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《2025年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》 专题02 2025八省联考卷读后续写及满分语料10类40句 (机车党硬汉柔情) 解析版 【读后续写六年高考考情】 年份 卷别 主题 话题 类型 2025 浙江1月卷 人与社会/自我 勇寻真相并且学会共情的重要性 生活故事类 八省联考卷 人与社会/动物 铁汉柔情让我感动流浪犬守护者 关爱动物类 2024 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与自我 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 校园生活类 九省联考卷 人与自然 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 关爱动物类 2023 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 写作竞赛类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 关爱动物类 2022 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 越野比赛类 浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 助人为乐类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友 校园生活类 2021 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 家庭亲情类 浙江6月卷 人与自我 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 生活故事类 2020 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 个人成长类 浙江7月卷 人与自然 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 关爱动物类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 关爱动物类 【读后续写竞赛类话题思维导图】 ( 点 1 ： 位于续写 第一段段首 ，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点 2 ： 位于续写 第一段段尾 ，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点 3 ： 位于续写 第二段段首 ，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点 4 ： 续写 结尾 主旨 升华 ，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 ) 【读后续写竞赛类话题满分策略】 【读后续写真题深度解读】 【原题呈现】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night. 在费城开会，想参加动物筹款活动。 I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off. 本想待在室内，后来决定出门去剧院。 It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers. 天黑出发，剧院门口遇到一群骑手。 I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men — all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club — standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event? 孤身遇骑手，心生警惕起疑惑。 A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. 确定地方正确，决定进剧院躲避骑手。 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【步步为赢】 一、知故事大意 阅读材料讲述了作者在费城出差时，看到一则关于当地动物救助组织的纪录片宣传广告。由于不愿独自一人外出，作者本打算在酒店房间度过这个晚上。然而，在感到无聊后，作者鼓起勇气前往剧院观看纪录片，但在剧院前遇到了一个由许多大块头骑士组成的团体。作者一开始感到非常紧张，认为自己可能会遇到麻烦，甚至有点后悔自己的决定。尽管如此，作者最终决定进入剧院，希望能安全观看电影。续写部分要求构思作者进入剧院后发生的事情，特别是揭示摩托车骑士的真实身份，以及作者是如何从恐惧转向安心。 二、审篇章段落 阅读材料由五段组成，各段段落大意如下： 第一段：作者在费城参加会议时，看到一个关于动物救助的纪录片广告，想去观看募捐活动，但由于没有同事陪伴，且担心独自外出，犹豫是否前往。 第二段：作者回到酒店后感到无聊和不安，决定克服恐惧，前往剧院。剧院距离酒店只有五个街区，周围环境看起来不危险，于是决定出发。 第三段：天色已晚，街道几乎空无一人。作者找到了剧院所在的街道，但转角后却被眼前的一群看起来强壮威猛的摩托车骑行者吓到。 第四段：虽然作者知道许多摩托车爱好者是友善的人，但此时作为一个独自女性，身处陌生的街区，面对一群身穿标志的摩托车骑行者，作者感到非常害怕，并开始怀疑自己是否来错了地方。 第五段：尽管感到害怕，作者看到剧院的标志确认自己来对了地方。她决定进入剧院，希望里面会更安全，并祈祷摩托车骑行者会离开。 三、定叙事结构 从结构上看，文章采用了“设悬念—解谜”的叙事方式。阅读材料部分通过详细描写作者的心理活动，尤其是对这群骑士的恐惧，制造了紧张氛围。而续写部分则要求合理构思情节解开这个谜团，让整个故事从紧张转为轻松，传递出一个积极向上的信息。续写部分要继续延续这个悬念并最终解答，保证故事有完整的闭环。 情节发展 故事细节 开端 (Beginning) 在费城的一家酒店，作者看到关于动物救助的募捐广告，决定去剧院观看。 发展 (Development) 在到达剧院时，作者看到一群摩托车骑士站在剧院门外，感到紧张和不安。 高潮 (Climax) 她决定进入剧院，但在剧院内，她发现里面有更多摩托车骑士，这让她更加困惑和不安。 结局 (Ending) 当电影开始后，作者发现这些摩托车骑士实际上是一个动物救助组织的成员，他们是来支持这次募捐活动的。 四、构写作思路 1.续写第一段写作思路 续写第一段的段落开头语是“我匆匆进入剧院，结果发现剧院里还有更多的摩托车骑士。”这暗示作者原本的恐惧没有完全消失，她进入剧院后发现情况并没有改善，反而有更多的骑士。这一段我们需要保持文章的紧张气氛和悬疑感，可通过环境的描写、作者的心理活动，以及骑士们的举止，来继续加强这种悬疑氛围。  2.续写第二段写作思路 续写第二段的段落开头语是“在电影开始后，我意识到这些骑士其实是一个动物救助组织的成员。” 在这一段的续写中，我们需要揭示这些骑士其实是参与动物救援活动的志愿者。可以通过对影片内容的描述、骑士们的行为等，让读者逐渐意识到他们并不是“坏人”，而是为了公益事业而聚集在一起。通过这个转折，消除之前的紧张氛围，并传达一种温暖和正能量。 步骤 分析 结果 找出矛盾冲突 故事中的主要矛盾是主人公的兴趣和安全担忧之间的对立，以及对陌生人外表的恐惧和内心勇气的冲突。主人公热爱动物，想去支持募捐活动，但她害怕独自一人前往陌生环境并面对看似威胁的骑士群体。 矛盾集中在兴趣与恐惧的对立以及偏见与真实情况的反差，通过勇气的表现推动情节发展，体现成长与突破自我。 分析情感转折 情感的转折从主人公初步犹豫到最终进入剧院，表现她对恐惧的克服。开始时她因骑士们的外表感到震惊和恐惧，但在克服内心的矛盾后，她选择了信任和坚持。最终，她发现骑士们实际上是动物救援组织的成员，这一情感转变突出了对陌生人和环境的重新认识。 情感转折体现在从不安与犹豫到勇气与突破，再到偏见消解后的温暖感动，推动了故事的情感递进和主题的升华。 推导主题 故事通过主人公从恐惧到勇气的成长，以及对骑士群体偏见的改变，探讨了勇气的力量和打破偏见的重要性。主人公不仅突破了自身的心理障碍，还感受到了陌生人善意的温暖，从中领悟到不应以貌取人。 主题为“勇气与善意”，强调克服内心恐惧的重要性以及通过行动理解和接纳他人的必要性，从而展现人际互动中信任与共鸣的力量。 