Unit 2 Rules around us 单元话题写作满分范文16篇(分层练习)英语新教材沪教版五四学制六年级下册

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学科网 同步精品课堂 www.ZXXK.COM 上好课系列 Unit2 Rules around us 单元话题写作满分范文16篇(分层练习) l,假如你是Jenny,在了解了Dave的家规后,也想写信给Dave分享你的家规。 写作要点: 1.When do you have to get up every day? 2.What can and can't you do at home? 3.What's your opinion about the rules? 要求: 1语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整: 2文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名、地名等): 3词数70左右,短文开头及结尾己给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Dave, Yours, Jenny 2.Lmda是你校的新生,不了解校规,请你根据下面示句为她介绍一下。50词左右。 提示: 1.上课不能迟到: 同步新教材,周周有练习,月月有重点! 1 6学科网 同步精品课堂 WWW.ZXXK.COM 上好课系列 2.不准在敦室吃东西: 3.不能在课堂上听音乐、玩游戏: 4.在校图书馆必须保持安静: 5.在校期间要穿校服。 3.假如你是孙彬,你家里有很多家规,如:上学日晚上不能出去玩;放学回家后要马上完成作业:之 后弹半个小时的钢琴;饭后要帮妈妈洗碗;看电视不超过30分钟。周末晚上出去玩;最晚9点要回家;要 帮妈妈做早饭和打扫房间卫生。 请你将你的家规给同学们做一个解说,并谈谈你对你家规的看法。80词左右,开头与结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数。 Hello, everyonel There are many rules in my family. That's all.Thank you. 4,假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Jae来信询问中国家规的情况。请你根据所给要点提示,给她写一 封信,谈谈你家都有哪些家规,你对这些家规有什么看法,并讲一讲原因。 要点提示: 1.Do the dishes after dinner. 2.Go to bed before 9 o'clock; 同步新教材,周周有练习,月月有重点! 2 学科网 同步精品课堂 www.ZXXK.cO 上好课系列 3.Can't watch TV or play computer games. 注意事项: 1,短文应包括所有的要点提示,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥; 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名: 3.词数70左右,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jane. How is it going?I have some rules at home. Yours, Li Hua 5.书面表达 无论在家里还是在学校,我们都有很多规则要遵守。请你根据下列提示,以“Rus”为题写一篇英语短文, 说说你需要遵守的规则及你的看法。 Family rules School rules Run in the morning. Get to school on time Read after dinner: Don't run in the Don't go out in the classroom. evening Wear the uniform 要求:1.不少于60词; 2.内容须包括以上提示,也可适当发挥。 同步新教材,周周有练习,月月有重点! 3 6学科网 同步精品课堂 www.ZXXK.COM 上好课系列 Rules 6.Write at least 50 words on the topic'“Things We Can'tDo”.(以“我们不能做的事情为题,写一篇至少50 个单词的短文,要求语句正确通顺,内容连贯,标点符号不占格)。 Suggested questions: What kind of things we can't do? Why? 7.Write a passage of at least50 words on the topic“Our school rules”(请以“我们校园规则”为题写一篇不 少于50个词的短文,标点符号不占格) Use the following suggestions:(使用以下提供的建议:) 1.What are your school rules?List three examples. 2.What do you think of them? 3.How do you often obey the rules? 8.Write at least50 words on the topic'Rules around us'(以“我们身边的规则为题,写一篇不少于50个 单词的短文,要求内容适切,意思连贯,标点符号不占格。) 注意:作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。) Suggested questions(以下提示仅供参考): Where do we have rules around us? ●What are they? 同步新教材,周周有练习,月月有重点! 4 学科网 同步精品课堂 www.ZXXK 上好课系列 What do you think of the rules? 9.生活中每个人都有一些规则要遵守,请根据下面的提示,介绍一下李明需要遵守的规则。要求不少 于60词,语法规范,要点齐全,可适当发挥。 1.早6:30起床,晚9:00上床睡觉: 2在校穿校服: 3.上课不准迟到4在家不能看电视,每晚 练钢琴; 5.周末打扫房间,洗衣服。 IO.无规矩不成方圆,每个家庭都有家规。请以My Family Rules'"为题,写一篇英语短文,从休息时间, 晚间活动,帮助做家务等方面介绍至少三条家规,以及你的感受。60词左右。 My Family Rules 11.Write at least 50 words about the topic"Fire-safety rules in pubic"using the following questions for reference..(请根据提示问题,以“公共消防安全规则"为题写一篇短文,不少于50个词,标点符号不占格) Suggested questions: (1)What do you think of the fire? 同步新教材,周周有练习,月月有重点! 5 6学科网 同步精品课堂 www.ZXXK.cO 上好课系列 (2)What are the fire-safety rules? l2.根据提示写出你的家规和校规。注意要用上must/have to,can or can't 1.Get up at 6:00 and make bed. 2.Don't leave the dirty dishes in the kitchen 3.Don't watch TV or play the computer games on school days. 4.Do homework first. 5.Go to bed before 10:00 6.Don't arrive late for class 7.Wear a school uniform 8.Don't eat in class 9.Eat in the dining hall 10.Keep hair short. 13.俗话说:“国有国法,家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长,使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽、 同步新教材,周周有练习,月月有重点! 6 学科网 同步精品课堂 www.ZXXK.cO 上好课系列 更和谐,每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如:必须按时回家,不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家 庭的实际情况,根据下而的提示和要求,以“My Family Rules"为题,写一篇短文。 提示: 1.家里有哪些家规: 2.对家规的感受; 3.对父母的建议。 要求: 1.必须包括提示内容,可以适当发挥: 2.词数:不少于60词: 3.文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。 提示词:housework家务;will be punished将被惩罚 14.Write a passage of at least50 words about the topic“My family rules'".