07 故事冲突的七大法宝-2025年高考英语读后续写高分技能提升

故事冲突设置七大法宝 在读后续写中，读懂原文是基础，关键在于把握记叙文的要素，尤其是故事情节中的冲突或问题。续写部分的首句往往为故事的发展提供了方向，考生需要据此推测两段内容的走向。叙事类文体的核心在于冲突（conflict）和解决（solution），它们推动了情节的发展。通过预设和解决冲突，学生可以在主题意义的框架下更好地发散思维，使故事完整且连贯，同时提升语言综合运用能力。 技巧1：面对问题，人物产生的情绪变化 技巧举例 (2021年6月，浙江高考，Para.1) The pay day arrived at last. I was delighted to finally get the payment after I worked hard for two weeks. On the way home full of excitement, I thought about how to make use of the “huge” sum of money. “I needed a new football in the future.” I whispered to myself. Approaching my house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck of my family, looking sad. It seemed as if something wrong had happened... 中文翻译： 终于到了发薪日。经过两周的努力工作，我终于拿到了报酬，感到非常高兴。在回家的路上，我满心欢喜地想着如何使用这笔“巨款”。“我将来需要一个新足球。”我自言自语道。快到家时，我看到爸爸妈妈站在我们家的旧卡车旁，神情忧伤，似乎出了什么事…… 分析： 主人公原本心情愉快，但看到父母忧伤的表情后，情绪迅速转变，产生了冲突和疑问。这种情绪的转变自然地衔接了前后情节，增加了故事的张力。 用语储备： “感到一阵……”：feel a flush of... = feel a wave of... = feel a feeling/sense of... 例如：She felt a wave of panic, but forced herself to leave the room calmly. 中文翻译：她感到一阵惊慌，但强迫自己镇静地离开了房间。 解释：通过使用“feel a wave of...”这类表达，可以生动地描绘人物的瞬间情绪变化，增强故事的真实感。 技巧2：面对复杂情境，人物产生复杂心理 技巧举例 (2021年1月，浙江高考，Para.2) The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. I looked just like a pumpkin head in it. Embarrassed and a little annoyed, I fled to my room, but Mom stopped me. “You haven’t read the comments yet.” I scrolled down the screen and marveled at the stories the viewers shared about Halloween. 中文翻译： 在万圣节前的星期一，这段视频被发布到了网上。视频里我看起来像个南瓜头。我感到尴尬又有点生气，于是跑进了房间，但妈妈拦住了我。“你还没看评论呢。”我滑动屏幕，惊讶地看到观众们分享的关于万圣节的故事。 分析： 主人公原本因视频内容感到尴尬和生气，但在妈妈的提醒下，他开始阅读评论，情绪发生了变化。这种情境的转变加剧了内心的矛盾冲突，使情节更加丰富。 用语储备： (1) 心里想：think/say to oneself (2) 害怕；恐慌：with fear/panic/terror; tremble; shiver; shake; quake (3) 生气；愤怒：with rage; be red-cheeked with rage; tremble/shake with rage (4) 兴奋；激动：with excitement; yell with excitement; jump up and down with excitement (5) 悲伤；流泪：Tears blurred one’s eyes.泪水模糊了她的双眼。/One’s eyes got misty.一个人的眼睛都模糊了。/tears roll down one’s eyes/cheeks/face泪水落下。 技巧3：面对他人的行为，人物展开新的动作 技巧举例 (2021年，新高考I卷，Para.2) The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again. 中文翻译： 双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了妈妈。当妈妈看到面前美味又完美的早餐时，她非常惊讶。这不仅是礼物本身，更是孩子们对她的爱让她深受感动。她没想到两个孩子能完成一顿早餐。孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”妈妈紧紧地拥抱了他们，亲了又亲。 分析： 母亲看到孩子们的举动后，产生了惊讶和感动的情绪，并通过拥抱和亲吻来回应。这种动作上的互动展现了人物对情境的回应，推动了情节的发展。 用语储备： (1) 常用词语：open one’s mouth; widen one’s eyes; rise to one’s feet; jump to one’s feet; shout at the top of one’s lung; reach out (2) 常用句式：Having passed the exam, he was so happy that he was at a loss what to do.通过考试后，他非常高兴，不知所措。/She opened the gift with her hands shaking slightly.她用微微颤抖的双手打开了礼物。 技巧4：人物沉浸在某一情境中，出现新问题 技巧举例 (2018年6月，浙江高考, Para.1) Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, “Hold on!” All of a sudden the horse began to run. My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track. 中文翻译： 突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的马前。我的马向左转以避开小兔子，我紧紧抓住缰绳，尽量不让自己摔下来。然后爸爸转过身喊道：“抓紧！”突然，马开始奔跑起来。爸爸在后面努力追赶我们。几分钟后，我的马慢了下来，变成小跑，然后停在了一条河边。我环顾四周，意识到我们已经偏离了原来的路线。 分析： 原本的情境是骑马前行，但兔子的出现引发了马的惊吓和奔跑，最终导致主人公迷路，情节由此转向新的冲突。 用语储备： (1) 不幸的是：unfortunately But bad luck for sb, ... 但是某人真不走运。/She tried her best, but in vain.她尽力了，但没有成功。 (2) 某人做了某事，不知道下一步该做什么： Sb did sth, wondering what to do next. Sb did sth, not knowing what to do next. 技巧5：情况好转，人物突然有了新想法 技巧举例 (2020年7月，浙江高考，Para.2) At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved. Elli used pepper spray again to buy us enough time. But this time the bear became more alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger, so we threw all the food we had. He then turned away and started devouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli prayed like a thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound. 