Unit 1 The secrets of happiness单元写作指导（讲义）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册易混易错点精讲精炼（外研版）

Unit 1 The secrets of happiness单元写作指导（讲义） 一、写作目标 语言目标 运用与“幸福”相关的核心词汇（如：smile, friendship, family, share, help others, feel happy...）和一般现在时，能够描述幸福瞬间，能够围绕“幸福”主题组织段落，表达个人观点或经历并且反思生活中的幸福瞬间，培养积极情感。 二、写作任务设计 主题： My Secret of Happiness 体裁： 记叙文/议论文 要求： 描述一个让你感到幸福的瞬间或日常小事。 说明为什么这件事让你感到幸福。 尝试使用本单元学过的词汇和句型。 三、分步写作指导 Step 1: 头脑风暴（Brainstorming） 活动： 小组讨论“What makes you happy?” 提供关键词引导：family, friends, hobbies, helping others, nature... Step 2: 语言支架搭建（Language Support） 1. 核心句型练习 句型模板： I feel happy when... ...makes me happy because... Happiness is... 任务： 学生用模板造句，教师提供反馈。 素材积累 (一) 常用词汇： touch // rich // poor // the most magical part // side // exciting // surprised // experience // help others // family // happy place // key to happiness // love // in one’s mind // to one’s surprise // join in // be full of // in one’s heart (二) 常用句型： 1）开头句 1. It’s important to help others. 2. When people help each other, it makes the world... 3. In fact, happiness is always around you. 2）中间句 1. Last Sunday, I went swimming with... 2. Suddenly we heard someone shout, “Help! Help!” 3. I tried my best to ... 4. Finally, we helped sb. ... 5. Yesterday there was something wrong with my bike... 3）结尾句 1. Helping other people makes ... feel... 2. If everyone helps others, our world will become... 2. 连接词强化 使用 and, because, so 连接句子（如：I helped my classmate with homework, and I felt happy.） Step 3: 范文分析与仿写（Model Text） Introduction: 引出主题（如：Happiness is everywhere in our life.） Body: 描述具体事件（When? Where? Who? What?） 解释幸福的原因（Why?） Conclusion: 总结对幸福的理解（如：Happiness is sharing love with others.） 4、 迁移写作（高频写作满分话题） 1．幸福对于每个人来说都有着不一样的定义。在你的生活和学习中，你觉得幸福是什么？是和同学玩耍，还是和父母共处？是读着喜欢的书，还是牵着钟爱的狗？是赚很多钱，还是拥有一个属于自己的梦想？其实幸福一直都在我们的身边，我们应当珍惜。请以“Happiness Around Me”为题，用英语写一篇短文，来表达你对幸福的理解。 观点 每个人对幸福的理解不一样，你认为什么是幸福？ 简单讲述自己的某个经历来表达你对幸福的理解。 要求： (1)有理有据且真实地陈述自己对幸福的观点； (2)结构合理，条理清楚，书写规范； (3)词数70左右，不得在文中提及真实校名及人名。 Happiness Around Me ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．生活中处处充满着阳光，每个人都会得到同学的帮助、朋友的支持、老师的关心、亲人的爱护，让你感受到生活中的幸福。请以 Sunshine in My Life 为题写一篇短文，描述你得到他人帮助或关爱的一次经历及感受。 要求： （1）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； （2）必须涵盖题目要求的内容，并做适当拓展； （3）词数 70左右。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Sunshine in My Life Life is beautiful and full of sunshine. There is a nice thing in my mind all the time. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．幸福在我们生活中处处存在，但不同的人对它有不同的理解。请根据下面的提示和写作要求，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对幸福的理解。 内容提示： 1）你认为幸福是什么； 2）分享你感到幸福的一次经历； 3）谈谈你对幸福的理解。 写作要求： 1）短文必须包含以上内容，可适当发挥； 2）语句通顺，条理清晰； 3）词数100左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） Happiness is everywhere around us. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．幸福的感觉如同蜜糖般甘甜，阳光般灿烂。只要用心感受，幸福无处不在。你最幸福的时刻是什么？学校英文校刊正在进行以“My happiest moment”为题的征文活动，请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文投稿，谈谈初中以来你最幸福的时刻以及你的感悟和收获。 要求： 1. 适当增加细节，行文连贯； 2. 语法准确、书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．幸福是什么？幸福是忙碌后的一杯清茶；幸福是迷茫时的一本好书；幸福是寒夜中的 一盏明灯！幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家；幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光；幸福是朋友送来的一份甜点；幸福是……请你以“My Happiness”为话题，结合亲身经历，谈谈你对幸福的看法。 要点： 1. 你对于幸福的定义； 2. 一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情； 3. 你的感受与感悟。 要求： 1. 条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确，字迹工整； 2. 100 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 My Happiness Happiness is important in our life.   ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．家是人生的起点，更是幸福的源泉。在你的日常生活中，有哪些与家人共度的快乐时光呢？请以“The Happiest Time with My Family”为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享你的幸福故事。 要求： 1. 书写规范、字迹清楚、语法正确、语句通顺； 2. 条理清晰、内容详实、表达准确、行文连贯； 3. 80—120词，文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．幸福是什么？幸福是父母对你无微不至的爱，幸福是老师投向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是朝着自己梦想的铿锵步伐。请以“Happiness”为标题，写一篇英语短文，描述一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事。 写作要点： 1、简要描述事件的背景或起因。 2、重点描写事件的过程（包含时间、地点、人物及事件的经过） 3、简要描述事件结果或你对事件的看法。 写作要求： 1、写作要素齐全，结构完整，层次分明，语句通顺。 