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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a sun-kissed spring afternoon along the beautiful Maryland coast, and Jonathan Bauer, a 51-year-old former firefighter, was enjoying a rare moment with his 13-year-old daughter, Ava. The two of them were heading home across the Route 90 bridge, over the waters of Assawoman Bay. However, the peace of their drive was suddenly disturbed by the noise of tires and a horrible crash just ahead of them. A black truck was out of control, running into a concrete barrier, and finally coming to rest over the bridge’s railing(栏杆). In that heart-stopping moment, Bauer hit the brakes in time to avoid the vehicles in his path, narrowly avoiding a crash with the truck ahead. But his heart sank as he saw a red car sliding backward towards him. He turned left, but too late——the car ultimately crashed into the trunk of his car. Bauer stopped the car. “Ava, are you OK?” he asked. Thankfully, Ava emerged from the chaos, but otherwise unhurt. Bauer, however, couldn’t stand by. Rushing to the red car, he checked on its driver. “Are you OK?” he asked the driver. She nodded, too shocked to speak. Then, suddenly, a scream of “HELP” cut through the air, coming from the overturned truck. As the truck driver climbed out and pointed toward the water, Bauer raced to his side. In the shallow bay waters below, he spotted a car seat and a terrified two-year-old girl, dressed in a pink dress. Without hesitation, Bauer instructed Ava to call the ambulance as he removed his shoes. He knew the situation was urgent, and he had to act swiftly to save the baby. He climbed onto the bridge’s railing, preparing to make a jump of faith into the water. He was not sure about his chances jumping from this height into such shallow water. And were there rocks this close to the concrete pillar(柱子) of the bridge? 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Bauer jumped into the water. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As the ambulance left, Ava anxiously turned to her father. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 在一个阳光明媚的春日午后，前消防员乔纳森・鲍尔和 13 岁的女儿艾娃驾车行驶在马里兰州海岸的 90 号公路桥上，享受着难得的亲子时光。突然，前方一辆黑色卡车失控撞上混凝土护栏，最终悬在桥栏杆上。鲍尔及时刹车，却仍被一辆向后滑行的红色轿车撞上。确认女儿和红车司机安全后，他听到翻车卡车里传来求救声。卡车司机指向水面，鲍尔看到浅湾中有一个汽车座椅和一个两岁左右穿着粉色连衣裙的惊恐小女孩。他让艾娃叫救护车，自己脱鞋准备从桥上跳入水中救人，尽管他不确定从高处跳入浅水区是否安全，也担心水下有岩石。 故事山分析 目标：鲍尔要从水中救出被困的两岁小女孩。 阻碍：从高处跳入浅水区存在极大风险，可能受伤，且不确定水下是否有岩石等危险物。 努力：鲍尔让女儿叫救护车，自己做好准备后勇敢地跳入水中。 结果：成功救出小女孩，小女孩和相关人员都得到妥善救治和安置。 意外：在救小女孩的过程中，可能遇到小女孩因恐惧而不配合，增加救援难度。 转折：原以为鲍尔会受伤，结果他凭借丰富的经验和顽强的毅力，顺利完成救援且自身安然无恙。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 伏笔：鲍尔是前消防员。回应：续写中可体现他在救援过程中运用消防员的专业技能和经验，比如水下救援技巧，让救援更顺利。 伏笔：不确定水下是否有岩石。回应：可以描述鲍尔在跳入水中后巧妙避开了隐藏在水下的岩石，突出救援的惊险。 伏笔：小女孩穿着粉色连衣裙。回应：在救出小女孩后，通过对小女孩粉色连衣裙的细节描写，如湿透的裙子紧贴身体等，展现救援的不易和小女孩的可怜。 伏笔：艾娃打电话叫救护车。回应：续写中可写救护车及时赶到，医护人员对小女孩和其他伤者进行救治，体现艾娃行为的重要性。 伏笔：鲍尔担心从高处跳入浅水区的风险。回应：描述他跳入水中时的感受，如巨大的冲击力带来的疼痛，但他依然坚持完成救援。 续写要点（两段） 第一段：着重描写鲍尔跳入水中后的救援过程。他如何克服水流、水压等困难接近小女孩，小女孩的反应，他又是怎样将小女孩安全救起，游回岸边。 第二段：主要刻画救护车离开后，艾娃和鲍尔的对话。艾娃表达对父亲的担心和敬佩，鲍尔则对这次经历进行感慨，强调生命的珍贵。 情感线 起初鲍尔和艾娃享受着温馨的亲子时光，心情愉悦。事故发生时，他们感到震惊和紧张。鲍尔决定救人时，怀着坚定和决绝。在救援过程中，他高度紧张和专注。成功救出小女孩后，他感到欣慰和自豪。艾娃从事故发生时的害怕，到看到父亲救人时的担心，再到最后对父亲的敬佩，情感随着故事发展不断变化。 故事线 鲍尔和艾娃驾车途中遭遇事故。 鲍尔确认女儿和红车司机安全。 鲍尔发现水中被困小女孩，准备救援。 鲍尔跳入水中展开救援行动。 成功救出小女孩，救护车赶到救治伤者。 救护车离开后，艾娃和鲍尔交流感受。 主旨升华句 In the face of danger, a brave heart and selfless dedication can turn despair into hope, showing the true power of humanity.（在危险面前，勇敢的心和无私的奉献能将绝望变为希望，展现出人性的真正力量。） This life - saving incident serves as a reminder that every life is precious, and we should always be ready to lend a helping hand when others are in need.