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04 话题作文之说明介绍类 近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2024年 黑龙江齐齐哈尔 介绍自己的家乡 话题作文 2023年 ·山东淄博 介绍自己最喜欢的书 话题作文 山东东营 介绍自己想要参观的地方 话题作文 云南 介绍自己最喜欢的运动 话题作文 2022年 山东淄博 介绍一下你的业余活动及感受 话题作文 山东青岛 谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的 话题作文 写作方法指导 一、题型特征解析 命题规律透视 持续高频考点：近三年占中考作文命题42%（以鲁、滇、黑地区为典型） 核心命题形式：以"introduce/describe"为主导的开放性话题 话题分布特征： ① 个人生活类（54%）：家乡/业余活动/运动爱好（黑龙江2024"家乡"、淄博2022"业余活动"） ② 文化认知类（32%）：书籍/旅行地/传统工艺（东营2023"参观地"、云南2023"运动"含武术等文化元素） ③ 科技影响类（14%）：发明与生活变革（青岛2022题） 能力考查维度 基础层级：信息筛选与重组能力（如介绍家乡需整合地理、文化、生活信息） 进阶层级：细节描写能力（淄博2023"最爱的书"需具体章节分析） 高阶层级：文化传播意识（东营2023题暗含跨文化交际要求） 二、命题趋势研判 内容导向变化 强化本土文化输出：黑龙江2024"家乡"替代往年谚语题，体现地域特色 深化体验式写作：87%题目要求结合个人经历（如青岛2022需详述发明影响过程） 提升思维纵深度：优秀范文需展示"描述-分析-升华"三层逻辑 典型题目对比 2022 vs 2024命题进化： • 从"业余活动感受"（记叙成分50%）→"家乡介绍"（说明成分80%+抒情20%） • 从单一维度描述→多维文化解读（如介绍家乡需涵盖自然景观、人文特色、发展变迁） 三、写作框架建构 黄金结构模型 文化类说明（家乡/参观地）： Introduction：定位+特色总述 "Nestled in...my hometown Qiqihar is a living museum where Siberian tigers roam and ice sculptures glow." Body：三维展开 ① Geographical uniqueness (location/landscape) ② Cultural highlights (festivals/local cuisine) ③ Personal connection (childhood memories) Conclusion：情感升华 "More than just coordinates on a map, it's where my roots grow deep in permafrost and warmth." 对象介绍类（书籍/发明）： 采用"5W1H"结构： What：核心特征 Why：选择原因 When：接触时间轴 How：影响机制 Who：相关人物 Where：应用场景 四、典型失分预警 内容维度 • 文化误读：将冰雕节简单表述为"play with ice"而非"artistic preservation of winter beauty" • 视角失衡：用70%篇幅描写家乡历史，忽略"我"的存在体验 语言维度 • 中式英语："My hometown's people are very hospitality." → "The warm-hearted locals embody northeastern hospitality." • 数据失实："Millions of tourists come every year" → "Attracting over 300,000 visitors annually" 写作模板 【模板一：家乡介绍类】 结构框架： 地理定位+总体印象 Located in...[方位], my hometown is famous for...[特色] 例句： Nestled in Northeast China's Songnen Plain, Qiqihar is known as "the home of red-crowned cranes". 自然特色+人文景观 What makes it unique is...[自然特征] + [文化符号] 例句： The vast Zhalong Wetland provides shelter for endangered birds, while the annual Ice Sculpture Festival turns frozen rivers into glowing art museums. 生活体验+情感联结 Growing up here, I'll never forget...[回忆] 例句： The aroma of sizzling guobaorou (sweet and sour pork) from street vendors always reminds me of grandma's kitchen. 【模板二：书籍介绍类】 结构框架： 书籍身份卡 Titled...[书名], this [类型] by [作者] explores...[主题] 例句： "The Little Prince" by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry isn't just a children's book, but a mirror reflecting adult world's loneliness. 核心章节解析 The most touching part is where...[情节] 例句： When the fox says "It's the time you spent on your rose that makes it so important", I finally understood friendship's true meaning. 现实联结+启示 This book changed my...[具体方面] 例句： Now I water my relationships like the little prince tended his rose – with patience and daily care.. 【模板三：参观地介绍类】 结构框架： 文化名片引入 Dreaming of visiting...[地点], a [形容词] place where...[特色] 例句： The Terracotta Warriors in Xi'an, an army frozen in time, guards China's first emperor's secrets. 三维吸引力 Historical value: As...[历史地位] Architectural wonder: The...[细节特征] Personal fascination: I'm obsessed with...[具体细节] 参观计划 If given the chance, I'll...[具体行动] 例句： I plan to sketch the warriors' facial expressions, each as unique as snowflakes, to study ancient craftsmanship. 【模板四：运动项目类】 结构框架： 动态场景描写 The moment I...[动作], I feel...[感受] 例句： When the badminton smashes across the net like a white comet, my heartbeat syncs with its trajectory. 技能成长轨迹 Beginner stage: I struggled with...[困难] Breakthrough moment: Everything changed when...[事件] 例句： After mastering the backhand clear, I finally won a match against our PE teacher. 哲理升华 More than a sport, it teaches me...[道理] 例句： Life, like shuttlecocks, requires knowing when to drop softly and when to strike decisively.. 【模板五：业余活动类】 结构框架： 活动速写 My weekends come alive with...[活动], especially when...