2025年中考英语三轮复习 作文五步法 课件

作文五步法 Warming-up Let's enjoy a video. 习作点津 --题目解读 假设你是School Kids Times杂志的编辑，你收到了一名叫Helen的读者来信，她向你诉说了她的烦恼。请你针对她的问题，给她提几点建议。 要求：1.书写清晰、字迹工整； 2.行文流畅、语句通 顺。 习作点津－－素材分析 Dear Editor, My problem is about my pressure. First, I have too much homework to do every day. I don't get enough sleep. Second, I have too many after-school classes. So I don't have any free time to do things I like. Finally, My parents don't allow me to hang out with my friends during the weekends. I feel sad. What should I do? Helen What are Helen’s problems? 习作点津－思路引导 problems -too much homework -don't get enough sleep -too many after-school classes -don't allow me to hang out advice -You could listen to music to relax. -You should play sports every day and go to bed early. -You could ask your parents to stop some boring classes? -You should talk to your parents and let them understand you... Review key sentence structures 习作点津－连接整合 First,You could listen to music to relax. Second,You should play sports every day and go to bed early. Next,You could ask your parents to stop some classes. Finally,You should talk to your parents and let them understand you. Master writing skills 习作点精—润色习作 1,灵活多变的运用提建议的句型。 First, you should listen to music to relax. Second, why don't you play sports every day and go to bed early? You'd better ask your parents to stop some classes.Finally,how about talking to your parents and let them understand you? Master writing skills 2.适当的利用从句增添文章的魅力。 First, although you have too much homework ,you could listen to music to relax. You'd better play sports every day and go to bed earlier . Second, If you feel too tired , why don't you ask your parents to stop some classes? Finally, how about talk your parents so that let them understand you? Master writing skills 3. 借助形容词，副词，词组等锦上添花 First, although you have too much homework ,you could listen to music to relax. You'd better play sports every day and go to bed early to keep healthy and strong. Second, if you feel too tired ，why don't you ask your parents to stop some boring classes? Finally, how about communicating with your parents patiently so that you can have a better understanding? talk to let them understand you 耐心地 Master writing skills I am sorry to know that you have such worries. I will share with you some advice and I hope they can help you. 习作点津--首尾相加 First, although you have too much homework ,you could listen to music to relax. You'd better play sports every day and go to bed early to keep healthy and strong. Second, if you feel too tired , why don't you ask your parents to stop some boring classes? Finally, how about communicating with your parents patiently so that you can have a better understanding? I hope everything will be OK. Best wishes. beginning body ending Master the format of letter 习作点津－成文展示 Dear Helen, I am sorry to know that you have such worries. I will share some advice and then I hope they can help you. First, although you have too much homework ,you could listen to music to relax. You'd better play sports every day and go to bed early to keep healthy and strong. Second, if you feel too tired , why don't you ask your parents to stop some boring classes? Finally,how about communicating with your parents patiently so that you can have a better understanding? I hope everything will be OK. Best wishes. Yours truly, Editor Master the format of letter It's normal to meet some problems in our life. feel nervous 感到焦虑 don't get enough sleep or have free time 没有足够的睡眠或空闲时间 compete with classmates 和同学竞争 have a fight with your parents 和父母争吵 a lot of stress from parents 来自父母的压力 take so many after-school classes 上很多课外补习班 What do you usually do on weekends? Do you have after-school classes or activities? What are they? Task 1 What after-school activities do you and your classmates usually do? do homework use the Internet watch movies/TV play sports or exercise hang out with friends have after-school classes read books play computer games After-school activities How do you relax yourself ? Carefree Action 零压行动 Carefree lifestyle 零压生活方式 Why don't you play sports or exercise. 做运动 Why not watch movies. 看电影 You can use the Internet. 上网 You should hang out with friends. 和朋友出去逛 How to relax？give some advice 如何减压 ，你有什么好建议？ Other ways to relax: Task2 写作任务: 假如你是朱海，你的朋友李然给你发邮件说他最近很不开心。请你根据表格中的 提示，给李然回一封不少于80词的电子邮件， 并给他提一些建议。内容包括: Task 3 1 谋布局、写句子 第一段:问题或烦恼简单地叙述李然在信 中告诉你的烦恼。 I am sorry to know that you are unhappy these days. 知道你最近过得不开心我感到很遗憾。(听到别人情况不好都可用的万能句子) You say you and have 你有很多的家庭作业，几乎没有时间休息 You often because of 因为压力，你经常会感到紧张。 Now let me give you some advice.现在让我给你一些建议。(给建议类作文的万能句，在文中起着承上启下的过渡作用) 第二段:提建议，针对李然的烦恼给出相应的建议 First, you should and try to find 你应该制订好的学习计划,找到适合自己的学习方法。 Second, learn to why don’t you such as 学会放松自己，为什么不做一些自己感兴趣的事呢？比如听音乐，看电影等等。 Third,Why not ,they may 第三，为什么不花时间和朋友待一会，或许他们会使你感觉好些 What is more, why don’t you when you have some difficulties? They will try their best 当你遇到困难的时候为什么不找老师或是家人寻求帮助呢？他们会尽最大努力帮助你。 最后，表达祝愿 Hope Wish you 希望一切能顺利解决,希望你能越来越好。 2. 巧衔接 给朋友写回信以及表达建议时，一般用现在时，在表达期待和愿望时可以用祈使句等句式，有时也可用一般将来时。在人称的选择上，一般使用第二人称。全文紧紧围绕李然的烦恼展开，针对李然遇到的烦恼对他提出了改变自己和寻求父母、老师及朋友的帮助等几方面的建议。让文章看起来内容丰富，逻辑更加清楚，选择一些合适的连词，如and,because of,first,second等，可以使上下文形成一个语义整体。 3.成篇章 把全文连接成一篇语义通顺的文章，工整地眷写在作文纸上。 � Life doesn't get easier... but you get stronger. 生活不会由难而易……但你会愈发强大。 贴心WWhy don't you get stronger so that your life will get easier? Our writing time! Summary 1. You'd better+do sth. 2.You should/could+do sth. 3. How about/What about+doing sth. ? 4. Why don't you/Why not+do sth. ? 5.Let’s+do sth. hang out with friends watch movies Listen to music  1.根据导学案提示，完成自己的习作。 2.完成配套练习第四课时。 Homework Lavf52.104.0 $$