UNIT 5 Section Ⅴ Writing——写一次潜水经历-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Writing——写一次潜水经历 ◎ I couldn’t believe that I succeeded in diving and swam with the seals for 10 minutes! I never thought I could start an adventure under the sea before, till my parents took me to the Farne Islands and tried diving there. 学生用书第136页 We were offered two choices, either wreck diving — to see the wrecked ship Somali, or scenic diving — to have a good time with the grey seals. I chose the second one because it was less challenging and I love sea animals. Diving turned out to be much less difficult than I had imagined. I just put on the instruments and followed my instructor. I was a bit scared but my instructor told me to take it easy. At first, I could only see nothing, but when my eyes gradually adjusted to the darkness, I could see deep blue waves moving up and down, and small fishes swimming. Soon we reached the spot, and I could breathe normally. It was such a wonderful world. Before realising it, I had been in the seaweed forest surrounded by the young seals. They were eager to get close to me and dance around me. I reached out my hands to touch one of them. All of a sudden, something big appeared on my right. I turned around and almost got astonished. It was a huge male seal. I was so scared fearing it would attack me. But it just touched me lightly with its body, as if it wanted to hug me. I put my hands on its back, trying to feel its smooth skin. The world here was so quiet that I felt that time had stopped. Finally, my instructor gestured for me to go up. When I reached the surface, I had to readjust to the sunlight. What had happened just now was like a dream. ◎ 学语言 1．使用否定词couldn’t和never起到了强调的作用，表达出作者对自己海底潜水经历的出乎意料。 2．使用被动语态We were offered...，使表达更加地道；连词either... or... 的使用使表达更加连贯。 3．at first, soon等过渡性词语的使用使故事的叙述更有逻辑。 4．介词短语all of a sudden写出了潜水时不可预知的事情发生的突然，很有画面感。 5．so... that... 句式强调了当时作者的真实感受。 知结构 第一部分(第一、二段)：我所做的； 第二部分(第三、四段)：整个潜水经历及所见； 第三部分(最后一段)：我的感受。 [情境任务写作] 假定你是李华，寒假里和父母去三亚旅游，体验了一次海底潜水。请根据下面的内容，为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文，介绍你的潜水经历。内容包括： 1．去美丽的三亚旅游； 2．潜水衣服和氧气瓶； 3．多彩缤纷的水下世界； 4．自我感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [仿写程序步骤] 1．一仿结构布局合理 第一段：点明时间、地点和人物； 第二段：陈述自己所看到的奇妙的水下世界； 第三段：总结自我感受。 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①寒假里，父母带我去三亚旅游。 During the winter vacation，my parents took me to Sanya. ②我换上潜水衣，穿上潜水背心，戴上氧气罐，向大海走去。 I changed into my diving suit，put on my diving vest，put on my oxygen tank and went to the sea. ③在教练的帮助下，我开始潜水。 With the help/aid/assistance of the coach，I started to dive. 学生用书第137页 ④我刚发现原来潜水并不是那么可怕，而是充满了乐趣。 I just found that the diving is not so terrible，but full of fun. ⑤它让我看到了美妙的海底世界。 It let me see the wonderful underwater world. ⑥它让我体验了浩瀚的大海。 It let me experience the vast sea. 3．三仿句式高级表达 ⑦用“连词＋动词-ing形式”改写句② After changing into my diving suit，I put on my diving vest，put on my oxygen tank and went to the sea. ⑧用“not only... but also... ”句式合并句⑤和句⑥ Not only did it let me see the wonderful underwater world but also experience the vast sea. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 During the winter vacation，my parents took me to Sanya. I had an unforgettable experience of underwater diving. After changing into my diving suit，I put on my diving vest，put on my oxygen tank and went to the sea. With the help of the coach，I started to dive. I saw a colorful underwater world！All kinds of fish are wearing beautiful clothes. There are also some strange shapes of large stones. Some like rolling mountains，and some like the triangular roofs of the houses..._I just found that the diving is not so terrible，but full of fun. This diving trip is very meaningful. Not only did it let me see the wonderful underwater world but also experience the vast sea. [精彩素材积累] 开头部分常用表达 1．Sanya is really beautiful! 三亚真美呀！ 2．The sky is as bright as sapphire，and there are patches of coconut forest，white sand and blue sea，which is unforgettable. 天空像蓝宝石一样透亮，还有成片的椰子林、洁白的沙滩和湛蓝的大海，令人难以忘怀。 3．Among them，the most unforgettable one is underwater diving. 其中，最让我难忘的就是海底潜水。 主体部分常用表达 1．Wow！How beautiful the ocean floor is! 哇！海底真美呀！ 2．Schools of small fish swam past me，wagging their big tails. 成群的小鱼摆动着大尾巴从我面前游过。 3．The fish was very strange，long and flat body，a pair of small bean eyes trickling round，gray and white body sparkling，a big，long tail wagging. 这小鱼长得非常奇怪，身子又长又扁，一双小眼滴溜滴溜圆，灰白相间的身体闪闪发光，一条大大的、长长的尾巴一摆一摆的。 4．In a moment they were gone. 不一会儿，它们便游得无影无踪了。 结尾部分常用表达 1．I asked my mother to let me dive next time. 我央求妈妈下次再让我来潜水。 2．My mother and I laughed together.What a wonderful diving experience! 我和妈妈一起放声大笑。