[场景] 例句： The scent of pine resin fills my workshop as I carve woodblocks for traditional New Year prints. 技能养成记 Phase 1: Initial failures (burned cookies/cracked pottery) Phase 2: Mentorship moment (grandma's secret recipe) Phase 3: Creative breakthrough (fusion designs) 心灵收获 Through...[活动], I discovered...[感悟] 例句： Woodcarving taught me that beauty often lies beneath rough surfaces – both in art and people.. 常用表达 写作方法指导 一、开篇引入类 1. 总体定位 基础：My hometown/city is located in...（我的家乡位于...） 进阶：Nestled in the heart of...（坐落于...腹地） 高级：Where the [river/mountain] meets [landscape], there lies...（在...与...交汇处） 2. 特色总述 基础：It is famous for...（因...而闻名） 进阶：Renowned as the "City of..."（被誉为"...之城"） 高级：A living museum showcasing...（展示...的活态博物馆） 二、细节描述类 1. 自然景观 基础：clear rivers（清澈的河流） / green mountains（青山） 进阶：crystal-clear waters shimmering like liquid jade（如玉液般闪烁的碧水） 高级：mist-kissed peaks piercing the clouds（云雾缭绕的穿云山峰） 2. 人文特色 基础：traditional festivals（传统节日） 进阶：intangible cultural heritage（非物质文化遗产） 高级：centuries-old craftsmanship preserved through generations（世代传承的古老工艺） 3. 个人体验 基础：I like/love...（我喜欢...） 进阶：Nothing compares to the joy of...（没有什么比...更让我快乐） 高级：The moment I..., time seems to stand still（当我...时，时间仿佛静止了） 三、过渡衔接类 1. 层次递进 基础：What's more...（此外） 进阶：Beyond its physical beauty...（除了外在之美） 高级：While [A] captures the eye, [B] touches the soul（A吸引眼球，B触动心灵） 2. 因果关系 基础：Because of this...（正因如此） 进阶：This explains why...（这解释了为何...） 高级：It is precisely this... that has shaped...（正是这一点塑造了...） 四、文化表达类 1. 历史传承 基础：has a history of... years（有...年历史） 进阶：dating back to the [Dynasty] era（可追溯至...朝代） 高级：whispers of ancient wisdom linger in...（古老的智慧在...中低语） 2. 特色活动 基础：We celebrate... every year（我们每年庆祝...） 进阶：The annual... festival transforms the city into...（一年一度的...节将城市变成...） 高级：Locals uphold the tradition of... with religious devotion（当地人虔诚地保持着...的传统） 五、情感升华类 1. 总结价值 基础：It is important because...（它很重要因为...） 进阶：More than just..., it represents...（不仅仅是...，它象征着...） 高级：In its essence lies the soul of...（它的本质承载着...的灵魂） 2. 个人感悟 基础：I have learned...（我学会了...） 进阶：This experience has reshaped my understanding of...（这次经历重塑了我对...的理解） 高级：It serves as a constant reminder that...（它时刻提醒我...） 六、数据支撑类 1. 客观数据 基础：About 70% of...（大约70%的...） 进阶：Statistics show a 300% increase in...（数据显示...增长了300%） 高级：According to UNESCO records...（根据联合国教科文组织记录） 2. 感官描写 基础：looks beautiful（看起来很美） 进阶：The aroma of... wafts through the air（...的香气在空气中飘荡） 高级：A symphony of [sound] fills the [place]（...的声音交响乐般充满...）. 中考真题精讲 （一）（2024·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题） (注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、教师真实姓名和校名，否则不给分） 2024年哈尔滨冰雪旅游火遍全国。相信你的家乡也极具特色。作为青少年，请为你的家乡代言。写一篇短文，宣传你的家乡。内容包括：地理位置、天气状况、特色美食、人文景观等方面。 要求： 1. 字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确； 2. 词数：30—50词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二）（2023·山东淄博·中考真题） 某中学生英语杂志开展主题为“My favorite book”的征文活动，请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文投稿，文中要包含这本书的主要内容和你喜爱它的理由。 注意： 1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三）（2023·山东东营·中考真题） 旅游是我们看世界的重要方式，它可以让我们开阔视野，增长见识，丰富阅历，陶冶情操。如果你有机会出去旅游，你最想去的地方是哪里？为什么想去那个地方？你想在那个地方干些什么？请以“The place I want to visit”为题，写一篇100 词左右的短文。 要求： 1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。 2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。 The place I want to visit ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四）（2023·云南·中考真题） Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life 提示：享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以“Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。 要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计： 4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五）（2022·山东淄博·中考真题） 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友想了解你的业余活动。请你以“My free time activities”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你的业余活动及感受。 