读后续写：寻找Mattie故事 讲义-广东省六校2024-2025学年高三下学期二月联考英语试卷

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I saw the dog for the first time outside Uncle Dan’s barn, he was all dusty and skinny, hardly worth a second glance. But my five-year-old sister Mattie reached out to pet him and said gently, “What a pretty dog!” “Keep away from that stray dog (流浪狗). You know how your dad feels about strays.” Uncle Dan reminded her. “Don’t call him stray dog.” Mattie protested, throwing her arms around his neck. The dog licked her face and put a paw on her shoulder. To Mattie, he was Pretty Dog. To the rest of us, he was Stray Dog. We would chase him away whenever we saw him. Of course, Mattie did everything she could to make sure of his coming back to her. She talked to him, played with him, and fed him. He responded by following her like a shadow when no one else was around. One day, when helping Uncle Dan mend the barn gate, Mattie taught Stray Dog to fetch the tools. He was so smart that before you knew it, he could pick out a hammer, saw, or screwdriver (螺丝刀). “That dog had plenty of smarts!” said Uncle Dan. Then we heard a truck rumbling up the drive and Dad jumped out. “How many times do I have to tell you to stay away from Stray Dog?” he growled (怒吼). Actually, deep down my dad had a kind heart. But he had no interest in dogs, especially stray ones. But when winter came, something changed his mind as well as ours. One cold day, Dad set off to go ice fishing. Matti had begged to go, but Dad said it was too cold outside. When Dad came home hours later, Matti was however nowhere to be seen. Mom turned to Dad with troubled eyes, “Maybe she went after you.” “She never came to the lake.” Worry was written on Dad’s face. “Come on, we’ve got to find her.” He dashed out desperately. Frightened, I immediately got Uncle Dan to help. 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Minutes of search turned into hours as darkness fell. Uncle Dan explained how he found Matti by following the dog’s bark. 寻找Mattie故事读后续写 续写要点 第一段：众人在冰天雪地中焦急地寻找 Mattie，内心充满担忧与恐惧。Stray Dog 此时发挥关键作用，凭借敏锐的嗅觉和对 Mattie 的熟悉，在前面奋力奔跑带路。众人跟着它，在艰难的雪地中前行，希望能尽快找到 Mattie。 第二段：最终，在一处偏僻的雪地里，众人找到了 Mattie。她被冻得瑟瑟发抖，情况危急。Stray Dog 的及时带路让他们得以迅速赶到。父亲看到 Mattie 平安，先是惊喜与欣慰，随后对 Stray Dog 充满感激与愧疚。从此，Stray Dog 正式成为家庭一员，名字也变成了 Hero，大家对它的态度从驱赶变为接纳与喜爱。 情感线 寻找 Mattie 时，众人的情感从最初的焦急逐渐转为恐惧，害怕她遭遇不测。看到 Stray Dog 主动带路，大家心中燃起一丝希望。找到 Mattie 的那一刻，父亲的情感从担忧瞬间转为惊喜与欣慰，同时对之前驱赶 Stray Dog 感到愧疚。而 Mattie 对 Stray Dog 一直充满喜爱，这次经历让其他人也对 Stray Dog 的情感从嫌弃变为接纳与感激，最终大家都对它充满了爱。 故事线 父亲回家后发现 Mattie 不见，众人得知她可能去追父亲，于是开始四处寻找。 众人在雪地中艰难前行，呼喊 Mattie 的名字，内心十分焦急。 Stray Dog 突然出现，朝着一个方向狂奔，众人跟在它后面。 众人在一处雪地里找到了 Mattie，她被冻得十分虚弱。 父亲赶紧将 Mattie 裹进大衣，看到她平安无事，心中满是欣慰。 父亲看着 Stray Dog，心中充满感激，决定让它成为家庭的一员，Stray Dog 从此有了新名字 Hero，也有了温暖的家。 主旨升华句 It dawned on us that a dog's loyalty and love could transcend our initial prejudices, and it was this very loyalty that saved Mattie. （我们逐渐意识到，狗的忠诚和爱能够超越我们最初的偏见，而正是这份忠诚拯救了玛蒂。） What truly matters is not the origin of a being, but the kindness and help it brings when we are in need. （真正重要的不是一个生命的出身，而是当我们身处困境时，它所给予的善意和帮助。） From this experience, we learned that sometimes, the most unexpected allies can turn out to be our greatest saviors. （从这次经历中我们学到，有时候，最意想不到的伙伴可能会成为我们最伟大的救星。） It was not the breed or status of the dog that made a difference; it was its unwavering dedication to Mattie that changed our lives. （改变局面的并非狗的品种或地位，而是它对玛蒂坚定不移的守护，这改变了我们的生活。） This incident taught us that love and gratitude can bridge the gap between humans and animals, creating a harmonious and warm bond. （这次事件教会我们，爱与感恩能够跨越人类与动物之间的鸿沟，建立起和谐而温暖的联系。） 