读后续写--舞会 “毁裙” 危机，祖母的爱力挽狂澜 讲义-河南省豫东名校2024-2025学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A young girl called Liza scrolled through an online store, her eyes lighting up at the sight of a beautiful dress. It was a designer gown (礼服). She looked over at her mother, who was reading a book in the armchair by the window. “Mom, can I get this dress for prom (舞会)? It’s perfect!” Liza asked. Her mother looked at the price and shook her head. “Liza, that’s expensive. We shouldn’t spend that much on a dress you’ll wear once. Besides, someone has a surprise for you today.” “A surprise? What kind of surprise?” Liza asked. Her mother smiled mysteriously and said, “Just be patient.” After a while, there was a knock on the door. Liza’s grandmother, Pam, entered the house, holding a package wrapped neatly in gift paper. Liza’s curiosity got the better of her, and she eagerly tore open the package. Inside was a beautiful dress. But Liza’s excitement faded quickly as she realized it wasn’t the designer dress she had dreamed of. “I’m not wearing this!” she shouted, her disappointment turning into anger. She didn’t consider how hurtful her words might be to her grandmother. Her mother tried to reassure her. “Well, dear, I think you will look beautiful in this dress,” she said. “No! Are you trying to save money on me!? Prom only happens once in a lifetime! I’m not wearing this!” Liza shouted, tears of anger welling up in her eyes. Finally, her mother decided to give in. Pam quietly accepted Liza’s choice and carefully packed the dress she had made. She didn’t say much, but her disappointment was clear. Liza was too wrapped up in her own feelings to notice the sadness in her grandmother’s eyes. The evening of the prom finally arrived. Liza danced among her friends, her heart filled with excitement. Suddenly, one of Liza’s friends Mary carelessly poured a glass of red wine on her dress. In an instant, the dress was completely ruined. Liza couldn’t believe what had just happened. She burst into the restroom, trying to clean the dress, but nothing worked. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Liza headed to the school exit and called her mother, crying uncontrollably. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Returning to the hall in her grandmother’s dress, Liza felt a mix of nervousness and hope. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意： 年轻女孩 Liza 在网上看中一件设计师礼服，想穿着去参加舞会，但母亲觉得太贵拒绝了。后来祖母 Pam 送来自己做的裙子作为惊喜，Liza 却因不是心仪的礼服而生气拒绝，祖母虽失望但默默接受。舞会当晚，Liza 的朋友不小心将红酒洒在她的裙子上，裙子完全被毁。 故事山分析： 开端：Liza 想要一件设计师礼服去参加舞会，母亲因价格拒绝。 发展：祖母送来亲手做的裙子，Liza 不满并拒绝。 高潮：舞会上朋友把红酒洒在 Liza 的裙子上，裙子被毁。 结局（待续写）：Liza 向母亲求助，母亲可能带来祖母做的裙子，Liza 穿上后态度转变。 尾声（待续写）：Liza 理解了祖母的心意，意识到亲情比物质更重要。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应： 母亲说有人有惊喜给 Liza，引出祖母送裙子。续写中可能母亲再次提及惊喜，让 Liza 接受祖母的裙子。 祖母精心包装裙子，体现祖母对 Liza 的爱。续写中 Liza 可能因看到精心包装的裙子而有所触动。 Liza 拒绝祖母的裙子，祖母的失望。续写中 Liza 可能会为自己的行为感到愧疚。 母亲试图安抚 Liza，体现母亲的包容。续写中母亲可能再次包容 Liza，鼓励她穿上祖母的裙子。 裙子被毁，Liza 陷入困境。这为祖母的裙子出场做铺垫，续写中祖母的裙子可能成为解决问题的关键。 续写要点（两段）： 第一段：Liza 向母亲哭诉裙子被毁，母亲可能会安慰她，并告诉她祖母的裙子或许能解决问题，Liza 可能会因之前的拒绝而犹豫。 第二段：Liza 穿上祖母的裙子回到舞会大厅，她可能会得到朋友们的赞美，从而意识到祖母的裙子也很美，进而理解祖母的心意，完成情感的转变。 情感线：从 Liza 对祖母裙子的嫌弃、愤怒，到裙子被毁后的绝望、无助，再到穿上祖母裙子后的紧张、期待，最后是理解祖母心意后的感动、愧疚。 故事线： Liza 裙子被毁，陷入困境。 Liza 向母亲求助。 母亲提及祖母的裙子。 Liza 犹豫是否穿祖母的裙子。 Liza 穿上祖母的裙子回到舞会。 Liza 得到赞美，理解祖母心意。 主旨升华句： True beauty lies not in the brand of a dress, but in the love and care that goes into making it. Family love is far more precious than any designer gown, and we should cherish the gifts from our loved ones. Sometimes, the most valuable things in life are not the ones we buy with money, but the ones filled with sincere affection. A simple dress made with love can bring more warmth and happiness than an expensive one bought with money. We should not judge a gift by its appearance, but by the love and effort behind it. 