注意：1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六）（2022·山东青岛·中考真题） 科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如computers，cars，smart phones，e-books，robots，Internet…请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。 要求: 1. 词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 名校模拟题提升练 1．（2024·浙江温州·模拟预测）青少年时期是一个人成长的重要阶段。处于这一时期的你经历了哪些身体和心理上的变化呢？学校英文报Teens栏目正在以“How I’ve Changed!”为题开展征文活动。请你根据下列提示，用英文写一篇110词左右短文投稿，分享你在外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，并具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化，谈谈你从这个变化中得到的启发。 注意：（1）开头已给，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。 How I’ve Changed! In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot cloth physically and mentally. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·山东青岛·一模）请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。 内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动； 2. 说明推荐理由。 要求： 1. 词数80-100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息。 Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·河北唐山·二模）端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。端午临中夏，时清日复长。端午节即将来临，学校英语社团将在下周五举办“The Dragon Boat Festival in My Eyes”的主题活动。活动期间，学生们了解端午节的由来和习俗、学包粽子、观看龙舟比赛视频等。假如你是学校英语社团的小记者，请结合以下提示写一篇英文报道，介绍此活动。 提示 ：show respect to Qu Yuan, make zongzi, dragon boat races, meaningful. 要求： 1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3. 词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入词数)。 Dear friends, As we all know, the Dragon Boat Festival is an important traditional festival in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·甘肃陇南·一模）与良友为伴，路遥不觉远。我们每个人都会有很多的朋友，朋友对我们非常重要。当遇到困难时，我们需要朋友给予鼓励和帮助；当获得成功时，我们也需要与朋友分享我们的喜悦。假如你是李华，请你以“My Best Friend”为题写一篇短文介绍你的一位好朋友。 He/She has many hobbies: What does he/she look like? His/Her character (性格): 要求： 1. 文中须包含提示中提到的3条内容； 2. 可根据图片发挥想象、适量拓展； 3. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范； 4. 词数：80词左右； 5. 文中不得出现朋友的真实姓名、工作单位及考生的任何个人相关信息。 My Best Friend I am glad to tell you something about my best friend ... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·山东东营·一模）艺术总是伴随着人的成长，无论是当我们沉浸在幸福中，还是面临困难挫折，它总能给人带来温暖、勇气和力量。在你成长过程中，是不是也有这么一本书、一首歌或者一部电影，对你有特别的影响和意义呢？请你以 My favorite _________为题，介绍一本书、一首歌或者一部电影。 注意事项： 1）字数：100 词左右； 2）短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！3 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 04 话题作文之说明介绍类 近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2024年 黑龙江齐齐哈尔 介绍自己的家乡 话题作文 2023年 ·山东淄博 介绍自己最喜欢的书 话题作文 山东东营 介绍自己想要参观的地方 话题作文 云南 介绍自己最喜欢的运动 话题作文 2022年 山东淄博 介绍一下你的业余活动及感受 话题作文 山东青岛 谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的 话题作文 写作方法指导 一、题型特征解析 命题规律透视 持续高频考点：近三年占中考作文命题42%（以鲁、滇、黑地区为典型） 核心命题形式：以"introduce/describe"为主导的开放性话题 话题分布特征： ① 个人生活类（54%）：家乡/业余活动/运动爱好（黑龙江2024"家乡"、淄博2022"业余活动"） ② 文化认知类（32%）：书籍/旅行地/传统工艺（东营2023"参观地"、云南2023"运动"含武术等文化元素） ③ 科技影响类（14%）：发明与生活变革（青岛2022题） 能力考查维度 基础层级：信息筛选与重组能力（如介绍家乡需整合地理、文化、生活信息） 进阶层级：细节描写能力（淄博2023"最爱的书"需具体章节分析） 高阶层级：文化传播意识（东营2023题暗含跨文化交际要求） 二、命题趋势研判 内容导向变化 强化本土文化输出：黑龙江2024"家乡"替代往年谚语题，体现地域特色 深化体验式写作：87%题目要求结合个人经历（如青岛2022需详述发明影响过程） 提升思维纵深度：优秀范文需展示"描述-分析-升华"三层逻辑 典型题目对比 2022 vs 2024命题进化： • 从"业余活动感受"（记叙成分50%）→"家乡介绍"（说明成分80%+抒情20%） • 从单一维度描述→多维文化解读（如介绍家乡需涵盖自然景观、人文特色、发展变迁） 三、写作框架建构 黄金结构模型 文化类说明（家乡/参观地）： Introduction：定位+特色总述 "Nestled in...my hometown Qiqihar is a living museum where Siberian tigers roam and ice sculptures glow." Body：三维展开 ① Geographical uniqueness (location/landscape) ② Cultural highlights (festivals/local cuisine) ③ Personal connection (childhood memories) Conclusion：情感升华 "More than just coordinates on a map, it's where my roots grow deep in permafrost and warmth." 对象介绍类（书籍/发明）： 采用"5W1H"结构： What：核心特征 Why：选择原因 When：接触时间轴 How：影响机制 Who：相关人物 Where：应用场景 四、典型失分预警 内容维度 • 文化误读：将冰雕节简单表述为"play with ice"而非"artistic preservation of winter beauty" • 视角失衡：用70%篇幅描写家乡历史，忽略"我"的存在体验 语言维度 • 中式英语："My hometown's people are very hospitality." → "The warm-hearted locals embody northeastern hospitality." • 数据失实："Millions of tourists come every year" → "Attracting over 300,000 visitors annually" 写作模板 【模板一：家乡介绍类】 结构框架： 地理定位+总体印象 Located in...