必修第三册Unit 5 What an adventure!(写潜水等经历)-同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(外研版2019)

Unit 5 What an adventure! 单元写作深度指导 写一篇有关潜水等经历的文章 ▲描述潜水经历 1.I couldn’t believe that I succeeded in diving and swam with the seals for 10 minutes! 2.Diving turned out to be much less difficult than I had imagined. 3.I was a bit scared but my instructor told me to take it easy. 4.But it just touched me lightly with its body, as if it wanted to hug me. 5.What had happened just now was like a dream. ▲基础词汇 explore 　　v.探索 unforgettable adj.难忘的 survive v.幸存 thrilling adj.令人兴奋的 unique adj.独特的 broaden vt.使扩大 I.要点解读 探险旅游是一种具有神秘性、危险性和刺激性的旅行活动。我们可以用日记或周记的形式记录下我们的探险过程,并与他人分享。在进行日记类写作时,我们可以从时间、地点、内容或感受等方面,把当天发生的事情或者在某一时间段内发生的事情记录下来,写作时多用一般过去时,以第一人称为主。 II.框架建构 能正确运用人称和时态以及本单元所学描述景色或心理活动等方面的词汇谈论和描述自己的探险或旅游经历。①时态:由于日记是对当天所发生的事情的回顾,常用一般过去时。描写景时,常用一般现在时。发表议论或感想时,也可使用现在完成时或一般将来时。②人称:日记以第一人称为主,语言简洁明了,表述口语化。 ③叙事:记事要有主次或先后顺序,因此可借助一些表示先后顺序的词语,如:early in the morning、at first、then、later on、afterwards、at noon、after breakfast、soon、finally、at last等。 III.词句表达 1.常用词块 be divided into 被分成 get lost 迷路 make a difference 有影响,有关系 turn to sb. for help 向某人求助 carry out a rescue plan 执行救援计划 be determined to do sth. 下定决心做某事 pay a visit to 参观…… 2.常用句式 (1)开篇句 ①During the winter vacation,my parents took me to..., where I had an unforgettable experience of underwater diving.在寒假期间,我的父母带我去了……在那里,我有一次难忘的潜水经历。 ②As I was eager to know about..., I went on an adventure... 因为我渴望知道……,我开始了一次……冒险。 (2)描述经历 ①What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was that... 最让我们惊讶/吸引我们/让我们高兴的是…… ②I felt so excited to see so many... 看到这么多的……,我感到很兴奋。 ③After that, we went diving, experiencing the beauty of... 在那之后,我们去潜水,体验了……的美丽。 (3)结尾句 ①This was such a real life-changing experience that I would never forget. 这是一次我永不会忘的改变人生的经历。 ②Tired as we were,we really had a wonderful day.尽管很疲惫,但我们度过了美好的一天。 IV.策略建构 1.‌开头引入‌ 简要介绍探险的背景，包括时间、地点、参与人员等。可以用一句引人入胜的话开头，吸引读者的注意力。 2‌正文叙述‌ ‌探险准备‌：描述探险前的准备工作，如装备、路线规划、安全教育等。 ‌探险过程‌：详细叙述探险过程中的经历，包括遇到的困难、挑战、有趣的事情等。可以使用时间顺序或空间转换来组织内容。 ‌情感表达‌：在叙述中穿插个人感受，如紧张、兴奋、害怕、成就感等，使文章更加生动。 ‌解决问题‌：描述在探险中遇到的问题以及如何解决这些问题，展现团队合作和个人智慧。 3.‌结尾总结‌ 总结探险的收获，如增长了知识、锻炼了意志、增进了友谊等。表达对未来探险的期待或感悟。 4.‌语言运用‌ 使用生动的词汇和形象的比喻来描述探险场景和感受。注意时态的正确使用，如过去时描述过去的经历。适当使用连接词和过渡句，使文章结构紧凑、逻辑清晰。 【范文示例】 Last summer vacation, my friends and I embarked on an unforgettable adventure in the mysterious mountains nearby our town. It was a journey filled with excitement, challenges, and invaluable lessons. ‌Preparation for the Adventure‌ Before setting off, we meticulously planned our route and packed all the necessary equipment, including tents, food, water, and first-aid kits. Our leader conducted a safety briefing, reminding us of the potential dangers and the importance of staying together as a team. ‌The Thrilling Journey‌ As we ventured deeper into the mountains, the scenery became more breathtaking. Towering trees and clear streams surrounded us, creating a serene atmosphere. However, the path soon became steep and rocky, testing our endurance and agility. We had to climb over boulders and cross treacherous ravines, all while keeping a sharp lookout for any signs of wildlife. One memorable moment occurred when we encountered a sudden downpour. The rain pounded on our backs, making the trail even more slippery. We huddled under a large rock, waiting for the storm to pass. Despite the discomfort, we shared stories and laughter, which helped us forget the cold and wet. ‌Overcoming Challenges‌ The biggest challenge came when we lost our way in the dense fog. The compass and GPS signals were unreliable, and panic began to set in. But our leader remained calm and encouraged us to stay together. We used our survival skills to navigate by the stars and eventually found our way back to the main trail. ‌Reflections on the Adventure‌ Looking back on this adventure, I realize how much I've grown. I learned the importance of teamwork, perseverance, and adaptability. The bond between my friends and I has also deepened, as we faced and overcame challenges together. This adventure has ignited my passion for exploration and I can't wait for the next one. I believe that every challenge we face is an opportunity to learn and grow, and I'm grateful for the experiences this journey has given me. 【范文分析】 1.‌语言特征‌ (1)‌生动描述‌：文章使用了丰富的形容词和动词来描绘探险过程中的景象和感受，如“breathtaking scenery”（令人叹为观止的风景）、“towering trees”（高耸的树木）、“pound on our backs”（打在背上）等，使得读者能够身临其境地感受到探险的紧张和刺激。 (2)‌情感表达‌：作者在叙述中穿插了个人的情感变化，如“meticulously planned”（精心计划）表现出对探险的认真态度，“panic began to set in”（开始感到恐慌）则展现了遇到困难时的紧张情绪，这些情感表达增强了文章的感染力。 (3)‌使用连接词‌：文章巧妙地运用了连接词来过渡段落和句子，如“However”（然而）、“Despite”（尽管）、“But”（但是）等，使得文章结构紧凑、逻辑清晰。 2.‌结构特征‌ (1)开篇引入‌：文章以“Last summer vacation, my friends and I embarked on an unforgettable adventure in the mysterious mountains nearby our town.”作为开头，直接点明了时间、人物和事件，同时用“unforgettable adventure”激发了读者的好奇心。 (2)‌层次分明‌：文章按照探险的准备、过程、挑战和反思四个部分进行叙述，每个部分都有明确的小标题，使得文章结构清晰、易于理解。 ①‌Preparation for the Adventure‌：详细描述了探险前的准备工作，包括路线规划、装备打包和安全教育等。 ②‌The Thrilling Journey‌：叙述了探险过程中的所见所闻和所感，包括美丽的风景、艰难的路径和突发的天气变化等。 ③‌Overcoming Challenges‌：描述了探险中遇到的最大挑战——迷路，以及团队如何克服这一困难的过程。 ④‌Reflections on the Adventure‌：总结了探险的收获和感悟，包括个人成长、团队协作的重要性等。 (3)‌结尾总结‌：文章以“This adventure has ignited my passion for exploration and I can't wait for the next one.”作为结尾，既总结了全文，又表达了对未来探险的期待，使得文章首尾呼应、结构完整。 　假定你是某国际学校的学生李华,你昨天参加了某旅行社组织的海底探险旅行。请用英语写一篇日记,记述这次探险旅行,内容包括: 1.时间、地点;2.探险项目:深海潜水、观察海洋生物、海底古文明遗址探险等;3.你的感受。 注意:1.词数80个左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:探险 expedition _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作示例】 I.审题布局 II.句式建构 1.昨天,我和一些游客参加了一家旅行社组织的西海海底探险活动。 Yesterday, I together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea.  2.我们有许多令人兴奋的活动。 We had many exciting activities.  3.其中之一是深海潜水。 One of them was deep sea diving.  4.在潜水期间,我们享受海底的美丽和观看海洋生物。 During the diving, we enjoyed the undersea beauty and watched the marine life.  5.我们从未如此近距离地看到海洋生物。 We had never seen the marine life so close.  6.给我印象最深的是对海底古文明遗址的探索。 What impressed me most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea.(主语从句)  The exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea left the deepest impression on me.(leave...impression on sb.)  I was most impressed by the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea.(be impressed by...)  It was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea that impressed me most.(impress sb.)  7.当我看到那些废墟时,我不禁想知道古代人们的生活是什么样子的,他们后来经历了什么。 When I saw those ruins, I couldn’t help wondering what the ancient people’s life was like and what they experienced later.  8.就我而言,这次旅行拓宽了我们的视野,也帮助我们了解了更多关于海洋的知识。 As far as I’m concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea.  III.衔接成篇 Yesterday, I together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea. We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving.During the diving, we enjoyed the undersea beauty and watched the marine life which we had never seen so close.What impressed me most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea.Seeing those ruins, I couldn’t help wondering what the ancient people’s life was like and what they experienced later. As far as I’m concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea. 【范文分析】 1.语言特征‌ ①‌时态运用‌：全文主要使用了过去时，如“took part in”、“had”、“enjoyed”等，准确地描述了过去的探险经历。 ②‌并列结构‌：文中多次使用并列结构来列举信息，如“Yesterday, I together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea.”和“We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving.”，使得信息表达更加清晰、有条理。 ③‌定语从句‌：如“which we had never seen so close”和“As far as I’m concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea.”，定语从句的运用丰富了句子的内容，提供了更多的背景信息。 ④‌情感表达‌：文中通过“impressed me most”和“couldn’t help wondering”等表达，展现了作者对探险经历的深刻感受和思考。 2.‌结构特征‌ ①‌开头引入‌：文章以“Yesterday, I together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea.”作为开头，直接点明了时间、人物和事件，简洁明了。 ②‌主体叙述‌：接着，作者详细叙述了探险过程中的活动，包括深海潜水、观赏海底美景和海洋生物，以及探索海底古代文明遗址等，内容丰富、条理清晰。 ③‌活动列举‌：通过“We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving.”引出具体活动，使得文章结构更加紧凑。 ④‌细节描写‌：在叙述深海潜水时，作者用“enjoyed the undersea beauty”和“watched the marine life”等细节描写，增强了文章的生动性和感染力。 ⑤‌个人感受‌：在叙述探索海底古代文明遗址时，作者加入了个人感受和思考，如“What impressed me most was...”和“Seeing those ruins, I couldn’t help wondering...”，使得文章更加具有深度和可读性。 ⑥‌结尾总结‌：最后，作者以“As far as I’m concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea.”作为结尾，总结了探险的收获和意义，使得文章结构完整、主题突出。 1．为绿化荒山，上周六你校组织学生去西山进行植树活动。现请你写一篇英语短文记录此次活动经历。要点如下： 1.活动目的； 2.经历和感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．你在生活中有什么历险经历吗？请结合自己的生活实际，写一篇历险短文。写作要点如下： 1．事件发生的时间和地点；2．你的感想。 注意：词数80左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假定你是李华，是学校英文报的记者。学校近期组织了一次踏青探春活动，请你写一篇短文，报道此次活动。 内容包括： 1. 时间与地点：上周三，郑州西流湖公园； 2. 活动的内容； 3. 你对这次活动的评价。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 提示词: 西流湖 Xiliu Lake Park ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．上周末你校地理社(The Geography Society)组织了主题为探索城市的City Walk 活动，请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动的过程； 2. 收获与感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你刚刚完成乘坐火车穿越加拿大的旅行，现在和班级同学分享你的旅行经历，介绍旅行路线。要点如下： 1. 旅行路线及沿遍各地特点：温哥华气候温和，群山包围；落基山脉壮丽的山峰，众多野生动物栖息；安大略省(Ontario)首府多伦多(Toronto），登上CN Tower眺望安大略湖，远处尼亚加拉瀑布(Niagara Falls)水雾缭绕。唐人街是著名景点。终点魁北克，浓厚法国文化与传统，一个融合城市生活与自然，户外探险与文化体验的城市。 2. 旅行的意义。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．最近，你班同学就“探索火星是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况，并谈谈自己的看法。 30%的同学认为火星不值得探索。理由： 1. 离我们及我们的日常生活太遥远。2. 浪费金钱。 70%的同学认为火星值得探索。理由： 1. 已发送火星车祝融探索发现了火星的基本情况。2. 有望解决人口问题。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Recently our class had a heated discussion on whether Mars is worth exploring. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．为促进班级团队建设，增进学科知识在实践中的应用，我校于10月27日组织学生及教师去净月潭国家森林公园（Jingyuetan National Forest Park）徒步，请写一篇英文游记，记录此次综合社会实践活动，内容包括：1)活动时间、地点及目的；2)活动内容：1. 参加定向越野（orienteering），徒步8公里，班级拍摄创意照；2. 