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2024学年第二学期浙江省名校协作体试题
高三年级英语试题
2025年2月
命题:浙江省温岭中学浙江省柯桥中学:审核:浙江省玉环中学浙江省学军中学
注意事项:
1.答卷前,考生务必将白己的姓名、准考证号填写在答题卡上。
2.回答选择题时,选出每小题答案后,用铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如需改动,用橡
皮擦干净后,再选涂其他答案标号。回答非选择题时,将答案写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。
3.考试结束后,将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。
第一部分听力(共两节,满分30分)
做题时,先将答案标在试卷上,录音内容结束后,你将有两分钟的时间将试卷上的答案转涂到答题卡
上。
第一节(共5小题:每小题1.5分,满分7.5分)
听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听完每
段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。
1.What does the man want to do?
A.Choose a movie.
B.Buy some popcorn.
C.Have something to drink.
2.What will the woman do today?
A.Stay at home.
B.Visit a lake.
C.Go to Mumbai.
3.What are the speakers talking about?
A.Joining a band.
B.Quitting a band.
C.Forming a band.
4.When did the woman plan to throw a party for Tracy?
A.On the 25th.
B.On the 26th
C.On the 27th.
5.Why does the man come to the company?
A.To visit the woman.
B.To attend an interview.
C.To make an appointment.
第二节(共15小题:每小题1.5分,满分22.5分
听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有儿个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳
选项。听每段对话或独白前,你将有时间阅读各个小题,每小题5秒钟:听完后,各小题将给出5秒钟的作
答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。
听第6段材料,问答第6、7题。
6.Where does the woman probably work?
A.At a design firm.
B.At a printing shop.
C.At a shipping company.
7.What will the woman do?
A.Pay the money back.
B.Put off the invitation.
C.Correct the measurements.
听第7段材料,回答第8至10题。
8.What are the speakers short of?
A.Tomatoes.
B.Cabbages.
C.Cheese.
9.What does the man think of Bert?
A.He is inexperienced.
B.He is under a lot of pressure.C.He has a good sense of direction.
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10.What is Elizabeth doing now?
A.Reading a menu.
B.Cutting vegetables.
C.Looking for Bert.
听第8段材料,回答第11至13题。
11.How does the man feel about his decision?
A.Lucky.
B.Regretful.
C.Satisfied.
12.What is true about the man's new car?
A.It is brand new.
B.It is the man's first car.
C.It has rushed into a garage.
13.What aspect of the car is the man anxious about?
A.The potential repair costs.
B.The car's speed performance.
C.The garage's space limitation.
听第9段材料,回答第14至16题。
14.What is the relationship between the speakers?
A.Workmates.
B.Schoolmates.
C.Teacher and student.
15.How did the man know about the activity?
A.From a friend.
B.From the organizer.
C.From an article.
16.What do we know about the activity?
A.It has a time limit of five hours.
B.It will be joined in by three teams.
C.It will give rewards to the winning team.
听下面一段独白,回答17至20题。
17.How long did it take to get to the destination?
A.One hour.
B.Two hours.
C.Three hours.
18.What did the class do in the morning?
A.They took a class.
B.They went horse-riding.
C.They admired the scenery.
19.What happened to the speaker when riding his horse?
A.He fell off it.
B.He lost control of it.
C.He moved slowly on it.
20.What was the speaker's opinion on horse-riding?
A.Terrible.
B.Exciting.
C.Difficult
第二部分阅读理解(共两节,满分50分)
第一节(共15小题:每小题2.5分,满分37.5分)
阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中,选出最住答案。
ALBANIA
It is no secret that traveling to Europe isn't generally cheap,but Albania is an exception to this rule.The cost of
living in Albania is much more affordable than elsewhere in Europe.There are some amazing beaches to visit in this
beautiful Mediterranean country if you're looking for sunshine and relaxation,and the traditional food here is nothing
short of“amazing”
VIETNAM
Vietnam is a place in Asia where you can travel for about 100 yuan per day if you play your cards right.Tourism
is picking up in Vietnam lately,but it's still a very affordable destination with lots of student-friendly options for
backpacking.Con Dao Island National Park is a great destination in Vietnam to see sea turtles and other wildlife
while exploring the area on foot.