(以“我的家规”为愿写一篇不少于 50个词的短文,标点符号不占格。) 俗话说“国有国法,家有家规。”你家有哪些家规?为什么需要这些家规?你认为你的家规怎么样?请分 享至少两条家规,并谈一谈原因和你的感受。 同步新教材,周周有练习,月月有重点! 6学科网 同步精品课堂 wwW.ZXXK.COM 上好课系列 15 According to the picture,.write at least6 short sentences about the topic“School rules”(根据图片,以“校园 规则为题写5句校规,标点符号不占格) 要求:这些学生违反了哪些学校规则?请根据他们的行为制定校规。 Suggested words: in the hallway在走廊 fight with sb.打架 1.Don't 2.We mustn't 4 16.假如你是ak,请先用(√)回答下列问卷调查中的问题,然后根据你的选择用英语写一篇有关 家庭规则的短文,并适当分享你的看法。 Questionnaire Yes No DCan you go out on school nights? 2Can you play computer games after school? 3Do you have to get up early every day? 4Do you have to do the housework at home? 5Do you think your parents are strict? 要求: 1.回答表格中的问题,可适当拓展; 2.要点齐全、行文连贯,拼写正确: 同步新教材,周周有练习,月月有重点! 8 学科网 同步精品课堂 www.ZXXK.COM 上好课系列 3.不少于60词(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 My name Jack 同步新教材,周周有练习,月月有重点! Unit2 Rules around us 单元话题写作满分范文16篇(分层练习) 1.假如你是Jenny,在了解了Dave的家规后,也想写信给Dave分享你的家规。 写作要点: 1. When do you have to get up every day? 2. What can and can’t you do at home? 3. What’s your opinion about the rules? 要求: 1.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名、地名等); 3.词数70左右,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Dave, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jenny 【答案】例文 Dear Dave, How is it going? There are many rules in my family. First of all, I must get up at 6:30 every day. Then I must do morning exercises for half an hour. Second, I need to do my homework and practice spoken English after school. Last but not least, after dinner, I have to read books for an hour. My parents don’t let me watch TV on school nights. On weekends, I must learn to play the guitar. As the saying goes, “Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.” Although there are many rules in my family, they do help me to be a better person. Yours, Jenny 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇书信作文 ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,先引出家规的主题; 第二步,具体介绍自己家的家规,包括每天早上几点起床、在家必须要做的事情以及不能做的事情等; 第三步,书写结束语,表达自己对这些家规的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①do morning exercises 做早操 ②practice spoken English 练习英语口语 ③last but not least 最后 ④learn to do sth. 学习做某事 ⑤as the saying goes 俗话说 [高分句型] Although there are many rules in my family, they do help me to be a better person.(although引导的让步状语从句) 2.Linda是你校的新生,不了解校规,请你根据下面示句为她介绍一下。50词左右。 提示: 1. 上课不能迟到; 2. 不准在教室吃东西; 3. 不能在课堂上听音乐、玩游戏; 4. 在校图书馆必须保持安静; 5. 在校期间要穿校服。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, Linda. Welcome to our school. There are many rules in our school. You must remember them. Now let me tell you. We can’t arrive late for class. We can’t eat in the classroom but we can eat in the dining hall. We can’t run in the hallways. We can’t listen to music or play games in class, either. We must be quiet in the school library. We have to wear school uniforms at school. Our school makes rules to help us. We have to follow the rules. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:要求根据所给的要点提示,介绍一下你学校的校规,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,用“学校有许多规则”来引出下文; 第二步,介绍具体的校规; 第三步,提示要遵守校规。 [亮点词汇] ①arrive late for class上课迟到 ②listen to music听音乐 ③have to do sth不得不做某事 [高分句型] ①There are many rules in our school. (there be句型) ②Now let me tell you.(祈使句) 3.假如你是孙彬,你家里有很多家规,如:上学日晚上不能出去玩;放学回家后要马上完成作业;之后弹半个小时的钢琴;饭后要帮妈妈洗碗;看电视不超过30分钟。周末晚上出去玩;最晚9点要回家;要帮妈妈做早饭和打扫房间卫生。 请你将你的家规给同学们做一个解说,并谈谈你对你家规的看法。80词左右,开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! There are many rules in my family. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 【答案】例文: Hello everyone! There are many rules in my family. Now let me introduce them to you. I can’t go out on school nights. I must finish my homework as soon as I get home from school. Then, I need to play the piano for half an hour. I have to help my mother wash the dishes after dinner. Don’t watch TV for more than 30 minutes at a time. I can go out on weekend nights, but I have to be home by 9 o’clock. I help my mother make breakfast and clean the room every day. I think these family rules can make us better people. That’s all. