UNIT 2 Section Ⅴ Writing——写一篇人物传记-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Writing——写一篇人物传记 ◎ In 2015, for the first time, a Chinese scientist won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.She is Tu Youyou. Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930, Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College (now Peking University Health Science Centre) from 1951 to 1955.Since 1955, she has worked at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences as a tenured and chief researcher.In 1969, she worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria.By 1972, she had managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb, which is very effective in fighting malaria.Fourteen years later, she obtained a New Drug 学生用书第53页 Certificate for qinghaosu, issued by the Ministry of Health of China.Because of her great contribution, she was presented with the Nobel Prize at the age of 85.In 2019, she was also nominated for “The Greatest Person of the 20th Century”． Not only has she saved many people suffering from malaria, but also she has proved the effectiveness of Chinese herbs.Furthermore, she is admired because she devotes most of her time and energy to medical research. ◎ 学语言 1．使用了时间状语for the first time，强调了获得此奖项的重要性。 2．使用了过去分词短语Born in Ningbo... 1930作状语，语言简洁，语义表达明确。 3．用“Since＋过去时间点(主句使用现在完成时)”进一步说明了屠呦呦的奉献精神。 4．使用现在分词短语aiming to... for malaria作后置定语，明确指出该研究团队的目标。 5．用“By＋过去时间点(主句使用过去完成时)”说明了所取得的成绩，同时用which引导的非限制性定语从句说明了青蒿素的疗效。 6．使用了部分倒装句Not only has she... from malaria，使句式富有变化，突出屠呦呦所做出的贡献。 知结构 引出人物姓名及其最大成就 叙述主要事件(按时间顺序排列) 总结你对他/她的贡献的看法 [情境任务写作] 袁隆平是我国杂交水稻研究的创始人，被誉为“杂交水稻之父”，请你以“Father of Hybrid Rice — Yuan Longping”为题，并结合下表的信息提示用英语写一篇80词左右的作文。 Date & Place of birth Born in Beijing，September 1930 Education 1949—1953：Agricultural Department in Southwest Agricultural Institute (now Southwest University) Major Achievements and Awards 2016：achieved a double-season super rice yield of 1，537.78 kg per mu，a world record for double-season rice production 2018：the rice planted in the tropical desert in Dubai reached a maximum yield of more than 500 kg 2019—2021：awarded “the Medal of the Republic” [仿写程序步骤] 1．一仿结构布局合理 第一段：人物背景介绍； 第二段：主要成就和奖项； 第三段：我的评论。 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①1930年9月，袁隆平出生在北京。 Yuan Longping was born in Beijing in September 1930. ②袁隆平被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。 Yuan Longping is known as “father of hybrid rice”． ③自那时起，他一直致力于农业研究。 Since then，he had devoted himself to the research into agriculture. ④2016年，他和他的团队成功地使“双季超级稻”年亩产达到1 537.78公斤。(achieve) In 2016，he and his team achieved a double-season super rice yield of 1,537.78 kg per mu. ⑤这打破了双季稻亩产量的世界纪录。(break) It broke a world record for double-season rice production. ⑥尽管他于2021年5月22日与世长辞，但是我认为我们应该向他的自我牺牲、谦虚和勤奋学习。(pass away) Although he passed away on 22 May 2021，I think we all should learn from his self-sacrifice，modesty and diligence. 3．三仿句式高级表达 ⑦把句①和句②合并为简单句，并使用非谓语形式 Yuan Longping，born in Beijing in September 1930，is known as “father of hybrid rice”． ⑧把句④和句⑤合并为定语从句 In 2016，he and his team achieved a double-season super rice yield of 1,537.78 kg per mu，which broke a world record for double-season rice production. 学生用书第54页 4．四仿教材连句成篇 Father of Hybrid Rice — Yuan Longping Yuan Longping，born in Beijing in September 1930，is known as “father of hybrid rice”. He graduated from Agricultural Department in Southwest Agricultural Institute (now Southwest University).Since then，he has devoted himself to the research into agriculture. Yuan Longping has made a lot of achievements in the area of hybrid rice. For example，in 2016，he and his team achieved a double-season super rice yield of 1,537.78 kg per mu，which broke a world record for double-season rice production. And in 2018，the rice planted in the tropical desert in Dubai reached a maximum yield of more than 500 kg. Because of his contribution，from 2019 to 2021，Yuan was awarded “the Medal of the Republic”. Although he passed away on 22 May 2021，I think we all should learn from his self-sacrifice, modesty and diligence. [精彩素材积累] 常用的开头语 1．He has made great contributions in the field of... 他在……领域做出了巨大贡献。 2．He was born in 1911 in Shanghai. 1911年他出生在上海。 主体部分常用表达 1．He was highly thought of by Von Karman，a famous scientist at that time，because of his great achievements. 因为他的伟大成就，他受到当时著名科学家冯·卡门的高度赞誉。 2．In 1939，he obtained his doctor’s degrees in aerospace science and research and mathematics in the US. 1939年他在美国获得航空航天科学与研究和数学博士学位。 3．Since 1958 he had been devoted to aerospace science and research and contributed a lot to the cause of China’s aerospace. 1958年起，他献身于航空航天科学与研究工作，为中国的航天事业做出了巨大的贡献。 4．She has been devoting all her time to researching into... 她把所有的时间都花在……的研究上。 5．Thanks to her creative work，China is playing a leading role in... 多亏了她创造性的工作，中国在……领域起着领先作用。 常用的结束语 1．He was regarded as “father of China’s space program”． 他被誉为“中国航天之父”。 2．He has set a good example to us. 他给我们树立了一个好榜样。 3．From her，I realise that as long as we keep on trying，we will achieve our dream. 通过她，我意识到只要我们不断努力就会实现梦想。 4．Because he has received many awards for education, he is regarded as a famous educator. 由于他在教育方面获得了很多奖，他被认为是著名的教育学家。 [学以致用] 请根据以下内容写一篇80词左右的文章， 介绍中国科学家钱学森。 1．1911年生于上海， 1935年赴美留学， 受到冯·卡门(Von Karman)的赞誉； 2．1939年在美国获得航空航天科学、数学博士学位； 3．1950年获悉中华人民共和国成立的消息， 克服了美国政府的百般阻挠， 于1955年成功地回到祖国； 4．1958年起，他献身于航空航天科学与研究工作， 为中国的航天事业做出巨大的贡献， 被誉为“中国航天之父”； 5．2009年在北京去世。 