NEW ORLEANS,U.S.
New Orleans is a fun place to party any time of the year.It's an incredibly unique place in the U.S.that's full of
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fascinating history,intriguing culture,delicious food,and a constantly buzzing nightlife scene.There are actually a
couple of hostels that offers reasonable accommodation rates for students.Hotels in New Orleans can get quite pricey,
so look into these hostel options well in advance so they don't get booked up.
ZAKYNTHOS ISLAND,GREECE
If you're looking for an affordable European summer beach vacation,consider Zakynthos Island located west
of the Greek mainland.There food is cheap and mouthwatering,while hotels are affordable.There are plenty of free
things to do,such as spending time on the beautiful beaches edged by electric blue water.There are countless options
for swimming in the enticing sea,along with charming villages and museums to explore on this beautiful island in
Greece.
21.Which destination will appeal to a party-goer?
A.ALBANIA
B.VIETNAM
C.NEW ORLEANS,U.S.
D.ZADYNTHOS ISLAND,GREECE
22.What do the four destinations have in common?
A.They have tempting food and charming beaches.
B.They have various wildlife and interesting culture.
C.They offer fascinating views at an acceptable price.
D.They offer luxurious travel experience worth visiting.
23.In which column of a magazine can this text be found?
A.Culture
B.Tourism
C.Advertisement
D.Entertainment
B
Andrew Carnegie's life is a remarkable "rags to riches"story.Rising from extreme poverty in Scotland to
become America's wealthiest man,Carnegie embraced every opportunity to improve himself.His willingness to
move from job to job not only secured better wages but also provided him with a broad range of valuable experiences
that shaped his future.
One of his notable talents was remembering names and faces,a skill he acquired while working as a telegraph
messenger in Pittsburgh.This ability enabled him to connect with influential business leaders,allowing him to
establish a reputation as a hardworking and trustworthy individual.As he built these connections,his perseverance
led him to a position in the Pennsylvania Railroad Company,where he quickly advanced to Superintendent of the
Western Division,gaining essential management skills under the mentorship of Thomas A.Scott.
A strong advocate for education,Carnegie also valued his friendships with literary figures and recognized the
transformative power of knowledge.Inspired by these connections,he established free public libraries,believing they
could uplift communities.In dedicating the latter part of his life to philanthropy ()Carnegie ensured that
his wealth contributed to the public good,leaving a lasting legacy.
Ultimately,Carnegie emphasizes the importance of perseverance,ambition,and striving for excellence.He
believed that success is the reward for hard work and that everyone deserves recognition for their efforts.Moreover,
he highlighted the significance of teamwork and effective leadership,encouraging individuals to delegate tasks and
focus on their strengths for greater success.
Through his journey,Carnegie saw motivation as the key to achieving one's goals.His humble beginnings fueled
his ambition,serving as a constant reminder that our circumstances do not define our potential.With determination
and a clear vision,we can overcome challenges and achieve greatness,just as Carnegie did in his extraordinary life.
24.What does the phrase"rags to riches"in paragraph 1 refer to?
A.His transition from poverty to wealth.
B.His increasing interest in fancy clothes.
C.His experience from workers to leaders.
D.His growing friendship with the wealthy.
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25.What do we know about Andrew Carnegie from this passage?
A.Carnegie thought leadership came from individual strengths.
B.Carnegie believed intelligence alone was enough for success.
C.Carnegie's memory for names helped him build relationships.
D.Carnegie thought relationships were less important than skills.
26.How did Camegie contribute to society later in his life?
A.He created free public libraries.
B.He opened a chain of bookstores.
C.He started a private school system.
D.He established a university for the rich.
27.Which of the following words can best describe Andrew Carnegie?
A.Patient and humble.
B.Generous and diligent.
C.Demanding and ambitious.
D.Determined and adventurous.
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Imagine you're purchasing a lottery ticket,and your heart races as you check the numbers.To your amazement,
you've matched five out of six!What will you do next?Will you buy another ticket?For most people,the answer is
abig“Ycs",
When we come close to achieving a goal,we often gain a powerful energy that can drive us toward future
success.Monica Wadhwa,a marketing professor at Temple University,suggests that not winning can actually
motivate us more than winning itself.