五、润参考答案 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. My heart sank even further. I quickly found an empty seat in the back row, trying to make myself as inconspicuous as possible. I clutched my bag tightly, constantly glanced around and prayed that nothing bad would happen. Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. Were they going to cause trouble? The tension in the air was palpable, and I regretted my decision to come alone. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They had come to support the fundraiser for the local animal shelters. As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. They were as moved as I was by the heartwarming and heartbreaking stories. During the intermission, some of them even came over to me, smiling kindly and asking if I was enjoying the film. Their tough exteriors hid big, soft hearts. I felt ashamed of my initial fear and was truly grateful that I had decided to come. We spent the rest of the evening sharing our love for animals and discussing ways to help. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间，看到酒店附近剧院有一场关于动物救助站救助流浪狗的纪录片放映及筹款活动，作者因喜爱动物想去参加，却在剧院外看到一群看起来凶巴巴的摩托骑手，犹豫后还是进入剧院，希望电影结束时骑手们已离开。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句 “我匆匆走进剧院，却发现里面有更多的骑手。” 可知，第一段可描写作者进入剧院后，面对更多骑手时内心的忐忑、不安，以及所采取的试图让自己安全、不引人注意的行动，比如找角落座位、紧紧抓包、频繁观察骑手等，展现当时紧张氛围。 ②由第二段首句“电影开始时，我意识到这些骑手是一个动物救援组织。” 可知，第二段可描写电影播放过程中作者看到骑手们被纪录片触动的表现，以及中场休息时骑手们与作者友好互动的情景，体现出骑手们外表与内心的反差，突显温暖主题。 2. 续写线索：进入剧院，遇到更多骑手——内心恐惧找座躲避——电影开场，知晓骑手身份——观影中骑手真情流露——中场休息友好交流 3. 词汇激活： 行为类： ①紧握：clutch/grab/grasp/seize ②偷看：peek at/steal a look at/glance at ③支持：support/back/uphold/advocate 情绪类： ①感动：moved/touched/affected ②羞愧：ashamed/embarrassed 【点睛】【高分句型1】Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和what引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语作状语和宾语补足语) 【读后续写真题满分语料】 满分语料一、无灵主语（时间、地点、情感、自然现象、动作行为类名词作主语） 1. My heart sank and I felt like I had walked into a lion's den. 1.我的心沉了下去，感觉自己好像走进了狮子窝。 2. A wave of panic swept over me as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia. 2.当我注意到一大群骑自行车的人时，一阵恐慌席卷了我，他们都戴着徽章。 3. Their tough appearance didn’t seem to match the peaceful atmosphere inside the theater. 3.他们强硬的外表似乎与剧院里的宁静气氛不相称。 4. The fear I had felt earlier faded, replaced by a deep respect for their dedication and kindness. 4.我早些时候感到的恐惧消失了，取而代之的是对他们的奉献精神和善良的深深敬意。 5. Their unexpected actions planted a seed of doubt in my mind-maybe I had misjudged them. 5.他们出乎意料的举动在我心中播下了怀疑的种子——也许我误判了他们。 6. Fear took over me in an instant, so I held my wallet really tight and tried my best to go unnoticed. 6.恐惧瞬间笼罩了我，所以我紧紧地攥着钱包，尽量不被人注意。 满分语料二、动作链（A and B型，A, B and C 型） 7. I clutched my bag tightly, constantly glanced around and prayed that nothing bad would happen. 7.我紧紧地抓着包，不停地环顾四周，祈祷不会发生什么坏事。 8. One of the bikers even smiled at me and handed me a booklet about their rescue work. 8.其中一名摩托车手甚至对我微笑，递给我一本关于他们救援工作的小册子。 9. Touched by their passion and kindness, I approached them expressed my admiration and respect. 9.我被他们的热情和善良所感动，走近他们表达了我的钦佩和尊重。 满分语料三、独立主格结构/with复合结构 10. With the documentary on, the bikers watched the film attentively. 10.随着纪录片的播放，摩托车手们聚精会神地看了这部电影。 11. I steeled myself and slid into a seat at the back, my heart pounding like a drum. 11.我挺直了身子，滑到后面的座位上，我的心像鼓一样砰砰直跳。 12. I approached one of them. “Thank you for what you do,” I said, my voice trembling. 12.我走近其中一人。“谢谢你所做的一切，”我说，声音颤抖。 13. With panic washing over me, my heart sank, regretting I should have rushed back to the hotel. 13.我惊慌失措，心沉了下去，后悔自己应该赶紧回酒店。 满分语料四、非谓语短语（作主语、宾语、状语、定语、宾语补足语等） 14. I kept stealing glances at them, still feeling extremely nervous. 14.我偷偷地瞥了他们一眼，仍然感到非常紧张。 15. They organized this event to raise funds and awareness for the abandoned dogs. 15.他们组织了这次活动，为被遗弃的狗筹集资金和提高认识。 16. Overwhelmed by a mixture of confusion and worry, I waited for the film to start. 16.困惑和担忧交织在一起，我等待着电影的开始。 17. Taking a deep breath, I managed to find an empty seat as far away from them as possible. 17.我深吸一口气，设法找到了一个离他们尽可能远的空座位。 