第18讲 书面表达：人际交往与志愿服务（人与社会）（讲义）-【上好课】2025年中考英语一轮复习讲练测（浙江专用）

第18讲 书面表达：人际交往与志愿服务 （人与社会） 目录 考情透视·目标导航 2 知识导图·思维引航 3 考点突破·考法探究 5 分层训练·巩固提升 7 基础巩固 7 能力提升 10 一、题型概述 “人际交往与志愿服务”是浙江中考英语书面表达的常见话题，题型主要包括： 书信或电子邮件：向他人介绍志愿服务经历或推荐社团活动。 倡议书：呼吁同学们积极参与志愿服务活动。 短文写作：描述个人在人际交往中的体验或志愿服务的收获。 演讲稿：围绕人际交往的重要性或志愿服务的意义发表演讲。 二、解题攻略 （一）审题 明确写作目的：是介绍个人经历、推荐活动，还是呼吁行动？ 确定内容要点：根据题目提示，列出需要涵盖的方面，如人际交往中的互助、志愿服务中的贡献等。 选择合适的文体和时态：书信和倡议书多用一般现在时，短文写作可结合一般现在时和一般过去时。 （二）构思与列提纲 引言：引出话题，表明写作意图。 正文： 人际交往：分享在学习或生活中与他人合作、互助的经历。 志愿服务：介绍参与的志愿活动、收获和意义。 使用连接词（如firstly, secondly, finally）使文章结构清晰。 结尾： 总结全文，强调人际交往和志愿服务的重要性。 发出呼吁或表达希望。 （三）写作技巧 使用多样化的词汇和句型：避免重复，使文章更丰富。 注意逻辑连贯性：通过连接词使文章逻辑清晰。 避免常见错误：注意拼写、语法和标点符号。 适当使用亮点句型：如定语从句、宾语从句、条件状语从句等，提升文章档次。 必备词汇 （一）人际交往 communicate（沟通） respect（尊重） teamwork（团队合作） help each other（互相帮助） friendship（友谊） trust（信任） （二）志愿服务 volunteer（志愿者） help（帮助） contribute（贡献） community service（社区服务） organize（组织） activity（活动） 亮点句型 （一）定语从句 I am a volunteer who often helps the elderly in the community.（我是一名经常在社区帮助老年人的志愿者）。 （二）宾语从句 I believe that helping others can bring us a lot of happiness.（我相信帮助他人能给我们带来很多快乐）。 （三）条件状语从句 If more people join us, we can make a bigger difference.（如果更多人加入我们，我们可以产生更大的影响）。 （四）倒装句 Only by working together can we achieve our goals.（只有通过合作，我们才能实现目标）。 （五）强调句 It is important for us to respect and help each other.（尊重和帮助彼此对我们很重要）。 （六）其它句 阐述重要性句型 “Good interpersonal communication is crucial in volunteer service, as it helps us work together more effectively and understand the needs of those we are helping.”（良好的人际交往在志愿服务中至关重要，因为它能帮助我们更有效地合作，并且了解我们所帮助对象的需求。） “Volunteer service provides a great platform for us to improve our interpersonal skills, which is beneficial for our future development in various aspects.”（志愿服务为我们提供了一个提升人际交往能力的绝佳平台，这对我们未来在各方面的发展都是有益的。） 描述经历句型 “When I volunteered at the local library, I had the chance to communicate with different people every day. I learned how to introduce books patiently and got along well with the library staff and readers.”（当我在当地图书馆做志愿者的时候，我每天都有机会和不同的人交流。我学会了如何耐心地介绍书籍，并且和图书馆工作人员以及读者相处得很好。） “I still remember the time when I joined a volunteer team to plant trees in the park. We cooperated with each other, shared tools and stories, and that experience really strengthened our friendship.”（我仍然记得我加入一个志愿者团队在公园里种树的时候。我们相互合作，分享工具和故事，那段经历真的加深了我们的友谊。） 表达观点句型 “In my opinion, volunteer service is not only about helping others but also about building good relationships with people from all walks of life through interpersonal communication.”（在我看来，志愿服务不仅仅是帮助他人，也是通过人际交往与各行各业的人建立良好关系。） “I firmly believe that the combination of volunteer service and excellent interpersonal skills can make a big difference in making our society a better place.”（我坚信志愿服务与出色的人际交往能力相结合，能在让我们的社会变得更美好方面发挥重大作用。） 提出建议句型 “If you want to improve your interpersonal communication skills while doing volunteer service, you'd better be an active listener and show your sincere care for others.”（如果你想在做志愿服务的同时提升自己的人际交往能力，你最好做一个积极的倾听者，并对他人展现出真诚的关怀。） “Schools should organize more volunteer activities to encourage students to communicate with others and develop their social skills in a practical way.”（学校应该组织更多的志愿服务活动，以鼓励学生与他人交流，并通过实际的方式培养他们的社会技能。）     【典例分析】 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael即将结束在中国的交换生课程。他打算为家人和好友准备一些中国礼物。请你写一封电子邮件，向他推荐三件有特色的礼物并说明推荐的理由(礼物可以从下表中选择或自行确定)。 Presents Reasons a silk scarf soft and comfortable; some Chinese paintings on it Chinese tea paper cuts pieces of Chinese clay art Chinese fans toy pandas … … 注意： (1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (2)词数：80-100。 Dear Michael, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 1．假设国外中学生Alex将来你校进行为期一周的交流学习，期间计划参加一项你校社团活动，体验中国文化。请你根据下表中的提示，写一篇英文短文，介绍其中一个社团内容。 Clubs Introduction Reasons The paper cutting club admire some masters’ great works, try paper cutting… a traditional art form of beauty; a symbol of wishes for good luck… The folk music club take musical instrument classes, attend a folk music concert… enjoy the beauty of Chinese folk music; a chance to bring the school and you closer… 注意：1. 请回复邮件中所提及的所有问题，可适当发挥使行文通顺、连贯。 2. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 3. 