探索森林公园，了解长春市气候、植物类型；3. 小组采集制作树叶标本（specimen）并展览；3)你的感受。 注意： 1. 词数100词左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Dalton来信说他非常喜欢化学，经常在家做实验，但是他的妈妈认为很危险，禁止他再做实验，为此他很苦恼。请你给Dalton写封回信，内容包括： (1)你的宽慰; (2)你的建议。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Dalton, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．假定你是李华，在暑假来临之际你校英文报拟刊登有关户外探险的利弊的文章，现面向全校征稿，请以“Outdoor Exploration”为题写篇英语文章投稿，内容包括： (1)户外探险的现状； (2)户外探险的利弊； (3)你的观点。 注意： (1)词数80左右； (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设你是李华，对探索太空很感兴趣，将要参加一个关于太空探险的夏令营，但是父母却反对，觉得你应该关注学习。对此，你很苦恼，向你的网友Tom寻求建议。 内容包括：1.阐述问题；2寻求建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 11．为丰富学生的暑期生活，你校拟举办“暑期户外冒险营(outdoor adventure camp)”活动。请你代学生会(The School Students’ Union)写一则通知，邀请广大学生报名参加。内容包括：1.活动目的;  2.活动内容;  3.报名时间及方式。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Notice _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．假定你是李华，十一期间你参加了一家冒险远足营地 (Adventure Hiking) 组织的一次冒险远足旅行，请你写一篇日记描述这次活动并谈谈自己的感受。主要内容应包括： 1. 活动的时间和人员； 2. 活动过程： (1)远足要穿过一个大沙漠以考验参加者的体力和耐力； (2)参加者将体验刺激的漂流活动 (white-water rafting)； (3)参加者将爬一座最大海拔高度为5000米的高山，并遇到一些野生动物； (4)远足组织者将提供良好的住宿 (accommodation)并要求参加者携带轻而有用的行李。 注意：词数100左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． Last Saturday, our school organized a tree planting activity at West Mountain to make our environment greener. Carrying saplings and tools, we arrived early and started planting trees on the barren hillsides. While working, I felt a sense of accomplishment. It was hard work, but knowing we were contributing to a better future made it worthwhile. When I looked at the newly planted saplings which would grow into tall trees, the feeling of pride filled my heart. This experience taught me the value of teamwork and environmental protection. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生写一篇英语短文记录此次植树活动经历。 1.词汇积累 成就感：a sense of accomplishment→a sense of achievement 值得的：worthwhile→rewarding 开始做某事：start doing sth→begin doing sth 做出贡献：contribute to→make contributions to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last Saturday, our school organized a tree planting activity at West Mountain to make our environment greener. 拓展句：Last Saturday, our school organized a tree planting activity at West Mountain so that we can make our environment greener. [高分句型1] While working, I felt a sense of accomplishment.（运用了时间状语从句和省略句） [高分句型2] When I looked at the newly planted saplings which would grow into tall trees, the feeling of pride filled my heart.（运用了when引导时间状语从句，which引导定语从句） 2． One day last month, I was trapped in the lift of our flat as I was about to go to school. The lift just came to a stop all of a sudden shortly after I got into it. I was alone in the lift and felt a bit frightened and worried at first, but I managed to make myself calm down. It was obvious that it was no use only feeling worried in the lift. First, I tried to cry for help, but no one seemed to be able to hear me from outside. I looked around and found there was an emergency bell on the wall. Just then, I knew I would be safe. I immediately rang the bell for help. Soon two guards came up and opened the door for me and let me out. In conclusion, stay calm in the face of danger, and soon we can find a way to protect ourselves. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生结合自己的生活实际，写一篇历险短文。 1.词汇积累 公寓：flat→apartment 害怕的：frightened→scared 能够：be able to→be capable of 总之：in conclusion→all in all 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：First, I tried to cry for help, but no one seemed to be able to hear me from outside. 拓展句：First, I tried to cry for help, but it seemed that no one was able to hear me from outside. [高分句型1] One day last month, I was trapped in the lift of our flat as I was about to go to school.(运用了as引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] It was obvious that it was no use only feeling worried in the lift. (运用了it作形式主语句型) 3． To help students relax, our school organized a spring tour to Xiliu Lake Park last Wednesday. It was a beautiful sunny day. At 7: 30 a. m., we met at our school gate and set off for the park. The scenery there was amazing. We were free to walk around and enjoy the amazing scenery for a few hours. After lunch, we played games, singing and dancing happily. This activity not only offered us a chance to get close to nature, but also brought us closer to each other. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道，要求考生写一篇短文，报道学校近期组织的一次踏青探春活动。 1.词汇积累 帮助：help→assist 高兴地：happily→merrily 提供：offer→provide 机会：chance→opportunity 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To help students relax, our school organized a spring tour to Xiliu Lake Park last Wednesday. 拓展句：To help students relax, our school organized a spring tour to Xiliu Lake Park, which took place last Wednesday. [高分句型1] To help students relax, our school organized a spring tour to Xiliu Lake Park last Wednesday.