写作示范一 We searched everywhere, calling Mattie's name. The wind was icy, and the snow on the ground made walking difficult. Stray Dog, who had been following us, suddenly barked loudly and sprinted ahead. We had no idea where he was going, but we chased after him. The snow - covered landscape seemed endless, and our hope was fading. However, Stray Dog didn't stop. He kept running, his tail wagging, as if he knew exactly where Mattie was. Finally, we found Mattie in a small, snow - covered clearing. She was shivering, her lips blue. Dad rushed to Mattie, wrapping her in his coat. "Thank goodness we found you," he said, his voice shaking. Then he looked at Stray Dog, his eyes full of gratitude. "You're a hero, boy," he said softly. From that day on, Stray Dog had a new name, Hero, and a permanent place in our home. We all learned that a dog's loyalty is unwavering, and it can bring unexpected warmth and hope. 写作示范二 In the biting cold, we frantically searched for Mattie, our hearts pounding with fear. The snow - covered fields seemed to stretch forever, and the howling wind drowned out our cries. Stray Dog, who had been by our side, suddenly took off. His ears were perked up, and his nose was close to the ground as he ran with determination. We followed him, our only hope that he could lead us to Mattie. To our relief, we saw Mattie huddled under a tree, her body trembling. Stray Dog had found her. Dad scooped Mattie up in his arms, his eyes filled with tears of joy. He looked at Stray Dog and said, "You saved her. I'm sorry for how I treated you before." From then on, Stray Dog, now named Hero, became an important part of our family. This experience taught us that kindness and loyalty can break down any barrier, and sometimes, the most unlikely heroes are right by our side. 参考答案 Minutes of search turned into hours as darkness fell. The icy wind howled, cutting our faces like a sharp knife. Dad and Mom called out Mattie’s name again and again, their voice trembling and growing hoarse. With flashlights in hand, we searched through the fields and near the woods, but there was no trace of her. Every time we called, “Matti, where are you?” and no answer came, I felt as if a fist were squeezing my heart. With every second ticking by, our hearts sank lower and lower with fear and worry. We were on the verge of breaking down when we heard an excited cry, “I’ve found her!” It was Uncle Dan carrying Mattie in his arms, with Stray Dog trotting along. Relief flooded through as we hugged Matti, who finally returned safe and sound. Uncle Dan explained how he found Matti by following the dog’s bark. “He kept barking, leading me straight to her,” Uncle Dan said, patting Stray Dog on the head. He told us he found Matti curled up asleep under the tree, the dog wrapping around her to keep her warm. Mom was all tears, covering Matti in a blanket. “He stayed with me the whole time.” Matti uttered affectionately. Struck by the words, Dad knelt down, reaching out to pet him. “Good Dog, well done!” From that day forward, he earned his place in our family, no longer a stray but a hero and a cherished family member. Dad even built him a cozy kennel in the backyard. Watching him follow Dad around days later, I smiled, knowing that his unwavering loyalty had won our heart. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$