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05 话题作文之咨询建议类 近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2024年 黑龙江 如何提高英语听说能力 话题作文 2023年 江苏常州 阐述倾听的重要性 话题作文 2022年 湖南岳阳 讲述提升自己的方法 话题作文 写作方法指导 一、命题特点解析 核心指向：聚焦个人成长与生活实践 学习方法指导（2024黑龙江/2022岳阳） 人际交往能力（2023常州） 自我管理能力（2022岳阳） 设题规律： 以第二人称为主（How to.../The way to...） 要求提出3-4条可行性建议 强调建议的层次性与逻辑性 高频考点： ✅ 条件状语从句（If you..., you'll...） ✅ 建议句型（It's advisable to.../Why not...） ✅ 逻辑连接词（Firstly, Moreover, Finally） 二、写作思维框架 黄金结构模型： 1. 引入段（40词） - 现象描述：Nowadays, many students find it challenging to... - 表达关切：As an experienced learner, I'd like to share... 2. 主体段（80词） - 分论点1：Immersion learning（例：English podcasts） - 分论点2：Practical application（例：language partners） - 分论点3：Persistent practice（例：daily recording） 3. 结尾段（30词） - 总结升华：Rome wasn't built in a day. With these methods... - 鼓励话语：Believe in yourself and you'll see progress! 三、高频语料库 进阶表达替换： 普通表达：listen carefully → 升级表达：practice active listening 普通表达：try hard → 升级表达：make consistent efforts 万能建议模板： • Create a ___-minute daily routine for ___ (时间管理) • Keep a progress journal to track ___ (自我监督) • Seek feedback from ___ regularly (外部反馈) 谚语运用示例： Practice makes perfect → 适用于学习方法类 Two heads are better than one → 适用于合作学习建议 四、避坑指南 内容陷阱： ❌ 空泛建议：Study harder ✅ 具体方案：Allocate 30 minutes daily for shadowing practice 逻辑陷阱： 避免建议矛盾（如既建议参加英语角又建议独自练习需说明互补关系） 文化陷阱： 慎用中式思维建议（如单纯强调memorization） 体现跨文化意识（建议观看TED演讲而非仅教科书） 写作模板 【模板一：能力提升型】 （适用于学习方法建议） 标题：How to Improve Your 【English Listening Skills】Effectively 结构解析： Introduction (现象描述+写作目的) Many students feel worried about 【their English listening exams】. As someone who has overcome similar challenges, I'd like to share practical strategies that really work. Body (分层建议) ◆ Create immersive environments Start by 【labeling household items with English names】. This helps you 【think in English naturally】. ◆ Leverage technology wisely Apps like 【"BBC Learning English"】allow you to 【adjust audio speed】. Remember: "Practice makes perfect" when doing 【dictation exercises】. ◆ Turn practice into habits 【Listen to English songs】while commuting. Even 15-minute daily practice will make 【a noticeable difference】. Conclusion (鼓励展望) With consistent effort and these methods, you'll not only 【pass exams】but also truly enjoy 【the beauty of English】 【模板二：人际交往型】 （适用于沟通技巧建议） 标题：The Art of Being a Good Listener 结构解析： Opening (类比引入) Just as a plant needs water to grow, relationships require 【active listening】to thrive. Let me show you how to master this skill. Suggestions (具体场景) ✓ Eye contact matters When 【your friend shares problems】, put down your phone. This simple action shows 【genuine care】. ✓ Respond with empathy Instead of saying "I know", try 【"That must be hard for you"】. This creates 【emotional connection】. ✓ Ask open-ended questions Phrases like 【"How did that make you feel?"】encourage deeper conversations. Closing (谚语升华) Remember: "We have two ears and one mouth for a reason." By practicing these tips, you'll become 【the friend everyone trusts】 【模板三：自我管理型】 （适用于习惯养成建议） 标题：3 Steps to Become a Better Self 结构解析： Hook(提问式开头) Ever wonder why some people keep improving while others stay the same? The secret lies in 【smart self-management】. Step-by-step Guide ❶ Set SMART goals Instead of 【"I want to read more"】, try 【"I'll read 20 pages every night before bed"】. ❷ Track progress visually Draw a 【weekly habit tracker】. Coloring each completed task gives 【a sense of achievement】. ❸ Reward milestones When you 【stick to a plan for 21 days】, treat yourself to 【a favorite movie】. Motivational Ending As the saying goes, 【"Small daily improvements lead to big results"】. Start your journey today! 常用表达 一、开头段必备表达 现象描述 基础句型：Many students have problems with... 升级句型：It's common to see teenagers struggling with... 示例：It's common to see teenagers struggling with time management during exams. 表达关切 基础句型：I want to give you some advice. 升级句型：As someone who has been through similar challenges, I'd like to share... 