专题17 2023年2月四省联考（收养小松鼠）-高考英语读后续写历年真题解析（PPT课件）

读后续写真题 2023年2月四省联考：收养小松鼠 1 1 试题再现 2 试题分析 3 写作思路 4 范文赏析 目录 CONTENTS 2 2023 试题再现 历年高考英语读后续写真题分析 01 3 My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover their world. While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel. We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait – and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother – we realized the tiny squirrel was lost. Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order. More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own. Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds. To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn’t long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild. His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1：One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. Paragraph 2：One night, Squirt didn't come back to our house and it rained hard. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 高中英语写作 新题型 读后续写 试题再现 2023 试题分析 历年高考英语读后续写真题分析 02 5 文本解读--语言积累 1.在台阶下 2.把...吓跑 3.一段漫长而沉默的等待 4.鸟窝或者妈妈的迹象 5.微小但是值得一搏的机会 6.轮流做某事 7.承担责任 8.嬉闹地在孩子身边转 9.重新接触野外世界 10.靠自己存活 1.beneath the steps 2.scare ... off/away 3.a long and silent wait 4.signs of a nest or a mother 5.a fighting chance 6.take turns in doing, take turns to do 7.take on /shoulder responsibility 8.playfully go around the kids 9.be reintroduced to the wild 10.survive on one’s own 我们有一天无意中发现了一只落单的红松鼠宝宝(取名为Squirt)，在确认他无家可归、无妈妈照料的前提下，收养了他并给予最大的照顾。我们一家，尤其是大女儿，在照料他的过程中和Squirt建立起了深厚的感情，引导着他学习生存技能，以待有一天能让他重返自然。 para 1: 一天在树上，Squirt偶遇了灰松鼠一家。 para 2：一天晚上，大雨滂沱，但是Squirt却没有回家。 故事梗概 文本解读 1.My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover their world. 2.While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel. 3. We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait – and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother – we realized the tiny squirrel was lost. 4.Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order. 首段是整篇文章的眼，也是续写部分的提示。后文需 要呼应，交代我们通过通过孩子的眼睛发现了什么样的世界。大人可能认为Kaytlin不舍得松鼠离开我们的家；而Kaytlin可能为松鼠找到家而开心并实现个人的成长。 Watch一词告诉我们：我和丈夫是站在旁观者的视角来 见证这件事的，续写部分也要遵循这一原则。 第三段红色词都表明我们都很爱护动物、尊重动物。这些伏笔告诉读者最后松鼠一定会回到他应该有的生活，enjoy the freedom to live in the wild with his peers. 第四段红色词描述松鼠所处的状态和我们想要帮助他的困难；划线词部分我们所付出的努力。最后一句话起到承接下一段的作用。 文本解读 5.More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own. 6. Our daughters and I took turns in feeding ”Squirt”. Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds. 7. To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn’t long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild. 8. His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material. 第5-6段讲述我们如何照看小松鼠。这过程让Kaytlin学会了承担责任，学会了如何照顾别人，是她人生当中一个重要的部分。这样在续写部分她让松鼠回归大自然也就水到渠成了。 第7-8段划线词表现了松鼠在我们照料下健康成长。从接受milk到solid food，从室内到室外，从go around girls到climb trees, find nest materials，为后续的回归自然做好了铺垫。 Tip: 第7-8段有许多描写松鼠动作的词汇表达，要在续写部分加以调整性的运用，是描写生动形象。 2023 写作思路 历年高考英语读后续写真题分析 03 11 情节推断 para 1---Squirt初涉wild，结交到同类，尝试独立生活； para 2---Squirt成功回归wild，我们虽然略有伤感，但仍为他感到开心。爱不是绑在身边形影不离，而是在合适的时间放手（let it go）。 写作思路-表达 1.One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. Q2:How did we react to Squirt’s new condition? (不舍+高兴，心理活动） We were relieved that he would finally return to his natural world, where he belonged. Meanwhile, we were sad because we had already made him a member of our family, without whom our life would be much less vigorous. Squirt seemed to have found a new family, and we couldn't help but feel a little bittersweet. The girls and I watched in amazement as he chased them up and down the tree trunks and branches. We knew that this was a great sign and that he was ready to be on his own. Seeing this, we smiled in relief and watched them from a distance, with a hope that Squirt could survive on his own and back to the wild. At the sight of this, Kaytlin said, half joking and half serious, that Squirt would soon become wild, to which we all responded with a sad smile. As we observed Squirt's interactions with the other squirrels, a mix of pride and sorrow washed over us, knowing that it was time for him to fully integrate back into the wild. 写作思路-表达 1.One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. Q3: Did he come back to our house every night?(下段首句) Day after day Squirt would hang out with his peers and day by day he seemed less attached to us. For several days he played all day in the trees surrounding our house but came down at bedtime. Squirt seemed to have found a new family, and we couldn't help but feel a little bittersweet watching him go. We knew that this was a great sign and that he was ready to be on his own. They knew that it would be hard to say goodbye to Squirt, but they also knew that it was the right thing to do. Squirt often went outdoors, looking for new friends, but still came back home at night. He still came back every night, but much later. And every morning, he set off early. Not until then did we realize that it was time for him to go back in the wild, where he belonged. 写作思路-表达 2.One night, Squirt didn’t come back to our house and it rained hard. Q1:How did we feel about Squirt’s absence in such terrible weather? Worried, we searched every corner of the yard, praying that he could be sheltering from the rain somewhere, but in vain. Throughout the night, we were dominated by anxiety, praying that he had found shelter. We worried about his safety, wondering if he had found a warm and dry place to shelter from the big rain. Desperately, our whole family put on our raincoats, took out our headlights and searched every corner of our garden. We called his name, but there was no response. We searched the trees and the bushes, but he was nowhere to be seen. We worried about him all night, hoping he had found a dry spot to shelter from the rain. 