中文翻译： 就在那一刻，直升机到了。我知道我们很可能得救了，心里充满了喜悦。埃利再次使用了胡椒喷雾，为我们争取了足够的时间。但这次，熊变得更加警觉。它以饥饿的无情目光看着我们，于是我们把所有的食物都扔了出去。它转过身，开始大吃起来。当我们爬上绳梯时，埃利像祈祷了一千次一样，感谢我们安然无恙。 分析： 直升机的到来让情况好转，主人公心情大好，但面对熊的威胁，他们又想出了新的应对办法（扔掉食物），最终成功脱险。这种“情况好转—突发新问题—找到解决办法”的模式推动了情节的发展。 用语储备： “某人突然想到……”：It suddenly occurred to sb that... = It hit sb that... = It struck sb that... = It dawned on sb that... 技巧6：面对他人的帮助，人物找到解决办法 技巧举例 (2017年6月，浙江高考, Para.2) A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac's friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance. 中文翻译： 几分钟后，另外两名骑自行车的人到了。他们发现了危险的情况，三个人正围着狼转。麦克的朋友们也从自行车上跳下来，加入了与狼的搏斗。越来越多的车停了下来。一些司机从车里拿出棍子，一些人拿出刀，甚至还有人拿出枪对准狼。与此同时，狼可能感受到了周围人们的威胁，开始慢慢后退。很快，它跑离了道路，消失在远方。 分析： 随着更多人的加入，原本紧张的局势得到了缓解，人物通过集体的力量解决了冲突。这种“他人帮助—找到解决办法”的模式展现了团队合作的力量。 用语储备： (1) 鼓起勇气（做某事）：take/gather/one’s courage (to do sth) (2) 毫不犹豫/选择：without a second thought/without delay/without hesitation/having no choice 技巧7：获得成长，人物总结并呼应前文 技巧举例 (2022年1月，浙江卷, Para.2) One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. I felt so sorry to hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case. He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits. I offered to do the rest of the work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it. We began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time. Our hard work paid off and Dr. Henderson was very satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther. 中文翻译： 有一天，我听说他因重病住进了医院。听到这个消息，我感到很难过，我觉得无论如何都应该去看望他。当我带着鲜花和水果走进他的病房时，他有点惊讶。我提出完成我们项目的剩余工作，他邀请我分享我的想法来完善它。我们开始像一个优秀的团队一样工作，并最终按时完成了项目。我们的努力得到了回报，亨德森博士对我们的成果非常满意。通过这个项目，我们也明白了团队成员的重要性。正如俗话说的，一个人可以走得快，但一群人可以走得远。 分析： 主人公通过与队友的合作完成了项目，从中体会到了团队合作的重要性，这种成长和总结不仅呼应了前文，也深化了主题。 用语储备： (1) 直到……才意识到…… 倒装句：Not until... did sb realize/notice that... 强调句：It was only... that sb realized that... (2) 表达经历与教训： What a valuable lesson I have learned from...! 我从……中得到了宝贵的教训。 What an unforgettable experience! 多么难忘的经历啊！ (3) 结尾点题： God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。 Everyone is the architect of his own fate. 每个人都是自己命运的建筑师。 Life is full of laughter and tears. Only by accepting both can we enjoy life. 生命就是充满欢笑和泪水的。只有同时接受两者，我们才能享受生活。 Never underestimate the power of your action. 永远不要低估你的行为的力量。 综合演练： Through our lives, we can gain a lot and lose so much. But being honest should always be with us, as honesty is always regarded as a virtue. Every time I talk about the topic, something crowds in my mind as if it had just happened. I was 16 when one morning, Dad told me I could drive him to Mijas and then take the car in a nearby garage to get it serviced. At that time, I had just passed the driving test, and I hardly had a chance to use the car, so I said yes without hesitation. I drove my father to Mijas, promising to pick him up again at 4 pm, then I went to a nearby garage, and put the car in there. Since I had several hours to spare, I decided to go to a movie theater near the garage to see the movie. However, I was so absorbed in the plot of the movie that I forgot the time. When the last movie finished, I looked at my watch： 6 pm. I was two hours late! I thought my father would be very angry if he knew what I was doing. And he would never let me drive again. So I decided to make up an excuse. Then, I drove to the appointed place, my father was sitting in a corner, waiting patiently. I first apologized for being late, then told him that I wanted to get there as soon as possible, but that something was wrong with some of the main parts of the car. I would never forget the way he looked at me. “I'm very disappointed that you thought you had to lie to me, Jason.” My father looked at me again and said, “When you didn't show up on time, I called the gas station and asked if there was anything wrong. They told me you never picked up the car. So, you see, I know there's nothing wrong with the car at all." 