18. We spent the rest of the evening sharing our love for animals and discussing ways to help. 18.我们花了剩下的时间分享我们对动物的爱，并讨论如何提供帮助。 19. Holding my wallet tightly I seated myself at the back of the theater, trying to remain unnoticed. 19.我紧紧地握着钱包，坐在剧院后面，尽量不被人注意。 满分语料五、形容词/副词开头 20. Surprised and amazed, I noticed that all the bikers were all in an orderly manner. 20.我惊讶地发现，所有的骑手都很有序。 21. Unable to contain my emotion, I was touched to tears. 21.我无法控制自己的情绪，感动得流下了眼泪。 满分语料六、特殊句式（倒装+强调+省略） 22. No sooner had I settled in than I noticed a biker gently petting a small dog by his side. 22.我刚安顿下来，就注意到一个骑自行车的人轻轻地抚摸着他身边的一只小狗。 23. Still nervous as I was, I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start. 23.尽管我仍然很紧张，但我还是努力让自己冷静下来，等待电影开始。 24. Little did I know that they were here to support the local animal shelters. 24.我几乎不知道他们来这里支持当地的动物收容所。 25. Not only did I learn not to judge a person by their looks, but also I encountered bikers making the world better for animals. 25.我不仅学会了不以貌取人，还遇到了为动物创造更美好世界的摩托车手。 满分语料七、介词短语位于句首 26. Despite their tough appearance, they weren’t as dangerous as they looked. 26.尽管他们外表强硬，但并不像看上去那么危险。 27. At the sight of scenes, my previous panic gave way to respect. 27.看到这些场景，我之前的恐慌让位于尊重。 28. Instead of being scary, they were working to make the world a better place for the helpless animals. 28.他们非但没有表现出恐惧，反而致力于让世界变得更适合无助的动物。 满分语料八、环境描写 29. The light dimming down, I had no choice but to watch the film with a frightened heart. 29.灯光变暗了，我别无选择，只能带着一颗害怕的心看电影。 30. The leather jackets, heavy boots, and impolite stares made my heart pound even faster. 30.皮夹克、沉重的靴子和无礼的眼神让我心跳得更快。 满分语料九、主从复合句 31. I felt ashamed of my initial fear and was truly grateful that I had decided to come. 31.我为最初的恐惧感到羞愧，并对自己决定来感到非常感激。 32. I hesitated for a moment at the door, unsure whether I should stay or leave. 32.我在门口犹豫了一会儿，不确定是留下还是离开。 33. By the time the credits rolled, my perception of these men had shifted entirely. 33.当学分滚动时，我对这些人的看法已经完全改变了。 34. The moment they approached, I got almost choked, hard to breath. 34.他们走近的那一刻，我几乎喘不过气来。 满分语料十、主题升华句 35. It was not until then that I really understood “don’t judge a book by its cover”. 35.直到那时，我才真正明白“不要以貌取人”。 36. A sense of relief washed over me as I realized that these bikers were there for a noble cause. 36.当我意识到这些骑自行车的人是为了崇高的事业而来时，一种解脱感涌上心头。 37. I was touched by their love for animals and glad that I hadn't let my fear stop me from coming. 37.他们对动物的热爱让我感动，我很高兴我没有让恐惧阻止我来。 38. As I walked out of the theater, I looked back at the bikers with newfound respect and admiration. 38.当我走出剧院时，我带着新的尊重和钦佩回头看了看那些骑自行车的人。 39. It was through this brave adventure that I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers. 39.正是通过这次勇敢的冒险，我结识了这些热情的动物救援人员。 40. I realized that courage is not only about facing danger but also about seeking the goodness in others. 40.我意识到，勇气不仅意味着面对危险，还意味着寻求他人的善良。 【读后续写真题好题调研】 1．（24-25高三下·山东·开学考试）犬吠传希望，忠诚救主归 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Grga Brkie never expected that a mountain-climbing trip would put him in such a desperate situation. That Sunday, while climbing the highest peak of the Velebit mountain range, which was about 5,800 feet above coastline, he accidentally slipped and fell nearly 500 feet down a snowy slope (斜坡). The fall caused his leg to be severely broken and he couldn’t move at all. He was filled with fear, knowing clearly that if no one came to rescue him, he might die of the freezing temperature in this snowy place. Fortunately, two nearby hikers spotted Brke and his eight-month-old Alaskan malamute (阿拉斯加犬), North, at the bottom of the slope. However, they couldn’t reach them safely. After a brief discussion, they knew they had no choice but to rush off in search of professional rescuers. Before they left, they dropped some necessary supplies to the bottom of the slope so that Brkic could keep his strength and energy. In spite of that, Brkic couldn’t help being shivering (颤抖) in the snow with