读后续写--击败内心的 “黑衣人”，踏上胜利跑道 讲义-山东省潍坊临朐第一中学2024-2025学年高二下学期开学考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was another competition day. A tall official was checking all the athletes. “Number Three. John Fisher.” John nodded while a ripple of goosebumps (一阵鸡皮疙瘩) shot up his backbone. He should be calm as he had trained pretty hard for the race. However, he had a headache and a sense of imbalance from his poor sleep the night before, Scenes of the last competition filled his head, when he had put in a good effort, doing what he thought was enough only to see another man beat him. The bitter taste of loss spread slowly in his mouth even now. Suddenly, John felt a “man” in black standing beside him, who looked quite familiar. He looked at John and sneered (讥笑), “Hey. You are not good enough. You’re going to fail like in the last competition!” How dare he say that? John angrily punched （拳打） him, who, however, disappeared into thin air. John remembered the early mornings when he was the first to arrive at the training ground, pushing himself through one more set of exercises each time. Determined not to let this negative voice affect him, he took a deep breath and looked ahead. “Now, everyone, follow me,” the official said and led the group into the arena (运动场). John looked over at the other competitors, each dressed in a similar uniform, well-trained and prepared. John knew he had a tough race ahead of him. The “man” appeared and sneered again “Good luck. You’re going to need it!” Ignoring the “man” and the competitors, John placed his fingers against the starting line and put his body in position. “What should I do first?” he wondered, All the strategies he had planned the night before were gone. He could feel the eye of the crowd on him and he wasn’t ready. Paragraph 1: Bang! John dashed out, but his foot almost slipped. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The “man” in black appeared and congratulated him, too. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 文章讲述了运动员约翰参加比赛的经历。比赛当天，约翰因前一晚睡眠不佳而头疼且感到失衡，还回忆起上一场比赛失利的场景，这让他心情低落。此时，一个身穿黑衣、似曾相识的 “人” 出现在他身边，不断讥笑他，称他会像上次比赛一样失败。约翰愤怒地挥拳，那人却消失了。进入运动场后，面对其他训练有素的竞争对手，约翰感到压力巨大，原本计划好的比赛策略也忘得一干二净。 故事山分析 · 开端：比赛日，约翰因睡眠问题状态不佳，还回忆起上次比赛失利，同时一个神秘的 “黑衣人” 出现并讥笑他。 · 发展：约翰努力不受 “黑衣人” 影响，进入运动场，看到强大的竞争对手，感到紧张且忘掉了比赛策略。 · 高潮：比赛开始，约翰起跑时差点滑倒，在比赛过程中克服困难。 · 结局：约翰成功完成比赛，“黑衣人” 出现祝贺他，他也从中获得成长感悟。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 1. 伏笔：约翰前一晚睡眠不佳，头疼且失衡。回应：在比赛中可能因身体状态不佳而遇到困难，但他努力克服，体现他的坚韧。 2. 伏笔：约翰回忆上一场比赛失利。回应：可能激励他在这场比赛中更加努力，不想再次品尝失败的滋味。 3. 伏笔：“黑衣人” 不断讥笑他。回应：在比赛中，“黑衣人” 的讥笑可能会再次出现干扰他，但他成功抵制干扰，专注比赛。 4. 伏笔：约翰忘掉比赛策略。回应：他需要在比赛中随机应变，展现他的应变能力。 5. 伏笔：看到其他强大的竞争对手。回应：他在比赛中可能会与对手激烈竞争，突出比赛的激烈程度。 续写要点 · 第一段：比赛开始，约翰起跑差点滑倒，之后在比赛中遇到各种困难，如体力不支、呼吸急促等，但他想起自己的努力训练和对胜利的渴望，不断给自己加油打气，努力跟上对手。 · 第二段：约翰冲过终点，取得好成绩，“黑衣人” 出现祝贺他，约翰意识到 “黑衣人” 是自己内心负面情绪的化身，他战胜了自己，明白了只要相信自己，克服内心的恐惧和消极，就能取得成功。 情感线 起初，约翰因身体不适、回忆失败和 “黑衣人” 讥笑而感到沮丧、愤怒和紧张。比赛中，他在困难面前感到焦虑，但通过自我激励变得坚定。最后，他成功后感到喜悦和自豪，同时获得了内心的成长，变得更加自信。 故事线 1. 约翰比赛日状态不佳，“黑衣人” 出现讥笑他。 2. 进入运动场，看到强大对手，忘掉比赛策略。 3. 比赛起跑差点滑倒，比赛中遇到困难。 4. 约翰努力克服困难，坚持比赛。 5. 约翰冲过终点，取得好成绩。 6. 约翰意识到 “黑衣人” 是内心负面情绪，获得成长。 主旨升华句 1. Believe in yourself and you can overcome any obstacle. 相信自己，你就能克服任何障碍。 2. The greatest opponent is not others, but the negative thoughts within ourselves. 最大的对手不是别人，而是我们内心的消极想法。 3. Victory lies not only in winning the race, but also in conquering one's own fears. 胜利不仅在于赢得比赛，还在于战胜自己的恐惧。 4. Success comes to those who can turn their inner doubts into motivation. 成功属于那些能将内心的疑虑转化为动力的人。 5. In the journey of life, it's our mental strength that determines the outcome of every challenge. 在人生的旅途中，是我们的精神力量决定了每一次挑战的结果。 