示例：As an experienced language learner, I'd like to share proven strategies. 强调重要性 基础句型：It's important to... 升级句型：Nothing is more crucial than... 示例：Nothing is more crucial than building confidence in language learning. 二、建议主体段核心句型 行动建议 万能模板：Make it a habit to 【do】 everyday 高级替换：Incorporate 【activity】 into your daily routine 真题应用：Incorporate 10-minute vocabulary review into your morning routine. 条件建议 基础句型：If you 【do A】, you'll 【achieve B】 升级句型：By 【doing A】, you're likely to 【achieve B】 真题应用：By keeping a learning journal, you're likely to identify your weaknesses. 对比建议 基础句型：Instead of 【wrong approach】, try 【better solution】 升级句型：Rather than 【negative action】, why not 【positive action】? 真题应用：Rather than memorizing alone, why not form a study group? 三、逻辑衔接黄金表达 顺序连接 基础词：Firstly → 升级词：Primarily（适用于学习方法类首要建议） 基础词：Secondly → 升级词：More importantly（强调核心建议） 举例说明 基础词：For example → 升级词：A case in point is... 使用场景：A case in point is using flashcards for vocabulary review. 总结过渡 基础词：In a word → 升级词：To sum up 使用场景：To sum up, consistent practice is the key to success. 四、结尾段高分句式 鼓励型 基础表达：Don't give up! 升级版本：Remember: Every small step today leads to big progress tomorrow. 适用话题：自我提升类 展望型 基础表达：You can do it! 升级版本：With consistent practice, you'll not only pass exams but also gain lifelong skills. 适用话题：学习方法类 谚语型 基础表达：Practice makes perfect 升级版本：As the proverb goes, "The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step." 适用话题：通用类 五、高级替换词库 important → essential/critical（强调建议重要性） 示例：Regular feedback is critical for improvement. try → attempt/undertake（描述实践过程） 示例：Attempt to summarize each lesson in your own words. good → effective/productive（评价方法效果） 示例：Productive learning requires focused attention. help → facilitate/enhance（说明建议作用） 示例：Mind maps can enhance memory retention. 六、谚语弹药库 Rome wasn't built in a day 翻译：罗马非一日建成 适用类型：学习方法类 示例："Rome wasn't built in a day" reminds us to be patient in improving listening skills. Actions speak louder than words 翻译：行胜于言 适用类型：自我管理类 示例：Don't just make plans – remember: actions speak louder than words. It takes two to tango 翻译：孤掌难鸣 适用类型：人际交往类 示例：When resolving conflicts, keep in mind: it takes two to tango. 中考真题精讲 （一）（2024·黑龙江·中考真题） 话题作文：英语听说能力是学好英语的关键。请你以How to Improve English Listening and Speaking为题，分享一下提高英语听说能力的方法。 注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分。 提示词：improve, listen to the teacher, English cartoons, conversation, communicate 注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Improve English Listening and Speaking As we know, English listening and speaking are really important in learning English. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二）（2023·江苏常州·中考真题） 当前，有些学生忽视倾听的作用，针对该情况，请你根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，阐述倾听的重要性。 要点： 1.在学校生活中要倾听及理由； 2.在日常生活中要倾听及理由。 注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Listening carefully plays an important role in our life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三）（2022·湖南岳阳·中考真题） 某英语网站开展关于“How to Improve Myself”的征稿活动，倡导同学们提升自我，努力成为“终生运动者，责任担当者，问题解决者，优雅生活者”，请根据以下图示内容积极投稿。 要求： 1.词数80~100； 2.请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥； 3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 How to Improve Myself Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself. _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 名校模拟题提升练 1．（2025·广东江门·二模）假定你是晨光中学学生李华。你校英文报开设了 “经典阅读”专栏，将举办主题为“Reading Classics Will Never Be Outdated” 的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1．阅读经典作品的人越来越少的原因； 2．阅读经典作品的好处； 3．你的建议。 注意： 1．词数不少于100词； 2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 Reading Classics Will Never Be Outdated ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·江苏常州·一模）现在越来越多的学生有久坐的习惯。假定你是李华，请你以“Do not sit for a long time”为题给你校英文报写一篇短文，说明久坐的危害并提出解决这一问题的建议。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称： 2. 词数100左右。 Do not sit for a long time ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·宁夏银川·一模）“双减”政策之后，如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义呢？