Unit 2 Neighbourhood 单元主题（社区）写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（译林版2024）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit2 Neighbourhood 单元主题（社区）写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．假如你校英语俱乐部正在举办以“我爱我的社区 (I Love My Community)”为主题的征文比赛，请你根据以下提示信息，写一篇短文参赛。 提示信息： 1. How is your community? 2. What facilities (设施) are there in your community? 3. What is your favorite place in your community? Why? 要求：1. 短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥; 2. 语言表达要准确，语句通顺，意思连贯; 3. 词数不少于60。 I Love My Community _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你叫Jessie，用英语介绍你家所住的小区——阳光花园，掘港镇中心，环境优美，生活便捷，是居住的好地方。邻里融洽（举一例）。邀请Lucy下周六到你家，一起去附近的动物园，并告之行走路线。 1. 内容覆盖所有要点，并适当发挥。 2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Lucy, Thank you for your letter. You are really lucky to have so many kind neighbours. Let me tell you about my neighbourhood and my neighbours. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jessie 3．假设你是Andy，五一假期期间你想邀请你的朋友Eason和你一起参加你们社区的志愿者活动。根据下列信息，用英语写一封邀请信。 社区介绍 社区的环境——鸟语花香； 地理位置 在苏州的西南面。乘地铁到索山桥（Suoshan Bridge），从A出口出来，然后过马路，你会看到我们小区在宝龙购物中心边上。 志愿活动 辅导学生作业，……（至少举1例） 要求：1. 文章涵盖所有要点；2. 词数80左右；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eason, May Day is coming. There will be a helping hands activity at our community centre during the holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Would you like to join us in the voluntary work? Yours, Andy 4．“五一”小长假快到了。假如你是Daniel，想邀请你在苏州的朋友Simon来你的新家做客。请根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一封邀请信。 地理位置 市中心长江花园(Changjiang Garden)小区，3 楼，距离火车站(Railway Station) 10公里 社区 绿树环绕，干净整洁…… 邻居友好，乐于助人，志愿者…… (至少举一例) 路线 乘火车从苏州火车站出发，到南京火车站后出来乘地铁1号线到珠江路(The Pearl Road)站下，往前第2个路口左转，你会看到一个超市，我家就在超市的旁边 注意：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 词数不少于 80，信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear Simon, I am very happy to invite you to visit my new home. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to my new home. I hope you can have a good time here. Yours, Daniel 5．假如你是李华，你正在参加“最美社区”英语征文活动。请用一个词概括你所在社区的特点并将标题补充完整，并围绕这一特点用英语描述社区设施以及人们在社区的日常活动。 参考词汇： 划船机：rowing machine；扭腰机：twister；转轮：shoulder builder；太空漫步机：air walker 要求： 1. 文章要包含以上主要信息，可适当合理发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 My ________ community ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My ideal neighbourhood”.（请以“我理想中的小区”为题写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Suggested questions: 1. What is your neighbourhood like now? 2. What changes would you like to see in your neighbourhood? 3. What can you do to make your neighbourhood better? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是李明，你的美国朋友Paul发来一封邮件，他想要知道你生活的社区是什么样的。请你用英文给他回一封邮件。 提示： 位置：市中心，附近有公园 环境：干净，安静，绿化很好 设施：一家超市，一个操场，一家银行，一家书店，一些餐馆 注意： 1. 包括所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 不少于60个词(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Dear Paul, I’m glad to hear from you. In your last email, you asked me something about my community. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Life in this community is great. How is your community? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours. Li Ming 8．假如你是红星中学七年级1班学生李华，你们学校的英文网站正在开展 “美丽社区” 主题征文活动，请你用英语投稿，介绍你的社区，你最喜欢的地方，以及你喜欢它的原因。 提示词语：quiet, park, exercise, convenient(方便的), enjoy 提示问题：●What is your neighborhood like? ●What is your favorite place in it? Why? I live in _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．你所在的社区要创建“幸福社区”，正在开展“The best place in my neighborhood”征文活动。请你投稿，介绍一下你们社区你最喜欢的一个地方，要点包括： 1. 说明喜欢的原因，并简单描述如何到达； 2. 描述上一次你去那里度过休闲时光的经历（包括时间、天气如何、跟谁一起、做了什么、感受等等）。 The best place in my neighborhood The best place in my neighborhood is _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假如你所在社区正在开展“因为有你—感动社区十大人物”评选活动，你想向社区中心推荐你的邻居Ricky，请根据下表所提示的要点，用英语写一篇短文介绍Ricky，并谈谈和这样的邻居相处的感受。 注意： 1．表达中必须包含所给的要点，可以适当发挥。 2．词数80左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Ricky is my neighbor. He lives next door to me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．假如你是李红，你所在的社区开设了一个关爱独居老人的爱心食堂。请根据提示，给Lisa写一封英文邮件，介绍这个食堂。 （1）老人们在食堂吃早饭和午饭，食物美味且便宜。 （2）早餐7:00—9:00，种类丰富（如：粥……）。 （3）午餐11:30—1:00，有米饭、面条……。 （4）老人们喜欢在这聊天、交朋友。 （5）老人们感觉……。 要求： （1）词数：70个左右。 （2）短文开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：社区neighborhood，粥porridge Dear Lisa, A special dining hall is open in my neighborhood. It is for the old people living alone. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have anything new? Write to me! Yours, Li Hong 12．假设你是李明，介绍一下你所在的社区。包括社区的环境、设施、邻居等方面，不少于 80 词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为“My Neighbourhood”的征文活动。假如你是李雷，住在花园社区，根据下面提示，完成一篇英语短文，向该英文报投稿。 My Neighbourhood Conditions What is your neighbourhood like? Neighbours What are your neighbours like? How do they help others?(give two examples) What do you do for your neighbourn?(give one example) Feelings How do you feel living in your neighbourhood? 要求：(1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2)必须包括图中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； (3)词数：100 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； (4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My Neighbourhood My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14． 假如你是王林，家住在Happiness Home。本周六是来自英国的交换生Mike的生日。你打算邀请他来你家过生日。请你根据下列提示，用英语给他写一封邮件，介绍一下你的小区环境、邻里关系，并告诉他生日会的安排以及从学校到你家的具体路线。 1. What do you think of the environment of your neighborhood? 2. What are your neighbors like?（Give at least one example. ） 3. What is your plan for the party? 4. How can Mike get to your home according to the map? 要求： 1. 层次清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范； 2. 邮件内容必须包括上面提及的要点，可适当发挥； 3. 词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 Dear Mike, I am going to have a party at home to celebrate your birthday this Saturday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Lin 15．请根据以下提示，写一篇关于你的社区的短文，不少于 80 词。 1. 介绍你的社区的位置和环境； 2. 描述社区里的设施，如超市、公园、学校等； 3. 谈论你的邻居们，他们是怎么样的，以及他们如何互相帮助。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 5 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit2 Neighbourhood 单元主题（社区）写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．假如你校英语俱乐部正在举办以“我爱我的社区 (I Love My Community)”为主题的征文比赛，请你根据以下提示信息，写一篇短文参赛。 提示信息： 1. How is your community? 2. What facilities (设施) are there in your community? 3. What is your favorite place in your community? Why? 要求：1. 短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥; 2. 语言表达要准确，语句通顺，意思连贯; 3. 词数不少于60。 I Love My Community _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I Love My Community My community is clean and quiet. I love it very much. Near my house there are a lot of buildings. There is a post office in front of a bank. On the left of the bank, there is a restaurant. My parents and I often go there to have dinner. The food there is good. There is one supermarket in my community and I go there to buy vegetables and fruit. Across from the supermarket, there is a small park. It’s my favorite place because we often take a walk there after dinner. How about your community? Please tell me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中给出的关键信息，写短文介绍自己所在的社区。 [写作步骤] 第一步，谈谈社区是怎么样的； 第二步，介绍社区里所配备的设施及自己最喜欢的地方； 第三步，收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of 许多 ②in front of 在……前面 ③across from 在……对面 [高分句型] ①There is a post office in front of a bank.（there be句型） ②It’s my favorite place because we often take a walk there after dinner.（because引导原因状语从句） 2．假如你叫Jessie，用英语介绍你家所住的小区——阳光花园，掘港镇中心，环境优美，生活便捷，是居住的好地方。邻里融洽（举一例）。邀请Lucy下周六到你家，一起去附近的动物园，并告之行走路线。 1. 内容覆盖所有要点，并适当发挥。 2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Lucy, Thank you for your letter. You are really lucky to have so many kind neighbours. Let me tell you about my neighbourhood and my neighbours. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jessie 【答案】例文： Dear Lucy, Thank you for your letter. You are really lucky to have so many kind neighbours. Let me tell you about my neighbourhood and my neighbours. I live in Sunshine Garden. It is in the center of Juegang. There are so many trees and flowers around. It is really a good place to live. People here are very kind and helpful. Last week, there was something wrong with my bicycle and I couldn’t go to school. One of my neighbors drove me there and another helped me fix my bicycle. I want to invite you to come to my home next Saturday. And we can go to the a zoo near my home. Just walk along Apple Road. Walk past Bank of China, and then turn left at the traffic lights. Then turn right, and you will see a bridge in front of us. Just cross the bridge and we can see the zoo. I believe we will have a good time there. Yours, Jessie 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”及“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，感谢对对方的来信并引出自己要介绍自己的社区； 第二步，具体介绍社区的环境、人以及一件具体的事情，以便表现出社区的美好； 第三步，最后介绍去自己家的路线。 [亮点词汇] ① so many如此多 ② one of……之一 ③ walk along沿着……走 [高分句型] ①I believe we will have a good time there.（省略that的宾语从句） ②Last week, there was something wrong with my bicycle and I couldn’t go to school.（and连接的并类聚） 3．假设你是Andy，五一假期期间你想邀请你的朋友Eason和你一起参加你们社区的志愿者活动。根据下列信息，用英语写一封邀请信。 社区介绍 社区的环境——鸟语花香； 地理位置 在苏州的西南面。乘地铁到索山桥（Suoshan Bridge），从A出口出来，然后过马路，你会看到我们小区在宝龙购物中心边上。 志愿活动 辅导学生作业，……（至少举1例） 要求：1. 文章涵盖所有要点；2. 词数80左右；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eason, May Day is coming. There will be a helping hands activity at our community centre during the holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Would you like to join us in the voluntary work? Yours, Andy 【答案】例文 Dear Eason, May Day is coming. There will be a helping hands activity at our community centre during the holiday. The community is in the south-west of Suzhou. There are many beautiful flowers and green trees. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. Now let me tell you the way to my community. You can take the underground to Suoshan Bridge. Go out at Exit A. Cross the road, and you’ll see Baolong shopping mall. My community is next to it. We’ll help students with their homework. I think this activity is very useful and meaningful. We will also help the elderly there. It will be great fun to tell them stories and clean their rooms. Would you like to join us in the voluntary work? Yours, Andy 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的； 第二步，介绍社区的环境、如何到那里去； 第三步，介绍志愿活动； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①the way to去……的路 ②take the underground 坐地铁 ③help sb. with sth. 帮助某人（做）某事 [高分句型] ①There are many beautiful flowers and green trees.（there be句型） ②Cross the road, and you’ll see Baolong shopping mall. My community is next to it.（祈使句+and+陈述句） 4．“五一”小长假快到了。假如你是Daniel，想邀请你在苏州的朋友Simon来你的新家做客。请根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一封邀请信。 地理位置 市中心长江花园(Changjiang Garden)小区，3 楼，距离火车站(Railway Station) 10公里 社区 绿树环绕，干净整洁…… 邻居友好，乐于助人，志愿者…… (至少举一例) 路线 乘火车从苏州火车站出发，到南京火车站后出来乘地铁1号线到珠江路(The Pearl Road)站下，往前第2个路口左转，你会看到一个超市，我家就在超市的旁边 注意：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 词数不少于 80，信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear Simon, I am very happy to invite you to visit my new home. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to my new home. I hope you can have a good time here. Yours, Daniel 【答案】例文： Dear Simon, I am very happy to invite you to visit my new home. My home is on the third floor in a community called Changjiang Garden in the city centre. It is only ten kilometers away from Railway Station. In our community, there are green trees everywhere. It is clean and tidy. You can smell the beautiful flowers and hear birds sing in the morning. The neighbors are kind and helpful. The volunteers often help the elderly to do some cleaning. We are like a big family. You can come here by train. From Suzhou Railway Station to Nanjing Railway Station, then change to No.1 subway and get off at The Pearl Road. Walk straight on, turn left at the second crossing, and then you will see a supermarket. My home is next to it. You can’t miss it. Welcome to my new home. I hope you can have a good time here. Yours, Daniel 【详解】[总体分析]   ① 题材：本文是一篇邀请信，属于书信类文章；   ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括新家的地理位置，社区情况和路线。 [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍自己新家的地理位置信息； 第二步，具体阐述社区的整体环境和邻居情况；   第三步，最后叙述过来的具体路线。   [亮点词汇]   ① away from 距离   ② help sb. (to) do sth. 帮助某人做某事 ③ get off 下车 ④ next to 在……旁边 [高分句型]   ① In our community, there are green trees everywhere.（there be句型）   ② Walk straight on, turn left at the second crossing, and then you will see a supermarket.（祈使句） 5．假如你是李华，你正在参加“最美社区”英语征文活动。请用一个词概括你所在社区的特点并将标题补充完整，并围绕这一特点用英语描述社区设施以及人们在社区的日常活动。 参考词汇： 划船机：rowing machine；扭腰机：twister；转轮：shoulder builder；太空漫步机：air walker 要求： 1. 