写作示范 示范一 Paragraph 1: Bang! John dashed out, but his foot almost slipped. He quickly regained his balance and sped up, his heart pounding like a drum. As the race went on, his legs began to feel heavy, and his breath grew ragged. The other competitors were pulling ahead, and he could hear the “man” in black laughing in his ear, “You see? You're going to lose again!” But John refused to give up. He thought of all the early - morning training sessions, the pain he endured, and his burning desire for victory. “No, I won't let you beat me,” he muttered to himself. Summoning all his strength, he pushed forward, step by step. Paragraph 2: The “man” in black appeared and congratulated him, too. “You did it! You're amazing!” the “man” said. John looked at him, finally realizing that the “man” was just a reflection of his own self - doubt. “Yes, I did it. And I did it by believing in myself,” John replied with a smile. He knew that this victory was not just about winning the race, but about conquering his inner fears. From that day on, whenever he faced challenges, he would remember this experience and the power of self - belief. 示范二 Paragraph 1: Bang! John dashed out, but his foot almost slipped. Panic briefly flashed through his mind, but he quickly composed himself. He pushed his legs harder, trying to catch up with the leading group. However, his headache seemed to get worse, and his vision became a bit blurry. Just then, the “man” in black shouted, “You're not fit for this race! Give up!” John gritted his teeth. “I've trained too hard for this. I won't let a voice in my head stop me,” he thought. He focused on the finish line, ignoring the pain and the mocking voice, and gradually increased his speed. Paragraph 2: The “man” in black appeared and congratulated him, too. “Well done! You proved me wrong,” the “man” said. John looked at the “man” and said, “You were always there to test me, but I'm stronger now. I know that as long as I stay true to myself and keep working hard, I can achieve anything.” He realized that the challenges he faced during the race were not just physical, but also mental. This victory taught him that the key to success was to face his fears head - on and never lose faith in himself. 参考答案 Paragraph 1: Bang! John dashed out, but his foot almost slipped. He quickly regained his balance, his heart pounding in his chest. The adrenaline surged through him, pushing him forward. He focused on the track ahead, blocking out the cheers and jeers of the crowd. His muscles worked in perfect harmony, each stride bringing him closer to the finish line. As he rounded the final bend, he saw the leaders just ahead. With a final burst of speed, he sprinted towards them, his lungs burning and his legs screaming in protest. But he didn’t let up, his determination propelling him forward. To his surprise, he crossed the finish line in second place, just inches behind the winner. Paragraph 2: The “man” in black appeared and congratulated him, too. “Well done, John,” he said, his tone no longer sneering but genuinely impressed. “You’ve come a long way. Remember, it’s not about winning every time, it’s about pushing yourself to be better, about facing your fears and rising above them.” John stared at the “man”, realizing he was a figment of his own doubts and insecurities. “Thanks,” he muttered, feeling a sense of relief wash over him. He turned to his coach and teammates, who were cheering him on. For the first time, he felt like he truly belonged. He knew he still had a lot to learn and many more races to run, but today, he had proven to himself that he could compete with the best. And that, he thought, was victory enough. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$