Unit 5大纲法写正在发生的事情（课件）-2024-2025学年五年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（人教版PEP版）

Unit 5 人教版PEP版五年级下册 大纲法写正在发生的事情 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 介绍地点，主人公 介绍主人公的活动 4 01 写作方法指引 主题：介绍正在发生的事情 开头：介绍地点，主人公 主体：介绍主人公的活动 结尾：表达大家的情绪 总结这是一个…的地方 检查be动词人称对应 检查现在进行时 5 01 写作方法指引-示例 On the beach, there are a lot of people having fun. Some kids are building sandcastles. A young couple is walking along the shore. Some men are playing beach volleyball. Many people are lying on the beach, enjoying the sunshine. Some swimmers are swimming in the sea. It's really a lively scene. 介绍地点，主人公 介绍主人公的活动 结束语 On the beach, there are a lot of people having fun. Some kids are building sandcastles. A young couple is walking along the shore. Some men are playing beach volleyball. Many people are lying on the beach, enjoying the sunshine. Some swimmers are swimming in the sea. It's really a lively scene. On the beach, there are a lot of people having fun. Some kids are building sandcastles. A young couple is walking along the shore. Some men are playing beach volleyball. Many people are lying on the beach, enjoying the sunshine. Some swimmers are swimming in the sea. It's really a lively scene. On the beach, there are a lot of people having fun. Some kids are building sandcastles. A young couple is walking along the shore. Some men are playing beach volleyball. Many people are lying on the beach, enjoying the sunshine. Some swimmers are swimming in the sea. It's really a lively scene. 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.介绍地点，主人公 参考句型： On the beach…, there are a lot of …having fun. 参考单词： In the forest（在森林里）By the river（在河边）At the stadium（在体育场）In the shopping mall（在购物中心）At the airport（在机场）In the museum（在博物馆）At the train station（在火车站）In the garden（在花园里）On the mountain（在山上）At the school cafeteria（在学校食堂）In the library（在图书馆）At the amusement park（在游乐园） 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.介绍主人公的活动 参考句型： 主语 + be 动词 + 现在分词 + 地点状语 （描述某人在某地正在做某事） There be + 名词复数 + 现在分词 + 地点状语 （表示某地有一些人或物正在做某事） 参考单词： fly a kite（放风筝）play frisbee（玩飞盘）sit on the grass（坐在草地上） chat and laugh（聊天大笑）feed the pigeons（喂鸽子）ride bicycles（骑自行车）buy snacks（买零食）take pictures（拍照） 9 02 基础知识精讲-语法 现在进行时 定义：现在进行时表示现在正在进行或发生的动作，也可表示当前一段时间内的活动或现阶段正在进行的动作。 构成： be 动词（am/is/are）+ 动词的现在分词形式（动词原形 + -ing）。第一人称单数 I + am + 现在分词 例如：I am reading a book.（我正在看书。） top - stopping。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 第三人称单数 he/she/it + is + 现在分词 例如：She is cooking dinner. （她正在做晚饭。） 第二人称单数 you 和所有复数形式（we/you/they） + are + 现在分词 例如：They are playing football. （他们正在踢足球。） 02 基础知识精讲-语法 动词现在分词的变化规则： 一般情况下，直接在动词原形后加 -ing， 如：play - playing，work - working。 以不发音的字母 e 结尾的动词，去掉 e，再加 -ing， 如：write - writing，make - making。 以重读闭音节结尾，且末尾只有一个辅音字母的动词，双写这个辅音字母，再加 -ing， 如：run - running，stop - stopping。 适当形式填空 Look! The boys ______________ (play) basketball on the playground. Listen! She ______________ (sing) an English song. My mother ______________ (cook) dinner in the kitchen now. They ______________ (not do) their homework. They are watching TV. What __________ you ______ (do) now? 02 基础知识精讲-语法 are playing is singing is cooking aren't doing are doing 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 请以 “On the Beach” 为题，写一篇短文，描述一下沙滩上的人们正在做什么。不少于 5 句话。 要求: 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考句型： On the beach, there are __________fun. ___________are building sandcastles. A young couple is ___________ the shore. Some men are ___________. Many people are ___________ on the beach, enjoying the sunshine. Some swimmers are ___________ in the sea. It's really a lively scene. 参考单词： beach（海滩）people（人们）kid（小孩）sandcastle（沙堡）couple（夫妇）shore（海岸）man（男人，复数 men）beach volleyball（沙滩排球）lie（躺，现在分词 lying）sunshine（阳光）swimmer（游泳者） 16 On the beach, there are a lot of people having fun. Some kids are building sandcastles. A young couple is walking along the shore. Some men are playing beach volleyball. Many people are lying on the beach, enjoying the sunshine. Some swimmers are swimming in the sea. It's really a lively scene. 范文2： 介绍地点，主人公 介绍主人公的活动 结束语 17 模拟写作提升2 请以 “In the Library” 为题，写一篇短文，描述一下图书馆里的人们正在进行的活动。 要求: 1.句子通顺，思路清晰有条理。 2.不少于五句话。 18 参考句型： In the library, _________are ________quietly. _________is _________ carefully. _________ are _________ in a low voice. A librarian is walking around, _________. Some people are _________ to search for information. It's a peaceful place. 参考单词： read books（读书）；take notes（做笔记）；discuss（讨论）；walk around（四处走动）；search for（寻找） 19 In the library, most of the students are reading books quietly. A girl is taking notes carefully. Two students are discussing a topic in a low voice. A librarian is walking around, checking the bookshelves. Some people are using the computers to search for information. It's a peaceful place. 范文2： 介绍地点，主人公 介绍主人公的活动 结束语 20 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 请以 “In the Gym” 为题，写一篇短文，描述一下体育馆里的人们正在做什么。 要求: 1.句子通顺，思路清晰有条理。 2.不少于五句话。 真题写作练习-四川绵阳 22 参考句型： In the gym, many people are ________. __________are __________. They are __________ and __________ actively. A group of __________ are __________. __________ is __________ on the treadmill slowly. There are also some people __________. Everyone is working hard to __________. 参考单词： play basketball（打篮球）；dance（跳舞）；walk（走路；散步）；lift weights（举重）；run（跑步）；jump（跳跃 ） 23 In the gym, many people are doing sports. Some boys are playing basketball. They are running and jumping actively. A group of girls are dancing. An old man is walking on the treadmill slowly. There are also some people lifting weights. Everyone is working hard to keep fit. 范文3： 介绍地点，主人公 介绍主人公的活动 结束语 24 Thank you! $$