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文; ②时态:一般现在时; ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开门见山,介绍自己家有很多家规; 第二步,具体介绍自己家的家规; 最后,表达个人感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①need to do sth.需要做某事 ②more than超过 ③wash the dishes洗碗 [高分句型] ①I must finish my homework as soon as I get home from school.(as soon as引导时间状语从句) ②Don’t watch TV for more than 30 minutes at a time.(祈使句的否定形式) 4.假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Jane来信询问中国家规的情况。请你根据所给要点提示,给她写一封信,谈谈你家都有哪些家规,你对这些家规有什么看法,并讲一讲原因。 要点提示: 1. Do the dishes after dinner; 2. Go to bed before 9 o’clock; 3. Can’t watch TV or play computer games. 注意事项: 1. 短文应包括所有的要点提示,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥; 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名; 3. 词数70左右,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jane, How is it going? I have some rules at home. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jane, How is it going? I have some rules at home. For example, I should do the dishes after dinner. I must go to bed before 9 o’clock. I can’t watch TV or play computer games. I think some of the rules are useful, but not all. I agree that I should do the dishes after dinner and it’s good for me to go to bed before 9 o’clock. However, I don’t agree that I can’t watch TV or play computer games, because I really want to have a more relaxing life. I hope I will be allowed to watch TV for a while on weekends. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇书信作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作内容提示已给出,考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息,并且要在内容提示的基础上适当发挥,使文章内容更加丰满。 [写作步骤] 第一步,陈述在家里有哪些家规; 第二步,陈述自己对于这些家规的看法; 第三步,讲述自己同意或不同意具体某项家规的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①for example例如 ②be good for...对……有好处 ③be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事 [高分句型] ①I think some rules are useful, but some are too strict.(省略that的宾语从句) ②I don’t agree that I can’t watch TV or play computer games, because I really want to have a more relaxing life.(because引导的原因状语从句) 5.书面表达 无论在家里还是在学校,我们都有很多规则要遵守。请你根据下列提示,以“Rules”为题写一篇英语短文,说说你需要遵守的规则及你的看法。 Family rules School rules ▶Run in the morning; ▶Read after dinner; ▶ Don't go out in the evening. ▶Get to school on time ▶Don't run in the classroom; ▶Wear the uniform. 要求:1. 不少于60 词; 2. 内容须包括以上提示,也可适当发挥。 Rules 【答案】 Rules There are many rules for me to follow. I think some of them are useful.  At home, I must get up early and run for half an hour. Also, I must get to school on time. And I can’t run in the classroom. But I don’t like some of them .At home I have to read books after dinner. I can't go out in the evening .These rules are too strict. On school days, I must wear the uniform. I don’t think it's cool. 【详解】本题是材料作文。学生首先要根据已知材料,认真审题,确定文章的中心。以“Rules”为题,写一篇英语短文,说说你需要遵守的规则及你的看法。材料中提示的几点都要求写进去。文章最后可以写自己的感悟和将要采取的措施等。写作的文章要具有一定的连贯性,还应注意使用一些连接词,使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。写作时还要注意:1.书写规范;2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;3.写完后要认真检查是否有漏写要点,有无拼写错误等。高分句型:There are many rules for me to follow.有许多规则要我遵守。I think some of them are useful.我认为其中一些是有用的。But I don’t like some of them .At home I have to read books after dinner.但是我不喜欢其中的一些。在家里我晚饭后必须读书。These rules are too strict.这些规则太严格了。On school days, I must wear the uniform.上学的日子里,我必须穿校服。I don’t think it's cool.我不认为这很酷。 【点睛】注意写作过程中,将要点展开并表达清楚,注意使用英语的经典句型,避免出现汉语表达。多使用诸如and ,but ,there be句型等。还有其他的宾语从句等,注意行文连贯,逻辑通顺。 6.Write at least 50 words on the topic“Things We Can't Do”. (以“我们不能做的事情”为题,写一篇至少50个单词的短文,要求语句正确通顺,内容连贯,标点符号不占格)。 Suggested questions: What kind of things we can't do? Why? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Things We Can't Do As students,we have many rules to follow at school. For example, we can’t arrive late for class. We must be on time. We can’t listen to music in the classroom. What’s more, we can’t make noise in the library. We have to be quiet in order not to disturb others. There are a lot of rules at home, too. We can’t go out or stay up late at school nights. Teachers and parents are sometimes strict, but they make rules to help us. So it’s best to follow them. 