注意： 1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右； 2.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好； 3续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late. ______________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here, and it's dark. You can't walk back. "I begged. ______________________________________________________________________________________ 翻译小练习： 1. 爸爸仔细地听着，一种悲伤掠过他的心头：“我生气了，不是对你，而是对我自己。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 你看。我意识到作为一个父亲我已经失败了，如果这么多年后你觉得你必须对我撒谎。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 我之所以失败，是因为我养育了一个连自己的父亲都不会说实话的儿子。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 我现在要走回家，想想这些年来我哪里做错了”。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 我的抗议，我的道歉和其他的话都没有用。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 我让我父亲失望了。我正准备吸取我生命中最痛苦的教训之一。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 爸爸开始沿着尘土飞扬的道路走去。我迅速跳上车，跟在后面。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 我一路道歉，告诉他我有多抱歉，但他根本不理我。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 他一直走了18英里。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 10. 看到父亲如此痛苦是我所经历过的最可怕的经历。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 11. 不过，这也是最成功的一课。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1. 爸爸仔细地听着，一种悲伤掠过他的心头：“我生气了，不是对你，而是对我自己。 Dad listened carefully as a sadness passed through him，“I'm angry, not with you but with myself. 2. 你看。我意识到作为一个父亲我已经失败了，如果这么多年后你觉得你必须对我撒谎。 You see. I realize that I have failed as a father if after all these years you feel that you have to lie to me. 3. 我之所以失败，是因为我养育了一个连自己的父亲都不会说实话的儿子。 I have failed because I have brought up a son who cannot even tell the truth to his own father. 4. 我现在要走回家，想想这些年来我哪里做错了”。 I'm going to walk home now and think where I have gone wrong all these years”. 5. 我的抗议，我的道歉和其他的话都没有用。 My protests, my apologies and the rest of my words were useless. 6. 我让我父亲失望了。我正准备吸取我生命中最痛苦的教训之一。 I had let my father down. And I was about to learn one of the most painful lessons of my life. 7. 爸爸开始沿着尘土飞扬的道路走去。我迅速跳上车，跟在后面。 Dad began walking along the dusty roads. I quickly jumped in the car and followed behind. 8. 我一路道歉，告诉他我有多抱歉，但他根本不理我。 I apologized all the way, telling him how sorry I was, but he simply ignored me. 9. 他一直走了18英里。 For 18 miles he kept walking. 10. 看到父亲如此痛苦是我所经历过的最可怕的经历。 Seeing my father in so much pain was the most awful experience that I have ever faced. 11. 不过，这也是最成功的一课。 However it was also the most successful lesson. 参考范文： A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late .Dad listened carefully as a sadness passed through him，“I'm angry, not with you but with myself. You see. I realize that I have failed as a father if after all these years you feel that you have to lie to me. I have failed because I have brought up a son who cannot even tell the truth to his own father. I'm going to walk home now and think where I have gone wrong all these years”. But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here, and it's dark. You can't walk back. "I begged .My protests, my apologies and the rest of my words were useless. I had let my father down. And I was about to learn one of the most painful lessons of my life. Dad began walking along the dusty roads. I quickly jumped in the car and followed behind. I apologized all the way, telling him how sorry I was, but he simply ignored me. For 18 miles he kept walking. Seeing my father in so much pain was the most awful experience that I have ever faced. However it was also the most successful lesson. / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$