[方位], my hometown is famous for...[特色] 例句： Nestled in Northeast China's Songnen Plain, Qiqihar is known as "the home of red-crowned cranes". 自然特色+人文景观 What makes it unique is...[自然特征] + [文化符号] 例句： The vast Zhalong Wetland provides shelter for endangered birds, while the annual Ice Sculpture Festival turns frozen rivers into glowing art museums. 生活体验+情感联结 Growing up here, I'll never forget...[回忆] 例句： The aroma of sizzling guobaorou (sweet and sour pork) from street vendors always reminds me of grandma's kitchen. 【模板二：书籍介绍类】 结构框架： 书籍身份卡 Titled...[书名], this [类型] by [作者] explores...[主题] 例句： "The Little Prince" by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry isn't just a children's book, but a mirror reflecting adult world's loneliness. 核心章节解析 The most touching part is where...[情节] 例句： When the fox says "It's the time you spent on your rose that makes it so important", I finally understood friendship's true meaning. 现实联结+启示 This book changed my...[具体方面] 例句： Now I water my relationships like the little prince tended his rose – with patience and daily care.. 【模板三：参观地介绍类】 结构框架： 文化名片引入 Dreaming of visiting...[地点], a [形容词] place where...[特色] 例句： The Terracotta Warriors in Xi'an, an army frozen in time, guards China's first emperor's secrets. 三维吸引力 Historical value: As...[历史地位] Architectural wonder: The...[细节特征] Personal fascination: I'm obsessed with...[具体细节] 参观计划 If given the chance, I'll...[具体行动] 例句： I plan to sketch the warriors' facial expressions, each as unique as snowflakes, to study ancient craftsmanship. 【模板四：运动项目类】 结构框架： 动态场景描写 The moment I...[动作], I feel...[感受] 例句： When the badminton smashes across the net like a white comet, my heartbeat syncs with its trajectory. 技能成长轨迹 Beginner stage: I struggled with...[困难] Breakthrough moment: Everything changed when...[事件] 例句： After mastering the backhand clear, I finally won a match against our PE teacher. 哲理升华 More than a sport, it teaches me...[道理] 例句： Life, like shuttlecocks, requires knowing when to drop softly and when to strike decisively.. 【模板五：业余活动类】 结构框架： 活动速写 My weekends come alive with...[活动], especially when...[场景] 例句： The scent of pine resin fills my workshop as I carve woodblocks for traditional New Year prints. 技能养成记 Phase 1: Initial failures (burned cookies/cracked pottery) Phase 2: Mentorship moment (grandma's secret recipe) Phase 3: Creative breakthrough (fusion designs) 心灵收获 Through...[活动], I discovered...[感悟] 例句： Woodcarving taught me that beauty often lies beneath rough surfaces – both in art and people.. 常用表达 写作方法指导 一、开篇引入类 1. 总体定位 基础：My hometown/city is located in...（我的家乡位于...） 进阶：Nestled in the heart of...（坐落于...腹地） 高级：Where the [river/mountain] meets [landscape], there lies...（在...与...交汇处） 2. 特色总述 基础：It is famous for...（因...而闻名） 进阶：Renowned as the "City of..."（被誉为"...之城"） 高级：A living museum showcasing...（展示...的活态博物馆） 二、细节描述类 1. 自然景观 基础：clear rivers（清澈的河流） / green mountains（青山） 进阶：crystal-clear waters shimmering like liquid jade（如玉液般闪烁的碧水） 高级：mist-kissed peaks piercing the clouds（云雾缭绕的穿云山峰） 2. 人文特色 基础：traditional festivals（传统节日） 进阶：intangible cultural heritage（非物质文化遗产） 高级：centuries-old craftsmanship preserved through generations（世代传承的古老工艺） 3. 个人体验 基础：I like/love...（我喜欢...） 进阶：Nothing compares to the joy of...（没有什么比...更让我快乐） 高级：The moment I..., time seems to stand still（当我...时，时间仿佛静止了） 三、过渡衔接类 1. 层次递进 基础：What's more...（此外） 进阶：Beyond its physical beauty...（除了外在之美） 高级：While [A] captures the eye, [B] touches the soul（A吸引眼球，B触动心灵） 2. 因果关系 基础：Because of this...（正因如此） 进阶：This explains why...（这解释了为何...） 高级：It is precisely this... that has shaped...（正是这一点塑造了...） 四、文化表达类 1. 历史传承 基础：has a history of... years（有...年历史） 进阶：dating back to the [Dynasty] era（可追溯至...朝代） 高级：whispers of ancient wisdom linger in...（古老的智慧在...中低语） 2. 