专题 04 建议信 导学案-2025届高考英语书面表达建议信导

No.4建议信 一、考点综述 建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议或者忠告的信件建议信有可能写给个人，就遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务提出建议或者忠告。建议信通常简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服性。 二、典例示范 假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Mike就读的学校要举办一年一度的“中华文化节”，他来信向你征求活动意见，请你写封回信，内容包括： 1.写作目的； 2.活动建议； 3.表示祝愿。 注意： 1.词数不少于100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 1.【建议信结构以及实例说明】 分条陈述 Dear Mike, (写信的背景和目的)I’m more than delighted to learn/Knowing/Learning that your school is going to hold the annual “Chinese Culture Festival”./, I’m only too willing to give you some suggestions. (逐条提出具体建议，并说明理由)Firstly, it would be a good idea to hold a competition about Chinese poetry recitation, through which students can have a better understanding of the language. In addition, giving a speech concerning traditional Chinese festivals is also a great choice, as customs and traditions will undoubtedly attract many students. (提出美好祝愿，希望建议被采纳)I’m fully convinced/I believe that the festival will be a joyful(令人愉快的) and fruitful(成果丰硕的) activity, which will spread brilliant(灿烂的，非常好地) Chinese culture to a larger extent(范围，程度). I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions. Best wishes. Yours, Li Jin 2.【建议信常用词汇】 1. give/offer sb. some advice (on) 给某人提建议 2. ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见 3.as follows 如下 4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view/ as far as I am concerned  在我看来 5. find…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用 6. take part in/participate in... 参加 7. follow/take/adopt one’s advice 采纳某人的建议 8. take sth. into account/consideration  把……考虑在内 9. with regard to 关于；就 10. put forward 提出 11. in this regard/in this respect/aspect 在这点上/在这方面 12. share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事 13. with time going by  随着时间的推移 14. Be faced with 面临 15. take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待 3.【建议信常用句型结构】 1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble (in) doing...很遗憾听说你在...有困难。 2. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 3. I have received your letter saying you plan to do...我已经收到了你的来信。信上说… 4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to do… 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何… 6. I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to do... 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何…，我写信给你一些建议。 7. I hope these suggestions will be of use/useful to you. (be of+修饰词+抽象名词，比如：be of importance/help/use/significance/value=be important/helpful/useful/ significant/valuable) 8. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way. 9. I would be more than happy to see improvement. 10. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！ 11. Here are a few suggestions/tips. 4. 【增分佳句】 开头说明写作目的的常用语： 1. I know you have trouble in learning Chinese after reading your letter. 读了你的信后，我知道你在中文学习上有困难。 2. I’m sorry to know you have trouble in learning English after reading your letter. 读了你的信之后，得知你在英语学习方面遇到麻烦，我深感遗憾。 3. You’ve asked me for advice on how to get on well with others and I’ll try to make some suggestions. 你向我征求关于如何与别人融洽相处的意见，我会尽量提出一些建议。 4. Here are my suggestions, which I hope can be of great benefit/beneficial to you. 以下是我的一些建议,希望对你有所益处. 5. My suggestions are as follows./ My advice is as follows. 我的建议如下。 6. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 7、Knowing that you’re having trouble...so I'm writing to you with the following suggestions. 知道你在……有困难，因此我写信给你提如下一些建议。 8、You are asking me for advice on English learning, and here I try to give some useful/helpful/practical advice. 关于英语学习，你向我征求建议，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的/有帮助的/实用的建议。 中间给出具体建议的常用语： 1. As for learning Chinese/When it comes to learning Chinese, I would like to recommend you to start with Pinyin. 关于学汉语，我想建议你从拼音开始 2. You may/might as well have a try. 你不妨试一试。 3. First of all, beginning with letters is a better choice. 首先，从字母开始是一个更好的选择。 4. It would be a good idea to listen to some Chinese radio programs because all the announcers speak standard Chinese. 听一些中文广播节目是一个好办法，因为所有的播音员都说标准的中文。 5. Finally, watching TV programs will help a lot. 最后，看电视节目也会有很大的帮助。 6. It is strongly suggested/advised/recommended that you participate in more activities to develop friendship. 强烈建议你多参加一些活动来发展你的友谊. 7. It would be better if you could read more to enlarge your vocabulary. 如果你能多读一些书来扩大词汇量也是不错的. 8. Why not try and write to me in Chinese next time? 为什么下次不尝试着用汉语来给我写信？ 9. As far as I am concerned, it’s a good idea to improve your oral English first. 