In her studies,Wadhwa conducted various experiments to test this concept.In one experiment,participants
played a cellphone game with the task of revealing eight diamonds.After the game,those who nearly won-by
getting seven diamonds-walked faster to claim their reward than both winners and losers."Their motivation is
getting intensified ()but then they miss it...So what happens to this motivation?It hooks on,giving you the
energy for the next goal that you have."Wadhwa explains,"As for the winners,they inch toward their goal,they
achieve it,and their motivation is satisficd,which leaves them with no nced to fight for anything clsc."
However,this fire in your belly should be used wiselv.Such motivation can push you toward significant goals,
or be wasted on distractions.In another experiment at a fashion-accessory store where shoppers were given scratch-
off lottery tickets,the near-winners shopped more and spent more than both winners and losers.
To harness()this energy,Wadhwa advises setting goals that are slightly beyond our reach.She encourages
managers to establish challenging yet achievable targets for their teams.Additionally,she recommends that parents
highlight how close their children came to winning when they experience losses,fostering resilience and motivation.
By understanding the uniquc power of nearly winning,we can turn setbacks into stcpping stones for future success.
As Wadhwa puts it,"Winners really do not take it all."
28.What's the purpose of paragraph 1?
A.To stress the importance of winning.
B.To display harmful effects of the lottery.
C.To explain the rules of playing the lottery.
D.To illustrate the excitement of nearly winning
29.According to Wadhwa,what motivated the near-winners to act faster?
A.The eagerness to win another game.
B.The unmet ambitions for winning games.
C.The dissatisfaction of not achieving goals.
D.The need for immediate recognition or rewards
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30.What does the underlined sentence in paragraph 4 mean?
A.Feeling energized does not always ensure success.
B.You should not let your emotions guide your actions.
C.Motivation can lead to unwise choices if not controlled.
D.Having strong ambitions always leads to acting carelessly.
31.Which statement might Wadhwa agree most?
A.Parents should take their children's losses seriously.
B.Managers should assign more tasks to star performers.
C.Encouraging children to fight for perfection is essential.
D.Setting slightly challenging goals can enhance motivation.
D
Cats always have a reputation for aloofness(),but a recent study suggests that you can improve your bond
with them by using a simple trick:smile-not in the human way,but by narrowing your eyes and blinking slowly.
When cats narrow their eyes and blink slowly,it's similar to how humans smile.This expression typically occurs
when cats are relaxed and content,and it's often interpreted as a "cat smile."Many cat owners have suspected that
mimicking this behavior could signal friendliness and openness.
To investigate,Karen McComb,a University of Sussex psychologist,conducted two experiments.In the first
experiment,cat owners slow-blinked at 21 cats in their homes.When the cats were settled,the owners sat about a
meter away and blinked slowly at them.Cameras recorded both the owner's and the cat's faces,and the results were
compared to how cats blink with no human interaction.The results showed that the cats were more likely to slow-
blink back after their owners had done so.
The second experiment included 24 cats from eight different houscholds.This time,it wasn't the owners doing
the blinking but the researchers,who'd had no prior contact with the cat.They performed the slow-blink while
extending a hand toward the cat.And they found that not only were the cats more likely to blink back,but they were
also more likely to approach the human's hand after the human blinked.
"This study is the first to experimentally investigate the role of slow blinking in cat-human communication,"
McComb said."And it is something you can try yourself with your own cat at home or with cats you meet in the
street.It's a great way of enhancing the bond you have with cats."Understanding how to communicate effectively
with cats can not only help cat owners but also benefit cats in stressful environments like vet practices and shelters.
So,the next time you're around a cat,remember to slow-blink and see how they respond!
32.When will cats narrow their eyes and blink slowly?
A.When they are feeling relaxed and satisfied.
B.When they are having a need for a good rest.
C.When they are signaling a desire for attention.
D.When they are suffering from stress and anxiety.
33.What can we imply from the two experiments?