特色活动 基础：We celebrate... every year（我们每年庆祝...） 进阶：The annual... festival transforms the city into...（一年一度的...节将城市变成...） 高级：Locals uphold the tradition of... with religious devotion（当地人虔诚地保持着...的传统） 五、情感升华类 1. 总结价值 基础：It is important because...（它很重要因为...） 进阶：More than just..., it represents...（不仅仅是...，它象征着...） 高级：In its essence lies the soul of...（它的本质承载着...的灵魂） 2. 个人感悟 基础：I have learned...（我学会了...） 进阶：This experience has reshaped my understanding of...（这次经历重塑了我对...的理解） 高级：It serves as a constant reminder that...（它时刻提醒我...） 六、数据支撑类 1. 客观数据 基础：About 70% of...（大约70%的...） 进阶：Statistics show a 300% increase in...（数据显示...增长了300%） 高级：According to UNESCO records...（根据联合国教科文组织记录） 2. 感官描写 基础：looks beautiful（看起来很美） 进阶：The aroma of... wafts through the air（...的香气在空气中飘荡） 高级：A symphony of [sound] fills the [place]（...的声音交响乐般充满...）. 中考真题精讲 （一）（2024·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题） (注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、教师真实姓名和校名，否则不给分） 2024年哈尔滨冰雪旅游火遍全国。相信你的家乡也极具特色。作为青少年，请为你的家乡代言。写一篇短文，宣传你的家乡。内容包括：地理位置、天气状况、特色美食、人文景观等方面。 要求： 1. 字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确； 2. 词数：30—50词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My hometown is Qiqihar. It lies in the west of Heilongjiang Province. The weather in my hometown is enjoyable. There are many places to visit, such as Heping Square, Zhalong Nature Reserve, Mingyue Island and so on. The most famous food is BBQ. The people here are friendly. Welcome to our hometown! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：文章主题是介绍自己的家乡，写作要点已给出，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍自己的家乡是什么地方； 第二步，具体介绍自己的家乡，可从地理位置、天气状况、特色美食、人文景观等方面介绍； 最后，欢迎大家来自己的家乡。 [亮点词汇] ①lie in位于 ②such as例如 ③friendly友好的 [高分句型] There are many places to visit, such as Heping Square, Zhalong Nature Reserve, Mingyue Island and so on.（there be句型） （二）（2023·山东淄博·中考真题） 某中学生英语杂志开展主题为“My favorite book”的征文活动，请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文投稿，文中要包含这本书的主要内容和你喜爱它的理由。 注意： 1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite book Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, the Monkey King is my favourite book. The Monkey King is the main character in the traditional Chinese book Journey to the West. He is not a normal monkey. In fact, he is brave enough to fight with any bad person and he can always win the fights. So I like to read it. The book mainly talks about three things. First of all, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and objects he can change into. Secondly, the book shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that he can keep it in his ear. Last but not least, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like to read this part very much because the monkey always tries his best to win the fights. The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. And it also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it tells us to keep trying in our lives and never give up. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：作文要求介绍自己最喜欢的书，包括其主要内容及喜欢它的理由；考生应按照要求写作，正确用词，使作文表达流畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍自己最喜欢的书是什么； 第二步，详细介绍这本书的主要内容以及你喜欢它的理由； 第三步，介绍从这本书中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①in fact 事实上 ②try his best to do sth. 尽他最大的努力做某事 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①First of all, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and objects he can change into. (why引导的宾语从句以及what引导的宾语从句) ②I like to read this part very much because the monkey always tries his best to win the fights.(because引导的原因状语从句) （三）（2023·山东东营·中考真题） 旅游是我们看世界的重要方式，它可以让我们开阔视野，增长见识，丰富阅历，陶冶情操。如果你有机会出去旅游，你最想去的地方是哪里？为什么想去那个地方？你想在那个地方干些什么？请以“The place I want to visit”为题，写一篇100 词左右的短文。 要求： 1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。 2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。 