2025届高考英语读后续写专题之个人成长类--从棉布袋到卢浮宫：绘画梦想照进现实 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。     To anyone else, it was just a simple white cotton bag, but to me, it was a canvas for my latest masterpiece. I laid it flat on the six-foot-long wooden table in my kitchen. With one hand I held down a comer of the bag and with the other dipped my brush in the paint and touched it to the canvas, and slowly an image took shape. Painting was hard, but I enjoyed it. And my friends and family loved the bags. "I get tons of praise for mine," my mother told me.     Only getting those paintings appreciated was quite not the honor I'd dreamed of when I first picked up a paintbrush as a kid. I used to aim higher. I wanted my work to appear in the Louvre Museum in Paris, right next to the Mona Lisa. But even then, I knew what a wild dream it was. My parents encouraged my interest, and paid for art lessons. In high school, I joined an art club, and showed my work along with other local artists in an exhibition. I started college and majored in fine art, took classes in drawing and design. But the farthest I ever traveled to was New York City. The Louvre might as well have been on another planet. Then things changed. I met and fell in love with Charlie. After we got married, I took a break from art.      When I finally picked up a brush, I was rusty and lost my inspiration. I tried a landscape but it was flat. Things in the foreground were the same size as in the background. I'd lost the ability. I was frustrated and threw down my brush. Maybe I'd never really had any talent at all. Charlie turned me around. "You have a talent," he told me. "Keep painting." 注意： 1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右； 2.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好； Paragraph 1: One day, talking through town, I found some white cotton bags in a store window. Paragraph 2: The next month, Charlie and I visited the Louvre Museum in Paris. 文章大意 文章讲述了 “我” 对绘画的热爱与追求。小时候 “我” 梦想作品能在巴黎卢浮宫与《蒙娜丽莎》一同展出，父母支持 “我” 学艺术，高中时 “我” 参加艺术俱乐部并参展，大学还主修美术。然而，最远只去过纽约的 “我”，卢浮宫对 “我” 来说遥不可及。后来 “我” 遇到查理并结婚，暂时中断绘画。重拾画笔时，“我” 生疏且失去灵感，感到挫败，是查理鼓励 “我” 坚持。 故事山分析 · 开端：“我” 从小热爱绘画，梦想作品进卢浮宫，父母支持，参加艺术活动。 · 发展：大学主修美术，但没去过卢浮宫，婚后中断绘画。 · 高潮：重拾画笔后失去灵感，感到挫败。 · 结局（待续写）：通过绘画棉布袋重获信心，最终前往卢浮宫，收获感悟。 伏笔及在续写中的回应 1. 梦想作品在卢浮宫展出：续写中会实现去卢浮宫，可能会带去棉布袋作品，与梦想呼应。 2. 父母鼓励学艺术：暗示 “我” 对艺术的热爱会持续，在续写中继续坚持绘画。 3. 婚后中断绘画：与后来重拾画笔形成对比，体现绘画在 “我” 生活中的起伏。 4. 查理鼓励坚持绘画：促使 “我” 在发现棉布袋后继续创作，是后续故事发展的动力。 5. 失去绘画灵感与能力：与之后在棉布袋绘画中找回信心和灵感形成反差。 续写要点 · 第一段：发现棉布袋后，对其产生兴趣，开始创作，创作过程中找回灵感与自信，作品完成后获得成就感。 · 第二段：前往卢浮宫，在卢浮宫看到经典画作，同时展示棉布袋作品，收获他人认可，感悟梦想实现与绘画的意义。 情感线 发现棉布袋时重拾希望，绘画过程中从怀疑到自信，前往卢浮宫时充满期待，在卢浮宫得到认可后，内心满是喜悦与对绘画新的感悟，从最初的迷茫挫败走向坚定热爱。 故事线 1. “我” 发现棉布袋。 2. “我” 决定在棉布袋上绘画。 3. “我” 在绘画中找回灵感和自信。 4. “我” 和查理前往卢浮宫。 5. “我” 在卢浮宫展示棉布袋作品。 6. “我” 获得他人认可，感悟绘画意义。 主旨升华句 1. This journey from losing inspiration to achieving my dream in the Louvre taught me that true passion can never fade, and with perseverance, even the wildest dreams can come true.（从失去灵感，到在卢浮宫实现梦想，这段经历让我明白，真正的热爱永不褪色，只要坚持不懈，再狂野的梦想也能成真。） 2. Through the simple act of painting on cotton bags, I not only found my artistic self again but also realized that the beauty of art lies in the journey, not just the destination of grand exhibitions.（通过在棉布袋上绘画这一简单行为，我不仅找回了艺术的自我，还意识到艺术之美在于过程，而非仅仅是大型展览这样的目的地。） 3. In the Louvre, surrounded by masterpieces and the recognition of my cotton bag art, I understood that talent is nurtured by love and support, and every stroke of the brush is a step towards self - discovery.