【详解】1、题干解读:本题要求以“我们不能做的事情”为题,写一篇至少50个单词的短文。短文内容可自由发挥,不作限制,但语句要正确通顺、连贯。 2、例文点评:例文用一般现在时第一人称口吻写作,行文逻辑清晰,过渡自然。 3、高分两点: 短语:for example,arrive late for ...,be on time ,listen to music,w hat’s more,have to +动词原形,in order not to+动词原形,go out,stay up late。 句型:It’s best to do sth.(最好去做某事) 7.Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “Our school rules”(请以“我们校园规则”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文,标点符号不占格) Use the following suggestions:(使用以下提供的建议:) 1. What are your school rules? List three examples. 2. What do you think of them? 3. How do you often obey the rules? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Our school rules Every school has its own rules for students. In our school, we must wear school uniforms at school. We should listen to our teachers carefully in class. We must do our homework carefully and handed in on time. We should keep quiet in the library. It’s necessary to get along well with our classmates. Besides, we must always be on time for school. I think school rules are very important for us. It’s important for us to follow the school rules. We must obey our school rules. If someone disobey the rules, he or she should be punished. 【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述学校的规则,自己对学校规则的看法以及服从规则的情况。 2.写作指导:本文用第一人称来写作;时态采用一般现在时为主,讲述学校的规则叙述完整,条理清晰。 8.Write at least 50 words on the topic ‘Rules around us’(以“我们身边的规则”为题,写一篇不少于50个单词的短文,要求内容适切,意思连贯,标点符号不占格。) 注意:作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。) Suggested questions (以下提示仅供参考): ●Where do we have rules around us? ●What are they? ●What do you think of the rules? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 We live in a world of rules. In school, we should not talk in the class and we must finish the homework on time.At home, we should also obey the rules our paretns made. In my family, I am forbidden to stay out of home at night, and I can not go and play with my friends without my paretns' approval . Sometimes I really hate those rules for they bound my free. However, we can not live well in a world without rules, that may cause lots of troubles. If all the students talk in the class, how can we learn? As to my family rule, I know that is to keep me safe. 【详解】题目解读:本文是一篇话题作文,要求介绍我们身边的规则,内容围绕参考问题,我们身边哪里有规则,这些规则是什么,作者对规则的看法。 写作指导:本文用一般现在时介绍,人称是第一人称,注意内容上的完整,介绍自己看法时候可以根据自身情况来写,要有观点。 9.生活中每个人都有一些规则要遵守,请根据下面的提示,介绍一下李明需要遵守的规则。要求不少于60词,语法规范,要点齐全,可适当发挥。 1.早6:30起床,晚9:00上床睡觉;      2.在校穿校服;     3.上课不准迟到;   4.在家不能看电视,每晚练钢琴;       5.周末打扫房间,洗衣服。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Li Ming has many rules at school and at home. He has to get up at 6:30 in the morning and go to bed at 9:00 in the evening. He has to wear a uniform at school. He can’t arrive late for class, either. At home, he can’t watch TV. He has to practice playing the piano every evening. At the weekend, he has to clean his room and wash his clothes. 【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示信息,介绍李明需要遵守的规则,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。 2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍李明在家和在学校要遵守的规则。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。 10.无规矩不成方圆,每个家庭都有家规。请以“My Family Rules”为题,写一篇英语短文,从休息时间,晚间活动,帮助做家务等方面介绍至少三条家规,以及你的感受。60词左右。 My Family Rules ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Family Rules I’m Tom. I am a student. There are too many rules in my family. Every day I have to get up at 6:00 in the morning. Then I eat breakfast quickly and I must do the dishes. I run to school because I can’t be late. I can’t play computer games or watch TV on school days. After dinner, I can’t relax because I must read a book. And I have to be in bed by 10:00 p.m. Also, I have to do some housework. I feel terrible. The rules are too strict. What can I do? 【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于提纲类写作,写自己家庭的家规。在写作时,要从四个方面介绍:休息时间,晚间活动,帮助做家务和你的感受。 2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时,因为是家规,可能会用到can’t/must/have to等表示必须或禁止的词。叙述要完整,表达要条理清晰连贯通顺,适当使用介词、副词和固定句型及短语。