读后续写--打破 “女巫” 传言，拥抱善意暖阳 讲义-湖南省常德市津市市第一中学2024-2025学年高三下学期开学考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “I don’t get it, Pete,” Janet said to her cousin. “Why do you fish at Murphy’s pond if old Mrs. Murphy is a witch (女巫)?” “The fishing’s great… And the old Murphy house is over a hill behind the pond,” Pete replied. “We’ll be okay… As long as we stay away from the house,” he continued in a low voice. “They say kids who go into that house are never seen again!” After they got to the pond, witches were forgotten. Pete sat on the old dock and threw out his line. Suddenly Janet saw something shining in the water and stepped forward for a closer look. The rotting (腐朽的) wood of the dock broke under her. “H-e-l-l-p!” She screamed as she dropped down into the dark, cold water. Pete jumped in to help her. “Quiet down!” He said out of breath as they got to the rocky shore. “You’re not hurt. If you keep complaining, you’ll wake the witch!” Then he screamed. “OUCH-H-H!” and lifted his foot. There was a deep cut on the bottom of his foot from a sharp rock! “Oh, Pete, you’re hurt!” Janet cried. “I’ll go for…” But before she could say Help, she saw an old woman coming toward them. Without a word, the woman picked up Pete and carried him up the hill. A cold, wet, and confused Janet followed. She was frightened but had a strange feeling that the old woman meant no harm. At the top of the hill, the woman walked to ward an old house. “Oh, p-p-please, Ma’am,” a frightened Pete begged, “Please don’t go there. That’s where the w-w-witch lives!” “That is my home, young man,” the woman said softly, “Do not be afraid.” At the front door, she said to Janet, “Please open the door.” Janet did, and the three went inside. Mrs. Murphy gently put Pete on a couch (睡椅), then disappeared into another room. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Mrs. Murphy returned with two warm blankets. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mrs. Murphy smiled happily. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 珍妮特和表哥皮特去墨菲池塘钓鱼，珍妮特听闻墨菲老夫人是女巫，对在这钓鱼心存疑虑，但皮特表示只要远离老夫人的房子就没事。到池塘后，珍妮特因查看水中发光物，踩破腐朽的码头木板掉进水里，皮特下水救她。上岸时，皮特的脚被锋利的石头割伤。这时，墨菲老夫人出现，二话不说抱起皮特朝山上的房子走去，珍妮特虽害怕但也跟了上去。到了房子前，皮特惊恐地求饶，可老夫人称那是自己家，并让珍妮特开门，三人一同进了屋。 故事山分析 · 开端：珍妮特和皮特在墨菲池塘钓鱼，珍妮特质疑在这钓的原因，因为传说墨菲老夫人是女巫，皮特表示只要远离她家就没事。 · 发展：珍妮特落水，皮特救她，上岸时皮特受伤，墨菲老夫人出现并将他们带回自己家。 · 高潮：续写部分，老夫人帮助皮特处理伤口，消除两人的恐惧和误解。 · 结局：两人发现老夫人并非女巫，消除偏见，可能与老夫人建立新的友好关系。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 1. 伏笔：传说墨菲老夫人是女巫，孩子进她家就失踪 。回应：在续写中，老夫人通过行动证明自己不是女巫，比如温柔照顾皮特，打消孩子们的恐惧。 2. 伏笔：皮特脚受伤 。回应：老夫人为皮特处理伤口，展现她的善良，改变孩子们对她的看法。 3. 伏笔：珍妮特虽害怕但感觉老夫人无恶意 。回应：随着故事发展，老夫人的行为证实珍妮特的感觉，她确实是友善的。 4. 伏笔：孩子们对老夫人房子的恐惧 。回应：进入房子后，老夫人的种种举动让孩子们逐渐克服恐惧，接受老夫人。 5. 伏笔：皮特和珍妮特对女巫的迷信 。回应：通过与老夫人的接触，两人破除迷信，认识到不能仅凭传言判断他人。 续写要点 · 第一段：老夫人拿着毯子回来，给孩子们盖上保暖，然后去拿医药箱为皮特处理伤口。在处理过程中，老夫人轻声安慰他们，让他们不要害怕。 · 第二段：老夫人处理好伤口后，微笑着和孩子们交流，解释关于自己是女巫的传言，告诉他们那些都是假的。孩子们意识到自己的误解，感到不好意思，同时也对老夫人的善良表示感激，最后愉快地和老夫人告别。 情感线 起初，孩子们对墨菲老夫人充满恐惧和怀疑，认为她是女巫。在老夫人帮助他们，为皮特处理伤口并解释后，孩子们的恐惧逐渐消除，转为对老夫人的感激，最后化解了误解，情感变得友好。 故事 1. 珍妮特和皮特去墨菲池塘钓鱼，担心女巫。 2. 珍妮特落水，皮特救她受伤。 3. 墨菲老夫人出现带他们回自己家。 4. 老夫人拿毯子给孩子们，为皮特处理伤口。 5. 老夫人解释传言，消除孩子们误解。 6. 孩子们感激老夫人，愉快告别。 主旨升华句 1. Appearances can be deceiving, and we should never judge others based on rumors. 外表可能具有欺骗性，我们绝不应根据传言来评判他人。 2. Kindness has the power to break down barriers of fear and misunderstanding. 善良有打破恐惧和误解障碍的力量。 