A.Slow-blinking is a sign that cats are familiar with you.
B.Cats are indifferent to human gestures and expressions.
C.Cats prefer to interact with their owners and ignore strangers.
D.Mimicking a cat's slow-blink encourages a friendly response.
34.What is paragraph 5 mainly focused on?
A.The limitations of the study.
B.The significance of the study.
C.The methodology of the study.
D.The implications for future research.
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35.What might be the best title of the text?
A.Training Cats for Communication
B.Connecting with Cats through Eyes
C.Investigating the Psychology of Cats
D.Understanding Cats'Responses to Humans
第二节(共5小题:每小题2.5分,满分12.5分)
阅读下面短文,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
How to Have Better,Deeper Conversations
In today's fast-paced world,distractions are everywhere,especially from our phones.When catching up with
friends,it can be frustrating when their attention shifts away.36It's a skill that can be cultivated.Here are
three key ways to enhance your listening ability.
Avoid distractions.
To be an effective listener,start by putting away your phone and other distractions.Research shows that
multitasking distracts our attention and hampers the quality of our conversations.As musician Hrishikesh Hirway
says,"Trying to listen to one song while singing another in your head is impossible."37
Reflect on what you hear.
Active listening is more than just being silent.38Phrases like"What I hear you saying is..."can confirm
your understanding.Also,resist the urge to share your own stories immediately;keep the conversation centered on
them.
39
Nonverbal communication plays a vital role in conversations.Maintaining eye contact,having an open posture,
and nodding can show that you're engaged.Those small gestures help the other person feel valued and encourage
them to continue sharing.
Improving your listening skills takes practice.40 As Hirway advises,"Let the other person know you're
listening and stay focused."
A.Use nonverbal cues.
B.Look up to show interest.
C.So to build stronger relationships,active listening is essential.
D.But with a bit more effort,you can foster deeper conversations.
E.Engage by asking questions or summarizing what the other person says.
F.Therefore,during conversations,focus fully on the person in front of you.
G.Taking notes while listening can help you remember the conversation better.
第三部分语言知识运用(共两节,满分30分)
第-节(共15小题:每小题1分,满分15分)
阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
It is the morning of my 58th birthday as I write this.When I looked in the mirror this morning,I could see the
sign of 41 on my body.My hair was 42and silver,my face marked with age spots,and deep 43
carved into my skin.Yet when I smiled and I saw the lines44 around my eyes and mouth,I had to admit that
they didn't look that 45
I thought about how much46it had taken to create those deep lines,and it made me smile again.In my
58 years,I have shared love,laughter,and joy.I've performed countless acts of kindness without expecting anything
_47.I've spoken kind words and done good deeds,striving to live my life48.I haven't always
succeeded,49 I know that every new day is another chance to live fully and to spread kindness.
I also recognize that I am not 50 in this.The vast majority of us are good people,doing good things,
sharing51,and working to make the world a better place.We all have the opportunity to make a52.
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Life has a purpose,and that purpose is to love and 53 with one another.No act of kindness is too small;as
Emily Dickinson once wrote,"If I can stop one heart from breaking,I shall not live in 54."
No matter how many years you have lived,remember that each day is a new 55.Embrace each day as a
new opportunity.Fill them with goodness and live them with smiles,laughter,and joy.
41.A.dying
B.aging
C.falling
D.growing
42.A.slim
B.thick
C.thin
D.delicate
43.A.scars
B.wrinkles
C.flaws
D.cracks
44.A.curl up
B.put up
C.grow up
D.pick up
45.A.fine
B.poor
C.great
D.bad
46.A.sorrow
B.suffering
C.laughter
D.silence
47.A.in return
B.in response
C.in respect
D.in reality
48.A.positively
B.carelessly
C.casually
D.reluctantly
49.A.s0
B.because
C.but
D.although
50.A.lonely
B.alone
C.only
D.single
51.A.generosity
B.hatred
C.compassion
D.kindness
52.A.donation
B.compromise
C.decision
D.difference
53.A.connect
B.argue
C.separate
D.talk
54.A.chaos
B.despair
C.vain
D.doubt
55.A.version
B.start
C.lesson
D.record
第二节(共10小题:每小题1.5分,满分15分)
阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式:
Have you heard of the term Start of Winter?There are things you may not know about it.Start of Winter is the
first one of 24 Solar terms,among56it means winter is coming and crops 57(harvest)in autumn
should be stored up.
