UNIT 3 Section Ⅴ Writing-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（人教版2019）

UNIT 3 DIVERSE CULTURES Section Ⅴ　Writing 内容索引 40分写作限时练 5 NO.1　单元写作——地点介绍 1 NO.2　续写微技能破茧——接纳多元文化 2 NO.3　巧用技法　突破续写 3 NO.4　牛刀小试　续写实战　 续写原创“6＋3”之高考题源改编 4 NO.1　单元写作——地点介绍 返回 原文呈现 WELCOME TO CHINATOWN! The Chinatown in San Francisco is the biggest in America，and also the oldest.It is a very popular tourist draw that receives more visitors each year than even the Golden Gate Bridge.The climate is mild all year round，meaning it is always a good time to visit. Historically，Chinese immigrants settled in the area during the railroad construction and gold rush period.What started as a residential area for Chinese immigrants then turned into a centre for Chinese culture.[1]The majority of residents in Chinatown are still ethnic Chinese，many of whom do not speak English fluently. [2]This allows visitors to experience a real taste of China. Most of Chinatown was destroyed in the 1906 earthquake，but the city and residents rebuilt it，taking care to include lots of Chinese architecture．[3]Traditionally，visitors enter Chinatown through the legendary Dragon Gate，which was built using materials donated from China.[4]Other famous sites include the Tin How Temple and Bank of Canton，to name but a few.Visitors can also spend hours just exploring the interesting sights，smells，and sounds of China.Portsmouth Square is also a key site，being the centre of Chinatown.It has a long and famous history，with the author Robert Louis Stevenson having spent much time writing there.[5]These days，the square is a great place to see traditional Chinese culture in real life，such as games of Chinese chess，and people practising tai chi. The stores in the Chinatown offer a unique range of souvenirs，goods，and clothing.All kinds of traditional Chinese herbal medicine can be found，too，and there are Chinese tea stores，where visitors can taste and buy varieties of Chinese tea. But perhaps what many tourists and San Franciscans treasure most about Chinatown is its food.There is Chinese food to suit everyone's taste，with traditional dishes from all over China. Chinatowns are an important part of the diverse culture of the USA.They allow visitors who have never been to China to experience traditional Chinese culture first hand. 名师圈点 学语言 1．第一段第一句中使用了biggest与oldest，突出表现了在旧金山的唐人街规模大，历史悠久。第一段第二句中使用了含有than的比较级句型，突出了旧金山的唐人街是旅游参观的好地方。 2．第二段用了较多的高级句式，例如句[1]使用了what引导的主语从句，表明这里是早期中国移民居住的地方。句[2]使用了“代词＋介词＋关系代词”引导的定语从句，说明这里还有许多人不能流利地讲英语，还保留着原有的中国文化。 3．第三段运用了动词-ing形式短语(taking care to...)作状语；非限制性定语从句(which was built...)；with复合结构(with the author...)等高级句式，突显出作者较强的语言功底。 4．第二段作者在介绍唐人街的历史时运用了then，still等词；第三段作者在介绍唐人街及震后重建过程中运用了but，and，also等词，使句子之间层次清晰，逻辑鲜明，语意连贯。 知结构 1．短文由三部分组成。第一部分介绍了旧金山的唐人街，第二部分详细地描述了唐人街的历史、建筑、商店和美食，第三部分总结唐人街是美国多元文化的一个重要组成部分。 2.文章第一段第一句交代了唐人街规模之大、历史之悠久。第三句点明一年四季气候温和，适宜游览。 3．文章第三至六段详细地描述了唐人街的历史、建筑、商店和美食，另外生动细致地描写了唐人街的大部分建筑融入了诸多中国建筑元素。全文在表达中使用了Historically，architecture，stores，food等词使文章表达条理清晰。 情境任务写作 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办主题为“我的家乡”的英文征文活动，请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文介绍你的家乡： 1．地理位置； 2．人文景观； 3．发展变化； 4．你的希望。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 仿写程序步骤 1．一仿结构布局合理 第一段： _____________________ 第二段： ________________ 第三段： _____________________ 对该地区进行简单概括 详细介绍其特点 对该地区进行总体评价 2．二仿语言规范美观 (1)我住在中国西南靠近成都的一个小城镇。 __________________ near Chengdu in the southwest of China. (2)这里没有那么多的高楼和宽阔的街道。 __________________________________ and wide streets. (3)由于这个城镇位于成都平原，周围有很多农田。 _______________________________________，around the town there is a great deal of farmland. I live in a small town There are not so many high-rise buildings As the town lies/is located in the Chengdu Plain (4)从春天到秋天，在农场种植了各种类型的庄稼，形成了一幅美丽的景象。 