（在卢浮宫，被杰作环绕，同时我的棉布袋艺术得到认可，我明白了才华是由爱和支持滋养的，画笔的每一笔都是自我发现的一步。） 4. This experience reminded me that art is not just about creating beautiful things; it's about expressing our inner selves and sharing that expression with the world, no matter how unconventional the medium.（这段经历让我想起，艺术不仅仅是创造美的事物，更是表达内心并与世界分享这种表达，无论媒介多么不寻常。） 5. Standing in the Louvre with my painted cotton bags, I knew that the pursuit of art is a lifelong adventure, filled with challenges and surprises, and it is these experiences that make our creative journey truly meaningful.（带着我绘制的棉布袋站在卢浮宫，我知道艺术追求是一场终身的冒险，充满挑战和惊喜，正是这些经历让我们的创作之旅真正有意义。） 写作示范一 One day, walking through town, I found some white cotton bags in a store window. Something about them just called out to me. I bought a few and rushed home. I laid one on the table, picked up my brush, and started painting. At first, the strokes were hesitant, but as I got lost in the process, my confidence grew. I painted a beautiful floral pattern, and the colors came alive. It was like all my lost skills had returned. When I finished, I held it up, filled with a sense of achievement I hadn't felt in a long time. The next month, Charlie and I visited the Louvre Museum in Paris. As we walked through the grand halls, surrounded by world - famous artworks, I was in awe. I couldn't believe I was finally here. Then, I took out one of my painted cotton bags. A few passers - by noticed it and asked about my art. They were impressed and praised my work. In that moment, I realized that my dream wasn't just about being in the Louvre; it was about sharing my art with the world, and I had finally made it happen. 写作示范二 One day, walking through town, I found some white cotton bags in a store window. A spark of inspiration lit up inside me. I immediately purchased several bags and couldn't wait to start my new project. Back home, I set up my painting tools and carefully began to paint on the bags. I experimented with different themes and styles, and gradually, my old creativity came back. Each bag became a unique piece of art, and I was overjoyed to see my talent reawakening. The next month, Charlie and I visited the Louvre Museum in Paris. Entering the magnificent museum, I was filled with excitement. I carried one of my favorite painted bags with me. While we were admiring the masterpieces, a museum staff member noticed my bag. He asked if I would allow them to display it in a small corner of the museum for a short time. I was thrilled. Standing beside my bag in the Louvre, I felt that my artistic journey had come full circle, and I was grateful for every step that led me here. Possible Version Paragraph 1: One day, walking through town, I found some white cotton bags in a store window. What interesting canvases they could be! I bought a few and began painting on them. And since then everything had started to change. There was no shortage of inspiration as I held my brush. My mother sent some of my pieces to her fiends. She came home with the proudest smile and told me that they all liked them. Seeing others' appreciation on my art made me feel never frustrated. Paragraph 2: The next month, Charlie and I visited the Louvre Museum in Paris. Of course we took along my cotton bag. For two hours, we wandered in the museum. There was so much to see, including the Mona Lisa. But every few minutes, somebody stopped me. They asked me where they could buy that bag. I had to tell them it was my work. It may not be a "Mona Lisa", but that doesn't matter. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$