(运用了不定式作目的状语) [高分句型2] After lunch, we played games, singing and dancing happily. (运用了现在分词作状语) 4． Last weekend The Cerography Society hosted a City Walk entitled “Exploring Chonging.” This excursion provided a rare opportunity for participants to delve into the rich cultural heritage of this historic city in China. The event kicked off with an informative introduction to the city’s rich history and cultural heritage, followed by a guided tour of its historic streets and alleyways. Participant explored traditional local markets, marveled at the stunning architecture of traditional residential buildings, and gained insight into the daily life of Chongqing’s residents. The city is also famous for its spicy cuisine, and participants had a chance to taste the local flavors. Not only was the event a fantastic opportunity to learn about the city’s history and culture, but it also allowed participants to fully immerse themselves in the local atmosphere and connect with the local community. The City Walk was a great success, with all participants thoroughly enjoying themselves and gaining valuable knowledge and memories. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生给校英文报写一篇报道，介绍上周末你校地理社(The Geography Society)组织了主题为探索城市的City Walk 活动。 1.词汇积累 命名：entitle →name 机会：chance → opportunity 非常：thoroughly →very 玩得愉快：enjoy oneself → have fun 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last weekend The Cerography Society hosted a City Walk entitled “Exploring Chonging.” 拓展句：Last weekend The Cerography Society hosted a City Walk which was entitled “Exploring Chonging.” 【高分句型1】The City Walk was a great success, with all participants thoroughly enjoying themselves and gaining valuable knowledge and memories.（运用了with复合结构） 【高分句型2】Not only was the event a fantastic opportunity to learn about the city’s history and culture, but it also allowed participants to fully immerse themselves in the local atmosphere and connect with the local community.（运用了部分倒装结构） 5． I am glad to share with you my travel experience in Canada. My first stop was Vancouver, which has a mild climate and is surrounded by mountains. Then I came to the Rocky Mountains. The Rocky Mountains, which are home to many wildlife, have magnificent peaks. My next destination was Toronto, the capital of Ontario. I climbed onto the CN Tower, glancing over Lake Ontario and saw Niagara Falls in the distance. After that, I went to Chinatown, which is also a famous scenic spot. I ended my trip in Quebec, a city with a strong French culture and tradition, which integrates urban life and nature, outdoor exploration and cultural experience. Through this trip, not only did I enjoy the beautiful natural scenery, but also I learned more about Canadian traditions and culture, which broadened my horizons. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生写一篇短文和班级同学分享在加拿大旅行的经历，介绍旅行路线和旅行的意义。 1.词汇积累 壮丽的：magnificent→grand 景点：scenic spot→tourist attraction 欣赏：enjoy→appreciate 开阔视野：broaden my horizons→expand my horizons 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My next destination was Toronto, the capital of Ontario. 拓展句：My next destination was Toronto, which is the capital of Ontario. 【高分句型1】My first stop was Vancouver, which has a mild climate and is surrounded by mountains.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Through this trip, not only did I enjoy the beautiful natural scenery, but also I learned more about Canadian traditions and culture, which broadened my horizons.(运用了倒装句和which引导的非限制性定语从句) 6． Recently our class had a heated discussion on whether Mars is worth exploring. Students hold different ideas about it. 30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile, holding the belief that space exploration is too far away from us and our daily life and is a waste of money.   However, 70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it, such as using satellites for communication and weather forecast. What’s more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day.   As far as I am concerned, it is worthwhile to explore the space. Not only can it promote the development of society but also enrich our life. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生用英语写一篇短文介绍你班同学就“探索火星是否值得”这一话题展开的一场讨论的情况，并谈谈自己的看法。 1. 词汇积累 观点：idea→opinion 然而：however→nevertheless 另外：what’s more→in addition 值得做的：worthwhile→rewarding 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：What’s more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. 拓展句：What’s more, if we carry out further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. [高分句型1] 30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile, holding the belief that space exploration is too far away from our daily life and is a waste of money. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句，现在分词作状语和that引导的同位语从句) [高分句型2] Not only can it promote the development of society but also enrich our life. (运用了部分倒装结构) 7． In order to promote the construction of class team and promote the application of subject knowledge in practice, our school organized students and teachers to go hiking in Jingyuetan National Forest Park on October 27th. The activities were rich and colorful. We participated in orienteering and walked 8 kilometers. And we were encouraged to take creative photos in class. Besides, we explored the forest park to learn about Changchun's climate and plant types. At last, each team collected and made leaf specimens and exhibited them. The 8 km journey was challenging but really enjoyable. My classmates and I cheered each other for our success. Regular activities like this not only keep us fit, but also help get us closer to each other and to nature. 【写作分析】这篇书面表达属于记叙文。学校组织的一次综合社会实践活动，要求考生写一篇关于净月潭国家森林公园徒步的游记。 1. 词汇积累 丰富的：abundant→rich 参加：take part in→ participate in 而且：additionally→ besides 愉快的：pleasant→ enjoyable 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：We participated in orienteering and walked 8 kilometers. And we were encouraged to take creative photos in class. 拓展句：We participated in orienteering and walked 8 kilometers, after which we were encouraged to take creative photos in class. [高分句型1] In order to promote the construction of class team and promote the application of subject knowledge in practice, our school organized students and teachers to go hiking in Jingyuetan National Forest Park on October 27th. (运用了in order to) [高分句型2] Regular activities like this not only keep us fit, but also help get us closer to each other and to nature. (运用了not only……but also…) 8．Dear Dalton, I understand how passionate you are about chemistry and how frustrated you must feel. It’s important to respect your mother’s concerns about safety. My suggestion is to try and find a middle ground. You could explain to her how much you love doing experiments and propose performing them under safe conditions or with proper supervision. This way, you’re addressing her worries while continuing your passion.     Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Dalton写一封回信，针对他母亲禁止他做实验的苦恼给予安慰并提出建议。 1. 词汇积累 感兴趣的: passionate →enthusiastic 建议: suggestion →advice 感到沮丧的: frustrated →upset 担忧: concern →worry 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句: My suggestion is to try and find a middle ground. 拓展句: My suggestion is that you should try and find a middle ground. 【高分句型1】It’s important to respect your mother’ s concerns about safety.（使用it作形式主语以及不定式作真正主语） 【高分句型2】You could explain to her how much you love doing experiments and propose performing them under safe conditions or with proper supervision.（使用how much引导的宾语从句） 9． Nowadays outdoor exploration activities have gained popularity among young people. They are always seen hiking or cycling to get close to nature. These adventures offer both benefits and risks. The benefits of outdoor exploration include improved physical health and mental relaxation. It allows people to enjoy nature and escape daily stress. However, there are risks such as injuries and getting lost. In my view, the advantages outweigh the risks. With careful planning and the right equipment, outdoor exploration can be a rewarding and enjoyable experience, which promotes a healthy lifestyle and a love for nature. 【写作分析】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生以“Outdoor Exploration”为题写篇英语文章投稿。 1.词汇积累 获得：gain→obtain 提供：offer→provide 在我看来：in my  view→in my opinion/as far as I’m concerned 有意义的：rewarding→meaningful 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Nowadays outdoor exploration activities have gained popularity among young people. They are always seen hiking or cycling to get close to nature. 拓展句：Nowadays outdoor exploration activities have gained popularity among young people who are always seen hiking or cycling to get close to nature. 【高分句型1】 However, there are risks such as injuries and getting lost.(运用了there be句型) 【高分句型2】 With careful planning and the right equipment, outdoor exploration can be a rewarding and enjoyable experience, which promotes a healthy lifestyle and a love for nature.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 10． Dear Tom, How is everything going? Recently I feel upset and are eager for your suggestion. As you know, I have a preference for space exploration and have a good command of it. However, whenever I read relevant books and watch videos, my parents will explode with anger. What’s worse, they even command me to give it up and focus on my study. What makes me most annoyed now is that they prevent me from signing up for the summer camp related to exploring space which will be held next month. I have no idea how to change their minds, and I’m wondering whether you can offer me some advice. I would be thankful if you could give me some help. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据提示就父母反对自己参加一个关于太空探险的夏令营这事向网友Tom寻求建议。 