写作示范： 第一篇 第一段： Liza headed to the school exit and called her mother, crying uncontrollably. “Mom, my dress is ruined! What should I do?” she sobbed. Her mother comforted her gently, “Don't worry, honey. Remember the dress your grandmother made? I brought it with me just in case. It's still in the car.” Liza was silent for a moment. She remembered how rudely she had rejected it. But now, she had no other choice. With a heavy heart, she walked towards the car. 第二段： Returning to the hall in her grandmother’s dress, Liza felt a mix of nervousness and hope. She was worried that her friends would laugh at her. But as soon as she stepped in, Mary exclaimed, “Liza, you look amazing! Where did you get this beautiful dress?” Others echoed her praise. Liza was surprised. She realized that the dress was actually very beautiful. At that moment, she understood her grandmother's love and the value of the gift. She decided to apologize to her grandmother sincerely when she got home. 第二篇 Liza headed to the school exit and called her mother, crying uncontrollably. "Mom, I'm in big trouble! Mary spilled red wine all over my dress, and it's completely ruined!" she wailed, her voice choked with sobs. Her mother, calm as ever, replied, "Honey, don't cry. I brought the dress your grandmother made. It's in the car. I'll bring it to you right away." Liza's heart sank at the mention of the dress she had previously rejected. She hesitated for a moment, filled with regret for her earlier rudeness, but in her desperate situation, she had no other option. Returning to the hall in her grandmother’s dress, Liza felt a mix of nervousness and hope. She worried that her friends would mock her choice, but as she walked in, all she heard were gasps of admiration. "Liza, you look stunning! Where did you get this dress?" one of her friends exclaimed. Another chimed in, "This dress suits you perfectly!" Surprised and touched, Liza realized the beauty of the dress her grandmother had lovingly crafted. She resolved to apologize to her grandmother sincerely when she got home, understanding that true value lies not in expensive designer labels, but in the love and effort put into a gift. 【答案】 Liza headed to the school exit and called her mother, crying uncontrollably. Soon her mother arrived at the school and gave her the package Pam had left for her. “Your grandmother left this for you, just in case,” her mother said gently. Liza’s tears slowed as she opened the package. Inside was the dress Pam had made, the one she had rejected so harshly. She smiled through her tears, feeling a wave of gratitude. “Grandma always thought of every possibility. It seems that she has saved me this time,” she said. Liza took the dress and went to the restroom to get changed. Returning to the hall in her grandmother’s dress, Liza felt a mix of nervousness and hope. As she stepped inside, the room fell silent for a moment. Everyone turned to look at her, their eyes widening in surprise. “Wow, Liza, where did you get that dress?”Mary exclaimed. “It’s beautiful!” another classmate added. Liza’s heart swelled with pride and joy as boys and girls praised her dress. “My grandmother made it for me,” she said proudly. After the prom, Liza couldn’t wait to see her grandmother to apologize and thank her for everything. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$