读后续写对母亲误解的故事 讲义-河南省南阳市第一中学校2024-2025学年高一上学期期中模拟考试英语试题

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Alisa who had stayed at home all her life to look after her three children lost her husband in a car accident, so she had to step out and earn money to make ends meet. With zero work experience and no professional degree, her chances of getting hired for a well-paid job were next to zero. One day, after dropping her children at school, Alisa spotted a construction site. “I think I can work here,” she thought and approached the manager. “Hi, are you hiring?” she asked. “Yes, we are,” the manager looked at Alisa from head to toe. “Are you sure you can work here? This job requires a lot of hard work.” “I’m ready for it,” she told the manager and signed a contract to work a 12-hour shift. However, Alisa kept her new job a secret from her children. She thought they would feel embarrassed after learning their mother worked at a construction site. Every morning, after dropping her children to school, she would go to the construction site and work until her shift ended. She would pick up heavy bricks on her shoulder to transport them from one part of the site to the other. One evening, Alisa’s son, David, told her about an upcoming contest in school that required mothers to participate. In the competition, students will wear blindfolds and have to recognize their mothers without looking at them. “That sounds like such a cool event, David!” Alisa said excitedly, “I can’t wait for it!” “I won’t go there with you, mom,” David replied. “But why?” What her son said next was something Alisa wasn’t prepared to hear. “Mom, I would have to touch your hands to recognize you, and everyone would look at them,” David explained. “Your hands are so ugly. They’re so hard and rough,” he added. “I will feel so embarrassed when my classmates look at your hands,” the boy said. “I won’t attend the event.” Alisa felt terrible but couldn’t say anything in her defense. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, David was walking home when something unexpected caught his attention. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ On his way back home, he kept thinking about how he would apologize to his mother. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 对母亲误解的故事续写 续写要点 第一段：David 偶然看到母亲在工地工作的场景，看到母亲艰辛劳作，意识到自己对母亲的误解。内心受到极大触动，开始反思自己之前嫌弃母亲手粗糙的行为。 第二段：David 怀着愧疚回家，鼓起勇气向母亲道歉，表达自己的悔恨与对母亲的爱。母亲感动落泪，母子相拥。此后 David 不再因母亲的工作而感到羞愧，而是为母亲的坚韧和付出感到骄傲。 情感线 起初 David 因母亲粗糙的手而嫌弃，情感上对母亲有排斥。当看到母亲在工地辛苦工作，他内心从震惊转为愧疚和自责。回家后向母亲道歉，情感转变为理解与深深的爱，最后母子关系更加紧密，David 对母亲充满敬重。 故事线 David 放学途中意外看到母亲在工地艰难搬运砖块，这是他第一次知晓母亲工作的真相。 看到母亲疲惫的身影和辛苦的劳作，David 想起自己对母亲说过的伤人话语，内心开始自责。 David 怀着复杂心情回家，一路上思考如何向母亲道歉，内心充满忐忑。 回到家后，David 鼓起勇气向母亲坦诚自己的错误，说出内心的感受。 母亲听到儿子的道歉，感动得热泪盈眶，母子俩相拥而泣，化解了之前的矛盾。 经历此事后，David 彻底改变了对母亲的看法，不再因母亲的工作和双手而感到尴尬，反而在生活中更加关心母亲，以母亲为傲。 主旨升华句 True love is not about appearance or social status, but understanding and appreciating the sacrifices one makes for the family.（真爱无关外表或社会地位，而是理解和感激一个人为家庭所做的牺牲。） The hardships a mother endures for her children are the silent proof of her boundless love, which should be cherished and respected.（母亲为孩子承受的艰辛是她无尽爱意的无声证明，这份爱应被珍视和尊重。） A child's realization of a mother's efforts can bridge the generation gap and strengthen the family bond, bringing about a deeper sense of love and gratitude.（孩子对母亲付出的理解能够跨越代沟，强化家庭纽带，带来更深层次的爱与感恩。） In the face of a mother's selfless dedication, our judgment based on trivial things fades, and we should learn to see the beauty in her hard - working hands and loving heart.（面对母亲无私的奉献，我们基于琐事的评判显得微不足道，我们应学会看到她勤劳双手和慈爱心中的美。） A mother's love, often expressed through arduous toil, has the power to transform a child's perspective, leading to a more mature and loving relationship within the family.（母亲的爱，常通过艰苦劳作来表达，有力量改变孩子的看法，在家庭中促成更成熟、更有爱的关系。） 写作示范一 A few weeks later, David was walking home when something unexpected caught his attention. As he passed by the construction site, he saw a familiar figure. It was his mother, struggling to carry a heavy load of bricks. Her face was red with exertion, and sweat dripped down her forehead. David was stunned. He had no idea his mother had been working such a tough job. He thought about his unkind words and felt a sharp pang of guilt. His eyes filled with tears as he realized how selfish he had been. On his way back home, he kept thinking about how he would apologize to his mother. When he arrived home, his mother was in the kitchen. With a lump in his throat, David walked up to her and said, "Mom, I saw you at the construction site today. I'm so sorry for what I said about your hands. I know now how hard you work for us. You're the best mom in the world." Alisa was surprised but extremely touched. She hugged David tightly, and tears of joy rolled down her cheeks. From then on, David was proud of his mother and never felt embarrassed again. 写作示范二 A few weeks later, David was walking home when something unexpected caught his attention. Out of the corner of his eye, he spotted his mother at the construction site. She was bending over, picking up large pieces of lumber with her rough hands. The sight made his heart ache. He remembered how he had complained about her hands, not knowing the back - breaking labor she endured for their family. Shame filled him as he watched her struggling to keep up with the work. On his way back home, he kept thinking about how he would apologize to his mother. As soon as he entered the house, he found his mother sitting on the couch, looking exhausted. Gathering his courage, David went up to her and said, "Mom, I was wrong. I saw you working so hard today. Your hands are beautiful because they work so hard for me. I love you." Alisa was taken aback by his words. She pulled him into her arms and said, "It's okay, dear. I'm just glad you understand now." From that day forward, David's attitude towards his mother changed completely, and their relationship grew even stronger. 【答案】参考范文 Para.1 A few weeks later, David was walking home when something unexpected caught his attention. His gaze was fixed on a familiar figure laboring in the distance. It was his mother, Alisa, working at the construction site he had never known about. (解释什么吸引了他的注意力) She was lifting heavy bricks onto her shoulder, with her hands hard and rough from the constant labor. (引用阅读文本中描述妈妈工地搬砖的动作，形成照应。手的描述与阅读文本信息也形成照应) David stood there, shocked. (神态描写) He had never imagined his mother working in such conditions. The sight of her hardworking figure made him feel a mix of shame, regret, and even admiration. (心理描写) He realized how foolish he had been, thinking only of his own embarrassment. (反思，即成长。为下文首句做铺垫) Para.2 On his way back home, he kept thinking about how he would apologize to his mother. He understood that his mother’s hands, though hard and rough, were an evidence to her sacrifice and love. (反思，理解妈妈) When his mother reaching home, he walked straight to Alisa and hugged her tightly. (构建动作链) “Tears in his eyes,” he said, “I was wrong to be ashamed of you. You’re the bravest and strongest person I know.” (道歉 神态+语言) Alisa, surprised at first, smiled warmly and hugged him back. “It’s okay, David,” she said. “I’m proud of you for understanding.” (使用动作链描写妈妈听到道歉后的反应，动作+神态+语言) That evening, David shared his mother’s story with his siblings, and they decided to support Alisa in whatever she did, for she was their hero and their pride. (从情感升华，David 的成长和成熟) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$