1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion → advice 精通：have a good command of → have a good knowledge of 专注于：focus on→ concentrate on 感激的：thankful → grateful 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：As you know, I have a preference for space exploration and have a good command of it. 拓展句：As you know, not only do I have a preference for space exploration, but also I have a good command of it. 【高分句型1】However, whenever I read relevant books and watch videos, my parents will explode with anger. （运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】 What makes me most annoyed now is that they prevent me from signing up for the summer camp related to exploring space which will be held next month. （运用了what引导的主语从句、that引导的表语从句和which引导的定语从句） 11． Notice In order to enrich students’ life, our school will organize an outdoor adventure camp this summer holiday.We would like to invite all the students to attend it. In this activity, we will not only have a climbing contest but also have an overnight camping trip. Through this activity, you’ ll have a wonderful time to explore the natural world, while making friends and learning something connected to nature. Do remember that the registration deadline is June 10, if you are interested, please sign up at the the Students’ Union office. Looking forward to your participation!      The School Students’ Union 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生名义写一则通知邀请大学生报名参加学校举办的“暑期户外冒险营”活动。 1.词汇积累 比赛：contest→competition 户外：outside→outside 活动：activity→events 参加：attend→take part in 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：In order to enrich students’ life, our school will organize an outdoor adventure camp this summer holiday. 同义句：To enhance the quality of students’ experiences, our school will be arranging an outdoor adventure camp during the upcoming summer break. 【高分句型1】In this activity, we will not only have a climbing contest but also have an overnight camping trip. (运用了not only…but also…句型) 【高分句型2】Do remember that the registration deadline is June 10, if you are interested, please sign up at the the Students’ Union office. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 12． Sunday, October 8th   Fine     I just had an amazing adventure hiking trip with Adventure Hiking during the National Day holiday! It was from October 1st to October 7th, and there were 20 of us.     First, we hiked through a huge desert to test our strength and endurance. It was tough, but we felt it rewarding. Then, we went white-water rafting, which was so thrilling! We paddled through rapids and laughed together. After that, we climbed a 5,000-meter mountain and saw wild animals like eagles and mountain goats. The view from the top was breathtaking!     Adventure Hiking provided great accommodation, and we only carried light but useful luggage. It was an incredible experience that allowed me to appreciate nature. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作，要求考生写一篇日记，记录自己十一期间参加的冒险远足旅行，具体描写活动的时间、参加活动的人员以及活动的内容，并谈谈自己对这次活动的感受。 1. 词汇积累 测试：test→do a test on/examine 困难的：tough→difficult/hard 值得做的：rewarding→worthwhile 刺激的：thrilling→exciting 提供：provide→offer 2. 句式拓展 简单句合并为主从复合句 原句：I just had an amazing adventure hiking trip with Adventure Hiking during the National Day holiday! It was from October 1st to October 7th, and there were 20 of us. 拓展句：I just had an amazing adventure hiking trip with Adventure Hiking during the National Day holiday, which was from October 1st to October 7th, and there were 20 of us. 【高分句型1】Then, we went white-water rafting, which was so thrilling!(使用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】It was an incredible experience that allowed me to appreciate nature. (使用了that引导定语从句、不定式短语作宾补) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 5 What an adventure! 单元写作深度指导 写一篇有关潜水等经历的文章 ▲描述潜水经历 1.I couldn’t believe that I succeeded in diving and swam with the seals for 10 minutes! 2.Diving turned out to be much less difficult than I had imagined. 3.I was a bit scared but my instructor told me to take it easy. 4.But it just touched me lightly with its body, as if it wanted to hug me. 5.What had happened just now was like a dream. ▲基础词汇 explore 　　v.探索 unforgettable adj.难忘的 survive v.幸存 thrilling adj.令人兴奋的 unique adj.独特的 broaden vt.使扩大 I.要点解读 探险旅游是一种具有神秘性、危险性和刺激性的旅行活动。我们可以用日记或周记的形式记录下我们的探险过程,并与他人分享。在进行日记类写作时,我们可以从时间、地点、内容或感受等方面,把当天发生的事情或者在某一时间段内发生的事情记录下来,写作时多用一般过去时,以第一人称为主。 II.框架建构 能正确运用人称和时态以及本单元所学描述景色或心理活动等方面的词汇谈论和描述自己的探险或旅游经历。①时态:由于日记是对当天所发生的事情的回顾,常用一般过去时。描写景时,常用一般现在时。发表议论或感想时,也可使用现在完成时或一般将来时。②人称:日记以第一人称为主,语言简洁明了,表述口语化。 ③叙事:记事要有主次或先后顺序,因此可借助一些表示先后顺序的词语,如:early in the morning、at first、then、later on、afterwards、at noon、after breakfast、soon、finally、at last等。 III.词句表达 1.常用词块 be divided into 被分成 get lost 迷路 make a difference 有影响,有关系 turn to sb. for help 向某人求助 carry out a rescue plan 执行救援计划 be determined to do sth. 下定决心做某事 pay a visit to 参观…… 2.