就我而言,首先提高你的口语也是不错的主意. 10. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following actions. 在我看来，采取以下行动是明智的。 11. Doing...is a good choice/better choice. 做……是一个好的选择/更好的选择。 12. you might as well do… 你不妨做…… 结尾常用语： 1. I hope my suggestions can make a difference to you. 我希望我的建议对你有用处。 2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议对你很实用/有用/有帮助。 3. I hope these suggestions are useful to you and I will be more than happy to see you make remarkable progress in Chinese. 我希望这些建议对你有用/有帮助，我非常高兴你在汉语方面会取得巨大进步。 4. I would be delighted/pleased if you could consider my suggestions. 如果你能考虑我的建议，我将非常高兴。 5. I hope that my advice will be beneficial to you. 我希望我的建议对你有益。 6. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 常见连接词——罗列观点 · Finally, · At last, · In the end, · Last but not least, · Secondly, · Besides, · Moreover, · In addition, · What’s more, · Furthermore, · Worse still, · To make matters worse, · For another thing, （其次） · Firstly, · First of all, · Above all, · To begin with, · In the first place, · For one thing, （首先） 三、真题演练 (2019年天津第二次) 假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件: ⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）； ⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容； ⑶希望从中有何收获。 注意： ⑴词数不少于100； ⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； ⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin 【分析】 第一步:审题。 （1）体裁：建议信 （2）人称：第一、二人称。 （3）时态：一般现在时。 （4）要点： 假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris （提建议的对象）将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容（建议的内容）征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件: ⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）； ⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容； ⑶希望从中有何收获。 第二步:列提纲 （结构、重点词组、句型） （1）布局段落。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，写信的目的（背景）。第二段: 你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）、选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容。第三段: 希望从中有何收获、希望建议被采纳、提出祝愿、盼回复。 （2）确定关键词汇和短语。 做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech 提供：provide sb. with sth.→offer sb. sth. 机会：opportunity→chance 采纳建议：take one’s advice→follow one’s advice （3）确定较为高级的句子。 第三步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接。 第四步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。 【参考范文1】 Dear Chris, I’m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. Knowing that you’ll give us a lecture about western art during the coming summer vacation, I’m writing to tell you my opinions about the content of your lecture/speech. As a music lover, I’m greatly fond of classical music, therefore I would appreciate it if you could talk about something about western classical music such as the origin and developing progress of it. In addition, some representative figures and their masterpieces are also expected to be introduced. I believe this lecture will enrich my knowledge about western classical music and develop students’ interest in western art. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into serious account and hope you a wonderful trip to our school. Yours, Li Jin 【参考范文2】 Dear Chris, I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. It’s our great pleasure/honor to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation. You are asking us for advice on the content of your lecture/speech, and here are my opinions. Personally, music is my priority. /I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. I like all kinds of music, among which jazz/classical music/pop music/rock music/rap is my favorite. That’s because it can make me relaxed both mentally and physically, thus reducing the pressure of study. I hope that I can gain more knowledge about western jazz music through the lecture, such as some famous jazz music composers and their representative works. Yours, Li Jin 【参考范文3】 Dear Chris, I’m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. Hearing that you’ll give us a lecture about western art and want to hear our opinions about which topic to cover, I’m eager to make my voice heard. Personally, I want to learn something about western dance in particular. As a teenager, I like dancing and have been taking dancing lessons in my spare time, so I want to learn what dance form is popular among students in England. Meanwhile, I’m also interested to learn some folk dances(民族舞蹈)from you in your lecture, which will help me improve my dancing. I’m sure that I’ll come to love English dance and learn a lot from your lecture. Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$