保证语法、单词拼写和标点使用正确。 11.Write at least 50 words about the topic “Fire-safety rules in pubic” using the following questions for reference.(请根据提示问题,以“公共消防安全规则”为题写一篇短文,不少于50个词,标点符号不占格) Suggested questions: (1)What do you think of the fire? (2)What are the fire-safety rules? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Fire-safety rules in pubic Fire is very dangerous. Let’s talk about Fire-safety rules in pubic. Fire can start in the countryside, at school or in our home. We must be careful. When we’re in the countryside, we can’t smoke. No camp-fires, no barbecues. And you must put your rubbish into the bin. When we’re at home, we mustn’t smoke. Don’t play near the fire. Don’t cook without an adult! At school when you hear the fire bell, you mustn’t run out of the classroom! Don’t pack your schoolbag! Don’t shout! Don’t run in the playground! Don’t push your classmates! Let’s be careful with fire and keep away from the fire danger! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文,写公共消防的一些规则; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,包括可能发生火灾的地方以及我们应该如何做等。 [写作步骤] 第一步,总体指出要小心预防火灾; 第二步,具体介绍在不同的地方应该如何预防火灾的一些具体的做法; 第三步,最后是总结要小心火灾,远离火灾危险。 [亮点词汇] ① put...into...把……放入……里 ② be careful with小心 ③ keep away from远离 [高分句型] ① When we’re in the countryside, we can’t smoke.(when引导的时间状语从句) ② Don’t cook without an adult!(祈使句的否定式) 12.根据提示写出你的家规和校规。注意要用上must/have to, can or can’t. 1. Get up at 6:00 and make bed. 2. Don’t leave the dirty dishes in the kitchen. 3. Don’t watch TV or play the computer games on school days. 4. Do homework first. 5. Go to bed before 10:00. 6. Don’t arrive late for class. 7. Wear a school uniform    8. Don’t eat in class. 9. Eat in the dining hall      10. Keep hair short. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 There are too many rules in my family! I have to get up at 6 a.m. and make my bed! After breakfast,I can’t leave the dirty dishes in the kitchen! I can’t watch TV or play the computer games on school days. I must do my homework first. I have to go to bed before 10:00. There are too many rules in our school, too! We can’t arrive late for class. We must wear a school uniform. We can’t eat in class and we must eat in the dining hall. We also have to keep hair short. How strict are my school and family! 【详解】[总体分析] 题材:本文是一篇材料作文; 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注心不要遗漏“信息提示”中家规和校规的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图借用“简单介绍家规和校规”来引出重点介绍的内容; 第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“起床时间、不允许看电视和玩电脑游戏、上床时间、上学不能迟到、不能在班里吃东西等”几个方面重点介绍家规和校规具体情况; 第三步,书写结语表达“学校和家人对我好严格啊”的感叹。 [亮点词汇] ① get up起床 ②watch TV看电视 ③play the computer games玩电脑游戏 [高分句型] ①There are too many rules in my family! (there be句型) ②How strict are my school and family! (how引导的感叹句) 13.俗话说:“国有国法,家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长,使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐,每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如:必须按时回家,不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况,根据下面的提示和要求,以“My Family Rules”为题,写一篇短文。 提示: 1. 家里有哪些家规; 2. 对家规的感受; 3. 对父母的建议。 要求: 1. 必须包括提示内容,可以适当发挥; 2. 词数:不少于60词; 3. 文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。 提示词:housework家务;will be punished将被惩罚 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Family Rules My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some basic rules which I must obey. Firstly, I must finish my homework in time. Secondly, I cannot play computer games, even in my free time or on weekends. Thirdly, I have to do some chores, such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom and so on. If I break one of them, I will be punished. But thanks to these rules, I can live a healthy and regular life. I think the second rule is unfair to me. I hope my parents can give me some freedom. I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while. It will make me relaxed. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”; ③提示:写作要求已给出,学生不要遗漏题目中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍家里有哪些家规; 第二步,谈谈对家规的感受; 第三步,谈谈对父母的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②thanks to多亏 ③be allowed to do sth被允许做某事 [高分句型] ①If I break one of them, I will be punished.