Unit2 Travelling 单元主题（旅行）写作满分范文15篇-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（牛津译林版）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作新课程同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新课程同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit2 Travelling 单元主题（旅行）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．（23-24八年级下·江苏南京·期中）总要来趟南京吧！假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示，以“Welcome to Nanjing”为题，邀请外国友人暑假走进幸福南京，感受民生温暖。 注意： 1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。 2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Welcome to Nanjing I’m Li Hua from Nanjing. I will recommend my hometown to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Welcome to Nanjing I’m Li Hua from Nanjing. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you. Nanjing is in the south-west of Jiangsu. It is hot and sunny during the summer holiday, so I think T-shirt s will be a good choice. Nanjing is a great city to visit. Here you can visit Nanjing Museum and it is a good place to learn about Chinese culture and history. You can also go to Xuanwu Lake Park. It’s interesting to row a boat and enjoy the beautiful sights on the lake. In Nanjing, you can travel around by bus or underground. It is easy and fast. Besides, local people are friendly and helpful. You can ask them for the way. There are different kinds of foods in Nanjing, such as Nanjing Salted Duck and Nanjing Dumplings. Don’t forget to have a try. Welcome to my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time in Nanjing. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我想向你推荐我的家乡。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——天气、交通、食物、当地人友好的性格、去过的名胜古迹等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“我相信您在南京一定会玩得很开心”。 [亮点词汇] ①a good choice一个好选择 ②such as比如 ③have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①I’m sure you’ll have a good time in Nanjing. (宾语从句) ②Don’t forget to have a try. (祈使句) 2．（23-24八年级下·江苏南通·期中）请根据以下要点，写一篇去南通的游记。 People/Time 我和家人寒假第一天到那儿，在那里呆了两天 Traffic 花了一个半小时乘汽车到那儿 Place 南通有许多名胜，例如狼山（Wolf Hill）； 这些年南通已经发生了很大的变化：过去……（自拟两点内容） 现在（ ……自拟两点内容） Activities 第一天，欣赏自然美景，情不自禁拍照； 第二天，给亲朋好友买礼物，品尝当地美味的小吃； Feelings …… 要求： 1. 条理清楚、语句通顺； 2. 词数：90 字左右 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My family and I arrived in Nantong on the first day of the winter holiday. We stayed there for two days. It took us about one and a half hours to go there by bus. There are many places of interest in Nantong such as Wolf Hill. Great changes have taken place in Nantong over the years. In the past, there were only narrow and dirty roads and there was rubbish everywhere. But now, the streets are wide and clean with many green trees on both sides. The government has also built shops and tall buildings in some large open spaces. On the first day, we enjoyed some natural beauty. We couldn’t stop taking photos. On the second day, we bought some gifts for our friends and relatives and tried some tasty local food. I enjoyed my trip very much. I hope to visit it again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍“我”和家人去南通； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、交通、地点、活动以及感受”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②narrow狭窄的 ③tasty美味的 [高分句型] ①It took us about one and a half hours to go there by bus.（it固定句式） ②In the past, there were only narrow and dirty roads and there was rubbish everywhere.（there be句型） 3．（23-24八年级下·江苏无锡·期中）一次旅游，一次经历，一次成长，一段美好的回忆。把点滴记录，把所感留存！请以“A Wonderful Trip”为话题写一篇旅游日记，包括以下内容：内容提示： 1. 旅行的时间、地点、出行方式、同行的人…… 2. 旅行中的所见所闻（天气、活动、食物……）； 3. 你的感受。 写作要求： 1. 包括上述所有要点，可作适当发挥，要求语意连贯、语言流畅、语法正确； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 词数在90个左右。 