请你根据以下提示，以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 注意： 1. 文中须包含提示中的所有信息。 2. 补充至少两条建议。 3. 合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和其他真实信息。 Happy Summer Vacation The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·吉林长春·一模）在日常生活中，人们会遇到交友、饮食、交通或防疫等安全问题。请你以“Self Protection”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 结合生活实际，谈谈自我保护的重要性。 2. 列举生活中的安全问题 (至少两个方面)，并分别提出合理化建议。 3. 发出自我保护的号召。 写作要求： 1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。 2.80词左右，书写规范，卷面整洁。 3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名及学校。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2023·辽宁盘锦·三模）拥有健康的体魄在我们的日常生活中尤为重要。某校园英文网站以“How to live a healthy life”为题征文，请从运动、饮食、睡眠、心态等方面提出建议，呼吁同学们关爱自己的健康。 要求： 1.内容符合题目要求，词数80-100； 2语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 How to live a healthy life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！3 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 05 话题作文之咨询建议类 近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2024年 黑龙江 如何提高英语听说能力 话题作文 2023年 江苏常州 阐述倾听的重要性 话题作文 2022年 湖南岳阳 讲述提升自己的方法 话题作文 写作方法指导 一、命题特点解析 核心指向：聚焦个人成长与生活实践 学习方法指导（2024黑龙江/2022岳阳） 人际交往能力（2023常州） 自我管理能力（2022岳阳） 设题规律： 以第二人称为主（How to.../The way to...） 要求提出3-4条可行性建议 强调建议的层次性与逻辑性 高频考点： ✅ 条件状语从句（If you..., you'll...） ✅ 建议句型（It's advisable to.../Why not...） ✅ 逻辑连接词（Firstly, Moreover, Finally） 二、写作思维框架 黄金结构模型： 1. 引入段（40词） - 现象描述：Nowadays, many students find it challenging to... - 表达关切：As an experienced learner, I'd like to share... 2. 主体段（80词） - 分论点1：Immersion learning（例：English podcasts） - 分论点2：Practical application（例：language partners） - 分论点3：Persistent practice（例：daily recording） 3. 结尾段（30词） - 总结升华：Rome wasn't built in a day. With these methods... - 鼓励话语：Believe in yourself and you'll see progress! 三、高频语料库 进阶表达替换： 普通表达：listen carefully → 升级表达：practice active listening 普通表达：try hard → 升级表达：make consistent efforts 万能建议模板： • Create a ___-minute daily routine for ___ (时间管理) • Keep a progress journal to track ___ (自我监督) • Seek feedback from ___ regularly (外部反馈) 谚语运用示例： Practice makes perfect → 适用于学习方法类 Two heads are better than one → 适用于合作学习建议 四、避坑指南 内容陷阱： ❌ 空泛建议：Study harder ✅ 具体方案：Allocate 30 minutes daily for shadowing practice 逻辑陷阱： 避免建议矛盾（如既建议参加英语角又建议独自练习需说明互补关系） 文化陷阱： 慎用中式思维建议（如单纯强调memorization） 体现跨文化意识（建议观看TED演讲而非仅教科书） 写作模板 【模板一：能力提升型】 （适用于学习方法建议） 标题：How to Improve Your 【English Listening Skills】Effectively 结构解析： Introduction (现象描述+写作目的) Many students feel worried about 【their English listening exams】. As someone who has overcome similar challenges, I'd like to share practical strategies that really work. Body (分层建议) ◆ Create immersive environments Start by 【labeling household items with English names】. This helps you 【think in English naturally】. ◆ Leverage technology wisely Apps like 【"BBC Learning English"】allow you to 【adjust audio speed】. Remember: "Practice makes perfect" when doing 【dictation exercises】. ◆ Turn practice into habits 【Listen to English songs】while commuting. Even 15-minute daily practice will make 【a noticeable difference】. Conclusion (鼓励展望) With consistent effort and these methods, you'll not only 【pass exams】but also truly enjoy 【the beauty of English】 【模板二：人际交往型】 （适用于沟通技巧建议） 标题：The Art of Being a Good Listener 结构解析： Opening (类比引入) Just as a plant needs water to grow, relationships require 【active listening】to thrive. Let me show you how to master this skill. Suggestions (具体场景) ✓ Eye contact matters When 【your friend shares problems】, put down your phone. This simple action shows 【genuine care】. ✓ Respond with empathy Instead of saying "I know", try 【"That must be hard for you"】. This creates 【emotional connection】. ✓ Ask open-ended questions Phrases like 【"How did that make you feel?"】encourage deeper conversations. Closing (谚语升华) Remember: "We have two ears and one mouth for a reason." By practicing these tips, you'll become 【the friend everyone trusts】 【模板三：自我管理型】 （适用于习惯养成建议） 标题：3 Steps to Become a Better Self 结构解析： Hook(提问式开头) Ever wonder why some people keep improving while others stay the same? The secret lies in 【smart self-management】. Step-by-step Guide ❶ Set SMART goals Instead of 【"I want to read more"】, try 【"I'll read 20 pages every night before bed"】. ❷ Track progress visually Draw a 【weekly habit tracker】. Coloring each completed task gives 【a sense of achievement】. ❸ Reward milestones When you 【stick to a plan for 21 days】, treat yourself to 【a favorite movie】. Motivational Ending As the saying goes, 【"Small daily improvements lead to big results"】. Start your journey today! 