3. Don't let superstition blind you to the truth; always be open - minded to new experiences. 不要让迷信蒙蔽你对真相的认知，始终保持开放的心态去接受新的经历。 4. True understanding comes from getting to know people, not from believing in unfounded stories. 真正的理解源于去了解他人，而非相信毫无根据的故事。 5. A simple act of kindness can change someone's perception and bring warmth to their hearts. 一个简单的善举可以改变一个人的看法，给他们的心灵带来温暖。 写作示范 示范一 Mrs. Murphy returned with two warm blankets. She wrapped them gently around Pete and Janet, who were still shivering from the cold water. Then, she fetched a first - aid kit and carefully cleaned the cut on Pete's foot. As she worked, she spoke in a soft, soothing voice, “Don't worry, my dears. It's just a little cut. It will be better soon.” Pete and Janet, still a bit scared, stared at her with wide eyes. They couldn't believe that the “witch” was being so kind. Mrs. Murphy smiled happily. “I know what you two were thinking. You thought I was a witch, right?” She chuckled. “Those are just silly rumors. I've lived here alone for a long time, and I'm just an old woman who loves peace. I'm sorry if I scared you before.” Pete and Janet felt a bit embarrassed. They realized how wrong they had been. They thanked Mrs. Murphy sincerely and left her house with a new understanding. From then on, they knew not to judge others by rumors. 示范二 Mrs. Murphy returned with two warm blankets. She placed them tenderly on the shivering children, then sat down beside Pete. Taking out some medical supplies, she started to treat his wound carefully. “This might sting a little, but it will help you get better,” she said softly. Janet and Pete watched in silence, their fear gradually fading away as they saw the old woman's gentle actions. Mrs. Murphy smiled happily. “You kids don't need to be afraid of me. I'm not a witch. I just like to live quietly by myself. I've seen you two fishing at the pond before. I was worried when I saw you in trouble, so I came to help.” Pete and Janet were ashamed of their previous thoughts. They apologized to Mrs. Murphy and thanked her for her kindness. Before they left, they even promised to visit her again. This experience taught them a valuable lesson about not believing in rumors easily. 参考答案 Mrs. Murphy brought two warm blankets. She wrapped one around Pete, saying his foot would be okay. Janet, still wet and confused, used the other blanket. Mrs. Murphy’s home felt strangely comforting, with a cozy fireplace calming their nerves. As Mrs. Murphy cared for Pete, she talked about the pond’s ancient magic, how it could heal and protect. Janet was amazed at the kindness of the woman she thought was a witch. Mrs. Murphy’s home, not scary, was a safe place of wisdom and care. Mrs. Murphy smiled happily. “You two are safe now. The pond’s magic has done wonders for both of you,” she said, her eyes showing genuine concern. Janet and Pete, once wary of Mrs. Murphy, now felt deeply thankful for the unexpected help they got from the supposed witch. Mrs. Murphy continued to share stories of the pond’s magical history, creating a picture of wonder that erased any remaining doubts. The kindness in her voice and the wisdom in her words showed her as a protector, not a “witch”. The scared pair embraced this newfound understanding with open hearts. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$