the temperature getting lower and lower. At this critical moment, North, sensing its master’s great danger, immediately sprang into action. It circled around Brkic a few times, as if assessing the best way to help. Then, with a gentle yet determined motion, it slowly and carefully laid itself over Brkie’s body, making sure to cover as much of him as possible. As an Alaskan malamute, North are naturally resistant to cold, whose waterproof double coats can keep it warm even in temperatures as low as -20°F. Now it was like a warm little sun, tightly guarding Brkie. North remained perfectly still, and was alert to any signs of approaching help or potential danger, as if it had taken on the great responsibility of being Brkie’s guardian and protecting his master from any possible danger. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Before Brkic lost consciousness (意识), he heard North barking loudly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, the rescuers managed to save and rush Brkie to the hospital with North. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 Before Brkic lost consciousness, he heard North barking loudly. The barking was a signal of hope which echoed through the mountains, leading the rescuers to find them. When they found Brkic, they were surprised to find that North was still warming his master without any movement until it realized that they were here to help. The rescuers quickly launched the rescue operation. They carefully fixed Brkic's broken leg with a splint, then gently lifted him onto a stretcher. During the whole process, North refused to be separated from its owner and watched patiently. Finally, there rescuers managed to save and rush Brkic to the hospital with North. In the hospital, Brkic underwent an emergency operation while North was unharmed. The moment Brkic regained consciousness, he thanked those kind people and searched for North, who was also looking at him with those warm and loyal eyes. Brkic reached out his hand weakly to pet North, with his voice choked with emotion as he whispered words of love and thanks. In face of the emergency, it was loyalty and kindness that cross all boundaries and brought hope of survival. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Grga Brkie带着阿拉斯加犬North爬山时不小心摔倒，从雪坡上滑下来受伤，无法动弹，幸好附近的两名徒步旅行者在斜坡底部发现了他们，但是他们无法到达那里，只能赶紧去寻找专业的救援人员，随着气温越来越低，Brkic忍不住在雪地里打哆嗦，North觉察到主人的危险情况，温柔地躺在Brkie身上为他保暖，并保持着警惕，保护他的主人免受任何可能的危险。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“在Brkie失去知觉之前，他听到North在大声吠叫。”可知，第一段可描写North的叫声引导救援人员找到他们并展开救援。 ②由第二段首句内容“最后，救援人员设法救出了Brkic，并将其与North一起送往医院。”可知，第二段可描写Brkic经过手术后恢复知觉，感激那些善良的人和忠诚的North。 2. 续写线索：救援人员发现Brkic和North——展开救援——送到医院——恢复知觉——感激 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①带领：lead/direct ②意识到：realize/be aware ③寻找：search for/look for 情绪类 ①惊讶：surprised/astonished ②感谢：thanks/appreciation 【点睛】【高分句型1】The barking was a signal of hope which echoed through the mountains, leading the rescuers to find them.（运用了关系代词which引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】The moment Brkic regained consciousness, he thanked those kind people and searched for North, who was also looking at him with those warm and loyal eyes.（运用了the moment引导的时间状语从句和关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型3】Brkic reached out his hand weakly to pet North, with his voice choked with emotion as he whispered words of love and thanks.（运用了独立主格结构以及从属连词as引导的时间状语从句） 2．