常用表达 一、开头段必备表达 现象描述 基础句型：Many students have problems with... 升级句型：It's common to see teenagers struggling with... 示例：It's common to see teenagers struggling with time management during exams. 表达关切 基础句型：I want to give you some advice. 升级句型：As someone who has been through similar challenges, I'd like to share... 示例：As an experienced language learner, I'd like to share proven strategies. 强调重要性 基础句型：It's important to... 升级句型：Nothing is more crucial than... 示例：Nothing is more crucial than building confidence in language learning. 二、建议主体段核心句型 行动建议 万能模板：Make it a habit to 【do】 everyday 高级替换：Incorporate 【activity】 into your daily routine 真题应用：Incorporate 10-minute vocabulary review into your morning routine. 条件建议 基础句型：If you 【do A】, you'll 【achieve B】 升级句型：By 【doing A】, you're likely to 【achieve B】 真题应用：By keeping a learning journal, you're likely to identify your weaknesses. 对比建议 基础句型：Instead of 【wrong approach】, try 【better solution】 升级句型：Rather than 【negative action】, why not 【positive action】? 真题应用：Rather than memorizing alone, why not form a study group? 三、逻辑衔接黄金表达 顺序连接 基础词：Firstly → 升级词：Primarily（适用于学习方法类首要建议） 基础词：Secondly → 升级词：More importantly（强调核心建议） 举例说明 基础词：For example → 升级词：A case in point is... 使用场景：A case in point is using flashcards for vocabulary review. 总结过渡 基础词：In a word → 升级词：To sum up 使用场景：To sum up, consistent practice is the key to success. 四、结尾段高分句式 鼓励型 基础表达：Don't give up! 升级版本：Remember: Every small step today leads to big progress tomorrow. 适用话题：自我提升类 展望型 基础表达：You can do it! 升级版本：With consistent practice, you'll not only pass exams but also gain lifelong skills. 适用话题：学习方法类 谚语型 基础表达：Practice makes perfect 升级版本：As the proverb goes, "The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step." 适用话题：通用类 五、高级替换词库 important → essential/critical（强调建议重要性） 示例：Regular feedback is critical for improvement. try → attempt/undertake（描述实践过程） 示例：Attempt to summarize each lesson in your own words. good → effective/productive（评价方法效果） 示例：Productive learning requires focused attention. help → facilitate/enhance（说明建议作用） 示例：Mind maps can enhance memory retention. 六、谚语弹药库 Rome wasn't built in a day 翻译：罗马非一日建成 适用类型：学习方法类 示例："Rome wasn't built in a day" reminds us to be patient in improving listening skills. Actions speak louder than words 翻译：行胜于言 适用类型：自我管理类 示例：Don't just make plans – remember: actions speak louder than words. It takes two to tango 翻译：孤掌难鸣 适用类型：人际交往类 示例：When resolving conflicts, keep in mind: it takes two to tango. 中考真题精讲 （一）（2024·黑龙江·中考真题） 话题作文：英语听说能力是学好英语的关键。请你以How to Improve English Listening and Speaking为题，分享一下提高英语听说能力的方法。 注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分。 提示词：improve, listen to the teacher, English cartoons, conversation, communicate 注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Improve English Listening and Speaking As we know, English listening and speaking are really important in learning English. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Improve English Listening and Speaking As we know, English listening and speaking are really important in learning English. Today I would like to share some useful tips on how to improve English listening and speaking skills with you. First of all, we can have more interactive activities in class, such as discussions, interviews, story-telling and role-play. In this way, we can have more fun learning English. Secondly, we can take part in more out-of-class activities like English speech competitions and English evenings. Through these activities we can improve our English skills in an easy and relaxing way. Thirdly, we need to find more opportunities to communicate with people in English, whether they are English teachers or classmates, foreigners or Chinese, because using English is the best way to learn. All in all, what we need is more free time and more space. We must be able to master listening and speaking skills. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题目内容介绍如何提高英语听说能力，可结合实例。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，表示要分享一些提高英语听说能力的方法； 第二步，详细介绍提高听说能力的方法； 第三步，提出希望或鼓励。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②have fun doing sth.做某事玩得开心 ③take part in参加 [高分句型] ①As English learners, we all know that only by mastering listening and speaking skills can we learn English well.(宾语从句以及倒装句) ②we need to find more opportunities to communicate with people in English, whether they are English teachers or classmates, foreigners or Chinese, because using English is the best way to learn.(because引导的原因状语从句) （二）（2023·江苏常州·中考真题） 当前，有些学生忽视倾听的作用，针对该情况，请你根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，阐述倾听的重要性。 要点： 1.在学校生活中要倾听及理由； 2.在日常生活中要倾听及理由。 注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Listening carefully plays an important role in our life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Listening carefully plays an important role in our life. In class, we should listen to teachers carefully. It can not only help us have a better understanding of what the teachers say, but also it can improve learning efficiency. What’s more, we should listen to our classmates carefully. It can show that we are listening to our classmates and we care about them so that it can strengthen our relationship. We should be good listeners at home. We should listen to our parents carefully in order to know about our parents’ ideas and avoid arguing with each other. In a word, listening to others carefully is important in our daily life, so we should learn to become good listeners. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍倾听的重要性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍在学校生活中要倾听及理由； 第三步，介绍在日常生活中要倾听及理由。 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also 不但……而且 ②care about 关心 ③in order to 为了 [高分句型] ①It can show that we are listening to our classmates and we care about them so that it can strengthen our relationship. (that引导的宾语从句，以及so that引导的目的状语从句) ②We should listen to our parents carefully in order to know about our parents’ ideas and avoid arguing with each other. (动词不定式作目的状语) （三）（2022·湖南岳阳·中考真题） 某英语网站开展关于“How to Improve Myself”的征稿活动，倡导同学们提升自我，努力成为“终生运动者，责任担当者，问题解决者，优雅生活者”，请根据以下图示内容积极投稿。 要求： 1.词数80~100； 2.请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥； 3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 How to Improve Myself Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself. _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How to Improve Myself Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself. First, I need to exercise one hour every day. It is bad to stay at home and play games for a long time. Second, I should be responsible for myself and my family. I should be independent instead of depending on my parents too often. Third, in face of the problems, I have to take up the challenges and work them out rather than run away from them. Next, I will develop my interest in many things, such as playing basketball, and knitting, instead of being interested in nothing. Last but not least, I will communicate with others and be a good team player. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述运动，责任担当，问题解决和兴趣爱好方面提升自己的方法。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述提升自己的方法，要叙述完整，条理清晰。 名校模拟题提升练 1．（2025·广东江门·二模）假定你是晨光中学学生李华。你校英文报开设了 “经典阅读”专栏，将举办主题为“Reading Classics Will Never Be Outdated” 的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1．