From spring to autumn，____________________________________________ ____________________． (5)最近这些年，我的家乡发生了很大的变化。 In recent years，________________________________________． (6)已经建设了许多购物中心和公寓楼，这使得人们的生活很方便。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________ many kinds of crops are grown on the farm，and it makes a beautiful sight great changes have taken place in my hometown A great many shopping centers and apartment buildings have been put up.They make people's lives pretty convenient. 3．三仿句式高级表达 (7)用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句(4) _____________________________________________________________________________________ (8)用动词-ing形式短语作结果状语改写句(6) __________________________________________________________________________________________________ From spring to autumn，many kinds of crops are grown on the farm，which makes a beautiful sight. A great many shopping centers and apartment buildings have been put up，making people's lives pretty convenient. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I live in a small town near Chengdu in the southwest of China.There are not so many high-rise buildings and wide streets.However，the scenery in my hometown is attractive. As the town lies/is located in the Chengdu Plain，around the town there is a great deal of farmland.From spring to autumn，many kinds of crops are grown on the farm，which makes a beautiful sight.In recent years，great changes have taken place in my hometown.A great many shopping centers and apartment buildings have been put up，making people's lives pretty convenient. Welcome to my hometown and I am willing to be your guide. 精彩素材积累 (一)地理位置、气候等常用句型 1．My hometown，neighboring Hong Kong，is located in Guangdong Province of China. 我的家乡位于中国广东，毗邻香港。 2．Surrounded by the water，Australia is a nice place to live in. 澳大利亚四面环水，是个居住的好地方。 3．The climate in Shantou is pleasant，neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. 汕头的气候宜人，冬不寒冷，夏不酷热。 (二)历史、景点、商店、饮食等常用句型 1．The city with a history of more than 1，000 years is our pride. 这座有1 000多年历史的城市是我们的骄傲。 2．Sydney，the biggest city in Australia，has many places of interest，of which the Opera House is well known all over the world. 悉尼是澳大利亚最大的城市，有许多名胜古迹，其中悉尼歌剧院闻名于世。 3．As is known to us all，Mount Hua is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and its unique characteristics. 众所周知，华山以它险峻的悬崖和它独一无二的特征而出名。 4．On arriving at the top of the hill，we were deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery. 一到达山顶，我们就深深地被这里美丽的风景所吸引。 (三)总结概括全文常用句型 1．You will never regret if you pay a visit to it. 如果你参观它，你将绝对不会后悔的。 2．It is really a great feast for your eyes. 它真的会让你大饱眼福。 返回 NO.2　续写微技能破茧——接纳多元文化 返回 Ⅰ.话题表达聚焦 Ⅱ.基于主题语境的续写实践 1．完成句子 (1)为了庆祝我们的结婚十周年纪念日，我和我丈夫预订了去墨西哥的旅行。(动词不定式作目的状语) ____________________________________，my husband and I booked a trip to Mexico. (2)正如我们期待的那样，当探索新的地点和体验新冒险时，我们沿途享受美味的食物和美好的陪伴。(as引导定语从句；while引导时间状语从句的省略) On the way，__________________，we enjoyed good food and good company，_________________________________________________． To celebrate our tenth wedding anniversary as we had expected while exploring new places and experiencing new adventures (3)我们开着一辆老旧的吉普车穿过茂密的丛林，欣赏美丽的风景，倾听动物们的鸣叫声。(动词的联动) We ____________________________ in an old jeep，___________________ _____ and ________________ of the animals. (4)上午10：30时，我们站在一个高台上，等待着用飞索穿过700米幽深的峡谷。(动词-ing形式作状语) By 10：30 a．m.，we were standing on a high platform，__________________________ by zip line—a distance of 700 metres. travelled through the thick jungle enjoyed the beautiful views listened to the calls waiting to cross the deep gorge (5)穿越峡谷时，我欣赏了左侧令人惊讶的海洋风光和脚下的雨林。