（23-24高三上·浙江·开学考试）宝宝落水，狗狗上演生死救援 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A Four-legged Guardian Angel Snow had just melted off the ground that April day at our house in Regina Beach. I had just cleaned up the pool in preparation for selling the house. The year before, I had lost my job, and now our financial situation was depressing. Finally, I had put the home on the market. Even worse, I would have to give up my beloved Great Dane (大丹犬), Brigitte, because I could no longer afford the cost of feeding it. The thought of losing the dog and our beautiful home was almost more than I could bear. Deep in discouragement, I sat typing up my application letters. Out of the corner of my eye I could see my thirteen-month-old son, Forrest, as he lay on the carpet, playing near our big, gentle Brigitte. It seemed as if Brigitte was always meant to be in this family and she turned out to be a perfect companion. Brigitte came to our house on Christmas eve when the doorbell rang and I was sure some of my Christmas packages had arrived.  I ran to the door but no one was there. I sensed something and looked down, only to find a beautiful Great Dane sitting there, looking up at me with big, intelligent eyes. Perhaps, someone had found the puppy somewhere and left her there, and then rang the doorbell and ran away. They accurately guessed I would welcome an additional family member and take care of her. Thinking of these, I couldn’t help sighing and went straight back to work. However, I hadn’t typed more than two sentences when Brigitte began barking and running back and forth to the sliding glass door overlooking our pool. I raced to see what was happening and noticed that the sliding door was slightly open. Suddenly, I realized Forrest was nowhere to be seen.  In panic, I opened the door and ran outside. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文1】 There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool. Breathless and astonished, I watched Brigitte mustering her courage to swim towards my son, who was struggling desperately in the icy water. Almost meanwhile, I sprang into action. With every powerful stroke, I got close to where Forrest was floating. Fortunately, he was about to sink when I grabbed him by the arm and dragged him to the shallow end of the pool, with Brigitte paddling alongside, concern obvious in her big and intelligent eyes. The moment I got my boy out, our beloved dog bounced around him, constantly licking his pale face as if to warm him. Voice trembling, I called 911 and soon we were rushed to the nearest hospital. Every second counted! Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital. At this, I heaved a sigh of relief. On arriving home, our dog Brigitte leaped high up to give us warm and wet kisses, wagging her tail cheerfully. Looking directly into her eyes with gratitude and a bit of guilt, I scooped her up and held her close to my chest, unwilling to let her go for a single minute. It was then that I suddenly became aware that life sometimes can be cruel and miserable, but there was always someone or something guiding you, protecting you, and accompanying you with unconditional love and loyalty. Our dog was just our guardian angel, shattering my despair about losing our home and guiding us out of trouble. How could I leave her? 【满分范文2】 There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool. Then to my horror, I caught sight of Forrest’s yellow sleeper. Brigitte was bravely doing her best to keep him afloat by holding on to his sleeper with her mouth. At the same time, she was desperately trying to swim to the shallow end. Only then did I realize that Forrest had somehow opened the door, wandered out and fallen into the pool. In a split second, I dove in, lifted my precious baby out and carried him inside. Hands shaking, I called 911 and we were rushed to the hospital immediately, where the doctor kept him for observation for one night. Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital. Back home, once Brigitte saw him, she barked with apparent joy and wouldn’t let Forrest out of her sight. In time she settled down, but remained dedicated to Forrest and followed him everywhere, concerned about his safety. Even when Forrest was asleep, Brigitte crammed herself under the crib, keeping a vigil. Our dog was indeed an angel, erasing any despair I might have had about losing our home. A house could always be replaced, but knowing we had each other around was the greatest blessing of all. I was grateful she was part of our lives, who I would never give up. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者失业后经济紧张，不得不卖掉房子并放弃爱犬Brigitte，沮丧之中作者一边编写求职信一边从眼角余光看着儿子Forrest和Brigitte玩耍，作者回忆着遇见Brigitte的情形，后来听到Brigitte开始吠叫，作者跑去查看才意识到Forrest不见了，惊慌地打开门跑了出去。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“在那里，我惊讶地看到害怕水的Brigitte跳进了游泳池。”可知，第一段可描写Brigitte跳进水里救起了Forrest，作者把儿子送去了医院。 ②由第二段首句内容“最后，医生说Forrest没事，可以出院了。”可知，第二段可描写回家后Brigitte的反应让作者决定不会放弃它。 2.续写线索：救出Forrest——送往医院——出院——Brigitte的反应——拥抱Brigitte——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①立即行动：spring into action/jump into action ②抓住：grab/catch ③意识到：become aware/realize 情绪类 ①惊讶：astonished/surprised ②感激：gratitude/appreciation 【点睛】[高分句型1] Breathless and astonished, I watched Brigitte mustering her courage to swim towards my son, who was struggling desperately in the icy water.（由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] The moment I got my boy out, our beloved dog bounced around him, constantly licking his pale face as if to warm him. （由the moment引导时间状语从句） [高分句型3] It was then that I suddenly became aware that life sometimes can be cruel and miserable, but there was always someone or something guiding you, protecting you, and accompanying you with unconditional love and loyalty.（强调句型和that引导的宾语从句） 4 / 15 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 《2025年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》 专题02 2025八省联考卷读后续写及满分语料10类40句 (机车党硬汉柔情) 原卷版 【读后续写六年高考考情】 年份 卷别 主题 话题 类型 2025 浙江1月卷 人与社会/自我 勇寻真相并且学会共情的重要性 生活故事类 八省联考卷 人与社会/动物 铁汉柔情让我感动流浪犬守护者 关爱动物类 2024 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与自我 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 校园生活类 九省联考卷 人与自然 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 关爱动物类 2023 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 写作竞赛类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 关爱动物类 2022 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 越野比赛类 浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 助人为乐类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友 校园生活类 2021 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 家庭亲情类 浙江6月卷 人与自我 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 生活故事类 2020 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 个人成长类 浙江7月卷 人与自然 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 关爱动物类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 关爱动物类 【读后续写竞赛类话题思维导图】 ( 点 1 ： 位于续写 第一段段首 ，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点 2 ： 位于续写 第一段段尾 ，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点 3 ： 位于续写 第二段段首 ，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点 4 ： 续写 结尾 主旨 升华 ，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 ) 【读后续写竞赛类话题满分策略】 【读后续写真题深度解读】 【原题呈现】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night. 在费城开会，想参加动物筹款活动。 I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off. 本想待在室内，后来决定出门去剧院。 It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers. 天黑出发，剧院门口遇到一群骑手。 I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men — all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club — standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event? 孤身遇骑手，心生警惕起疑惑。 A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. 确定地方正确，决定进剧院躲避骑手。 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【步步为赢】 一、知故事大意 阅读材料讲述了作者在费城出差时，看到一则关于当地动物救助组织的纪录片宣传广告。由于不愿独自一人外出，作者本打算在酒店房间度过这个晚上。然而，在感到无聊后，作者鼓起勇气前往剧院观看纪录片，但在剧院前遇到了一个由许多大块头骑士组成的团体。作者一开始感到非常紧张，认为自己可能会遇到麻烦，甚至有点后悔自己的决定。尽管如此，作者最终决定进入剧院，希望能安全观看电影。续写部分要求构思作者进入剧院后发生的事情，特别是揭示摩托车骑士的真实身份，以及作者是如何从恐惧转向安心。 二、审篇章段落 阅读材料由五段组成，各段段落大意如下： 第一段：作者在费城参加会议时，看到一个关于动物救助的纪录片广告，想去观看募捐活动，但由于没有同事陪伴，且担心独自外出，犹豫是否前往。 第二段：作者回到酒店后感到无聊和不安，决定克服恐惧，前往剧院。剧院距离酒店只有五个街区，周围环境看起来不危险，于是决定出发。 第三段：天色已晚，街道几乎空无一人。作者找到了剧院所在的街道，但转角后却被眼前的一群看起来强壮威猛的摩托车骑行者吓到。 