阅读经典作品的人越来越少的原因； 2．阅读经典作品的好处； 3．你的建议。 注意： 1．词数不少于100词； 2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 Reading Classics Will Never Be Outdated ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Reading Classics Will Never Be Outdated Nowadays, many people, especially the young, are unwilling to spend time reading classics. Some reasons account for this phenomenon. For one thing, people tend to do fragmented reading, which brings them fast information without deep thinking. For another, some people feel it no use reading classics since they are outdated and disconnected with their current life. There is no denying that we can benefit a great deal from reading classics. To start with, it is significant for readers to learn about society by reading great works about history and culture, thus enriching our knowledge in many aspects. Additionally, classics provide a chance for us to enhance our aesthetic taste with their beautiful and unique language styles. From my perspective, classics are a precious spiritual treasure of all human beings, which we should value and inherit. Therefore, I advocate all of us reading classics and absorbing the essence of great literature. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体介绍阅读经典作品的人数越来越少的原因、阅读经典作品的好处以及你的建议； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的倡议。 [亮点词汇] ①be unwilling to do sth. 不愿意做某事 ②account for说明…… ③benefit from从……中受益 ④to start with首先 [高分句型] ①From my perspective, classics are a precious spiritual treasure of all human beings, which we should value and inherit. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2．（2024·江苏常州·一模）现在越来越多的学生有久坐的习惯。假定你是李华，请你以“Do not sit for a long time”为题给你校英文报写一篇短文，说明久坐的危害并提出解决这一问题的建议。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称： 2. 词数100左右。 Do not sit for a long time ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Do not sit for a long time Nowadays, more and more students have the habit of sitting for a long time. Not only can this habit make our neck and back ache, but it may make us fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death. To prevent these problems from happening, we should form good living habits. First, we can go to school on foot or by bike so that we can exercise. Second, we should keep a correct sitting posture when we are in class. What’s more, it’s necessary for us to stand up and take some exercise during break time at school. All in all, sitting for a long time has a bad effect on us, and we should develop good living habits. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求介绍久坐的危害并给出解决问题的建议，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍久坐的危害； 第二步，给出解决问题的建议； 第三步，进行总结。 [亮点词汇] ①form good living habits养成良好的生活习惯 ②all in all总而言之 ③have a bad effect on对……有不良影响 [高分句型] ①Not only can this habit make our neck and back ache, but it may make us fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death. (倒装句) ②To prevent these problems from happening, we should form good living habits. (动词不定式作目的状语) 3．（2024·宁夏银川·一模）“双减”政策之后，如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义呢？请你根据以下提示，以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 注意： 1. 文中须包含提示中的所有信息。 2. 补充至少两条建议。 3. 合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和其他真实信息。 Happy Summer Vacation The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Happy Summer Vacation    The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.     Firstly, we should help parents with housework because they need to work during daytime. Secondly, we’d better do some sports to keep fit. Thirdly, I think it advisable to go traveling during the summer vacation. Not only is traveling a great way to enjoy ourselves, but we can also learn more about the world during the process. Fourthly, we are supposed to take up some hobbies in the summer vacation as hobbies can make our life more colorful. Fifthly, we can also work as a volunteer. When we help others, we will also feel happy. Also, we can read more books because we can learn knowledge from books. Finally, we should have a good sleep every night. And this will make us energetic.     