The place I want to visit ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The place I want to visit Beijing, the second largest city in our country, is the place I want to visit. There are several reasons why I would like to visit Beijing. First, Beijing is the capital of China, and has a history of more than 3,000 years. It has been the capital for many dynasties. Second, there are many historical buildings, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. There are also some new stadiums, including the Bird Nest and the Water Cube, which were built for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. I am really looking forward to going there and visiting all the wonderful places. At the same time, I hope Beijing will be more and more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：题目要求以“The place I want to visit”为题写短文介绍自己想要参观的地方。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍想要去参观哪里； 第二步，谈谈想去这个地方的原因； 第三步，介绍想要在那里干些什么。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth. 想要做某事 ②such as 例如 ③look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事 ④at the same time 与此同时 [高分句型] ①There are several reasons why I would like to visit Beijing.（why引导定语从句） ②Second, there are many historical buildings, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace.（there be句型） （四）（2023·云南·中考真题） Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life 提示：享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以“Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。 要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计： 4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life Cycling is one of my favorite sports. It always makes me relaxed and full of energy. It was sunny last Saturday morning. After finishing my schoolwork, I felt a little bit tired. So I went cycling along the road in a forest not far from my home. What great beauty of nature it was when I got close to it! Colorful flowers were smiling at me. Birds were flying here and there in the trees and they never stopped singing. Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster. I got relaxed and refreshed at once. What an enjoyment of cycling it is! I enjoy my life by doing sports. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动； 第二步，具体阐述自己运动的经历； 第三步，最后总结全文，通过运动可以享受生活。 [亮点词汇] ①make sb adj使某人处于……状态 ②get close to接近 ③far from远离 [高分句型] ①Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②What an enjoyment of cycling it is! （感叹句） （五）（2022·山东淄博·中考真题） 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友想了解你的业余活动。请你以“My free time activities”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你的业余活动及感受。 注意：1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My free time activities I do many things in my free time. Let me tell you something about them. I usually take exercise after school every day. It’s a good way to keep healthy and help me study better. Besides, I love reading. I think reading is a great activity, and I often go to the library to read books twice or three times a month. Reading can open my eyes and increase my knowledge. Sometimes I go to the park with my parents. We can take in some fresh air in the beautiful park and it also makes my family happy. So you see, my free time activities are wonderful and they make my life colorful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：题干没有给出明确的写作要点，需要考生整理出要点，再进行写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己业余生活有很多活动； 第二步，具体描述自己的业余活动及做每项活动的频率及益处，围绕“运动，阅读和周末家庭活动”展开； 第二步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①take exercise做运动 ②take in吸收，吸入 [高分句型] ①It’s a good way to keep healthy and help me study better.（It固定句型） ②I often go to the library to read books twice or three times a month.（动词不定式作目的状语） （六）（2022·山东青岛·中考真题） 科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如computers，cars，smart phones，e-books，robots，Internet…请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。 要求: 1. 