A Wonderful Trip _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Wonderful Trip Last week, my parents and I went to Beijing by plane. Beijing is the capital of China. It’s very beautiful. There are many tall buildings in Beijing. We stayed there for four days. The weather was very hot, but I was still excited. The first day, we went to the Great Wall. We were so tired that we couldn’t say a word, but we had a wonderful experience. The second day, we visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. The third day, we went to the countryside of Beijing to go boating and fishing. It was very interesting. The last day, we bought lots of presents for my grandparents. And we ate many delicious food. Beijing Duck is my favourite. I will never forget this trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要有遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作的重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，点明主题，介绍去北京的时间、地点等； 第二步，具体阐述旅行中的所见所闻； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①the capital of……首都 ②go boating划船 ③buy sth. for sb. 给某人买某物 [高分句型] ①There are many tall buildings in Beijing.（There be句型） ②We were so tired that we couldn’t say a word, but we had a wonderful experience.（so...that引导的结果状语从句） 4．（23-24八年级下·江苏连云港·期中）你校英语兴趣小组的网站“Tour”板块正在举行题为“My trip in Lianyungang”的征文比赛。 假如你是李华，请根据下列信息提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍你在连云港的一次旅游经历，参加征文比赛。 A place of interest My trip in Lianyungang Beautiful views Time, people, transport,... ... Activities 要求： （1）词数90左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 My trip in Lianyungang Hi, I’m Li Hua. I’m very happy to introduce my trip in Lianyungang. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My trip in Lianyungang Hi, I’m Li Hua. I’m very happy to introduce my trip in Lianyungang. Last summer, I went to Suma Bay with my family by car. It was sunny and hot. We spent a whole day there and enjoyed ourselves. We arrived there at about 9 a.m. My brother and I couldn’t wait to rush into the sea. We swam in the sea and played water games. The water was so cool. Then we played with the sand on the beach. It was so wonderful. When we were tired, we sat in the chair and enjoyed the wind. What a nice day it was! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我去连云港旅游的时间，同游人员，交通工具，美景以及活动内容”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“嗨，我是李华。我很高兴向大家介绍我的连云港之行。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我去连云港旅游的经历”介绍去连云港旅游的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“多么美好的一天啊！” [亮点词汇] ① by car乘汽车 ② in the sea在海里 [高分句型] ① When we were tired, we sat in the chair and enjoyed the wind.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② What a nice day it was!（what引导的感叹句） 5．（23-24八年级下·江苏无锡·期中）旅行，身心在路上，可以拓宽人的眼界；读书，灵魂在路上，让心智成长。值此“世界读书日”及“中国旅游日”之际，你校英语俱乐部正在组织一次主题为“My Body and Soul (心灵) on the Way”的英语征文活动，请根据以下图表内容写一篇短文。 注意事项： 1. 文中不得使用真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 2. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 3. 词数 100 左右，短文开头已写好，不计入总词数； 4. 短文内容必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。 We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way. Last summer I visited the Palace Museum. I was amazed by the wonderful palaces and those famous works of art. I learned much about China’s history. Travelling is really a fantastic time. Reading is also great fun. When I read my favourite books, I feel relaxed. I am interested in geography books because I can learn more about nature. Last week I read a magazine Chinese National Geography. I learned a lot about places of interest from it. I think both travelling and reading help us learn more knowledge. Moreover, they can open up a whole new world to us. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：写作时注意围绕所给点展开描述，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍旅行的地方，以及自己的所见所得； 第二步，介绍所看的一本书，以及自己的体会； 第三步，书写结语，点名主题。 [亮点词汇] ①works of art 艺术作品 ②be interested in 对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①I am interested in geography books because I can learn more about nature. (because引导的状语从句) ②I think both travelling and reading help us learn more knowledge. (宾语从句) 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．（23-24八年级下·江苏无锡·期中）春天是个适合出游的季节。旅行不仅会带你见证书中的美景，而且会让你遇见不同的人和事， 开阔你的视眼。5 月 19 日是中国旅游日（National Tourism Day），Teens 正在征集有关“Travel”的稿件，请结合流程图谈谈你难忘的（unforgettable）旅行经历和你对旅行的看法。 注意事项： 1.    内容须包括所给提示内容，可作适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2.    