写作思路-表达 2.One night, Squirt didn’t come back to our house and it rained hard. Q2:What did we do with the situation? Suddenly out of a tree hole came this red creature, who was sleepily looking at us and then jumped into Kaytlin’s arms. Our girls wanted to seek Squirt. We prevented them because it was too dangerous. But when the sun rose the next day, there was Squirt, begging for food. The next morning, we went out to search for him, calling his name and looking everywhere. Finally, we found him in a nearby tree, making himself a ball, shivering in the rain. But the next day he appeared on the branch of a tree near our house. He seemed to be saying goodbye to us before he disappeared into the forest. Suddenly there came an excited cry, "Here he is!" We raced towards a big tree. There was a hole beneath a big branch, at the entrance of which Squirt was standing and chattered at us. I was awoken by the cheerful chattering outside. As I peered through the window, I was greeted with Squirt and his squirrel buddies bouncing around in our garden. 写作思路-表达 2.One night, Squirt didn’t come back to our house and it rained hard. Q3: How would the story end? What was my reflection?（结尾） The red baby squirrel left, turned back, left again and once more turned back before finally disappearing among the trees. Over the next few days, Squirt started coming back to visit us less frequently, until finally he stopped coming altogether. They knew that it would be hard to say goodbye to Squirt, but they also knew that it was the right thing to do. They were sad to see Squirt go, but they were also happy that he was finally back where he belonged. Watching Squirt enjoying his feast, we realized that it was time to say goodbye to him, however unwilling we were. They knew that it would be hard to say goodbye to Squirt, but they also knew that it was the right thing to do. 写作思路-表达 2.One night, Squirt didn’t come back to our house and it rained hard. Q3: How would the story end? What was my reflection?（感悟） Though a little sad, I exchanged an understanding smile with my husband, really glad that the bitter-sweet experience helped our kids find their world of love with Squirt for company.(回扣原文首句） Every time we took a walk in the forest, I always felt there was a red figure nearly, as if the red Squirt was accompanying us all the time, never really departing. We can shower all the creatures with love and care, but we also should allow them the freedom to return to the wild. Without him, we would not have learnt about how to care for a squirrel and our daughters would not have learned so much about responsibility and empathy. It was a tearful moment, but we knew it was the right thing to do. Squirt had taught us so much about caring for others and letting go. We will always remember the time we spent with Squirt and the lessons we learned about the importance of taking care of our wildlife. 2023 范文赏析 历年高考英语读后续写真题分析 04 20 One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. They found a hollow in an old tree where their nest was snug with moss and tree leaves. Startled by the unexpected stranger, the gray squirrel, crouching on the tree, chattered fierecely and trembled his furry tail. After spotting this, Squirt abandoned the stick in his mouth and ran back to Kaytlin for shelter. “He seemingly couldn’t survive on his own temporarily.” My daughter turned to us and stroked him affectionately. The following days witnessed his active round-trip, who was busy in carrying sticks and patching up the nest but came down to house for food. 阅读以下参考范文，学习范文的精彩表达和亮点表述。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 高中英语写作 新题型 读后续写 范文学习 One night, Squirt didn’t come back to our house and it rained hard. We immediately headed for the nest, only to find it was destroyed by the heavy rain. It deepened my daughters’ concern after searching everywhere around our house. Kaytlin was anxious that the tiny squirrel was threatened by some other nocturnal creatures. We had no alternative, distressed the whole night. But to our relief, when the sun rose, the Squirt appeared and was waiting for his feeds, accompanied by the family of gray squirrels. It seemed that they have formed an intimate acquaintance and he can be reintroduced to the wild. The warm experience taught my children to appreciate life with respect and live in harmony with nature.  阅读以下参考范文，学习范文的精彩表达和亮点表述。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 高中英语写作 新题型 读后续写 范文学习 阅读下面的补充语料，积累一些续写素材吧！ 补充素材 读后续写中的动物叫声 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 高中英语写作 新题型 读后续写 补充语料 狮子 lion roar Kept in the cage, the lion roared angrily, attempting to get out. 老虎tiger roar The powerfultiger roared ferociously, warning the other animals to keep off. 狼 wolf howl/roar/bark Seeing this, the wolf still howled outside the door for some time and then left unwillingly. 大象 elephant trumpet The mighty elephant trumpeted loudly, showing its strength. 狗 dog bark Brady kept barking at them anxiously and continuously. 猫 cat 喵meow The meekcat meowed softly,obviously glad at his owner’s return . 熊bear growl低吼声/roar With an angry roar, the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 公鸡 rooster乌鸦 crow crow啼叫，打鸣 The proud rooster crowed early, which quite annoyed me, who wanted to sleep a little longer. 鸭子 ducks quack嘎嘎叫 The cheerful duck quacked loudly,closely followed by her kids 松鼠 squirrel chirp叽叽喳喳chatter吱吱叫 Startled by the unexpected stranger, the gray squirrel chattered fiercely and trembled his furry tail. 鸟 bird chirp叽叽喳喳chatter吱吱叫 Perching on my palm, she chirped/squeaked merrily, eyes fixed on mine again 青蛙 frog croak呱呱叫 The lively frog croaked in the pond, making a splash. 蜜蜂 bee buzz 嗡嗡叫hum哼唱 Looking at the sea of flowers and smelling their fragrance, the busy bee buzzed/hummedenergetically. 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