第四段：虽然作者知道许多摩托车爱好者是友善的人，但此时作为一个独自女性，身处陌生的街区，面对一群身穿标志的摩托车骑行者，作者感到非常害怕，并开始怀疑自己是否来错了地方。 第五段：尽管感到害怕，作者看到剧院的标志确认自己来对了地方。她决定进入剧院，希望里面会更安全，并祈祷摩托车骑行者会离开。 三、定叙事结构 从结构上看，文章采用了“设悬念—解谜”的叙事方式。阅读材料部分通过详细描写作者的心理活动，尤其是对这群骑士的恐惧，制造了紧张氛围。而续写部分则要求合理构思情节解开这个谜团，让整个故事从紧张转为轻松，传递出一个积极向上的信息。续写部分要继续延续这个悬念并最终解答，保证故事有完整的闭环。 情节发展 故事细节 开端 (Beginning) 在费城的一家酒店，作者看到关于动物救助的募捐广告，决定去剧院观看。 发展 (Development) 在到达剧院时，作者看到一群摩托车骑士站在剧院门外，感到紧张和不安。 高潮 (Climax) 她决定进入剧院，但在剧院内，她发现里面有更多摩托车骑士，这让她更加困惑和不安。 结局 (Ending) 当电影开始后，作者发现这些摩托车骑士实际上是一个动物救助组织的成员，他们是来支持这次募捐活动的。 四、构写作思路 1.续写第一段写作思路 续写第一段的段落开头语是“我匆匆进入剧院，结果发现剧院里还有更多的摩托车骑士。”这暗示作者原本的恐惧没有完全消失，她进入剧院后发现情况并没有改善，反而有更多的骑士。这一段我们需要保持文章的紧张气氛和悬疑感，可通过环境的描写、作者的心理活动，以及骑士们的举止，来继续加强这种悬疑氛围。  2.续写第二段写作思路 续写第二段的段落开头语是“在电影开始后，我意识到这些骑士其实是一个动物救助组织的成员。” 在这一段的续写中，我们需要揭示这些骑士其实是参与动物救援活动的志愿者。可以通过对影片内容的描述、骑士们的行为等，让读者逐渐意识到他们并不是“坏人”，而是为了公益事业而聚集在一起。通过这个转折，消除之前的紧张氛围，并传达一种温暖和正能量。 步骤 分析 结果 找出矛盾冲突 故事中的主要矛盾是主人公的兴趣和安全担忧之间的对立，以及对陌生人外表的恐惧和内心勇气的冲突。主人公热爱动物，想去支持募捐活动，但她害怕独自一人前往陌生环境并面对看似威胁的骑士群体。 矛盾集中在兴趣与恐惧的对立以及偏见与真实情况的反差，通过勇气的表现推动情节发展，体现成长与突破自我。 分析情感转折 情感的转折从主人公初步犹豫到最终进入剧院，表现她对恐惧的克服。开始时她因骑士们的外表感到震惊和恐惧，但在克服内心的矛盾后，她选择了信任和坚持。最终，她发现骑士们实际上是动物救援组织的成员，这一情感转变突出了对陌生人和环境的重新认识。 情感转折体现在从不安与犹豫到勇气与突破，再到偏见消解后的温暖感动，推动了故事的情感递进和主题的升华。 推导主题 故事通过主人公从恐惧到勇气的成长，以及对骑士群体偏见的改变，探讨了勇气的力量和打破偏见的重要性。主人公不仅突破了自身的心理障碍，还感受到了陌生人善意的温暖，从中领悟到不应以貌取人。 主题为“勇气与善意”，强调克服内心恐惧的重要性以及通过行动理解和接纳他人的必要性，从而展现人际互动中信任与共鸣的力量。 五、润参考答案 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间，看到酒店附近剧院有一场关于动物救助站救助流浪狗的纪录片放映及筹款活动，作者因喜爱动物想去参加，却在剧院外看到一群看起来凶巴巴的摩托骑手，犹豫后还是进入剧院，希望电影结束时骑手们已离开。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句 “我匆匆走进剧院，却发现里面有更多的骑手。” 可知，第一段可描写作者进入剧院后，面对更多骑手时内心的忐忑、不安，以及所采取的试图让自己安全、不引人注意的行动，比如找角落座位、紧紧抓包、频繁观察骑手等，展现当时紧张氛围。 ②由第二段首句“电影开始时，我意识到这些骑手是一个动物救援组织。” 可知，第二段可描写电影播放过程中作者看到骑手们被纪录片触动的表现，以及中场休息时骑手们与作者友好互动的情景，体现出骑手们外表与内心的反差，突显温暖主题。 2. 续写线索：进入剧院，遇到更多骑手——内心恐惧找座躲避——电影开场，知晓骑手身份——观影中骑手真情流露——中场休息友好交流 3. 词汇激活： 行为类： ①紧握：clutch/grab/grasp/seize ②偷看：peek at/steal a look at/glance at ③支持：support/back/uphold/advocate 情绪类： ①感动：moved/touched/affected ②羞愧：ashamed/embarrassed 【点睛】【高分句型1】Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和what引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语作状语和宾语补足语) 【读后续写真题满分语料】 满分语料一、无灵主语（时间、地点、情感、自然现象、动作行为类名词作主语） 1. 1.我的心沉了下去，感觉自己好像走进了狮子窝。 2. 2.当我注意到一大群骑自行车的人时，一阵恐慌席卷了我，他们都戴着徽章。 3. 3.他们强硬的外表似乎与剧院里的宁静气氛不相称。 4. 4.我早些时候感到的恐惧消失了，取而代之的是对他们的奉献精神和善良的深深敬意。 5. 5.他们出乎意料的举动在我心中播下了怀疑的种子——也许我误判了他们。 6. 6.恐惧瞬间笼罩了我，所以我紧紧地攥着钱包，尽量不被人注意。 满分语料二、动作链（A and B型，A, B and C 型） 7. 7.我紧紧地抓着包，不停地环顾四周，祈祷不会发生什么坏事。 8. 8.其中一名摩托车手甚至对我微笑，递给我一本关于他们救援工作的小册子。 9. 9.我被他们的热情和善良所感动，走近他们表达了我的钦佩和尊重。 满分语料三、独立主格结构/with复合结构 10. 10.随着纪录片的播放，摩托车手们聚精会神地看了这部电影。 11. 11.我挺直了身子，滑到后面的座位上，我的心像鼓一样砰砰直跳。 12. 12.我走近其中一人。“谢谢你所做的一切，”我说，声音颤抖。 13. 13.我惊慌失措，心沉了下去，后悔自己应该赶紧回酒店。 满分语料四、非谓语短语（作主语、宾语、状语、定语、宾语补足语等） 14. 14.我偷偷地瞥了他们一眼，仍然感到非常紧张。 15. 15.他们组织了这次活动，为被遗弃的狗筹集资金和提高认识。 16. 16.困惑和担忧交织在一起，我等待着电影的开始。 17. 17.我深吸一口气，设法找到了一个离他们尽可能远的空座位。 18. 18.我们花了剩下的时间分享我们对动物的爱，并讨论如何提供帮助。 19. 19.我紧紧地握着钱包，坐在剧院后面，尽量不被人注意。 满分语料五、形容词/副词开头 20. 20.我惊讶地发现，所有的骑手都很有序。 21. 21.我无法控制自己的情绪，感动得流下了眼泪。 满分语料六、特殊句式（倒装+强调+省略） 22. 22.我刚安顿下来，就注意到一个骑自行车的人轻轻地抚摸着他身边的一只小狗。 23. 23.尽管我仍然很紧张，但我还是努力让自己冷静下来，等待电影开始。 24. 24.我几乎不知道他们来这里支持当地的动物收容所。 25. 25.我不仅学会了不以貌取人，还遇到了为动物创造更美好世界的摩托车手。 满分语料七、介词短语位于句首 26. 26.尽管他们外表强硬，但并不像看上去那么危险。 27. 27.看到这些场景，我之前的恐慌让位于尊重。 28. 28.他们非但没有表现出恐惧，反而致力于让世界变得更适合无助的动物。 满分语料八、环境描写 29. 29.灯光变暗了，我别无选择，只能带着一颗害怕的心看电影。 30. 30.皮夹克、沉重的靴子和无礼的眼神让我心跳得更快。 满分语料九、主从复合句 31. 31.我为最初的恐惧感到羞愧，并对自己决定来感到非常感激。 32. 32.我在门口犹豫了一会儿，不确定是留下还是离开。 33. 33.当学分滚动时，我对这些人的看法已经完全改变了。 34. 34.他们走近的那一刻，我几乎喘不过气来。 满分语料十、主题升华句 35. 35.直到那时，我才真正明白“不要以貌取人”。 36. 36.当我意识到这些骑自行车的人是为了崇高的事业而来时，一种解脱感涌上心头。 37. 37.他们对动物的热爱让我感动，我很高兴我没有让恐惧阻止我来。 38. 38.当我走出剧院时，我带着新的尊重和钦佩回头看了看那些骑自行车的人。 39. 39.正是通过这次勇敢的冒险，我结识了这些热情的动物救援人员。 40. 40.我意识到，勇气不仅意味着面对危险，还意味着寻求他人的善良。 【读后续写真题好题调研】 1．