I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Hope everyone can have a great summer vacation. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并且要在内容提示的基础上适当发挥，使文章内容更加丰满。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出文章主题——就如何度过即将到来的暑假提建议（这部分题目已给出）； 第二步，陈述题目已给出的建议，包括帮助父母、做运动、去旅行、开始学爱好和作为志愿者工作，并且要在此基础上补充原因；另外，补充两点建议——阅读更多的书籍及保持好的睡眠，并说明原因。 第三步，呼应文章的主题，表示希望自己的建议是有帮助的，愿每个人都度过一个快乐的暑假。 [亮点词汇] ① help sb. with sth.在某事方面帮助某人 ② not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ③ enjoy oneself玩的开心 ④ be supposed to do sth.应该做某事 [高分句型] ① Firstly, we should help parents with housework because they need to work during daytime.（because引导的原因状语从句） ② Not only is traveling a great way to enjoy ourselves, but we can also learn more about the world during the process.(not only位于句首时的部分倒装) 4．（2024·吉林长春·一模）在日常生活中，人们会遇到交友、饮食、交通或防疫等安全问题。请你以“Self Protection”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 结合生活实际，谈谈自我保护的重要性。 2. 列举生活中的安全问题 (至少两个方面)，并分别提出合理化建议。 3. 发出自我保护的号召。 写作要求： 1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。 2.80词左右，书写规范，卷面整洁。 3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名及学校。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. As students, we have to go to school every weekday. On the way to school, we need go across the road sometimes. If we are not careful enough, we may be hit by a car. So we have to learn to protect ourselves. But how can we protect ourselves? First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, don’t cross the street when the lights are red. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. These three suggestions are good for us to protect ourselves. We should accept these suggestions to protect ourselves. In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍当今人们关注的话题是什么； 第二步，介绍学生应该保护好自己； 第三步，介绍具体如何保护自己的建议； 第四步，总结自我保护很重要，希望大家都能有安全的生活。 [亮点词汇] ① pay attention to注意 ② go across穿过 ③ in short总之 [高分句型] ① If we are not careful enough, we may be hit by a car.（if引导的条件状语从句） ② we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line.（when引导的时间状语从句） 5．（2023·辽宁盘锦·三模）拥有健康的体魄在我们的日常生活中尤为重要。某校园英文网站以“How to live a healthy life”为题征文，请从运动、饮食、睡眠、心态等方面提出建议，呼吁同学们关爱自己的健康。 要求： 1.内容符合题目要求，词数80-100； 2语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 How to live a healthy life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to live a healthy life As the saying goes, “You don’t know what health is until you lose it.” So it is very important to live a healthy life. Here is my advice. First, you should do more exercise to build up your body. Maybe running in the morning is a good choice. At the same time, you’d better get enough sleep during the night. You are supposed to go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is harmful to your health. And then it’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and develop a good eating habit. For example, it’s necessary to eat some fruit and vegetables every day. More importantly, holding an active and optimistic attitude toward life is rather important. Whenever you are in trouble, you can try to communicate with your parents and learn to relax. All in all, I hope everyone can pay more attention to health and everyone can benefit from healthy living habits. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中如何过健康的生活的介绍要点， 适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍如何过健康的生活”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“运动、饮食、睡眠、心态等”几个方面重点介绍如何过健康的生活的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语：希望每个人都能更加关注健康，每个人都可以从健康的生活习惯中受益。。 [亮点词汇] ①do exercise做锻炼 ②build up one’s body强健体魄 ③go to bed上床睡觉 [高分句型] ①First, you should do more exercise to build up your body.（to do不定式作目的状语） ②Staying up late is harmful to your health.（动名词作主语）写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！3 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$