词数80-100左右。 Dear Alex, I’m so excited to hear from you. It’s my honor to introduce some                 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ping 2．某学习网站的“Student Helper”栏目收到两位学生的邮件。假如你是该网站志愿者李明，请就其中一封(任选)进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To: studenthelper@mail.com Subject: Need Help! Dear Helper, Chinese is too difficult for me! I really don’t know how to speak well. Could you please tell me how I can improve my Chinese speaking skills? Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! May To: studenthelper@mail.com Subject: What can I do? Dear Helper, I’m very worried about my physics these days. You know, it’s really hard for me. Could you please tell me how I can improve my physics? Looking forward to your reply. Eric Hi, ____________, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ming 1．假设你是学生李华，你的学校将组织一个新的社团，现有以下几种计划: ● Reading club ●Arts and sport club ●Hand-made workshop 请给校报的Mr. King写一封邮件，选择一个你最喜欢的社团，说明你选择的理由，并对社团后续开展活动提出至少两点建议。 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息； 2. 词数：80~100词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. King, I’m writing to give some advice about the new club our school will set up. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope my advice can be taken by you. Yours, Li Hua 2．假设你是学校Cultural China社团的成员李平，你将作为社团代表在校英语文化节上介绍你所在的社团。请按照以下提示，撰写一篇发言稿，介绍社团活动以及你的收获。 注意： （1）发言稿必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节； （2）活动至少三项； （3）词数：90-100。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 21 / 21 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 第18讲 书面表达：人际交往与志愿服务 （人与社会） 目录 考情透视·目标导航 2 知识导图·思维引航 3 考点突破·考法探究 5 分层训练·巩固提升 7 基础巩固 7 能力提升 10 一、题型概述 “人际交往与志愿服务”是浙江中考英语书面表达的常见话题，题型主要包括： 书信或电子邮件：向他人介绍志愿服务经历或推荐社团活动。 倡议书：呼吁同学们积极参与志愿服务活动。 短文写作：描述个人在人际交往中的体验或志愿服务的收获。 演讲稿：围绕人际交往的重要性或志愿服务的意义发表演讲。 二、解题攻略 （一）审题 明确写作目的：是介绍个人经历、推荐活动，还是呼吁行动？ 确定内容要点：根据题目提示，列出需要涵盖的方面，如人际交往中的互助、志愿服务中的贡献等。 选择合适的文体和时态：书信和倡议书多用一般现在时，短文写作可结合一般现在时和一般过去时。 （二）构思与列提纲 引言：引出话题，表明写作意图。 正文： 人际交往：分享在学习或生活中与他人合作、互助的经历。 志愿服务：介绍参与的志愿活动、收获和意义。 使用连接词（如firstly, secondly, finally）使文章结构清晰。 结尾： 总结全文，强调人际交往和志愿服务的重要性。 发出呼吁或表达希望。 （三）写作技巧 使用多样化的词汇和句型：避免重复，使文章更丰富。 注意逻辑连贯性：通过连接词使文章逻辑清晰。 避免常见错误：注意拼写、语法和标点符号。 适当使用亮点句型：如定语从句、宾语从句、条件状语从句等，提升文章档次。 必备词汇 （一）人际交往 communicate（沟通） respect（尊重） teamwork（团队合作） help each other（互相帮助） friendship（友谊） trust（信任） （二）志愿服务 volunteer（志愿者） help（帮助） contribute（贡献） community service（社区服务） organize（组织） activity（活动） 亮点句型 （一）定语从句 I am a volunteer who often helps the elderly in the community.（我是一名经常在社区帮助老年人的志愿者）。 （二）宾语从句 I believe that helping others can bring us a lot of happiness.（我相信帮助他人能给我们带来很多快乐）。 （三）条件状语从句 If more people join us, we can make a bigger difference.（如果更多人加入我们，我们可以产生更大的影响）。 （四）倒装句 Only by working together can we achieve our goals.（只有通过合作，我们才能实现目标）。 （五）强调句 It is important for us to respect and help each other.（尊重和帮助彼此对我们很重要）。 （六）其它句 阐述重要性句型 “Good interpersonal communication is crucial in volunteer service, as it helps us work together more effectively and understand the needs of those we are helping.”（良好的人际交往在志愿服务中至关重要，因为它能帮助我们更有效地合作，并且了解我们所帮助对象的需求。） “Volunteer service provides a great platform for us to improve our interpersonal skills, which is beneficial for our future development in various aspects.”（志愿服务为我们提供了一个提升人际交往能力的绝佳平台，这对我们未来在各方面的发展都是有益的。） 描述经历句型 “When I volunteered at the local library, I had the chance to communicate with different people every day. I learned how to introduce books patiently and got along well with the library staff and readers.”（当我在当地图书馆做志愿者的时候，我每天都有机会和不同的人交流。我学会了如何耐心地介绍书籍，并且和图书馆工作人员以及读者相处得很好。） “I still remember the time when I joined a volunteer team to plant trees in the park. We cooperated with each other, shared tools and stories, and that experience really strengthened our friendship.”（我仍然记得我加入一个志愿者团队在公园里种树的时候。我们相互合作，分享工具和故事，那段经历真的加深了我们的友谊。） 表达观点句型 “In my opinion, volunteer service is not only about helping others but also about building good relationships with people from all walks of life through interpersonal communication.”