（这次救援事件提醒我们，每一个生命都很珍贵，当他人需要帮助时，我们应随时伸出援手。） Through this harrowing experience, we witness the unwavering courage of an ordinary person, proving that heroism exists in the most unexpected moments.（通过这次惊心动魄的经历，我们见证了一个普通人坚定不移的勇气，证明了英雄主义存在于最意想不到的时刻。） The bond between a father and daughter was strengthened during this crisis, and the act of saving a life became a precious memory that would stay with them forever.（在这场危机中，父女之间的纽带得到了加强，救人的行为成为了他们永远铭记的珍贵回忆。） This accident not only tested Bauer's physical strength and courage but also deepened our understanding of the value of life and the importance of compassion.（这次事故不仅考验了鲍尔的体力和勇气，也加深了我们对生命价值和同情心重要性的理解。） 写作示范 示范一 Bauer jumped into the water. The coldness of the bay water hit him instantly, but he ignored it and swam towards the car seat with all his might. The terrified girl was crying loudly, her small hands waving in the air. As he got closer, he realized the girl was strapped tightly in the seat. With his strong hands, he quickly unbuckled the straps and scooped up the girl. Holding her close to his chest, he fought against the current and swam back to the shore. As the ambulance left, Ava anxiously turned to her father. “Dad, you were so brave! I was so scared for you,” she said, her eyes filled with tears. Bauer smiled weakly and hugged her. “I'm okay, honey. That little girl needed our help. Life is precious, and we should always do what we can to protect it.” Ava nodded, her respect for her father growing even deeper. They watched as the ambulance disappeared, knowing that this day would change their lives forever. 示范二 Bauer jumped into the water. The impact was more intense than he had expected, but his determination to save the girl kept him going. He swam through the choppy water, his eyes fixed on the crying child. When he reached the car seat, the girl was screaming in fear. He gently stroked her head to calm her down, then carefully lifted her out. Despite the fatigue in his muscles, he swam back to the shore as fast as he could. As the ambulance left, Ava rushed to her father. “Dad, I was so worried! You could have been hurt,” she exclaimed. Bauer patted her shoulder. “I know, but I couldn't just stand by and watch that little girl in danger. Today, we saw how quickly life can change, and we must cherish every moment.” Ava looked at him, understanding the depth of his words. They walked back to their car, their hearts filled with a new appreciation for life. 【答案】 Bauer jumped into the water. A moment later he was bouncing off the sandy bottom—unhurt! The little girl was less than 10 feet away. Bauer swam to her in a few quick strokes and lifted her out of the water: mouth half open, eyes nearly closed, not breathing. Standing up, he laid her against his shoulder and patted her at the back with his hand. After tense moments, she began coughing and her eyes opened. Tears of relief filled Bauer’s eyes as he carried the girl to the shore. As the ambulance left, Ava anxiously turned to her father. Bauer hugged his own daughter tightly, a moment they’d cherish forever. “That girl is going to live a whole life because of you. It’s incredible.” she said to her father. “Well, I just did what a man should do,” responded the father. On that bright spring day, Jonathan Bauer’s jump of faith became a symbol of courage and love. It was a reminder that ordinary people can perform extraordinary acts of heroism, forever changing the lives of others. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$