorry to have kept you waiting so long. The car is working properly now. You may continue your journey.” With great gratitude, Mom tried to give the $135 back to the officer. Whatever Mom said, the officer would not take the money. He told Mom that he knew we didn’t have much money and that my birthday trip shouldn’t be ruined because of something we had no control over. With these words, he departed hurriedly. To this day, I have been grateful for his kindness. Not only did he save my birthday trip, but he also changed my life. I always help others when I get a chance and try to instill this concept into my children’s lives. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者八岁生日那天，原本计划与家人和朋友一起去佛罗里达州Tampa附近的水上乐园游玩，但途中汽车出现故障，导致他们被困在路边。警察帮忙叫了拖车，并将他们送到汽修站。然而，由于修理费用高昂，他们没有足够的钱继续原计划的水上乐园之旅，只能放弃。最后，他们在汽修站举行了一个简单的野餐来庆祝生日。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“二十分钟后，警察带着一份包装好的礼物来了。”可知，第一段可描写警察给作者带来生日礼物并支付修理费和拖车费的情景。 ②由第二段首句内容“带着感激之情，妈妈试着把135美元还给警察。”可知，第二段可描写警察的慷慨解囊和对作者产生的深远影响。 2.续写线索：递给作者礼物——警察检查车——警察拒绝收钱——警察离开——作者感激——作者变化 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①递：hand/pass ②检查：inspect/check ③离开：depart/leave 情绪类 ①快乐的：happy/merry ②感激的：grateful/thankful 【点睛】[高分句型1] It was at that moment that I realized why the mechanic told Mom to wait. (强调句和why引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] He was requested to do so by the police officer who promised to return to pay him. (由关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句) 5 / 13 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$