常用句式 (1)开篇句 ①During the winter vacation,my parents took me to..., where I had an unforgettable experience of underwater diving.在寒假期间,我的父母带我去了……在那里,我有一次难忘的潜水经历。 ②As I was eager to know about..., I went on an adventure... 因为我渴望知道……,我开始了一次……冒险。 (2)描述经历 ①What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was that... 最让我们惊讶/吸引我们/让我们高兴的是…… ②I felt so excited to see so many... 看到这么多的……,我感到很兴奋。 ③After that, we went diving, experiencing the beauty of... 在那之后,我们去潜水,体验了……的美丽。 (3)结尾句 ①This was such a real life-changing experience that I would never forget. 这是一次我永不会忘的改变人生的经历。 ②Tired as we were,we really had a wonderful day.尽管很疲惫,但我们度过了美好的一天。 IV.策略建构 1.‌开头引入‌ 简要介绍探险的背景，包括时间、地点、参与人员等。可以用一句引人入胜的话开头，吸引读者的注意力。 2‌正文叙述‌ ‌探险准备‌：描述探险前的准备工作，如装备、路线规划、安全教育等。 ‌探险过程‌：详细叙述探险过程中的经历，包括遇到的困难、挑战、有趣的事情等。可以使用时间顺序或空间转换来组织内容。 ‌情感表达‌：在叙述中穿插个人感受，如紧张、兴奋、害怕、成就感等，使文章更加生动。 ‌解决问题‌：描述在探险中遇到的问题以及如何解决这些问题，展现团队合作和个人智慧。 3.‌结尾总结‌ 总结探险的收获，如增长了知识、锻炼了意志、增进了友谊等。表达对未来探险的期待或感悟。 4.‌语言运用‌ 使用生动的词汇和形象的比喻来描述探险场景和感受。注意时态的正确使用，如过去时描述过去的经历。适当使用连接词和过渡句，使文章结构紧凑、逻辑清晰。 【范文示例】 Last summer vacation, my friends and I embarked on an unforgettable adventure in the mysterious mountains nearby our town. It was a journey filled with excitement, challenges, and invaluable lessons. ‌Preparation for the Adventure‌ Before setting off, we meticulously planned our route and packed all the necessary equipment, including tents, food, water, and first-aid kits. Our leader conducted a safety briefing, reminding us of the potential dangers and the importance of staying together as a team. ‌The Thrilling Journey‌ As we ventured deeper into the mountains, the scenery became more breathtaking. Towering trees and clear streams surrounded us, creating a serene atmosphere. However, the path soon became steep and rocky, testing our endurance and agility. We had to climb over boulders and cross treacherous ravines, all while keeping a sharp lookout for any signs of wildlife. One memorable moment occurred when we encountered a sudden downpour. The rain pounded on our backs, making the trail even more slippery. We huddled under a large rock, waiting for the storm to pass. Despite the discomfort, we shared stories and laughter, which helped us forget the cold and wet. ‌Overcoming Challenges‌ The biggest challenge came when we lost our way in the dense fog. The compass and GPS signals were unreliable, and panic began to set in. But our leader remained calm and encouraged us to stay together. We used our survival skills to navigate by the stars and eventually found our way back to the main trail. ‌Reflections on the Adventure‌ Looking back on this adventure, I realize how much I've grown. I learned the importance of teamwork, perseverance, and adaptability. The bond between my friends and I has also deepened, as we faced and overcame challenges together. This adventure has ignited my passion for exploration and I can't wait for the next one. I believe that every challenge we face is an opportunity to learn and grow, and I'm grateful for the experiences this journey has given me. 【范文分析】 1.‌语言特征‌ (1)‌生动描述‌：文章使用了丰富的形容词和动词来描绘探险过程中的景象和感受，如“breathtaking scenery”（令人叹为观止的风景）、“towering trees”（高耸的树木）、“pound on our backs”（打在背上）等，使得读者能够身临其境地感受到探险的紧张和刺激。 (2)‌情感表达‌：作者在叙述中穿插了个人的情感变化，如“meticulously planned”（精心计划）表现出对探险的认真态度，“panic began to set in”（开始感到恐慌）则展现了遇到困难时的紧张情绪，这些情感表达增强了文章的感染力。 (3)‌使用连接词‌：文章巧妙地运用了连接词来过渡段落和句子，如“However”（然而）、“Despite”（尽管）、“But”（但是）等，使得文章结构紧凑、逻辑清晰。 2.‌结构特征‌ (1)开篇引入‌：文章以“Last summer vacation, my friends and I embarked on an unforgettable adventure in the mysterious mountains nearby our town.”作为开头，直接点明了时间、人物和事件，同时用“unforgettable adventure”激发了读者的好奇心。 (2)‌层次分明‌：文章按照探险的准备、过程、挑战和反思四个部分进行叙述，每个部分都有明确的小标题，使得文章结构清晰、易于理解。 ①‌Preparation for the Adventure‌：详细描述了探险前的准备工作，包括路线规划、装备打包和安全教育等。 ②‌The Thrilling Journey‌：叙述了探险过程中的所见所闻和所感，包括美丽的风景、艰难的路径和突发的天气变化等。 ③‌Overcoming Challenges‌：描述了探险中遇到的最大挑战——迷路，以及团队如何克服这一困难的过程。 ④‌Reflections on the Adventure‌：总结了探险的收获和感悟，包括个人成长、团队协作的重要性等。 (3)‌结尾总结‌：文章以“This adventure has ignited my passion for exploration and I can't wait for the next one.”作为结尾，既总结了全文，又表达了对未来探险的期待，使得文章首尾呼应、结构完整。 　假定你是某国际学校的学生李华,你昨天参加了某旅行社组织的海底探险旅行。请用英语写一篇日记,记述这次探险旅行,内容包括: 1.时间、地点;2.探险项目:深海潜水、观察海洋生物、海底古文明遗址探险等;3.你的感受。 注意:1.词数80个左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:探险 expedition _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作示例】 I.审题布局 II.句式建构 1.昨天,我和一些游客参加了一家旅行社组织的西海海底探险活动。 Yesterday, I together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea.  2.我们有许多令人兴奋的活动。 We had many exciting activities.  3.其中之一是深海潜水。 One of them was deep sea diving.  4.在潜水期间,我们享受海底的美丽和观看海洋生物。 During the diving, we enjoyed the undersea beauty and watched the marine life.  5.我们从未如此近距离地看到海洋生物。 We had never seen the marine life so close.  6.给我印象最深的是对海底古文明遗址的探索。 What impressed me most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea.(主语从句)  The exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea left the deepest impression on me.