Before the Start of Winter,the ancient emperor would take a shower and have no more meat.On that day,the
emperor would lead his officials to the suburbs and perform the ceremony of"58(welcome)the winter."The
following are some traditions about the festival.
Legend has 59 that at the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty(AD25-220),"Medical Saint"Zhang Zhongjing
saved many people in Henan province60a typhoid epidemic and their ears'from being frostbitten around
Start of Winter.He cooked mutton,hot peppers and herbs to dispel the cold and increase body heat.He wrapped these
ingredicnts into a dough skin and made them into 61ear shape.Since then,pcople 62(learn)to make
the food which became known as"dumpling".Today there is still a saying that goes"Eat dumplings on Start of
Winter Day,63 your ears will be frostbitten".
There is another custom,"nourishing the winter",in Southeast China.To prepare for the oncoming cold winter,
people there like to eat high-calorie food such as chicken,duck,beef,mutton,and fish,which 64(stew)with
the four Chinese medicines to enhance the 65(effective)of the nourishment.
第四部分写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
假定你是李华,你将参加你校举办的“Music and Me”主题英语演讲比赛,请撰写·份演讲稿,内容包
括:
(1)分享你和音乐的故事:
(2)音乐对你的影响。
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注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Hello,everyone!
That's all.Thank you!
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Right after I had my first son,I found myself with a surplus of baby formula(I couldn't use due to his
stomach issues.Not wanting it to go to waste,I turned to a website for giving away items for free.Shortly afterward,
a young woman from my small town reached out,expressing her desperate need for the formula.She explained that
her husband had just passed away in an accident,leaving her in a difficult situation.Feeling a tug at my heart,I
immediately promised to save all the formula for her.
However,three days passed,and I heard nothing.I tried to connect her but failed.My husband suggested it
might be a cruel joke or maybe some sort of sick tricks.Unwilling to believe it,I decided to give it one last try.
This time I got through.In the telephone,I could hear the tiredness and strain in her voice as she mentioned
she'd just managed to pay her phone bill and had to wait until she could find a way to get closer to town.It was clear
she was struggling.Trying to keep my tone neutral,I offered to send the formula to her house.After an awkward
silence,she agreed and provided her address.
Once I hung up,I felt compelled to do more than just provide the formula.We checked her address and
discovered she lived in a desolate part of town.Her cottage was situated in the middle of the desert,far removed from
any public transportation.Realizing how tough her situation must be,I went through my pantry(食品f储藏室),fridge,
and freezer,gathering anything we could spare.In total,we filled three bags and a laundry hamper with food and
essentials.
When we arrived at her home the next day,she welcomed us inside,her face devoid of emotion.The
sight that greeted me was heartbreaking:her living space was almost empty,with only a single couch and a bare
kitchen.Even when we unloaded the items,she still seemed almost numb,as if life had drained all the color from her.
Without a word,she simply nodded,turned away,and mechanically began making a bottle for her son,her movements
slow and detached.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:On the way back home,I couldn't shake her from my mind.
Paragraph 2:Several weeks later,the woman came to me.
