Unit 5 Feeling excited 单元写作指导-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册易错易混考点精讲精练（仁爱科普版）

Unit5 Feeling Excited 单元写作指导 ★话题命题角度 Unit5主要涉及个人经历情感体验方面的“经历与感受”这一话题主要考查：1.自己的经历与感受；2.他人的经历对自己的影响。此话题偶尔还会涉及社会热点进而提出一些自我提升的方法和建议。 一、核心词句 【词汇积累】 品德修养 1. quality品质；人品 2. spirit精神 3. honesty诚实 4. kindness善良 5. admire钦佩 6. independent独立的 7. positive积极的 8. moral道德的 9. grateful感激的 10. behave politely举止文明 　　　　　 11. respect each other相互尊重 12. keep promises信守承诺 　　　　　 13. strong will坚强的意志 14. be friendly to对……友好 　　　　　 15. be responsible for对……负责 16. be patient with对……有耐心 　　　 17. be thankful to others感恩他人 18. be ready to help others乐于助人 　　　19. never give up永不放弃 自我认识与提升 1. influence影响 2. experience经验；经历 3. dare敢于 4. require需要 5. fail失败 6. silent不说话的；沉默的 7. helpful有帮助的 8. valuable宝贵的 9. seldom很少 10. deal with应对；处理 11. in public公开地 12. in person亲身；亲自 13. take pride in为……感到自豪 　　　14. be proud of为……骄傲 15. make plans制订计划 　　　　　 16. manage time管理时间 17. overcome challenges克服挑战 　　18. stick to doing sth.坚持做某事 19. achieve the goal实现目标 　　　　20. take… seriously认真对待…… 21. as long as只要 　　　　　 22. learn from mistakes从错误中学习 23. make progress取得进步 二、话题佳句记背 过去经历 1.I used to be afraid of writing English articles. 我过去害怕写英语文章。 2.How nervous I was when I was told to give a speech. 当听说我要发表演讲时我紧张极了。 3.The biggest change I’ve ever made is that I’ve fallen in love with reading. 我做过的最大的改变是我爱上了阅读。 4.My teacher encouraged me to study hard and gave me some helpful advice. 我的老师鼓励我努力学习，并给了我一些有用的建议。 5.I didn’t fall behind the others with his help/with the help of him. 在他的帮助下，我没有落在别人后面。 6.He spent one hour every day studying with her and explaining difficult problems to her， so she made much progress in math. 他每天花一个小时和她一起学习，给她解释难题，所以她在数学上取得了很大的进步。 感受和影响 1.All in all， the world needs love and we should get ready to help others at any time without expecting anything in return. 总而言之，世界需要爱，我们应该随时准备帮助别人，不求任何回报。 2.In my opinion， it’s very important to learn to be thankful. If everyone can help each other， the world will be full of love. 在我看来，学会感恩非常重要。如果每个人都能互相帮助，世界将会充满爱。 3.No matter how hard life is， we won’t fail unless we give up hope.无论生活多么难，除非我们放弃希望，否则我们不会失败。 我认识与提升 1. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school.为了赶上我的同学，我开始每天放学后练习跑步。 2. No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to stick to exercising.无论我遇到了什么困难，我都竭尽全力坚持锻炼。 3. I find it important to keep a positive attitude when we're in trouble.我发现当我们遇到麻烦时，保持积极的态度很重要。 4. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English.然而，我认为它是一个挑战，也是一个提高我的英语水平的好机会。 个人成长 5. I used to be very shy, not daring to express myself in public.我过去很害羞，不敢在公共场合表达自己。 6. But with the encouragement of my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me.但是在老师的鼓励下，我不仅变得更加外向，而且与周围的人相处得很好。 7. Making and keeping promises plays an important role in our lives.许下承诺并信守承诺在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。 8. Don't spend too much time on hard thinking because only action leads you to success.不要花太多时间苦思冥想，因为只有行动才能带你走向成功。 三、开头中间结尾模板 开头段 1. The activity impressed me most was a basketball game. 给我印象最深的活动是一场篮球赛。 2. It was at that time that I decided to help more people in need. 就是在那个时候，我决定帮助更多需要帮助的人。 3. There is always something unforgettable in my life， especially the stories between my friend and me. 在我的生活中总有一些难忘的事情，尤其是我和朋友之间的故事。 4. Though the physical test in the entrance examination for senior middle school was over， it left me a deep impression. 即使中招体育考试已经结束了，但它给我留下了深刻的印象。 中间段 To prepare for the physical examination， I got up early and used some free time to practice these sports. In P.E. class， I also had a competition with others. Finally， I got full marks in the examination. 在这次体育考试的备考期间，我每天早起并用空闲时间练习这些考试项目。在体育课上，我也和其他人进行了比赛。最终，我考试得了满分。 结尾段 1. Through this examination， I understand that as long as we work hard， there will be harvest. So I will continue to work hard and never give up in my future life and study. 通过这次考试，我明白了只要努力就会有收获。因此，在未来的生活和学习中，我会继续努力，永不放弃。 2. This experience taught me not to look down on others. 这次经历教会我不要小瞧别人。 四、话题俗语谚语 1. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people’s eyes. 一千个人眼中有一千个哈姆雷特。 2. You have to sow before you can reap. You have to give before you can get. 先播种才能收获，先付出才能得到。 3. In doing we learn. 实践长才干。 4. All things are difficult before they are easy. 凡事必先难后易。 5. Actions speak louder than words.行动胜于空谈。 6. Bad luck often brings good luck.塞翁失马，安知非福。 7. A journey of a thousand li begins with a single step.千里之行，始于足下。 水滴石穿，绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing every day”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇发言稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。 1. 要点：1)你每天在坚持做什么； 2)你坚持这么做的理由； 3)它会给你带来怎样的影响或改变。 2. 要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2)词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 One thing I keep doing every day Good morning, everyone! I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That's all. Thank you! 