(“介词＋关系词”引导定语从句) I was crossing the gorge，______________________________ of the ocean to the left and the rainforest below. (6)那一刻我感觉自己像一只在天空中自由飞翔的鸟。(强调句型；比喻修辞法) _____________________________________________ from where I enjoyed striking view It was then that I felt like a bird flying freely in the air. 2．衔接美文 将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵，注意使用合适的过渡衔接词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 返回 To celebrate our tenth wedding anniversary，my husband and I booked a trip to Mexico.On the way，as we had expected，we enjoyed good food and good company，while exploring new places and experiencing new adventures.Then，we travelled through the thick jungle in an old jeep，enjoyed the beautiful views and listened to the calls of the animals.By 10：30 a．m.，we were standing on a high platform，waiting to cross the deep gorge by zip line—a distance of 700 metres.I was crossing the gorge，from where I enjoyed striking view of the ocean to the left and the rainforest below.It was then that I felt like a bird flying freely in the air. NO.3　巧用技法　突破续写 返回 夯基微技能(三)　逻辑衔接，缜密谋篇 为了写出逻辑清晰、衔接流畅的文章，需要用过渡词把句与句、段与段巧妙地连接在一起，使文章结构紧凑且自然，脉络完整且顺畅。常见的逻辑衔接关系如下： 1．表示时间先后顺序的过渡词 此类词有first(ly)、second(ly)、third(ly)、at first、in the beginning、afterwards、meanwhile、after that、finally、at last、in the end、eventually等。 *Meanwhile，in order to enhance my capability，I actively participate in various activities to accumulate my experience. 与此同时，为了提高个人能力，我积极参加各种各样的活动以积累经验。 2．表示空间顺序的过渡词 此类词有on one side...on the other side...、beneath、down、on the opposite side、behind、opposite to、in (the) front of、in the center of、in the distance、(in) the middle of、at the back of、on/to the left/right、close to、next to、nearby、beyond、at the very top等。 *Down the middle of the valley runs a clear，fast stream which is suitable for fishing. 山谷中间有一条清澈湍急的小溪，适合钓鱼。 3．表示原因的过渡词 此类词有because、for、as a consequence (result) of、due to、thanks to、on account of、owing to等。 *As a consequence of the population aging trend，old age security has become a very pressing issue. 由于人口老龄化趋势的发展，养老保障已成为一个十分突出的问题。 4．表示结果的过渡词 此类词有therefore、as a result、consequently、thereby、thus、so等。 *Therefore，never give up whatever happens. 因此，无论发生什么都不要放弃。 5．表示强调的过渡词 此类词有definitely、absolutely、certainly、indeed、above all、surely、to tell the truth等。 *To tell the truth，never have I seen such a nice school. 说实话，我从没见过这么好的学校。 6．表示递进或补充的过渡词 此类词有in addition、furthermore、also、moreover、meanwhile、what's more、besides、to make matters worse、worse still、most importantly、last but not least等。 *What's more，I'm crazy about sports and I often play basketball after school with my friends. 另外，我热爱体育运动，放学后我经常和我的朋友们一起打篮球。 7．表示举例的过渡词 此类词有for example、for instance、such as等。 *For instance，we can share our positive attitude with our friends who are negative or upset. 例如，我们可以与那些消极或沮丧的朋友分享我们积极的态度。 8．表示让步或转折的过渡词 此类词有but、however、although、though、yet、even if、even though、except for、on the contrary等。 *The article is educational.However，kids find it hard to understand it. 这篇文章具有教育意义。然而，孩子们却发现很难理解它。 返回 NO.4　牛刀小试　续写实战　 续写原创“6＋3”之高考题源改编 返回 创意聊天长椅　保障银龄老人安全交友 写作任务 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 [1]Detective Sgt.Ashley Jones works at the Avon and Somerset Police department in England.During his efforts to combat senior citizen loneliness，Jones realized that，with the rapid development of society，over 9 million people in the UK suffered from frequent or permanent loneliness，and 17% of elderly people had contact with friends and family members less than once per week. [2]Loneliness is a serious social problem that can contribute to depression as well as crimes.The