2、文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3、90词左右。 Happiness _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．Happiness Is From                   提示：幸福源于什么？不同的人会有不同的感受。请以“Happiness Is From         ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你生活或学习中所经历的一件令你感到幸福快乐的事。 要求： 1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不得少于60个； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．幸福源于什么？不同的人会有不同的感受。请以“Happiness From ________ ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你生活或学习中所经历的一件令你感到幸福快乐的事。 要求： 1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 Happiness From__________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师投向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是请以“Happiness”为标题，写一篇约110词的英语短文，描述一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事。 注意：文中不可出现真实的人名、校名。标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Happiness ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 The secrets of happiness单元写作指导（讲义） 一、写作目标 语言目标 运用与“幸福”相关的核心词汇（如：smile, friendship, family, share, help others, feel happy...）和一般现在时，能够描述幸福瞬间，能够围绕“幸福”主题组织段落，表达个人观点或经历并且反思生活中的幸福瞬间，培养积极情感。 二、写作任务设计 主题： My Secret of Happiness 体裁： 记叙文/议论文 要求： 描述一个让你感到幸福的瞬间或日常小事。 说明为什么这件事让你感到幸福。 尝试使用本单元学过的词汇和句型。 三、分步写作指导 Step 1: 头脑风暴（Brainstorming） 活动： 小组讨论“What makes you happy?” 提供关键词引导：family, friends, hobbies, helping others, nature... Step 2: 语言支架搭建（Language Support） 1. 核心句型练习 句型模板： I feel happy when... ...makes me happy because... Happiness is... 任务： 学生用模板造句，教师提供反馈。 素材积累 (一) 常用词汇： touch // rich // poor // the most magical part // side // exciting // surprised // experience // help others // family // happy place // key to happiness // love // in one’s mind // to one’s surprise // join in // be full of // in one’s heart (二) 常用句型： 1）开头句 1. It’s important to help others. 2. When people help each other, it makes the world... 3. In fact, happiness is always around you. 2）中间句 1. Last Sunday, I went swimming with... 2. Suddenly we heard someone shout, “Help! Help!” 3. I tried my best to ... 4. Finally, we helped sb. ... 5. Yesterday there was something wrong with my bike... 3）结尾句 1. Helping other people makes ... feel... 2. If everyone helps others, our world will become... 2. 连接词强化 使用 and, because, so 连接句子（如：I helped my classmate with homework, and I felt happy.） Step 3: 范文分析与仿写（Model Text） Introduction: 引出主题（如：Happiness is everywhere in our life.） Body: 描述具体事件（When? Where? Who? What?） 解释幸福的原因（Why?） Conclusion: 总结对幸福的理解（如：Happiness is sharing love with others.） 4、 迁移写作（高频写作满分话题） 1．幸福对于每个人来说都有着不一样的定义。在你的生活和学习中，你觉得幸福是什么？是和同学玩耍，还是和父母共处？是读着喜欢的书，还是牵着钟爱的狗？是赚很多钱，还是拥有一个属于自己的梦想？其实幸福一直都在我们的身边，我们应当珍惜。请以“Happiness Around Me”为题，用英语写一篇短文，来表达你对幸福的理解。 观点 每个人对幸福的理解不一样，你认为什么是幸福？ 简单讲述自己的某个经历来表达你对幸福的理解。 要求： (1)有理有据且真实地陈述自己对幸福的观点； (2)结构合理，条理清楚，书写规范； (3)词数70左右，不得在文中提及真实校名及人名。 Happiness Around Me ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Happiness Around Me In my eyes, staying with my family makes me happy. In the sixth grade of primary school, I had a high fever and had to stay in hospital for two weeks. My mother made delicious food for me. My father talked with me to make me happy. My little sister often called me and cared about my health. I think staying with my family is the biggest happiness and that I am the happiest person in the world. Dear friends, let’s love our family. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍和家人在一起很快乐； 第二步，讲述小时候生病时家人陪伴的经历和感受； 第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家爱自己的家人。 [亮点词汇] ①stay with和……待在一起 ②have a high fever发高烧 [高分句型] ①I think staying with my family is the biggest happiness and that I am the happiest person in the world.（宾语从句） 2．生活中处处充满着阳光，每个人都会得到同学的帮助、朋友的支持、老师的关心、亲人的爱护，让你感受到生活中的幸福。请以 Sunshine in My Life 为题写一篇短文，描述你得到他人帮助或关爱的一次经历及感受。 要求： （1）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； （2）必须涵盖题目要求的内容，并做适当拓展； （3）词数 70左右。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Sunshine in My Life Life is beautiful and full of sunshine. There is a nice thing in my mind all the time. