内容正文:
写作
假定你是李华,你正在做一个问卷调查,以了解中英高中生在未来大学专业选择上的差异。请你用英文给英国好友Jim写封邮件,内容包括:
1.问卷内容;
2.请求答卷并转发。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
邀请Jim参与问卷的邮件
写作提纲
第一段:以友好问候开启邮件,迅速表明写信目的,即正在进行关于中英高中生未来大学专业选择差异的问卷调查,引发对方兴趣,为后续内容铺垫。
第二段:详细阐述问卷内容,包括学生喜爱的专业、影响专业选择的因素以及职业期望等方面,让对方对问卷有清晰认知,感受到问卷的合理性与重要性。
第三段:诚恳请求对方抽出时间填写问卷,并强调其回答的价值。进一步提出希望对方帮忙将问卷转发给更多英国学生,以扩大调查范围,增强调查的全面性。
语言积累
conduct a survey:进行一项调查
differences in...:在…… 方面的差异
college major choices:大学专业选择
high school students:高中生
include questions about...:包括关于…… 的问题
favorite majors:喜爱的专业
factors influencing...:影响…… 的因素
career expectations:职业期望
spare a few minutes:抽出几分钟时间
forward to...:转发给……
佳句
I am writing to you with great enthusiasm as I am currently engaged in a significant survey that aims to explore the disparities in future college major choices between Chinese and British high school students.(我满怀热情地给你写信,因为我目前正在进行一项重要调查,旨在探究中英高中生在未来大学专业选择上的差异。)
The questionnaire, which is designed to be comprehensive and insightful, encompasses a range of questions regarding students' preferred majors, the elements that sway their decisions, and their anticipations for future careers.(这份精心设计、内容全面且富有洞察力的问卷,涵盖了一系列关于学生偏好专业、影响其决策的因素以及对未来职业期望的问题。)
Your participation in this survey would be extremely valuable, as your responses can provide unique perspectives and contribute to a more in - depth understanding of this topic.(你参与此次调查将具有极高的价值,因为你的回答能够提供独特的视角,有助于更深入地理解这一主题。)
I sincerely hope that you could take a few moments out of your busy schedule to fill out the questionnaire, as every piece of information you provide is crucial for the success of this research.(我真诚地希望你能在百忙之中抽出几分钟时间填写问卷,因为你提供的每一条信息对这项研究的成功都至关重要。)
Additionally, it would be a great help if you could forward this questionnaire to more British high school students, enabling us to gather a more extensive and diverse range of data.(此外,如果你能将这份问卷转发给更多英国高中生,那将是极大的帮助,这能让我们收集到更广泛、更多样化的数据。)
写作示范一(正式商务风)
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you in good spirits. I am currently conducting a research project focused on the differences in future college major choices between Chinese and British high school students.
The questionnaire is structured to cover aspects such as students' favorite majors, the underlying factors influencing their decisions, and their long - term career expectations. It is designed to provide a comprehensive understanding of the decision - making process.
I would highly appreciate it if you could spare some time to complete the questionnaire. Your input will be instrumental in enriching the data. Moreover, if possible, please forward it to your fellow British high school peers.
Thank you for your support.
Best regards,
Li Hua
写作示范二(亲切友好风)
Dear Jim,
Hey! How's it going? I'm super excited to tell you about a cool survey I'm doing. It's all about the differences in what Chinese and British high school students choose for their college majors in the future.
The questionnaire has questions about the majors we like, what makes us pick them, and what we hope to do in our jobs later. It's really interesting!
Could you do me a huge favor and fill it out? Your answers will mean a lot to me. And if you could pass it on to more of your friends in the UK, that would be amazing!
Thanks a ton!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
写作示范三(简洁明了风)
Dear Jim,
Hope you're doing great. I'm conducting a survey on the differences in future college major choices of Chinese and British high school students.
The questionnaire asks about favorite majors, influencing factors, and career expectations. It's simple but important.
Please spend a few minutes filling it out. Your answers are valuable. Also, forward it to more British students if you can.
Thanks!
Best regards,
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Jim,
I'm currently researching the differences in university major preferences between British and Chinese students. Could you please take a moment to fill out my questionnaire?
With the aim to identify the most popular majors both in China and the UK, explore the decision-making factors and guidance sources for students, the questionnaire includes the following three questions — What are your top three favorite majors? From which aspect of the major would you consider? Who would you turn to when choosing a major?
It'd be highly appreciated if you could forward the survey to your friends and fellow students. Thank you for considering my request and attached is the questionnaire. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well! Currently I am conducting a research to explore the differences between Chinese and British high school students regarding their future college major preferences.
To gather more data, I have designed a brief questionnaire that addresses various factors influencing major selection, identifies the most popular categories of college majors, and examines the cognitive differences of major choices among Chinese and British students.
I’m wondering if you could take a few minutes to complete this questionnaire. Additionally, I would greatly appreciate it if you could share this with your friends. Attached is the link to the questionnaire. Looking forward to your reply and thank you for your support.
Yours, Li Hua
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