elderly people are so eager to communicate with others that they fall victim to cheaters.Suzanne who had been cheated of her money was a typical example. [3]It was obvious that the cheater had done his homework and found that Suzanne was an old lady living alone，with barely any visitors.Then，every morning，she would get a call from a stranger who eventually convinced her that he was her long lost friend.Then out of sympathy，she lent him about ￡31，000 as he was poor and in desperate need.Even after knowing she was cheated，she said that she didn't actually mind being cheated，which made Jones shocked，“Otherwise，I would never speak to another person for weeks on end，”she said. [4]It bothered Jones for a long time.He decided to do something about it.That's when he made a significant discovery，which could prevent it in a clever way.The solution was chat benches—specially designated benches in local parks that encouraged people to interact and get to know each other. [5]First Jones convinced the police department to allow him to set up a couple of “chat benches” in two of their local parks.Then he hung a colorful sign on each of the benches that read：“HAPPY TO CHAT.Sit here if you don't mind someone stopping to say hello.” 注意：1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Fantastically，it began to gain attention.___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Therefore，the idea was catching on quickly._______________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一审——审要素 写作思路 Police department England 背景Settings When&Where [1]Detective Sgt.Ashley Jones works at the Avon and Somerset _________________ in _______． 角色Characters Who Ashley Jones—detective； □junior□senior citizens √ 情节Plot What [2]The elderly people are so eager to ________________ others that they fall ______ to cheaters. [4]It ________ Jones for a long time.He decided to do something about it.That's when he made a significant discovery，which could _______ it in a clever way.The solution was ____________specially designated benches in local parks that encouraged people to ________ and get to ____ each other. Why [2]Loneliness is a ______________________ that can contribute to depression as well as ______． communicate with victim bothered prevent chat benches interact know serious social problem crimes 情感Feelings How [2]__________；__________；eager→[3]________；_______ loneliness depression sympathy shocked 二定——定主题：正能量原则 原文依据 [4]That's when he made a significant discovery，which could _______ it in a clever way.The solution was ____________—specially designated benches in local parks that encouraged people to ________ and get to ____ each other. 主题 The benches could not only cut down ______，but also encourage senior citizens to ________ and get to ____ each other. prevent chat benches interact know crimes interact know 三推测——两步段首句定发展：三衔接原则 (一)标出段首句的关键句 第一段：Fantastically，it began to ______________． 第二段：_________，the idea was ___________ quickly. (二)基于三衔接原则：利用复现、代词指代及过渡衔接词三大方法做好衔接。 ①根据第一段的段首句可知，设立聊天长椅这件事开始受到关注。第一段应描写：所有的_____都坐满了人，大家在开心地进行____。 gain attention Therefore catching on 长椅 交流 ②根据第二段的段首句可知，这个想法流行起来。第二段应描写：这个想法流行起来的表现可以分为两步：首先，琼斯(Jones)在当地增加了长椅的数量；其次，鉴于其□有效性□无效性，这个方法在更□多的□少的地方得到推广。 ③由此可推测第一段的结局：_____成为安全的平台，让老年人安全地_____，且不会成为______的受害者。第二段的结局：这种方法最大限度地解决了老年人______的问题，并且让他们收获良多。 √ 长椅 交流 骗子 孤独 √ 四构思——每段三个微情节原则 第 一 段 情节 ①所有的____都坐满了人； ②大家在开心地进行____； ③长椅的□有效性□无效性 动作链 被完全占用_______________→笑容满面 v．____→拆除；消除；破除__________→防止；阻止_________________ 心理描写 积极的；活跃的 adj.______；欢乐的；令人愉快的 adj. ____________；幸福；愉快 n．