(条件状语从句) ②I think the second rule is unfair to me.(宾语从句) ③I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while.(宾语从句) 14.Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “My family rules”.(以“我的家规”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文,标点符号不占格。) 俗话说“国有国法,家有家规。”你家有哪些家规?为什么需要这些家规?你认为你的家规怎么样?请分享至少两条家规,并谈一谈原因和你的感受。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: My family rules In my family, we have some family rules to keep order. Firstly, we must complete our homework and study tasks on time. This rule is to develop our study habits. Secondly, we have to take part in at least one family activity together every week, such as watching movies, having picnics, or playing card games. This rule is to ensure connection among family members. I think these family rules are very important because they help make our family warm and happy. I feel lucky to grow up in such a family. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇话题作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明家有家规; 第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了家规内容和原因; 第三步,书写结语。表达自己对家规的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①keep order维持秩序 ②take part in参加 ③grow up成长 [高分句型] ①This rule is to develop our study habits.(不定式作表语) ②I think these family rules are very important because they help make our family warm and happy.(宾语从句;原因状语从句) 15. According to the picture, write at least 6 short sentences about the topic “School rules”(根据图片,以“校园规则”为题写5句校规,标点符号不占格) 要求:这些学生违反了哪些学校规则?请根据他们的行为制定校规。 Suggested words: in the hallway在走廊    fight with sb.打架 1. Don’t _________________________________________ 2. We mustn’t _________________________________________ 3. _________________________________________ 4. _________________________________________ 5. _________________________________________ 【答案】例文: SCHOOL RULES 1. Don’t arrive late for class. 2. We mustn’t run in the hallways. 3. Don’t eat in the classroom. 4. Don’t listen to music in class. 5. Don’t fight with your classmates. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇看图作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:写作要点已给出,学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中根据图片这些学生违反的学校规则,为他们的行为制定校规。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,以“SCHOOL RULES”为标题写作。 第二步,根据图片这些学生违反的学校规则,为他们的行为制定校规。 [亮点词汇] ① arrive late for class上课迟到 ② run in the hallways在走廊里跑 ③ listen to music in class在课上听音乐 ④ fight with your classmates和你的同班同学打架 [高分句型] ① Don’t arrive late for class.(Don’t+动词原形,否定的祈使句) ② We mustn’t run in the hallways.(mustn’t+动词原形,表示禁止做某事) 16.假如你是Jack,请先用(√)回答下列问卷调查中的问题,然后根据你的选择用英语写一篇有关家庭规则的短文,并适当分享你的看法。 Questionnaire Yes No ①Can you go out on school nights? √ ②Can you play computer games after school? √ ③Do you have to get up early every day? √ ④Do you have to do the housework at home? √ ⑤Do you think your parents are strict? √ 要求: 1.回答表格中的问题,可适当拓展; 2.要点齐全、行文连贯,拼写正确; 3.不少于60词(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 My name is Jack.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My name is Jack. There are many rules in my home. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go home after school. I can’t play computer games, either. I have to get up early every day. I have to run for half an hour every morning. And I have to help my parents do the housework at home. My parents are very strict with me. They think the rules can help me do well, but sometimes these rules make me tired. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:根据表格内容提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍自己家里有很多规则; 第二步,根据表格问题介绍自己家里的规则; 第三步,最后表达对于家庭规则的看法。 [亮点词汇] ① have to必须 ② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③ be strict with sb对某人严格 [高分句型] They think the rules can help me do well, but sometimes these rules make me tired.(宾语从句) 2 同步新教材,周周有练习,月月有重点! 1 同步新教材,周周有练习,月月有重点! 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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