文章要包含以上主要信息，可适当合理发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 My ________ community ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My lovely community My name is Li Hua. I am a boy at the age of 14. I live in Zhonghua Community. My community is so lovely that I like it so much. Why do I say so? Firstly, it has a lot of exercise equipment, such as rowing machine, twister, air walker and so on. We can not only build up our body, but also chat with our family members there. Secondly, there are a lot of beautiful trees, flowers and grass around it. Hearing the birds singing in the tree and smelling the sweet flowers, I feel very relaxed and happy. Thirdly, people here are friendly to each other and offer to help the person in trouble. Don’t you think my community is lovely? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：为“一般现在时”； ③提示：考生应按要求完成写作，将标题补充完整，并围绕标题来描述社区设施和人们在社区的日常活动。 [写作步骤] 第一步，将标题补充完整； 第二步，先简单自我介绍，并介绍自己所居住的社区； 第三步，介绍社区的设施和人们在社区的活动、以及社区的环境、社区的人； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① at the age of ……岁的 ② a lot of 很多 ③ build up 增强 ④ be friendly to 对……友好 ⑤ in trouble 处于困境中 [高分句型] ① My community is so lovely that I like it so much. (so...that...引导结果状语从句) ② We can not only build up our body, but also chat with our family members there. (“not only...but also...”句式) ③ Secondly, there are a lot of beautiful trees, flowers and grass around it. (there be句式) 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My ideal neighbourhood”.（请以“我理想中的小区”为题写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Suggested questions: 1. What is your neighbourhood like now? 2. What changes would you like to see in your neighbourhood? 3. What can you do to make your neighbourhood better? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My ideal neighbourhood I live in a neighbourhood in the city. This place is very beautiful. There are green grasslands, beautiful flowers, and tall trees in the neighbourhood. There is a wide sports field in the middle of the neighbourhood, which is a playground for children. Children can ride small cars, play sand, slide there happily. But someone always bring the dogs to come here, I think it is dangerous for children. I hope the neighbourhood can divide the playground into two parts—a children’s activity area and a pet area. In order to make my neighbourhood better and better, my friends and I can help clean up the garbage in the neighbourhood. This is my ideal neighbourhood and I really like it. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我的小区，我希望我的小区怎样改变，为了让我的小区变好，我能做的事情”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，借用“我住在城里的一个小区”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“小区现在的情况，希望小区怎样改变，为了小区变好，能做的事情”重点介绍的理想的小区； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① divide...into把……分成…… ② in order to为了 [高分句型] ① There are green grasslands, beautiful flowers, and tall trees in the neighbourhood.（there be句型） ② But someone always bring the dogs to come here, I think it is dangerous for children.（省略that的宾语从句） 7．假如你是李明，你的美国朋友Paul发来一封邮件，他想要知道你生活的社区是什么样的。请你用英文给他回一封邮件。 提示： 位置：市中心，附近有公园 环境：干净，安静，绿化很好 设施：一家超市，一个操场，一家银行，一家书店，一些餐馆 注意： 1. 包括所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 不少于60个词(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Dear Paul, I’m glad to hear from you. In your last email, you asked me something about my community. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Life in this community is great. How is your community? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours. Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Paul, I’m glad to hear from you. In your last email, you asked me something about my community. My community is in the center of the city. There are several beautiful parks. There are lots of trees and flowers here. So it is very clean and quiet. There is a supermarket, so it’s convenient for us to do shopping. There is also a playground, a bank, a bookstore and some restaurants. They make our life better. My neighbors are very kind. We often help each other.     Life in this community is great. How is your community? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours. Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的社区，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍社区的位置、环境和设施等信息； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①in the center of the city在市中心 ②lots of很多 ③help each other互相帮助 [高分句型] There is a supermarket, so it’s convenient for us to do shopping. (so连接的并列句) 8．假如你是红星中学七年级1班学生李华，你们学校的英文网站正在开展 “美丽社区” 主题征文活动，请你用英语投稿，介绍你的社区，你最喜欢的地方，以及你喜欢它的原因。 提示词语：quiet, park, exercise, convenient(方便的), enjoy 提示问题：●What is your neighborhood like? ●What is your favorite place in it? Why? I live in _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： 简单版： I live in a quiet neighborhood. There is a shopping mall, a bank, a bookshop and a post office in the neighborhood, but my favorite place is the park. Why do I like the park? First, there is a lake in the park. Next to the lake, there are green trees and colorful flowers. I always take a walk around the lake and watch the fish swimming. Next, it’s such a good place to exercise that I can enjoy running in spring and ice skating in winter there. What’s more, I like the clean air in the park. I feel relaxed when I stay there. Last, it is near my home and it’s convenient to go there. It is only a five-minute walk. I really enjoy living in this peaceful neighborhood. 丰富版： I live in a picturesque neighborhood, where I enjoy a comfortable life. There are not only convenient facilities but also fun places to go to. Of all the places, I like the bookshop best. I like the bookshop for the following reasons. First of all, there are a variety of books, and I can easily find the one I need with the help of a robot. Besides, the bookshop offers quite nice facilities, such as different reading sections and handy computers. I can either do some reading on the soft sofa or do some research on the computers. It is such a wonderful place that I can enjoy myself. Last but not least, a lot of my friends go there. Usually when I step into the bookshop, I can see some familiar faces. It is fun to be together with someone who share the same interest with us, isn’t it? Living in such a neighborhood not only fills my heart with joy but also brings friendships and a sense of achievement in my personal growth. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：围绕写作提示词语和问题介绍自己的社区，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍自己所在社区的配套设施； 第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的地方是公园，并阐述自己最喜欢公园的原因； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①next to 紧挨着 ②take a walk 散步 ③what’s more 除此之外 ④enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 [高分句型] ①First, there is a lake in the park.（there be句型） ②I feel relaxed when I stay there.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③Last, it is near my home and it’s convenient to go there（and连接并列句） 9．你所在的社区要创建“幸福社区”，正在开展“The best place in my neighborhood”征文活动。请你投稿，介绍一下你们社区你最喜欢的一个地方，要点包括： 1. 说明喜欢的原因，并简单描述如何到达； 2. 描述上一次你去那里度过休闲时光的经历（包括时间、天气如何、跟谁一起、做了什么、感受等等）。 The best place in my neighborhood The best place in my neighborhood is _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The best place in my neighborhood The best place in my neighborhood is the park. In the park, there are many flowers and trees. Of course, there’s plenty of exercise equipment, too. It’s very close to my house, only a 2-minute walk away. So there are always a lot of adults and children there. It was sunny last Sunday. I went to the park with my mother. I played many games with my children. Some people flew kites there, too. Although I was tired, I had a great time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，介绍社区里最好的地方是什么，引出话题； 第二步，说明喜欢的原因以及到达的方式，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，描述上一次去那里度过休闲时光的经历并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①plenty of大量的 ②be close to靠近 ③fly kites放风筝 ④have a great time玩得愉快 [高分句型] ①Although I was tired, I had a great time.（although引导的让步状语从句） 10．假如你所在社区正在开展“因为有你—感动社区十大人物”评选活动，你想向社区中心推荐你的邻居Ricky，请根据下表所提示的要点，用英语写一篇短文介绍Ricky，并谈谈和这样的邻居相处的感受。 注意： 1．表达中必须包含所给的要点，可以适当发挥。 2．