多么美好的一次潜水经历！ [学以致用] 假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，昨天参加了某旅行社组织的海底探险旅行。请用英语写一篇日记，记述这次探险旅行。内容包括： 1．时间、地点； 2．探险项目：深海潜水、观察海洋生物、海底古文明遗址探险等； 3．你的感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：探险 expedition ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Yesterday, I，together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea. We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving. During the diving, we enjoyed the undersea beauty and watched the marine life which we had never seen so close. What impressed me most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea. Seeing those ruins, I couldn’t help wondering what the ancient people’s life was like and what they experienced later. As far as I’m concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea. 40分写作限时练(五) (时间：45分钟　满分：40分) (本栏目内容，在学生用书中以独立形式分册装订！) Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分) (2024·南京期末) 假定你是李华，你在上周六参加了学校组织的爬黄山的活动，请据此写一篇日记。内容包括： 1．集合地点、出发的时间和乘坐的工具； 2．爬山的经历； 3．感受。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Saturday Sunny Today, I went to climb Mount Huang with my classmates.This activity was organized by our school.We gathered at the school gate at 6 am and then set off by coach. On the way, we sang while enjoying the scenery out of the window.Upon arriving at the foot of Mount Huang, we began climbing it happily.Its beautiful pines and mists really attracted us so we took many photos of them.It’s a steep climb to the top of the mountain, but the view was worth it. We were tired but happy when we came back because not only did we enjoy the beauty of the mountain but our friendship was strengthened. Ⅱ.读后续写(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·云南期末) I had practiced climbing drainpipes(排水管)much as a teenager，when I forgot my keys.It wasn’t a skill I expected to need again on a sunny bank holiday. I’d arranged to meet my wife in the beer garden of a local hotel.As I approached，I could hear raised voices.I thought maybe some people had drunk，but as I walked into the garden，I saw everyone looking up，including my wife.Following their sight，I saw a child on the top of a roof sticking out of the hotel. I realized the people in the garden had arranged themselves underneath，in the hope that one of them would be able to catch him if he fell.From the other side of the roof，I heard a woman’s voice begging him to sit down and keep still.It was the boy’s mother，who had tried to climb up to him and become trapped halfway.The child ignored his mother’s voice and his every movement brought a fresh gasp(倒抽气)of anxiety from onlookers.The firemen had been called，but no one knew how long it would take.I imagined the firemen working their way across the city，slowed by holiday traffic.The thought of looking on helplessly as the boy lost his footing made me feel sick.Scanning the side of the building，I quickly worked out the quickest way up and made for the drainpipe. It was old and looked as if it might break away from the wall，but I managed to quickly climb onto the roof.Above me，the child paid me little attention and didn’t appear to be frightened at all.He was no older than two.I realized I’d be unable to predict his response.My only choice then was to keep climbing.The roof narrowed as it rose and I planted myself as firmly as I could on the edge，caught the boy and held him on to my lap. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Below me，the hotel’s customers remained on the spot，occasionally shouting words of encouragement. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ It took only about 15 minutes for the firemen to arrive，but I was more than ready. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Below me，the hotel’s customers remained on the spot，occasionally shouting words of encouragement.My wife，unable to watch，was playing with our four-year-old daughter，attempting to take her attention away.It occurred to me suddenly that the life of this strange child was indeed in my hands. I had no doubt that he was safer now that I was holding on to him, but if we fell，would I be blamed for the consequences? It took only about 15 minutes for the firemen to arrive，but I was more than ready.A long ladder was leaning against the wall of the hotel towards us，and the firemen climbed up，warning me not to move (until they were directly below me).My anxiety turned into a flow of relief as I passed the boy over，and then waited to take my own turn climbing down.I was glad the situation was then in someone else’s hands.The boy’s mother thanked me over and over. 学生用书第138页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$