词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, the computer has become an important part . And it changed me a lot. With the help of the computer, I can search for some useful information and read different kinds of books. By receiving and sending emails, I can communicate with my friends freely. If I have some problems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the Internet. If I feel stressed from time to time, I can listen to music online to relax myself. I can also buy all kinds of things online.      But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the Internet. This makes me lazy and too much computer work is bad for my eyes. So I think everyone should use the computer wisely. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文。 ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：从题干所给的科技中选择一种，谈谈这个发明对自己的影响以及是如何改变自己的生活的。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，是哪一个发明改变了自己； 第二步，介绍这项发明是如何改变自己的生活的； 第三步，介绍自己的感受总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①with the help of在……的帮助下 ②search for寻找 ③from time to time不时 [高分句型] ①If I have some problems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the Internet.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.（省略that的宾语从句） 名校模拟题提升练 1．（2024·浙江温州·模拟预测）青少年时期是一个人成长的重要阶段。处于这一时期的你经历了哪些身体和心理上的变化呢？学校英文报Teens栏目正在以“How I’ve Changed!”为题开展征文活动。请你根据下列提示，用英文写一篇110词左右短文投稿，分享你在外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，并具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化，谈谈你从这个变化中得到的启发。 注意：（1）开头已给，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。 How I’ve Changed! In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot cloth physically and mentally. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How I’ve Changed! In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot both physically and mentally. I used to be thin and short. But now I’m tall and strong. I’m a brave and outgoing student. However, I was a little bit shy before. My hobby has changed, too. I used to play computer games on weekends. But now I spend much time playing basketball with my friends. Besides, my English has improved a lot. I used to be afraid of speaking English. Later I tried to listen more and speak more. Now I even dare to make speeches in public in English. The most important change in my life was becoming interested in reading. Last summer, my best friend gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. It was the most important change because I learned a lot from reading. What’s more, reading makes me happy and relaxed. What great changes! I hope I can become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”穿插； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当拓展。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用“在过去的几年里，我的身体和精神都发生了很大的变化”引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化以及启发； 第三步，总结全文，表明“我希望我能变得越来越好”，进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do sth.过去常常做某事 ②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事 ③be afraid of害怕 [高分句型] It was the most important change because I learned a lot from reading.（because引导的原因状语从句） 2．（2024·山东青岛·一模）请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。 内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动； 2. 说明推荐理由。 要求： 1. 词数80-100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息。 Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons. First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍一项适合课间开展的运动； 第二步，具体这项运动的好处； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①be tired of厌倦 ②remember to do sth.记得要做某事 ③make a big difference产生重大影响 [高分句型] Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 3．（2024·河北唐山·二模）端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。端午临中夏，时清日复长。端午节即将来临，学校英语社团将在下周五举办“The Dragon Boat Festival in My Eyes”的主题活动。活动期间，学生们了解端午节的由来和习俗、学包粽子、观看龙舟比赛视频等。假如你是学校英语社团的小记者，请结合以下提示写一篇英文报道，介绍此活动。 提示 ：show respect to Qu Yuan, make zongzi, dragon boat races, meaningful. 