(leave...impression on sb.)  I was most impressed by the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea.(be impressed by...)  It was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea that impressed me most.(impress sb.)  7.当我看到那些废墟时,我不禁想知道古代人们的生活是什么样子的,他们后来经历了什么。 When I saw those ruins, I couldn’t help wondering what the ancient people’s life was like and what they experienced later.  8.就我而言,这次旅行拓宽了我们的视野,也帮助我们了解了更多关于海洋的知识。 As far as I’m concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea.  III.衔接成篇 Yesterday, I together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea. We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving.During the diving, we enjoyed the undersea beauty and watched the marine life which we had never seen so close.What impressed me most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea.Seeing those ruins, I couldn’t help wondering what the ancient people’s life was like and what they experienced later. As far as I’m concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea. 【范文分析】 1.语言特征‌ ①‌时态运用‌：全文主要使用了过去时，如“took part in”、“had”、“enjoyed”等，准确地描述了过去的探险经历。 ②‌并列结构‌：文中多次使用并列结构来列举信息，如“Yesterday, I together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea.”和“We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving.”，使得信息表达更加清晰、有条理。 ③‌定语从句‌：如“which we had never seen so close”和“As far as I’m concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea.”，定语从句的运用丰富了句子的内容，提供了更多的背景信息。 ④‌情感表达‌：文中通过“impressed me most”和“couldn’t help wondering”等表达，展现了作者对探险经历的深刻感受和思考。 2.‌结构特征‌ ①‌开头引入‌：文章以“Yesterday, I together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea.”作为开头，直接点明了时间、人物和事件，简洁明了。 ②‌主体叙述‌：接着，作者详细叙述了探险过程中的活动，包括深海潜水、观赏海底美景和海洋生物，以及探索海底古代文明遗址等，内容丰富、条理清晰。 ③‌活动列举‌：通过“We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving.”引出具体活动，使得文章结构更加紧凑。 ④‌细节描写‌：在叙述深海潜水时，作者用“enjoyed the undersea beauty”和“watched the marine life”等细节描写，增强了文章的生动性和感染力。 ⑤‌个人感受‌：在叙述探索海底古代文明遗址时，作者加入了个人感受和思考，如“What impressed me most was...”和“Seeing those ruins, I couldn’t help wondering...”，使得文章更加具有深度和可读性。 ⑥‌结尾总结‌：最后，作者以“As far as I’m concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea.”作为结尾，总结了探险的收获和意义，使得文章结构完整、主题突出。 1．为绿化荒山，上周六你校组织学生去西山进行植树活动。现请你写一篇英语短文记录此次活动经历。要点如下： 1.活动目的； 2.经历和感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．你在生活中有什么历险经历吗？请结合自己的生活实际，写一篇历险短文。写作要点如下： 1．事件发生的时间和地点；2．你的感想。 注意：词数80左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假定你是李华，是学校英文报的记者。学校近期组织了一次踏青探春活动，请你写一篇短文，报道此次活动。 内容包括： 1. 时间与地点：上周三，郑州西流湖公园； 2. 活动的内容； 3. 你对这次活动的评价。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 提示词: 西流湖 Xiliu Lake Park ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．上周末你校地理社(The Geography Society)组织了主题为探索城市的City Walk 活动，请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动的过程； 2. 收获与感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你刚刚完成乘坐火车穿越加拿大的旅行，现在和班级同学分享你的旅行经历，介绍旅行路线。要点如下： 1. 旅行路线及沿遍各地特点：温哥华气候温和，群山包围；落基山脉壮丽的山峰，众多野生动物栖息；安大略省(Ontario)首府多伦多(Toronto），登上CN Tower眺望安大略湖，远处尼亚加拉瀑布(Niagara Falls)水雾缭绕。唐人街是著名景点。终点魁北克，浓厚法国文化与传统，一个融合城市生活与自然，户外探险与文化体验的城市。 2. 旅行的意义。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．最近，你班同学就“探索火星是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况，并谈谈自己的看法。 30%的同学认为火星不值得探索。理由： 1. 离我们及我们的日常生活太遥远。2. 浪费金钱。 70%的同学认为火星值得探索。理由： 1. 已发送火星车祝融探索发现了火星的基本情况。2. 有望解决人口问题。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Recently our class had a heated discussion on whether Mars is worth exploring. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．为促进班级团队建设，增进学科知识在实践中的应用，我校于10月27日组织学生及教师去净月潭国家森林公园（Jingyuetan National Forest Park）徒步，请写一篇英文游记，记录此次综合社会实践活动，内容包括：1)活动时间、地点及目的；2)活动内容：1. 参加定向越野（orienteering），徒步8公里，班级拍摄创意照；2. 探索森林公园，了解长春市气候、植物类型；3. 小组采集制作树叶标本（specimen）并展览；3)你的感受。 注意： 1. 词数100词左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Dalton来信说他非常喜欢化学，经常在家做实验，但是他的妈妈认为很危险，禁止他再做实验，为此他很苦恼。请你给Dalton写封回信，内容包括： (1)你的宽慰; (2)你的建议。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Dalton, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．假定你是李华，在暑假来临之际你校英文报拟刊登有关户外探险的利弊的文章，现面向全校征稿，请以“Outdoor Exploration”为题写篇英语文章投稿，内容包括： (1)户外探险的现状； (2)户外探险的利弊； (3)你的观点。 注意： (1)词数80左右； (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设你是李华，对探索太空很感兴趣，将要参加一个关于太空探险的夏令营，但是父母却反对，觉得你应该关注学习。对此，你很苦恼，向你的网友Tom寻求建议。 内容包括：1.阐述问题；2寻求建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 11．为丰富学生的暑期生活，你校拟举办“暑期户外冒险营(outdoor adventure camp)”活动。请你代学生会(The School Students’ Union)写一则通知，邀请广大学生报名参加。内容包括：1.活动目的;  2.活动内容;  3.报名时间及方式。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Notice _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．假定你是李华，十一期间你参加了一家冒险远足营地 (Adventure Hiking) 组织的一次冒险远足旅行，请你写一篇日记描述这次活动并谈谈自己的感受。主要内容应包括： 1. 活动的时间和人员； 2. 活动过程： (1)远足要穿过一个大沙漠以考验参加者的体力和耐力； (2)参加者将体验刺激的漂流活动 (white-water rafting)； (3)参加者将爬一座最大海拔高度为5000米的高山，并遇到一些野生动物； (4)远足组织者将提供良好的住宿 (accommodation)并要求参加者携带轻而有用的行李。 注意：词数100左右。 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