词数80左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Ricky is my neighbor. He lives next door to me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Ricky is my neighbour. He lives next door to me. He truly embodies the spirit of our community. He is very kind and brave. Once, an elderly couple down the street was struggling to clear their driveway during a snowstorm. Ricky braved the cold and helped them dig out their driveway to ensure their safety. Ricky also has a remarkable ability to check and fix a variety of machines, from malfunctioning lawnmowers to malfunctioning garage doors. In addition to his practical skills, Ricky was an avid reader and sports fan. Living near Ricky is a true blessing. His presence fills our community with warmth. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和 “一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作的要点提示已给出，考生应围绕要点来展开写作，注意用词，避免出现单词拼写和语法方面的错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出要介绍的邻居Ricky； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“品质、能力、爱好”几个方面介绍我的邻居Ricky； 第三步，书写总结。阐述与Ricky相处的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① the spirit of ……的精神 ② struggle to 努力 ③ a variety of... 各种各样的 [高分句型] ① Ricky also has a remarkable ability to check and fix a variety of machines, from malfunctioning lawnmowers to malfunctioning garage doors.  (动词不定式作定语) ② Living near Ricky is a true blessing.  (动名词作主语) 能力综合实践5篇 11．假如你是李红，你所在的社区开设了一个关爱独居老人的爱心食堂。请根据提示，给Lisa写一封英文邮件，介绍这个食堂。 （1）老人们在食堂吃早饭和午饭，食物美味且便宜。 （2）早餐7:00—9:00，种类丰富（如：粥……）。 （3）午餐11:30—1:00，有米饭、面条……。 （4）老人们喜欢在这聊天、交朋友。 （5）老人们感觉……。 要求： （1）词数：70个左右。 （2）短文开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：社区neighborhood，粥porridge Dear Lisa, A special dining hall is open in my neighborhood. It is for the old people living alone. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have anything new? Write to me! Yours, Li Hong 【答案】例文 Dear Lisa, A special dining hall is open in my neighborhood. It is for the old people living alone. These old people can have two meals, breakfast and lunch in it every day. All the food is nice and cheap. There are all kinds of food like porridge and eggs for breakfast from 7: 30 am to 9: 00 am. The lunchtime is from 11: 30 am to 1: 00 pm. The old people can have noodles, rice, vegetables, fish and soup. The old people eat well and many of them enjoy talking and making friends there, so they feel warm and happy. Do you have anything new? Write to me! Yours, Li Hong 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍这个食堂的信息； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of各种各样的 ②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 [高分句型] The old people eat well and many of them enjoy talking and making friends there, so they feel warm and happy. (并列句) 12．假设你是李明，介绍一下你所在的社区。包括社区的环境、设施、邻居等方面，不少于 80 词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Neighbourhood I live in a wonderful neighbourhood. It’s clean and quiet. There are many trees and flowers around, making the air very fresh. In my neighbourhood, there is a big garden where people can take a walk and enjoy the beautiful scenery. There is also a sports centre where we can do exercise. Besides, there is a supermarket and several small shops, which is very convenient for us to buy daily necessities. My neighbours are very friendly and helpful. They always smile and say hello to each other. When someone is in trouble, others will come to help at once. I love my neighbourhood and I’m happy to live here. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据要点提示进行写作，可适当添加细节，注意语言表达自然流畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己所在社区，展现社区整体环境； 第二步，详细描述社区设施； 第三步，阐述社区邻居情况，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①take a walk散步 ②do exercise做运动 ③in trouble处于困境中 [高分句型] In my neighbourhood, there is a big garden where people can take a walk and enjoy the beautiful scenery. (where引导的定语从句) 13．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为“My Neighbourhood”的征文活动。假如你是李雷，住在花园社区，根据下面提示，完成一篇英语短文，向该英文报投稿。 My Neighbourhood Conditions What is your neighbourhood like? Neighbours What are your neighbours like? How do they help others?(give two examples) What do you do for your neighbourn?(give one example) Feelings How do you feel living in your neighbourhood? 