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Sunshine in My Life Life is beautiful and full of sunshine. There is a nice thing in my mind all the time. Some say life is happy, but others feel life is unhappy. In my opinion, life is beautiful and full of sunshine. Several weeks ago, I was badly ill. I had to be in hospital for a long time. But my family was too poor to afford it. Everyone in my class took out their pocket money. Then, some students went to the street on Sunday to collect money from others and sent all the money to me. My teachers helped me with study when I was in hospital. Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky, but we should believe: Life is beautiful and full of sunshine. Help and love will be around us forever. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，引出本文主题；   第二步，描述自己得到他人帮助和关爱的一次经历； 第三步，表达感悟。   [亮点词汇]   ①be full of充满   ②too…to太……而不能…… [高分句型]   ①There is a nice thing in my mind all the time.（there be句型） ②My teachers helped me with study when I was in hospital.（when引导时间状语从句） 3．幸福在我们生活中处处存在，但不同的人对它有不同的理解。请根据下面的提示和写作要求，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对幸福的理解。 内容提示： 1）你认为幸福是什么； 2）分享你感到幸福的一次经历； 3）谈谈你对幸福的理解。 写作要求： 1）短文必须包含以上内容，可适当发挥； 2）语句通顺，条理清晰； 3）词数100左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） Happiness is everywhere around us. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Happiness is everywhere around us. But different people have different opinions about it. For me, staying with my family really makes me happy. In the sixth grade of primary school, I had a high fever and had to be in hospital for two weeks. My father sent me delicious food made by my mother every day and talked with me to relax me. My little sister Li Mei often called me and cared about my health. When I was awake at night, I found my father sleeping on the chair beside my bed. At that time I suddenly thought that staying with family was the biggest happiness and I was the happiest person in the world. I think happiness is the deep love from my family. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容谈谈你对幸福的理解，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你认为幸福是什么； 第二步，分享你感到幸福的一次经历； 第三步，谈谈你对幸福的理解。 [亮点词汇] ①have a high fever发高烧 ②care about关心 ③at that time在那时 [高分句型] ①My father sent me delicious food made by my mother every day and talked with me to relax me. (过去分词作定语) ②When I was awake at night, I found my father sleeping on the chair beside my bed. (when引导的时间状语从句) ③At that time I suddenly thought that staying with family was the biggest happiness and I was the happiest person in the world. (宾语从句) 4．幸福的感觉如同蜜糖般甘甜，阳光般灿烂。只要用心感受，幸福无处不在。你最幸福的时刻是什么？学校英文校刊正在进行以“My happiest moment”为题的征文活动，请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文投稿，谈谈初中以来你最幸福的时刻以及你的感悟和收获。 要求： 1. 适当增加细节，行文连贯； 2. 语法准确、书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    Everyone has the happiest moment. So do I. In my opinion, my happy moment is when I stay with my friends. When I’m in trouble, my friends are always around me and ready to do me a favor, which makes me happy.    What’s more, my friends always give their support to me when I feel sad. Furthermore, they tell me some jokes or take me for a walk. Sometimes we play sports, we all like sports. In addition, I always share all my happiness with them so that the happiness is twice than before.    I am very happy because I spend much time with my friends. With our efforts, our friendship are more stable than before. We are not only friends but also family members now. That is why I think my happy moment is with my friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文 ②时态：一般现在时/一般过去时 ③提示：包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，说明自己觉得最幸福的时刻； 第二步，描述那些让自己觉得幸福的时刻； 第三步，感悟和收获。 [亮点词汇] ① in my opinion 依我看来 ②in trouble 遇到麻烦 ③do me a favor 帮助我 ④give their support 给我支持 ⑤in addition 此外 ⑥with our efforts 通过我们的努力 [高分句型] ①When I’m in trouble, my friends are always around me and ready to do me a favor, which makes me happy. (时间状语从句+非限制性定语从句) ②That is why I think my happy moment is with my friends. (表语从句+宾语从句) 5．幸福是什么？幸福是忙碌后的一杯清茶；幸福是迷茫时的一本好书；幸福是寒夜中的 一盏明灯！幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家；幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光；幸福是朋友送来的一份甜点；幸福是……请你以“My Happiness”为话题，结合亲身经历，谈谈你对幸福的看法。 要点： 1. 你对于幸福的定义； 2. 一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情； 3. 你的感受与感悟。 要求： 1. 条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确，字迹工整； 2. 100 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 My Happiness Happiness is important in our life.   ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Happiness        Happiness is important in our lives. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.        I will never forget one thing that happened to me. Once, I got a bad mark in a math test. I was sad and afraid to go home, because I was afraid of being blamed. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what had happened. To my surprise, they said to me in a kind voice, “It doesn’t matter, my dear. Remember we’ll always be with you whenever you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy.       Courage from my parents when I am frustrated will make me the happiest person in the world. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. In the future, I want to be a person who can be the pride of my parents. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作方向已给出，写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容，注意表述清晰，逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体说明如果你用心感受，幸福是无处不在的； 第二步，介绍曾经发生在自己身上的幸福的事情； 第三步，写出父母的爱对我成长的作用。 [亮点词汇] ①happen to sb.发生在某人身上 ②be afraid to do sth.害怕做某事 ③to one’s surprise令某人吃惊的 ④give up放弃 ⑤in trouble处于困难中 ⑥make one’s mind to do sth.下定决心做某事 [高分句型] ① I will never forget one thing that happened to me. (that 引导的定语从句) ②I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. (make one’s mind to do sth.下定决心做某事) 6．家是人生的起点，更是幸福的源泉。在你的日常生活中，有哪些与家人共度的快乐时光呢？请以“The Happiest Time with My Family”为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享你的幸福故事。 要求： 1. 书写规范、字迹清楚、语法正确、语句通顺； 2. 条理清晰、内容详实、表达准确、行文连贯； 3. 80—120词，文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: The Happiest Time with My Family As a famous saying goes, “East or west, home is the best”. I always feel happy and relaxed when I am with my family. Last Sunday, I went to fly kites with my family in south mountain. It was sunny and windy. While flying kites, we ran and ran until our kites flew higher and higher. There were many kites in the sky. They were colorful and in different shapes. Some were like birds, and some were like animals. The sky was decorated so beautifully. We ran freely with the kites. Then we had a great picnic. We talked and laughed happily. After lunch, we took a walk there enjoying the sunny spring. What an amazing day! We spent an enjoyable and unforgettable day. It helps me understand my parents better and show my true love for them. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：要求以“The Happiest Time with My Family”为题，围绕“与家人共度的欢乐时光”来展开写作，分享自己的幸福故事，注意正确拼写单词，避免出现语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，以名言“金窝银窝不如自家草窝”来引出与家人相处的感受； 第二步，具体阐述与家人共度的欢乐时光； 第三步，叙述那段欢乐时光给自己带来的影响。 [亮点词汇] ① fly kites 放风筝 ② take a walk 散步 ③ help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ① I always feel happy and relaxed when I am with my family.（when引导时间状语从句） ② What an amazing day!（感叹句） 7．幸福是什么？幸福是父母对你无微不至的爱，幸福是老师投向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是朝着自己梦想的铿锵步伐。请以“Happiness”为标题，写一篇英语短文，描述一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事。 写作要点： 1、简要描述事件的背景或起因。 2、重点描写事件的过程（包含时间、地点、人物及事件的经过） 3、简要描述事件结果或你对事件的看法。 写作要求： 1、写作要素齐全，结构完整，层次分明，语句通顺。 2、文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3、90词左右。 Happiness _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Happiness Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it. I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was afraid to tell my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, and they said to me “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always here for you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child and a good student. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，描述一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题； 第二步，描述一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事，交代清楚事件的背景或起因，过程以及结果； 第三步，表达自己的看法和感受。 [亮点词汇] ①in fact事实上 ②put one’s heart into sth用心去做一件事 ③be afraid to do sth害怕做某事 ④make up one’s mind to do sth下定决心做某事 [高分句型] ①In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②Remember we’ll be always here for you when you need help.(when引导的时间状语从句) 8．Happiness Is From                   提示：幸福源于什么？不同的人会有不同的感受。请以“Happiness Is From         ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你生活或学习中所经历的一件令你感到幸福快乐的事。 要求： 1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不得少于60个； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Happiness Is From Hard Work Our life is full of happiness. My happiness comes from hard work. I can get happiness every time I work hard. Last term, I was chosen to take part in the English Speech Contest. I was nervous when I heard the news, because I was always afraid of speaking in public. I wondered if I could succeed and I wanted to give up. My English teacher noticed that. She had a long talk with me and encouraged me to challenge myself. After that I kept practicing every day. When I got the first prize in the contest, I felt happy deep in my heart. My happiness is from the success through my hard work. The harder I work, the more happiness I get. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； 提示：写作要求已给出，不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先通过介绍幸福源于什么来引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述学习中所经历的一件令你感到幸福快乐的事； 第三步，谈谈自己的感想。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②be afraid of doing sth害怕做某事 ③give up放弃 ④encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①I wondered if I could succeed and I wanted to give up.（宾语从句） ②When I got the first prize in the contest, I felt happy deep in my heart.（时间状语从句） 9．幸福源于什么？不同的人会有不同的感受。请以“Happiness From ________ ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你生活或学习中所经历的一件令你感到幸福快乐的事。 要求： 1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 Happiness From__________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：                               Happiness From Hard Work Our life is full of happiness. My happiness comes from hard work. I can get happiness every time I work hard. Last term, I was chosen to take part in the English Speech Contest. I was nervous when I heard the news, because I was always afraid of speaking in public. I wondered if I could succeed and I wanted to give up. My English teacher noticed that. She had a long talk with me and encouraged me to challenge myself. After that, I kept practicing every day. When I got the first prize in the contest, I felt happy from my deep heart. My happiness is from the success through my hard work. The harder I work, the more happiness I get. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，要围绕幸福的来源展开； ②时态：一般过去时为主； ③提示：考生应注意围绕主题展开阐述，并应先补全题目，确定好主题，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意行文逻辑和文章连贯性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题目，表明自己的幸福源于努力工作； 第二步，具体阐述自己所经历的一件事情，要围绕主题展开，注意时态的正确性，突出自己感受到的幸福和付出的辛勤； 第三步，总结文章，并突出自己的主题，即幸福源于努力。 [亮点词汇] ①be full of充满 ②take part in参加 ③in public在公共场合 ④challenge myself挑战自我 [高分句型] I wondered if I could succeed and I wanted to give up. （if引导的宾语从句） 10．幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师投向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是请以“Happiness”为标题，写一篇约110词的英语短文，描述一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事。 注意：文中不可出现真实的人名、校名。标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Happiness ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Happiness Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it. I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was afraid to tell my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, and they said to me “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always here for you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child and a good student. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“幸福”为题写一篇短文。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事；最后一句发表感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$