_________ 长椅 交流 √ be fully occupied beam break down prevent...from... active joyful/happy happiness 第 二 段 情节 ①首先，琼斯在当地_____了长椅的数量； ②其次，这个方法在更□多的□少的地方得到推广； ③这种方法最大限度地解决了老年人_____的问题，并且让他们收获良多 动作链 设置；设立______→期待；期望_______________→与……战斗；减轻 v．______→充当；作为________→互动 v．________ 心理描写 满意的 adj._________；积极乐观的 adj.________ 增加 √ 孤独 set up look forward to combat serve as interact satisfied positive 五遣词造句——连词成句，连句成文 1．高级词汇及语块 ①____ n.　　　　　　　　 招牌；指示牌 ②______ adj. 积极的；活跃的 ③____________ adj. 欢乐的；令人愉快的 ④____________ n. 交谈；对话 ⑤__________ adv. 明显地 ⑥________ n. 平台 ⑦________ v. 常去；常到 ⑧________ n. 方式；方法 sign active joyful/happy conversation apparently platform frequent approach ⑨________________ 被完全占用 ⑩_____________ 忙于；从事 ⑪_______________ 范围从……到…… ⑫__________ 拆除；消除；破除 ⑬______________ 防止；阻止 ⑭______ 设置；设立 ⑮______________ 期待；期望 be fully occupied be engaged in range from...to... break down prevent...from... set up look forward to 2．find＋宾语＋宾语补足语 指示牌建起没几天，琼斯就发现长椅上坐满了白发苍苍的老人。 Just a few days after the signs went up，Jones __________________________ _________ with gray hair. 3．独立主格结构 他们正坐在那里积极、愉快的交谈，脸上露出真诚、幸福的笑容。 They were sitting there and engaged in active and joyful conversations，________________________________． found the benches fully occupied by people faces beaming with sincere happiness 4．where引导定语从句 很明显，长椅成了一个安全的平台，打破了阻碍老年人打招呼的无形的社会障碍。 Apparently，the benches became a safe platform ________________________ _________________________________________________． 5．形容词短语作状语＋where引导定语从句 首先，(琼斯)很满意他的想法的出现，他设立了更多的长椅，大部分在老年人常去的地方。 First，_________________________________，Jones set up more benches，mostly in places ___________________________． where invisible social barrier that kept elderly people from saying hello was broken down satisfied with the development of his idea where senior citizens frequented 6．with复合结构 不久后，英国有超过100条聊天长椅被设立，还有数百条正在建设中。 Shortly after，there were over 100 chat benches built throughout England，____________________________． 7．总结全文画龙点睛的升华；not only引起部分倒装＋动词-ing形式作状语 长椅不仅成为减少犯罪的有效方法，而且鼓励那些相同年龄的人互动以及相互了解，因此获得了积极的效果。 ____________________________________________ to cut down crimes，but they also encouraged those of similar ages to interact and get to know each other，thus _______________________． with hundreds under construction Not only did the benches serve as an effective means gaining a positive outcome 六成文——誊写清晰，字迹工整 Fantastically，it began to gain attention.___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Just a few days after the signs went up，Jones found the benches fully occupied by people with gray hair.They were sitting there and engaged in active and joyful conversations，faces beaming with sincere happiness.Their topics ranged from daily routines to their entertainment activities.Apparently，the benches became a safe platform where invisible social barrier that kept elderly people from saying hello was broken down.Most importantly，it prevents the elderly who are cut off from society falling victim to cheaters. Therefore，the idea was catching on quickly._______________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 返回 First，satisfied with the development of his idea，Jones set up more benches，mostly in places where senior citizens frequented.More cities were looking forward to copying his approach for combating loneliness.Shortly after，there were over 100 chat benches built throughout England，with hundreds under construction.Not only did the benches serve as an effective means to cut down crimes，but they also encouraged those of similar ages to interact and get to know each other，thus gaining a positive outcome. 40分写作限时练(三) 返回 Ⅰ.应用文写作(共15分) (2024·秦皇岛高一检测) 假定你是李华，有个英国旅游团暑假期间来北京旅游，请你作为导游根据提示信息写一篇导游词，简要介绍一下北京。内容要点如下： 1．是中国的首都及政治、文化中心； 2．历史悠久，景点众多，长城、天坛、故宫久负盛名； 3．美食也很多，北京烤鸭非常出名。