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2024学年第二学期浙江省名校协作体联考参考答案
高三年级英语学科
首命题:温岭中学次命题兼审校:柯桥中学
审核学校:玉环中学、学军中学
一、听力(每小题1.5分,满分30分)
1-5 BACBB
6-10ACCAB
11-15 BAABC
16-20 CBCBA
二、阅读(共两节,满分50分)
第一节(每小题2.5分,满分37.5分)
21-23CCB
24-27ACAB
28-31 DBCD
32-35 ADBB
第二节(每小题2.5分,满分12.5分)
36-40 CFEAD
三、语言运用(共两节,满分30分)
第一节(每小题1分,满分15分)
41-45 BCBAD
46-50 CAACB
51-55 DDACB
第二节(每小题1.5分,满分15分)
56.which
57.harvested
58.welcoming
59.it
60.from
61.an
62.have learned/have learnt
63.or/otherwise
64.are stewed
65.effectiveness
四、写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
[评分标准]
第五档(13-15)
1,覆盖了所有内容要点,表述清楚、合理。
2.使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有个别小错,但不影响理解。
3.有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构清晰,意义连贯,完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(10-12)
1.覆盖了所有内容要点,表述比较清楚、合理。
2.使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有些许小错,但不影响理解。
3.比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构比较清晰,意义比较连贯,达到了预期的写
作目的。
第三档(7-9)
1.覆盖了大部分内容要点,有个别地方表达不够清楚、合理。
2.使用了简单的词汇和语法结构,有一些错误或不恰当之处,但基本不影响理解。
3.基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构基本清晰,意义基本连贯,基本达到了预期
的写作目的。
第二档(4-6)
1.遗漏或未清楚表述一些内容要点,或一些内容与写作目的不相关。
2.所使用词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误较多,影响理解。
3.几乎不能有效地使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不清晰,意义不够连贯,未能达到预期的
写作目的。
第一档(1-3)
1.遗漏或未清楚表达大部分内容要点,或大部分内容与写作目的不相关。
2.所使用词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误很多,严重影响理解。
3.几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不清晰,意义不连贯,完全未能达到预期的目的。
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One possible version:
Hello everyone.
My name is Li Hua,and today I'm thrilled to share with you my joumey of"Music and Me".
From a tender age,music has been my soul's companion,whispering stories of joy and sorrow
through melodies.It was the piano's gentle notes that first captivated my heart,leading me to
explore a world of harmonies and rhythms.
Music has shaped me in more ways than one.It's been my sanctuary,healing my wounds and
igniting my passions.Through its magic,I've learned empathy,resilience,and the art of expressing
the inexpressible.
Thank you for letting me share this harmonious bond between music and me.
That's all.Thank you!
第二节(满分25分)
[评分标准]
第五档(21-25)
1.创造了丰富、合理的内容,富有逻辑性,续写完整,与原文情境融洽度高。
2.使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有个别小错,但不影响理解。
3.有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构清晰,意义连贯。
第四档(16-20)
1.创造了比较丰富、合理的内容,比较有逻辑性,续写完整,与原文情境融洽度较高。
2.使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有些许错误,但不影响理解。
3.比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构比较清晰,意义比较连贯。
第三档(11-15)
1.创造了基本合理的内容,有一定逻辑性,续写基本完整,与原文情境相关。
2.使用了简单的词汇和语法结构,有一些错误或不恰当的地方,但基本不影响理解。
3.基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构基本清晰,意义基本连贯。
第二档(6-10)
】.内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题,续写不够完整,与原文情境有一定程度脱节。
2.所使用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误较多,影响理解。
3.未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不够清晰,意义不够连贯。
第一档(1-5)
1.内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题,或有部分内容抄自原文,续写不完整,与原文情节基本脱
节。
2.所使用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误很多,严重影响理解。
3.几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不清晰,意义不连贯。
注意:1.第一段只写想法,没写具体做法不给最高档。
2.第一段描写应以“我”为主体,否则酌情扣1-2分。
3.主题能得出kindness就不扣分。
One possible version:
On the way back home,I couldn't shake her from my mind.My heart ached for the young
woman and her son,their plight echoing in my thoughts.Determined to offer more support,I started
researching local resources and support networks that could assist her.I even reached out to a nearby
charity organization,explaining her situation and pleading for their help.The response was
overwhelming-clothes,toys,and even monetary donations poured in.Each contribution filled me
with a sense of warmth and hope,as if we were all part of a larger,compassionate tapestry.Faced
with the heartwarming contributions,I prayed that our small gestures would bring them a semblance
of comfort and hope.
Several weeks later:the woman came to me.She was visibly different-her face brightened
with a smile I hadn't seen before and her eyes,once tired and strained,now sparkled with gratitude.
She thanked me profusely,holding her son in her arms,looking much more at ease."Thank you for
restoring our faith in humanity.Your kindness has given us strength to keep going."she said,her
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