词数 90 个左右，开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 3.    文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 4.    内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 May 19th is National Tourism Day. We students should always improve ourselves. Besides reading, travelling is also a good way. I like travelling very much. So far, I have travelled to Beijing, Hong Kong, New York and many other places. But my favourite place is Hong Kong. It is an international modern city with many beautiful places of interest. We can enjoy delicious food there. Last summer we visited Hong Kong Disneyland. We watched a parade of Disney characters there and I couldn’t stop taking photos with them. I had a good time there. It is an unforgettable experience for me. Travelling is really a good way to open our mind and learn more about the world. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主； ③提示：要点已给出，注意衔接自然顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，总述旅行是是提升自己好的方式； 第二步，介绍自己的一次旅行经历； 第三步，结束语，表达感受。 ［亮点词汇］ ① Besides除……之外 ②So far到目前为止 ［高分句型］ Travelling is really a good way to open our mind and learn more about the world. （动名词作主语） 7．（23-24八年级下·江苏苏州·期中）假如你是Amy，你的学校将开展“灵魂在路上，让心智成长”为主题的演讲活动，请你根据下面的流程图所给的提示，写一篇关于旅行的演讲稿，分享你对旅行的感受、你印象深刻的一次旅行以及体会。 注意事项： 1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在100左右，演讲稿的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear teachers and classmates, I’m Amy. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about travelling with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 【答案】例文 Dear teachers and classmates, I’m Amy. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about travelling with you. Travelling plays an important role in our lives, for we can broaden our horizons by travelling. As the old saying goes, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.” Last summer, I visited the Great Wall, which is one of the wonders of the world. I was amazed by the wonderful view and took a lot of photos there. While standing on the Great Wall, I made up my mind to study harder to make China better. Moreover, I have learnt a lot about our great history and felt quite proud of our country. As far as I am concerned, travelling refreshes us. Let’s travel together. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述自己对旅游的观点； 第二步，讲述自己印象深刻的一次旅行； 第三步，讲述这趟旅行的感想； 第四步，总结全文，并呼吁大家去旅行。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在……中起重要作用 ②broaden our horizons开阔我们的眼界 ③make up one’s mind to do sth.下定决心做某事 ④as far as I am concerned就我个人而言 [高分句型] ①Travelling plays an important role in our lives, for we can broaden our horizons by travelling.（含for的并列句） ②I visited the Great Wall, which is one of the wonders of the world.（which引导的定语从句） 8．（23-24八年级下·江苏南京·期末）学校英语俱乐部将举办以“Act for a Better City”为主题的英语演讲比赛，旨在号召同学们为建设更美好的南京而努力。请你根据下面图表中的要点，写一篇英文演讲稿。 Good manners     in public Volunteering for the community Green lifestyle     … 注意： 1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80左右(已给出的演讲稿开头不计入总词数)。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Act for a Better City Hello, everyone! Today I will give a speech and the title is “Act for a Better City”. What can we do to make Nanjing a better place to live in? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Act for a Better City Hello, everyone! Today I will give a speech and the title is “Act for a Better City”. What can we do to make Nanjing a better place to live in? Good manners play a very important role in social development. We should not talk loudly in public and we should wait in line when we buy things. What’s more, we can do some voluntary work to make the community better and better. For example, we can bring a bag when we take a walk in the community. When we see rubbish on the ground, we can pick it up. Besides, we can ride bikes or walk to schools instead of going by car. We should plant more trees and flowers to make the city more beautiful. Let’s work together to build a better Nanjing. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何建设更美好的南京，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，从良好礼仪、志愿活动以及绿色生活等几个方面介绍如何建设更美好的南京； 第三步，发出号召。 [亮点词汇] ①play a very important role in在……中发挥重要的作用 ②wait in line排队等候 ③pick up捡起 [高分句型] ①For example, we can bring a bag when we take a walk in the community. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②We should plant more trees and flowers to make the city more beautiful. (动词不定式作目的状语) 9．（23-24八年级下·江苏·期末）假如你是 Li Hua，在五一黄金周的旅游中，发现了一些游客的不文明行为，请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目写一封英文邮件，反映这些问题，并提出一些建议。 不文明行为（Improper behaviors） •乱扔垃圾 •摘花 •爬树 建议（Suggestions） …… 注意： 1.词数 100左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3.建议栏内，至少写2条建议； 4.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名。 Dear editor， I was shocked to see some improper behaviors when I took a trip during the May Day holiday.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear editor, I was shocked to see some improper behaviors when I took a trip during the May Day holiday. Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying around. Some picked flowers without permission to take photos so that they could show off online. And some climbed trees for fun, which might result in serious accidents. I think it wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others. Visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like putting rubbish into proper bins. They should cherish flowers and trees. And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and more civilized new village will be there for us all to enjoy. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：本文的主要时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据表格提供的信息完成书面表达，注意内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；注意正确使用时态和连接词；注意行文的逻辑性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述自己发现的游客的不文明行为； 第二步；就这些不文明行为提出自己的建议； 第三步；设想改善不文明行为后的情况。 [亮点词汇] ①throw rubbish everywhere 到处扔垃圾 ②without permission 未经允许 ③show off online 在网上炫耀 ④cherish flowers and trees 爱护花草树木 [高分句型] ①And some climbed trees for fun, which might result in serious accidents. (非限制性定语从句) ②I think it wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others. (it作形式宾语) 10．（23-24八年级下·江苏苏州·期末）旅行，拓宽视野；阅读，滋养心灵。本月校园广播站“英语时光”栏目拟开展主题为“Reading or Travelling”的分享活动，请以“I like________（travelling/reading） more”为题，用英语一篇发言稿，要点如下： 1. Explain why you like travelling or reading more; 2. Share one of your travelling or reading experiences; 3. Offer advice on travelling or reading in summer holiday. 注意： 1. 词数90左右；短文开头结尾已给出；不计入总词数； 2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 I like_______(travelling/reading) more Good morning, dear teachers and friends! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for today’s sharing. Thanks for listening! 【答案】例文 I like reading more Good morning, dear teachers and friends! Reading is a lifelong journey and plays an important part in our life. It can not only open our minds but also make us get more useful knowledge that we can’t learn from school books. I often read books about history and some interesting novels in my free time. The more I read, the more thoughtful I will be. I didn’t use to read before. I spent much time in playing games, watching TV or listening to music. Finally I realized it was bad for me, so I took up reading. Reading has made my life colourful and meaningful. I read books at least three times a week now. If you enjoy reading, I think first you should read the books you like. Secondly, you need to develop good reading habits. Finally, you need to take reading notes frequently. That’s all for today’s sharing. Thanks for listening!； 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，按题目要求填入标题“I like travelling/reading more”。 第二步，根据提示内容解释你为什么喜欢旅行或多读书，分享一次旅行或阅读经历，再提供暑假旅行或阅读方面的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①plays an important part 扮演一个重要的角色 ②spend much time in doing 花费很多时间做某事 ③need to do sth. 需要做某事 [高分句型] ①It can not only open our minds but also make us get more useful knowledge that we can’t learn from school books.