参考词汇： 航空航天科学与研究工作aerospace science and research ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Qian Xuesen, regarded as “father of China’s space program”， was born in 1911 in Shanghai. In 1935, Qian went to America for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman. In 1939, he obtained his doctor’s degrees in aerospace science and mathematics in the US. In 1950, he heard the People’s Republic of China had been founded and succeeded in coming back to his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him. Since 1958 he had been devoted to aerospace science and research and made great contributions to the cause of China’s aerospace. In 2009, he passed away in Beijing. Because of the love for his country and the great achievement, he has received the respect and admiration from people. 40分写作限时练(二) (时间：45分钟　满分：40分) (本栏目内容，在学生用书中以独立形式分册装订！) Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分) (2024·苏州期末) 每年的3月22日是“世界水日”(World Water Day)，上周日你校学生会组织学生在市中心开展志愿宣传活动。假定你是李华，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1．活动目的； 2．活动内容(时间、地点等)； 3．活动反响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 A Volunteer Activity Celebrating World Water Day ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] A Volunteer Activity Celebrating World Water Day World Water Day falls on March 22 every year. Last Sunday, some young student volunteers, organized by the student union, took to the streets to celebrate and advertise World Water Day. Firstly, they handed out leaflets to the citizens to lecture about World Water Day. Later, public speeches about the importance of protecting water resources were given by some volunteers. Not only did these activities arouse people’s great interest in World Water Day, but also raised their awareness of water resources protection. This activity turned out to be a huge success. Ⅱ.读后续写(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·湘潭期末) In a small Chinese village, a young girl named Mei lived with a deep love for painting. Her artworks, filled with lively colors, caught the beauty of her surroundings. Despite her talent, Mei often battled with self-doubt. She wondered if her skills were truly excellent or if she was just fortunate. One day, Mei heard about a painting contest in the town called the “Sunlit Art Challenge”. Determined to prove herself and remove the doubts, Mei quickly signed up for it. The contest stirred a mix of excitement and nervousness in her. Mei spent countless hours perfecting her painting technique, pouring her heart and soul into her works. For the contest, Mei painted a beautiful sunrise over the sea. The sun just started to rise above the horizon (地平线), its bright light beginning to shine over the ocean. The sun’s rays looked like golden light, spreading across the water and making it shine like a giant mirror. As the sun rose higher, it looked like a bright ball of fire, warming the sea and making the waves shine brightly. The sky changed colors too, from a soft blue to bright oranges, pinks and reds. It was like watching the day begin right there on her canvas (画布). Mei’s painting captured the peaceful yet lively scene of the sun’s first rays touching the vast ocean, symbolizing hope. On the day of the contest, the village square was filled with excitement. Artists from near and far displayed their works. Mei set up her painting, feeling both proud and anxious. As the judges evaluated (评估) Mei’s painting, her heart raced with nervousness. Since their expressions were hard to read, Mei felt like her doubts were right, that she wasn’t as good as she hoped. When the host started to announce the winners, Mei listened with hope and curiosity. But sadly her name wasn’t called. Disappointment washed over her, and she forced a smile, applauding (鼓掌) the winners. After the contest, Mei felt disheartened. She thought her painting had failed to impress anyone, and she lost her motivation to lift her brush. At that time, Mr. Zhang, a villager, approached Mei. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Mr. Zhang told Mei that Mei’s painting was excellent and moved him.__________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Mr. Zhang’s recognition of Mei’s works renewed Mei’s interest in painting._____________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Mr. Zhang told Mei that Mei’s painting was excellent and moved him. With tears in his eyes, he told her how her painting of the sunrise had profoundly touched him. Mr. Zhang explained that he had been going through a tough time and that Mei’s painting reminded him of the beauty and hope in the world. He described how the warm colors and the image of the sun rising over the ocean gave him a sense of peace and comfort. Mr. Zhang’s words made Mei realize that her works had a significant impact, reaching beyond just winning contests. Mr. Zhang’s recognition of Mei’s works renewed Mei’s interest in painting. She started to see her art not just as a means to achieve personal recognition, but as a tool for healing and bringing joy to others. Mei began to paint with a new purpose, creating artworks that depicted scenes of hope and beauty. Her art soon became a source of warmth and inspiration in her community. Through her journey, Mei discovered the true essence of her art. It was not just about creating beautiful scenes on canvas, but about touching hearts and warming souls. 学生用书第55页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$