【审题】 人称：______________ 时态：______________ 【列纲】 【成文】 One thing I keep doing every day Good morning, everyone! I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day. I love running and I have kept running for three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports and running was always my weakness. I often failed my running tests. ①In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school. Sometimes, I was so tired that I really wanted to give up. ②But I kept telling myself that I could make it. ③No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to keep running. Now I do much better in running. I'm very proud of myself and I'm ready for any challenge in the future. That's all. Thank you！ 加分亮点 ①句使用in order to引导的目的状语，阐述作者每天坚持练习跑步的原因，表达干净利落，使文章句式结构多样； ②句使用转折词but及that引导的宾语从句，生动形象地描述了作者不轻易放弃的决心，逻辑严密顺畅，内容更加连贯； ③句使用no matter引导的让步状语从句，再次阐明作者勇于面对困难，使文章句式更高级，内容更加充实。 1．每个人都有自己的闪光点，请以“My Shining Point”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 要求： （1）讲述一个自己的故事； （2）你的感悟； （3）适当增加细节，行文连贯； （4）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     My Shining Point I meet many excellent people every day and at the same time I also find myself really good. I can see the world with kind eyes. I think I don’t like to complain. I find it important to have a positive attitude. Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise. In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：以“My Shining Point”为题并结合提示进行写作，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，简要说明自己有哪些闪光点； 第二步，讲述一个自己的故事； 第三步，介绍自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①at the same time同时 ②play a role in在……中扮演角色 ③regard…as把……当作 [高分句型] ①However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. (which引导的定语从句) ②In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time. (强调句) 2．你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Story（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。 选择一：以Sometimes people surprise us为题，内容包括： 1．你对这句话的理解； 2．结合实际生活举例说明； 3．你得到的启发。 选择二：以Trouble is a friend为题，内容包括： 1．你对这句话的理解； 2．结合实际生活举例说明； 3．你得到的启发。 注意： 1．词数：100左右； 2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章； 3．照抄阅读语篇不得分； 4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Title: ____________ After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Title: Trouble is a friend After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. And I think trouble is a friend. The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend. In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly. In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解； 第二步，结合实际生活举例说明； 第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。 [亮点词汇] ① thanks to多亏 ② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③ in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.（表语从句，让步状语从句） ②That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score.（原因状语从句） 3．假定你是李华，学校正举办“我劳动，我快乐”为主题向学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 要点包括： （1）分享你的劳动经历； （2）谈谈你的劳动感受； （3）表达你的观点并发出倡议。 注意： （1）词数90左右； （2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Last weekend, I got up early and cooked noodles for my parents. First, I boiled some water. Then I put some noodles into the pot. About five or six minutes later, I placed them in the bowls and added some salt and oil. When my parents got up, they were surprised and praised me with a big smile. It was the first time for me to cook for them. A little bit tired but happy, I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents. From this unforgettable experience, I’ve also got a deeper understanding of my parents. I think it’s our duty to share some housework. Besides, doing some hard housework is a kind of physical exercise. As teenagers, we should take action to help around the house. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，同时注意用一般过去时叙述自己的劳动经历和感受，用一般现在时谈自己的观点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍自己的劳动经历； 第二步：谈谈自己从这次劳动经历中获得的感受； 第三步：表达自己对劳动的观点。 [亮点词汇] ① surprised 惊讶的 ② praise 表扬 ③ take care of 照顾 ④ unforgettable 难以忘记的 ⑤ take action 采取行动 [高分句型] ① It was the first time for me to cook for them. （it is/was the first time to do sth. 第一次做某事） ② doing some hard housework is a kind of physical exercise. （动名词作主语） 4．某英文网站正在开展以“我最想感谢的人”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈谁是你最想感谢的人，他/她是怎样帮助你的，以及你的收获。 提示词语: trouble, encourage, improve, stick to 提示问题: . ·Who do you want to thank most? ·How did he/she help you? ·What have you learned from him/her? In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. My mother is my role model. I admire her very much. My mother is responsible and careful. She is not only busy with her work but also takes good care of our family. What’s more, She did a lot for me when I was upset. Once I failed a singing competition and felt very upset. I was crying in the corner of the hall when my mother came to me. She handed me a piece of tissue and hugged me tenderly. She kept comforting me and encouraged me till I stopped crying. From her words, I became calm and found confidence again. I love her and I will learn from her. She makes me know the importance of diligence. I will work hard and try my best to help others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“我最想感谢的人”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“身份、事件、感悟”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①admire钦佩 ②diligence勤奋 ③not only…but also…不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①I was crying in the corner of the hall when my mother came to me.