（not only…but also…句型，that引导的定语从句） ②If you enjoy reading, I think first you should read the books you like.（if引导的条件状语从句） 能力综合实践5篇 11．（23-24八年级下·江苏徐州·期中）徐州是国家历史文化名城，越来越多的人选择到徐州旅行。假定你是李华，想邀请在南京的笔友留学生David在五一假期到徐州游玩，请你根据以下要点，写一封邀请信。 1. 邀请他在五一假期来徐州旅游， 2. 推荐的旅游景点及理由， 3. 推荐的娱乐活动及理由。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 信需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺； 3. 信中不得泄露个人信息。 参考词汇：五一劳动节：May Day Dear David, How are you? I know you are interested in travelling. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear David, How are you? I know you are interested in travelling. I’d like to invite you to travel to Xuzhou during May Day holiday. Xuzhou is a famous city with a long history. There are many places of interest, such as Yunlong Mountain, Yunlong Lake and Han Tomb. You can learn a lot about the history and culture of Xuzhou. Besides, you can also enjoy some local food, like Guotie and Babao Porridge. In the evening, you can go to the theater to watch Xuzhou Bangzi, a local opera. It’s very interesting. I’m sure you will have a great time in Xuzhou. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：在写作时要包含提示的要点。在阐述这些要点时注意保证条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，提出邀请。 第二步，介绍推荐的旅游景点并说明理由 第三步，介绍推荐的娱乐活动并说明理由。 [亮点词汇] ①during May Day holiday五一假期期间 ②invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人去做某事 ③places of interest名胜 [高分句型] ①There are many places of interest, such as Yunlong Mountain, Yunlong Lake and Han Tomb.（there be句型） ② I’m sure you will have a great time in Xuzhou.（省略that的宾语从句） 12．（23-24八年级下·江苏徐州·期中）假如你校英文校刊正在开展“Travelling”的主题征文活动。请你根据下面提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你难忘的(unforgettable)一次旅行经历和你对旅行的看法。 注意： 1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，适当发挥，书写规范； 2. 词数90左右，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I like travelling very much. So far, I have travelled to Beijing, Hong Kong, New York and many other places. But my favouriate place is Hong Kong, which is an international modern city with many beautiful places of interest. We can enjoy delicious food there. Last summer, we visited Hong Kong Disneyland. We watched a parade of Disney characters there and I couldn’t stop taking photos with them. I had a good time there. What an unforgettable experience! Travelling is really a good way to open our minds and learn more about the world. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己去过的地方； 第二步，具体介绍自己难忘的一次旅行经历以及感受； 第三步，表达自己对旅行的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②take photos拍照 ③have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] But my favouriate place is Hong Kong, which is an international modern city with many beautiful places of interest.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 13．（23-24八年级下·江苏南通·期末）文明是一座城市最温暖的底色。作为全国文明城市，启东正在加快步伐，向“文明高地”攀登。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇演讲稿，以参加暑期“How to be a civilized middle school student?”为主题的演讲比赛。内容应包含以下要点： ▷礼仪修养：遵守交通规则，公共场合举止文明…… ▷关爱他人：参加志愿者活动…… ▷环境保护：节约能源……； 减少污染…… ▷暑假计划：按时完成作业；读书……旅行…… 注意： 1. 词数90词左右。(文章首尾已给，不计入总词数。) 2. 省略号部分适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear classmates, The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Qidong more civilized. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s try our best to become civilized students. Wish you all have a happy and meaningful summer holiday! 【答案】例文 Dear classmates, The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Qidong more civilized. First, we should always obey traffic rules when crossing the road. In public places, it is necessary to behave politely. For example, we must keep quiet in the library. Then, learning to care about others is also important. During the summer holiday, we can work as volunteers at the community centre and take part in charity activities. Why not save our pocket money and donate it to those in need? Moreover, we can save energy by turning off lights when we leave a room. Also, rubbish should be separated into different groups carefully. It’s wise of us to choose public transport because protecting the environment can help us live a green life. At last, as a middle school student, I plan to finish my homework on time and read more meaningful books in the next two months. Besides, I am going to travel to Beijing to learn more about the history and culture with my parents. Just as the saying goes, read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles. Let’s try our best to become civilized students. Wish you all have a happy and meaningful summer holiday! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出如何做一名文明的中学生的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体从几个方面阐述如何成为一名文明的中学生； 第三步，书写结语。总结成为一名文明中学生的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①care about sb.关心某人 ②work as担任，以……身份而工作 ③take part in参加 ④plan to do sth.计划去做某事 [高分句型] ①Then, learning to care about others is also important. (动名词作主语) ②Why not save our pocket money and donate it to those in need? (why not特殊疑问句的省略句） ③Moreover, we can save energy by turning off lights when we leave a room. (when引导时间状语从句) ④It’s wise of us to choose public transport because protecting the environment can help us live a green life. (it作形式主语；because引导原因状语从句；动名词作从句中的主语) 14．（23-24八年级下·江苏南通·期末）畅游天下，文明伴行。你校正在举办以“civilized traveling”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请从下列图示内容中至少选择三个方面用英语写一篇演讲稿，并结合生活实际，谈谈自身感悟。 要求： 1. 词数90词左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 表达中请勿出现本人真实姓名、校名等。 参考词：custom n. 习俗 antiquity n. 文物 scrawl on sth 在……上乱画 guard against 提防，防范 Dear classmates, Traveling is a wonderful way to learn about life, culture and history. While traveling, it’s our duty to be civilized travelers. Here are some suggestions (建议). ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 【答案】例文： Dear classmates, Traveling is a wonderful way to learn about life, culture and history. While traveling, it’s our duty to be civilized travelers. Here are some suggestions. First, when traveling, we should abide by the laws and regulations and respect the local customs. Second, we should protect cultural relics and should not scrawl on antiquity because cultural relics are an important embodiment of the civilization of a country or even a nation. Third, we should protect the local environment. Don’t throw rubbish everywhere. I remember several months ago, a Chinese tourist left some notes on a relic in Egypt and the relic has a history of more than one thousand years. What a pity! When I heard this thing, I feel very ashamed. Because it will not only tarnish our country’s image but also damage the priceless relic. Travelling can relax us. I think civilized tourism can help us enjoy our life better. In a word, it’s the duty of every citizen to be a civilized traveler. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题目要求，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“文明旅行”来引出下文中对具体建议的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“遵守法规、尊重风俗”“守护文物、不乱涂乱画”和“保护环境、不乱丢乱扔”三方面入手，结合具体事例，重点介绍旅行时的注意事项； ③第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家做文明游客。 [亮点词汇] ①abide by 遵守 ②not only...but also 不但……而且 ③in a word 总之 [高分句型] ①Second, we should protect cultural relics and should not scrawl on antiquity because cultural relics are an important embodiment of the civilization of a country or even a nation. （because引导的原因状语从句） ②I think civilized tourism can help us enjoy our life better.（宾语从句） 15．（23-24八年级下·江苏淮安·期末）旅行可以使人放松，开阔眼界。假如你是八（1）班的李海，很喜欢旅行，请用英语写一篇短文，与同学们分享一下你的旅行体验。 内容需包括以下要点： 1. 旅行的好处（至少两点）； 2. 介绍你的一次旅行经历（时间、地点、人物、出行方式、经过、心得、感受）； 3. 你对同学们有关旅行的倡议。 要求： 1. 词数在80-100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等。 Hello, everybody! I am Li Hai in Class One Grade Eight. I’d like to say something about travelling. Travelling is a good lifestyle. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everybody! I am Li Hai in Class One Grade Eight. I’d like to say something about travelling. Travelling is a good lifestyle. As one of the lifestyle for the modern humans, travelling is loved by more and more people. Traveling can not only broaden our horizon, but also relax us physically and mentally. Last summer holiday, I took a trip to Yunnan with my family. Yunnan is in the southwestern part of our country. It’s a good place with beautiful mountains, clean rivers and kind people. Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere. The fruits there were very fresh. We stayed there for about one week. We went to Kunming, Dali and the Old Town of Lijiang. We enjoyed the local food. We also went to climb the mountains and took many photos. We all had a good time. Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience. When we travel somewhere, we should pay attention to the local weather. We also need to bring some common medicines. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据所给提示要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍旅行的好处； 第二步，具体介绍自己的一次旅行经历； 第三步，提出关于旅行的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ②took photos照相 ③had a good time玩得高兴 ④pay attention to注意 [高分句型] ①Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere.（情态动词的被动语态） ②Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience.（让步状语从句；宾语从句） ③When we travel somewhere, we should pay attention to the local weather.（时间状语从句） 18 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 23 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新课程同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新课程同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit2 Travelling 单元主题（旅行）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．（23-24八年级下·江苏南京·期中）总要来趟南京吧！假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示，以“Welcome to Nanjing”为题，邀请外国友人暑假走进幸福南京，感受民生温暖。 注意： 1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。 2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Welcome to Nanjing I’m Li Hua from Nanjing. I will recommend my hometown to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24八年级下·江苏南通·期中）请根据以下要点，写一篇去南通的游记。 People/Time 我和家人寒假第一天到那儿，在那里呆了两天 Traffic 花了一个半小时乘汽车到那儿 Place 南通有许多名胜，例如狼山（Wolf Hill）； 这些年南通已经发生了很大的变化：过去……（自拟两点内容） 现在（ ……自拟两点内容） Activities 第一天，欣赏自然美景，情不自禁拍照； 第二天，给亲朋好友买礼物，品尝当地美味的小吃； Feelings …… 要求： 1. 条理清楚、语句通顺； 2. 词数：90 字左右 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24八年级下·江苏无锡·期中）一次旅游，一次经历，一次成长，一段美好的回忆。把点滴记录，把所感留存！请以“A Wonderful Trip”为话题写一篇旅游日记，包括以下内容：内容提示： 1. 旅行的时间、地点、出行方式、同行的人…… 2. 旅行中的所见所闻（天气、活动、食物……）； 3. 你的感受。 写作要求： 1. 包括上述所有要点，可作适当发挥，要求语意连贯、语言流畅、语法正确； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 词数在90个左右。 A Wonderful Trip _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（23-24八年级下·江苏连云港·期中）你校英语兴趣小组的网站“Tour”板块正在举行题为“My trip in Lianyungang”的征文比赛。 假如你是李华，请根据下列信息提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍你在连云港的一次旅游经历，参加征文比赛。 A place of interest My trip in Lianyungang Beautiful views Time, people, transport,... ... Activities 要求： （1）词数90左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 My trip in Lianyungang Hi, I’m Li Hua. I’m very happy to introduce my trip in Lianyungang. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（23-24八年级下·江苏无锡·期中）旅行，身心在路上，可以拓宽人的眼界；读书，灵魂在路上，让心智成长。值此“世界读书日”及“中国旅游日”之际，你校英语俱乐部正在组织一次主题为“My Body and Soul (心灵) on the Way”的英语征文活动，请根据以下图表内容写一篇短文。 注意事项： 1. 文中不得使用真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 2. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 3. 词数 100 左右，短文开头已写好，不计入总词数； 4. 短文内容必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。 We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．（23-24八年级下·江苏无锡·期中）春天是个适合出游的季节。旅行不仅会带你见证书中的美景，而且会让你遇见不同的人和事， 开阔你的视眼。5 月 19 日是中国旅游日（National Tourism Day），Teens 正在征集有关“Travel”的稿件，请结合流程图谈谈你难忘的（unforgettable）旅行经历和你对旅行的看法。 注意事项： 1.    内容须包括所给提示内容，可作适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2.    词数 90 个左右，开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 3.    文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 4.    内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（23-24八年级下·江苏苏州·期中）假如你是Amy，你的学校将开展“灵魂在路上，让心智成长”为主题的演讲活动，请你根据下面的流程图所给的提示，写一篇关于旅行的演讲稿，分享你对旅行的感受、你印象深刻的一次旅行以及体会。 注意事项： 1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在100左右，演讲稿的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear teachers and classmates, I’m Amy. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about travelling with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 8．（23-24八年级下·江苏南京·期末）学校英语俱乐部将举办以“Act for a Better City”为主题的英语演讲比赛，旨在号召同学们为建设更美好的南京而努力。请你根据下面图表中的要点，写一篇英文演讲稿。 Good manners     in public Volunteering for the community Green lifestyle     … 注意： 1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80左右(已给出的演讲稿开头不计入总词数)。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Act for a Better City Hello, everyone! Today I will give a speech and the title is “Act for a Better City”. What can we do to make Nanjing a better place to live in? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（23-24八年级下·江苏·期末）假如你是 Li Hua，在五一黄金周的旅游中，发现了一些游客的不文明行为，请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目写一封英文邮件，反映这些问题，并提出一些建议。 不文明行为（Improper behaviors） •乱扔垃圾 •摘花 •爬树 建议（Suggestions） …… 注意： 1.词数 100左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3.建议栏内，至少写2条建议； 4.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名。 Dear editor， I was shocked to see some improper behaviors when I took a trip during the May Day holiday.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 10．（23-24八年级下·江苏苏州·期末）旅行，拓宽视野；阅读，滋养心灵。本月校园广播站“英语时光”栏目拟开展主题为“Reading or Travelling”的分享活动，请以“I like________（travelling/reading） more”为题，用英语一篇发言稿，要点如下： 1. Explain why you like travelling or reading more; 2. Share one of your travelling or reading experiences; 3. Offer advice on travelling or reading in summer holiday. 注意： 1. 词数90左右；短文开头结尾已给出；不计入总词数； 2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 I like_______(travelling/reading) more Good morning, dear teachers and friends! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for today’s sharing. Thanks for listening! 能力综合实践5篇 11．（23-24八年级下·江苏徐州·期中）徐州是国家历史文化名城，越来越多的人选择到徐州旅行。假定你是李华，想邀请在南京的笔友留学生David在五一假期到徐州游玩，请你根据以下要点，写一封邀请信。 1. 邀请他在五一假期来徐州旅游， 2. 推荐的旅游景点及理由， 3. 推荐的娱乐活动及理由。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 信需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺； 3. 信中不得泄露个人信息。 参考词汇：五一劳动节：May Day Dear David, How are you? I know you are interested in travelling. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 12．（23-24八年级下·江苏徐州·期中）假如你校英文校刊正在开展“Travelling”的主题征文活动。请你根据下面提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你难忘的(unforgettable)一次旅行经历和你对旅行的看法。 注意： 1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，适当发挥，书写规范； 2. 词数90左右，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（23-24八年级下·江苏南通·期末）文明是一座城市最温暖的底色。作为全国文明城市，启东正在加快步伐，向“文明高地”攀登。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇演讲稿，以参加暑期“How to be a civilized middle school student?”为主题的演讲比赛。内容应包含以下要点： ▷礼仪修养：遵守交通规则，公共场合举止文明…… ▷关爱他人：参加志愿者活动…… ▷环境保护：节约能源……； 减少污染…… ▷暑假计划：按时完成作业；读书……旅行…… 注意： 1. 词数90词左右。(文章首尾已给，不计入总词数。) 2. 省略号部分适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear classmates, The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Qidong more civilized. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s try our best to become civilized students. Wish you all have a happy and meaningful summer holiday! 14．（23-24八年级下·江苏南通·期末）畅游天下，文明伴行。你校正在举办以“civilized traveling”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请从下列图示内容中至少选择三个方面用英语写一篇演讲稿，并结合生活实际，谈谈自身感悟。 要求： 1. 词数90词左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 表达中请勿出现本人真实姓名、校名等。 参考词：custom n. 习俗 antiquity n. 文物 scrawl on sth 在……上乱画 guard against 提防，防范 Dear classmates, Traveling is a wonderful way to learn about life, culture and history. While traveling, it’s our duty to be civilized travelers. Here are some suggestions (建议). ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 15．（23-24八年级下·江苏淮安·期末）旅行可以使人放松，开阔眼界。假如你是八（1）班的李海，很喜欢旅行，请用英语写一篇短文，与同学们分享一下你的旅行体验。 内容需包括以下要点： 1. 旅行的好处（至少两点）； 2. 介绍你的一次旅行经历（时间、地点、人物、出行方式、经过、心得、感受）； 3. 你对同学们有关旅行的倡议。 要求： 1. 词数在80-100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等。 Hello, everybody! I am Li Hai in Class One Grade Eight. I’d like to say something about travelling. Travelling is a good lifestyle. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 11 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$