（在我看来，志愿服务不仅仅是帮助他人，也是通过人际交往与各行各业的人建立良好关系。） “I firmly believe that the combination of volunteer service and excellent interpersonal skills can make a big difference in making our society a better place.”（我坚信志愿服务与出色的人际交往能力相结合，能在让我们的社会变得更美好方面发挥重大作用。） 提出建议句型 “If you want to improve your interpersonal communication skills while doing volunteer service, you'd better be an active listener and show your sincere care for others.”（如果你想在做志愿服务的同时提升自己的人际交往能力，你最好做一个积极的倾听者，并对他人展现出真诚的关怀。） “Schools should organize more volunteer activities to encourage students to communicate with others and develop their social skills in a practical way.”（学校应该组织更多的志愿服务活动，以鼓励学生与他人交流，并通过实际的方式培养他们的社会技能。）     【典例分析】 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael即将结束在中国的交换生课程。他打算为家人和好友准备一些中国礼物。请你写一封电子邮件，向他推荐三件有特色的礼物并说明推荐的理由(礼物可以从下表中选择或自行确定)。 Presents Reasons a silk scarf soft and comfortable; some Chinese paintings on it Chinese tea paper cuts pieces of Chinese clay art Chinese fans toy pandas … … 注意： (1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (2)词数：80-100。 Dear Michael, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Michael, There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents. For your mother, I think a silk scarf from Hangzhou is a nice present. It’s soft and comfortable. There are usually beautiful Chinese paintings on it. And you can give your father some Chinese tea. It’s a kind of healthy drink with a long history. Paper cutting is a traditional Chinese art. Chinese artists cut the paper into different shapes, such as flowers or buildings. I believe your friends will like paper cuts. I hope these can help you. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，可参考表格中给出的礼物来推荐三件有特色的礼物。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，推荐礼物； 第二步，具体推荐三种有特色的礼物； 第三步，收尾，希望能帮到对方。 [亮点词汇] ①give sb. sth. 给某人某物 ②traditional Chinese art 传统中国艺术 ③such as 例如 [高分句型] ①There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents.（There be句型） ②I believe your friends will like paper cuts.（省略that的宾语从句） 1．假设国外中学生Alex将来你校进行为期一周的交流学习，期间计划参加一项你校社团活动，体验中国文化。请你根据下表中的提示，写一篇英文短文，介绍其中一个社团内容。 Clubs Introduction Reasons The paper cutting club admire some masters’ great works, try paper cutting… a traditional art form of beauty; a symbol of wishes for good luck… The folk music club take musical instrument classes, attend a folk music concert… enjoy the beauty of Chinese folk music; a chance to bring the school and you closer… 注意：1. 请回复邮件中所提及的所有问题，可适当发挥使行文通顺、连贯。 2. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 3. 词数80-100左右。 Dear Alex, I’m so excited to hear from you. It’s my honor to introduce some                 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ping 【答案】例文 Dear Alex, I’m so excited to hear from you. It’s my honor to introduce some of the wonderful clubs in our school to you. For me, the paper cutting club is without doubt the most attractive one. In fact, paper cutting has been around for centuries. Here, students are able to admire some masters’ great works. The most common pictures are animals, flowers and things about Chinese history. They are often put on the windows as a symbol of people’s wishes for good luck. Additionally, students are given the opportunity to try paper cutting. This way, you can enjoy the beauty of this traditional art form by yourself. In a word, joining the club is a good chance for you to have a deeper understanding of Chinese culture. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍学校的社团活动”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，介绍学校有好的社团； 第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，介绍相关社团的内容，以及选择的理由； 第三步，点评加入社团是一件好事。 [亮点词汇] ①in fact实际上 ②in a word总而言之 [高分句型] ①Additionally, students are given the opportunity to try paper cutting.（被动语态） ②In a word, joining the club is a good chance for you to have a deeper understanding of Chinese culture.（动名词作主语） 2．某学习网站的“Student Helper”栏目收到两位学生的邮件。假如你是该网站志愿者李明，请就其中一封(任选)进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To: studenthelper@mail.com Subject: Need Help! Dear Helper, Chinese is too difficult for me! I really don’t know how to speak well. Could you please tell me how I can improve my Chinese speaking skills? Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! May To: studenthelper@mail.com Subject: What can I do? Dear Helper, I’m very worried about my physics these days. You know, it’s really hard for me. Could you please tell me how I can improve my physics? Looking forward to your reply. Eric Hi, ____________, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ming 【答案】例文 Hi, May I am glad to hear that you have a great interest in Chinese. I would like to give some advice. First, try to say Chinese as much as possible in and out of class. Second, don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Last but not least, you should try to say Chinese in public. When you have time, you can call me in Chinese. Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析]： ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邮件写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：考生根据邮件内容，选择一篇回复，给出如何提高中文水平或物理成绩的建议。 [写作步骤] 第一步：本文要回复的是第一封邮件，给出如何提高中文水平的建议。 第二步：具体阐述提高中文的方法。 [亮点词汇] ①in and out of class课堂内外 ②be afraid of害怕 ③in poblic公开的；当众 [高分句型] ①First, try to say Chinese as much as possible in and out of class. （祈使句） ②When you have time, you can call me in Chinese.（时间状语从句） 1．假设你是学生李华，你的学校将组织一个新的社团，现有以下几种计划: ● Reading club ●Arts and sport club ●Hand-made workshop 请给校报的Mr. King写一封邮件，选择一个你最喜欢的社团，说明你选择的理由，并对社团后续开展活动提出至少两点建议。 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息； 2. 词数：80~100词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. King, I’m writing to give some advice about the new club our school will set up. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope my advice can be taken by you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. King, I’m writing to give some advice about the new club our school will set up. I choose to join the reading club. I like reading. I read all kinds of books. I especially like story books. Their stories have enriched my spare time life, and also made me feel the hardships of society. If I have time, I will pick up a book to read. Through reading, I learned a lot of knowledge, which not only opened my eyes, but also made me relax. After joining the book club, I hope we can hold regular book briefing meetings. At the same time, we can also hold a reading speech to say what books we like and why. Hope my advice can be taken by you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤]   第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；   第二步，介绍自己选择这个社团的原因。   [亮点词汇]   ①choose to do sth选择做某事 ②all kinds of各种各样的 ③at the same time同时 [高分句型]   ①If I have time, I will pick up a book to read.（if引导条件状语从句）   2．假设你是学校Cultural China社团的成员李平，你将作为社团代表在校英语文化节上介绍你所在的社团。请按照以下提示，撰写一篇发言稿，介绍社团活动以及你的收获。 注意： （1）发言稿必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节； （2）活动至少三项； （3）词数：90-100。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ping, a member of Cultural China Club. I’m here to introduce my club to you. If you are a Chinese culture lover, our club is a great choice. Many interesting activities are offered here. You can learn how to make beautiful paper cutting that is usually regarded as a symbol of good luck. Also, you can try making traditional Chinese food like dumplings, zongzi and so on. What’s more, you can experience the beauty of clay art here. The club activities have helped me a lot. I have not only learned lots of skills, but also made many friends here. If you are interested, we are looking forward to having you in the club! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据表格中所列要点进行写作，不可遗漏，适当补充细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍并引出下文； 第二步，详细介绍俱乐部的活动，如学习剪纸、制作传统美食等； 第三步，总结感受，表达对他人加入的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①offer提供 ②be regarded as被认为是 ③what’s more而且 [高分句型] ①If you are a Chinese culture lover, our club is a great choice.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②You can learn how to make beautiful paper cutting that is usually regarded as a symbol of good luck.（that引导的定语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 21 / 21 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$