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 参考词汇：天坛the Temple of Heaven Ladies and Gentlemen， Welcome to Beijing！My name is Li Hua，and I feel honored to _______ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ be your guide for the tour.Now，I'd like to tell you something about Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China and the center for politics and culture.It enjoys a long and rich history.There are numerous famous places of interest and wonderful examples of ancient architecture，such as the world-famous Great Wall，the Temple of Heaven and the Forbidden City.Besides sightseeing places，there are many delicious foods such as Beijing roast duck.There is no doubt that Beijing is really a good place to travel. I hope you all have a pleasant time here. Ⅱ.读后续写(共25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·杭州北斗联盟高二期中联考) A long time ago，when I worked in Ahmedabad，we would often drive to Mount Abu for short trips—it took us anywhere between seven to eight hours to drive up.That year，my close relatives were visiting from Lucknow during the holidays，and we made a plan to visit Abu for three days.Since there were seven of us，including my brother's family who also lived in Ahmedabad，we hired two cabs.We picked ourselves into the vehicles，stacked (堆放) our luggage on the carriers on top and started out. A good time was bad by all，and soon it was time to return.During the journey back，we stopped at a Dhaba for tea and snacks near the Mehana district.That's when I noticed suddenly that the rope with which the luggage was tied on and of the carriers had come loose and one of the suitcases was missing.It must have fallen off somewhere along the way. Although it didn't contain any valuables—just clothes and some cash，we decided to retrace our steps，drawing back four kilometres，looking for the bag.But luck wasn't our friend：we could not locate it and returned to Ahmedabad depressed. After about a month，one day，while in my office，I got a call from my assistant that a certain Mr.Shah wanted to see me.I was in the middle of a meeting so he was asked to wait.After I got done，I called him into my office. I was looking after the development of small industries in the state at the time，so my immediate query was “How can we help you? Do you want to set up an industry or are you facing any issues in your enterprise？” To which he said，“No，sir.I have not come for any official help.It is a personal matter.Did you lose something recently？” Of course，it all came back to me and I told him about the lost suitcase from the cab back from Mount Abu a month ago. 注意：1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Then Shah told his side of the story._______________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ While driving home，he noticed a suitcase lying by the side of the road.He left a message at the Lost and Found，but no one approached him for the suitcase.About a month passed，he could do nothing but break open the lock and found my name and address inside.Words failed me to convey my thanks for his kindness and generosity.Of course，I mentioned that I would visit his residence in the evening and collect my bag. But the gentleman insisted on delivering the suitcase to me.____________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 返回 In the evening he and his wife came to my house with the suitcase.We chatted over tea.I thanked them again.It was not for the belongings but for the efforts they spared to find me.We remained in touch for quite some time afterwards，but somehow we lost touch with each other.Hats off to him，the man who makes me realize that kindness still rules the world. 谢 谢 观 看 ！ 返回 $$