要求： 1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3. 词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入词数)。 Dear friends, As we all know, the Dragon Boat Festival is an important traditional festival in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear friends, As we all know, the Dragon Boat Festival is an important traditional festival in China. To celebrate this festival, our school English club is planning a special activity called “The Dragon Boat Festival in My Eyes” for next Friday. The event aims to help us understand the origin and customs of the festival, including showing respect to Qu Yuan, a great poet. We will learn how to make delicious zongzi, a traditional food eaten during the festival. Additionally, we will watch exciting dragon boat race videos, capturing the thrill and spirit of the festival. This meaningful event promises to be an enriching experience for all participants, bringing us closer to our cultural roots. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：要求根据提示内容介绍关于端午节的习俗，活动等，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，表达端午节是中国一项重要的传统节日； 第二步，介绍该活动的时间，目的和内容； 第三步，介绍该活动期待达到的效果。 [亮点词汇] ①aim to旨在 ②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 ③promise to do sth.承诺做某事 [高分句型] To celebrate this festival, our school English club is planning a special activity called “The Dragon Boat Festival in My Eyes” for next Friday. (动词不定式作目的状语) 4．（2024·甘肃陇南·一模）与良友为伴，路遥不觉远。我们每个人都会有很多的朋友，朋友对我们非常重要。当遇到困难时，我们需要朋友给予鼓励和帮助；当获得成功时，我们也需要与朋友分享我们的喜悦。假如你是李华，请你以“My Best Friend”为题写一篇短文介绍你的一位好朋友。 He/She has many hobbies: What does he/she look like? His/Her character (性格): 要求： 1. 文中须包含提示中提到的3条内容； 2. 可根据图片发挥想象、适量拓展； 3. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范； 4. 词数：80词左右； 5. 文中不得出现朋友的真实姓名、工作单位及考生的任何个人相关信息。 My Best Friend I am glad to tell you something about my best friend ... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Best Friend I am glad to tell you something about my best friend. She is a pretty girl. She is a middle school student. She has big eyes, a small mouth, a small nose and a round face. She likes watching TV and playing basketball. On the weekend, she always plays basketball with her friends in the afternoon and watches TV in the evening. She is very nice and always helpful to others when her classmates are in need. I like her very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍好朋友的外貌； 第二步，介绍好朋友的爱好； 第三步，介绍好朋友的性格特征。 [亮点词汇] ①watch TV看电视 ②play the basketball打篮球 [高分句型] ①She is very nice and always helpful to others when her classmates are in need. (when引导的时间状语从句) 5．（2024·山东东营·一模）艺术总是伴随着人的成长，无论是当我们沉浸在幸福中，还是面临困难挫折，它总能给人带来温暖、勇气和力量。在你成长过程中，是不是也有这么一本书、一首歌或者一部电影，对你有特别的影响和意义呢？请你以 My favorite _________为题，介绍一本书、一首歌或者一部电影。 注意事项： 1）字数：100 词左右； 2）短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favorite movie My name is Li Hua. I like movies very much. I think a good movie can teach us about life, or explain what the meaning of life is, what real friendship is and so on. Zootopia is one of my favorite movies. It is a cartoon movie. The story is about a rabbit that joins the police force and solves a difficult case with a fox. I like the movie because it teaches me to stick to my dream and then to achieve it. “If you don’t try anything new, you’ll never succeed.” These words from the movie influenced me a lot. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：写作题目已给出，考生应注意完善题目，文章适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题干； 第二步，整体对作品介绍； 第三步，介绍你喜爱的理由。 [亮点词汇] ①stick to坚持 ②achieve实现 [高分句型] ①I think a good movie can teach us about life, or explain what the meaning of life is, what real friendship is and so on.（what引导宾语从句） ②I like the movie because it teaches me to stick to my dream and then to achieve it.（because引导原因状语从句） 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！3 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$