（24-25高三下·山东·开学考试）犬吠传希望，忠诚救主归 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Grga Brkie never expected that a mountain-climbing trip would put him in such a desperate situation. That Sunday, while climbing the highest peak of the Velebit mountain range, which was about 5,800 feet above coastline, he accidentally slipped and fell nearly 500 feet down a snowy slope (斜坡). The fall caused his leg to be severely broken and he couldn’t move at all. He was filled with fear, knowing clearly that if no one came to rescue him, he might die of the freezing temperature in this snowy place. Fortunately, two nearby hikers spotted Brke and his eight-month-old Alaskan malamute (阿拉斯加犬), North, at the bottom of the slope. However, they couldn’t reach them safely. After a brief discussion, they knew they had no choice but to rush off in search of professional rescuers. Before they left, they dropped some necessary supplies to the bottom of the slope so that Brkic could keep his strength and energy. In spite of that, Brkic couldn’t help being shivering (颤抖) in the snow with the temperature getting lower and lower. At this critical moment, North, sensing its master’s great danger, immediately sprang into action. It circled around Brkic a few times, as if assessing the best way to help. Then, with a gentle yet determined motion, it slowly and carefully laid itself over Brkie’s body, making sure to cover as much of him as possible. As an Alaskan malamute, North are naturally resistant to cold, whose waterproof double coats can keep it warm even in temperatures as low as -20°F. Now it was like a warm little sun, tightly guarding Brkie. North remained perfectly still, and was alert to any signs of approaching help or potential danger, as if it had taken on the great responsibility of being Brkie’s guardian and protecting his master from any possible danger. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Before Brkic lost consciousness (意识), he heard North barking loudly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, the rescuers managed to save and rush Brkie to the hospital with North. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24高三上·浙江·开学考试）宝宝落水，狗狗上演生死救援 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A Four-legged Guardian Angel Snow had just melted off the ground that April day at our house in Regina Beach. I had just cleaned up the pool in preparation for selling the house. The year before, I had lost my job, and now our financial situation was depressing. Finally, I had put the home on the market. Even worse, I would have to give up my beloved Great Dane (大丹犬), Brigitte, because I could no longer afford the cost of feeding it. The thought of losing the dog and our beautiful home was almost more than I could bear. Deep in discouragement, I sat typing up my application letters. Out of the corner of my eye I could see my thirteen-month-old son, Forrest, as he lay on the carpet, playing near our big, gentle Brigitte. It seemed as if Brigitte was always meant to be in this family and she turned out to be a perfect companion. Brigitte came to our house on Christmas eve when the doorbell rang and I was sure some of my Christmas packages had arrived.  I ran to the door but no one was there. I sensed something and looked down, only to find a beautiful Great Dane sitting there, looking up at me with big, intelligent eyes. Perhaps, someone had found the puppy somewhere and left her there, and then rang the doorbell and ran away. They accurately guessed I would welcome an additional family member and take care of her. Thinking of these, I couldn’t help sighing and went straight back to work. However, I hadn’t typed more than two sentences when Brigitte began barking and running back and forth to the sliding glass door overlooking our pool. I raced to see what was happening and noticed that the sliding door was slightly open. Suddenly, I realized Forrest was nowhere to be seen.  In panic, I opened the door and ran outside. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 / 12 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$