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②She kept comforting me and encouraged me till I stopped crying.（till引导的时间状语从句） 5．家是温馨的港湾，家是幸福的源泉，家是永远的依恋，每年5月15日是世界家庭日(International Day of Families)。学校英语校刊举办征文活动，请结合自身的成长经历，破解家庭幸福的“密码”，写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 你对家庭幸福的理解； 2. 你家发生的一件有意义的事； 3. 促进家庭和谐幸福的几点建议(请列举两到三条具体做法)。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Family is the source of happiness and the harbor of warmth. To me, a happy family means mutual respect, understanding, and support among all members. One meaningful event in my family was when we all worked together to prepare a surprise birthday party for my grandmother. Everyone had a role to play, and the joy on her face was priceless. To promote family harmony and happiness, I have a few suggestions. First, spend quality time together, such as having meals or playing games. Second, communicate openly and honestly to understand each other’s feelings and needs. Lastly, show appreciation and gratitude for each other’s efforts and contributions. By following these steps, we can create a loving and supportive family environment. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一和第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体介绍对家庭幸福的理解； 第二步，具体描述家庭中发生的一件有意义的事； 第三步，最后提出促进家庭和谐幸福的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①the source of……的来源 ②prepare for准备 ③show appreciation for对……表示感谢 [高分句型] ①One meaningful event in my family was when we all worked together to prepare a surprise birthday party for my grandmother.（表语从句） ②To promote family harmony and happiness, I have a few suggestions.（动词不定式作目的状语） 6．在成长过程中，青少年面临越来越多的烦恼与压力， 请以此为话题给英语报社投稿，写一篇文章谈谈你的看法。 内容包括： （1）导致青少年压力大的主要原因？（学习、与他人相处等，至少两条） （2）减少压力的措施？（运动、听音乐、与他人谈心等，至少两条） （3）简要谈谈你对压力的看法。 要求： （1）包含所有要点，可适当发挥。 （2）词数80 左右。 （3）不得出现真实姓名和校名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. The main reason for pressure is schoolwork and getting along with others. Students have so much homework that they have no time to relax. Some students don’t know how to get along well with others. They feel lonely. I’ll give you some ways to relieve pressure. First of all, you need to take part in all kinds of class activities, such as sports meetings, football games and singing competitions. Besides, you should try to communicate with your classmates as often as possible. In my opinion, proper pressure is beneficial to our growth and development. We should learn to face pressure in our life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所给提示不得遗漏，注意“原因”和“措施”部分至少写明两条。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍青少年压力大的原因； 第二步，阐述减轻压力的方法； 第三步，表达自己对压力的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①grow up长大 ②get along with sb.与某人相处 ③first of all首先 ④take part in参加 [高分句型] ①Students have so much homework that they have no time to relax.（结果状语从句） ②I’ll give you some ways to relieve pressure.（不定式作目的状语） 7．当我们在生活中遇到烦恼的时候，首先应该试着控制自己的情绪，因为情绪可以影响我们生活的方方面面。心情不好时，我们要多与父母、朋友沟通，学会笑对人生。 请根据以上提示，以How to Deal with our Problems 为题写一篇短文，阐述一下我们应该怎样面对生活中的烦恼。100个单词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Deal with our Problems It is very common for us to get into trouble. And it often makes us feel bad. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Deal with our Problems    It is very common for us to get into trouble. And it often makes us feel bad. Do you know what to do at this time? First of all, try to control your feelings because bad feelings can bring you other bad effects. Then believe in yourself. You can speak to yourself,“ I’m the best in the world. I can deal with anything.” You can also do something for others to help you forget your problems. Last, when you have some problems, you’d better talk about them with your parents or friends. They may help you get out of trouble. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我们遇到麻烦是很常见的。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——控制情绪、多沟通、学会笑对人生等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“父母或朋友可能会帮助你走出困境”的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①believe in相信 ②you’d better你最好 ③get out of trouble摆脱困境 [高分句型] ①First of all, try to control your feelings because bad feelings can bring you other bad effects. （because引导的原因状语从句） ②Last, when you have some problems, you’d better talk about them with your parents or friends. (when引导的时间状语从句） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$