要求：(1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2)必须包括图中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； (3)词数：100 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； (4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My Neighbourhood My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My Neighbourhood My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. There’s a beautiful park in the neighbourhood, and I always take a walk in it. There’s a shop in our neighbourhood, so it’s very easy for us to buy things. I love my neighbourhood a lot. My neighbours are very friendly and helpful. We are just like good friends. They often have a “helping hands” meeting at the weekend. Some of them often visit the old people and help them clean their houses. They also do some shopping for them. Sometimes I join them. If there is something wrong with their washing machine or fridge, I’m willing to help them check and fix it. I think it’s such a good neighbourhood. I’m happy and lucky to live here. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇关于“邻里生活”的短文，介绍了作者所住社区的环境、邻居的互助精神以及自己的感受。 ②时态：文章使用“一般现在时”描述日常的邻里生活和相互帮助的事情。 ③提示：根据题目要求，详细描述邻里的环境、邻居的性格、他们的互帮互助情况以及自己为邻居做的事情，并表达对居住环境的喜爱。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要描述邻里的环境和便捷设施； 第二步，介绍邻居的友好和互助精神，举例说明； 第三步，描述自己为邻居做过的事情； 第四步，表达对邻里生活的喜爱和感受。 [亮点词汇] ①in the neighbourhood 在社区 ②at the weekend 在周末 ③do some shopping 去购物 [高分句型] ①it’s very easy for us to buy things. (it作形式主语的句型) ②If there is something wrong with their washing machine or fridge, I’m willing to help them check and fix it. (if引导的条件状语从句) 14． 假如你是王林，家住在Happiness Home。本周六是来自英国的交换生Mike的生日。你打算邀请他来你家过生日。请你根据下列提示，用英语给他写一封邮件，介绍一下你的小区环境、邻里关系，并告诉他生日会的安排以及从学校到你家的具体路线。 1. What do you think of the environment of your neighborhood? 2. What are your neighbors like?（Give at least one example. ） 3. What is your plan for the party? 4. How can Mike get to your home according to the map? 要求： 1. 层次清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范； 2. 邮件内容必须包括上面提及的要点，可适当发挥； 3. 词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 Dear Mike, I am going to have a party at home to celebrate your birthday this Saturday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Lin 【答案】例文： Dear Mike, I am going to have a party at home to celebrate your birthday this Saturday. I live in Happiness Home. It is beautiful and convenient. My neighbors are very friendly. They always help each other. I plan to have a big dinner in the evening. We can play games after dinner. You can find my home easily. Go out of school and enter Ninghang Road, and go straight along People’s Road. Then go across Huayang Road. You need to turn left at the end of People’s Road and you can find my home. The opposite of my home is the supermarket. I hope that we can have a good time on Saturday. Yours, Wang Lin 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态以 “一般现在时” 为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容写电子邮件邀请Mike来自己家里过生日，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，介绍自己所在的社区及邻居并给出生日会的计划； 第三步，介绍从学校到自己家的具体路线； 第四步，表达美好期望。 [亮点词汇] ①go straight along沿着……一直往前走 ②at the end of在……尽头 ③play games玩游戏 ④have a good time玩得开心 [重点句型] ①Go out of school and enter Ninghang Road, and go straight along People’s Road.（祈使句） ②I hope that we can have a good time on Saturday.（that引导的宾语从句） 15．请根据以下提示，写一篇关于你的社区的短文，不少于 80 词。 1. 介绍你的社区的位置和环境； 2. 描述社区里的设施，如超市、公园、学校等； 3. 谈论你的邻居们，他们是怎么样的，以及他们如何互相帮助。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Neighbourhood I live in a beautiful neighbourhood. It’s on the east side of the city. There are many trees and flowers everywhere, making the air very fresh. In my neighbourhood, there is a big supermarket where we can buy all kinds of things. There is also a lovely park with a playground and a lake. We often go for a walk and play there. A school is not far from my home. It has nice classrooms and a big library. The neighbours here are very friendly and helpful. When someone is in trouble, others will come to help at once. We often visit each other and have parties together. It’s a wonderful place to live. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从位置和环境、设施以及邻居们等方面介绍具体详情。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of各种各样的…… ②go for a walk去散步 ③far from远离…… ④come to help来帮忙 [高分句型] ①When someone is in trouble, others will come to help at once. 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