内容正文:
Continuation Writing
How to Describe Emotion-Happiness
Brainstorm
1.形容词:
merry, glad, pleased, delighted, cheerful, overjoyed, enjoyable, pleasant
2.副词:
happily, merrily, gladly, joyfully, cheerfully
3.名词:
pleasure, delight, enjoyment, joy, happiness, amusement
dance with joy
be wild with delight
grin from ear to ear
be as sweet as honey
brighten one's heart
on top of the world
1. dance with joy 手舞足蹈
2.be wild with delight 欣喜若狂
3. grin from ear to ear满面笑容
4. be as sweet as honey 像蜜一样甜
5. brighten one's heart 使某人心情愉快
6. on top of the world心满意足
7.beam with pleasure 喜不自胜
8.be delighted at 对...很高兴
9. to one's amusement
令某人开心的是
10. in high spirits 心情愉快
11. be seized by joy快乐起来
12. be overcome with happiness
非常高兴
Game
task1. 单句情景表达
1.当主持人宣布我获奖时,我感到....
When the host announced that I won the prize, .
激动的两眼放光
My eyes twinkled with excitement
眼睛里闪着开心
欢欣雀跃
My eyes danced with joy
I cheered and jumped with pleasure
单句情景表达
2.得知我被梦寐以求的大学录取,我父母感到....
When they heard that I had been admitted to my dream university, .
高兴地手舞足蹈
they danced with joy
喜不自胜
they hugged with tears in their eyes
happiness seized them
相拥而泣
无灵主语:没有生命的事物作主语,如情感,动作,物品,时间。地点等
Explore:Which group is more vivid?
She was very happy.
They were overjoyed.
tell=general description
show=detailed description
Don’t just tell. But !
show
She cheered and jumped with pleasure.
They hugged with tears in their eyes.
Group A
Group B
请运用以上单词或高频语块,把下面的语篇补充完整。
Learning the children’s idea, Relieved and 1. (高兴的),Mrs. Wendy smiled brightly. Then, the children got down to preparing popcorn 2. (高兴地). With a basket of popcorn, they left for the Dennis’s and were 3. (非常高兴) to share the good plan with Dennis. Hearing what they said, Dennis felt a wave of 4. (高兴)welling up in his heart. At the sight of the basket of popcorn, his parents 5. (也非常高兴), with tears filling their eyes.
Later, 6. (令他非常高兴的是), the popcorn was so tasty that it soon sold out. Dennis soon returned, 7. (高兴) seized him.Laughter lingered around the room.(笑声在房间里萦绕).
task2. 片段情景表达 Fill in the blank.
Summarize some useful sentence patterns to show happiness.
Explore: Group Work
Useful sentence patterns
直接表达法(直接使用表达喜悦的词):
1. adj. and adj.,sb did sth.
2.Hearing what sb. said, sb felt a wave of +n.+welling up in ones heart.
间接表达法(用表情和动作来表达喜悦):
3. sb. did sth, with +n.+doing/done/to do.
4.无灵主语+n.+固定动词(seize/grasp/overwhelm...)+sb.
[2021年高考题改编] A Mother’s Day Surprise
(一对双胞胎在母亲节为妈妈送惊喜,准备为母亲做一份早餐,虽然一开始不顺利,但在爸爸的帮助下完成了制作。)
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 激动并高兴着,双胞胎大喊:“母亲节快乐!”,眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。当妈妈看到早餐时,惊讶和高兴淹没了她。妈妈紧紧地拥抱着他们,说这是她吃过最好吃的早餐。听到妈妈的话,双胞胎高兴得似乎在世界之巅。
Micro-writing Task
Performance Correct gender Proper phrases Beautiful handwriting Sentence patterns Past tense
Excellent(2)
Need to be improved(1)
Excited and pleased, the twins yelled: “Happy Mother’s Day!” Their eyes twinkled with excitement.When mom saw the brakfast,surprise and amusement overwhelmed her.Mom hugged them tightly,saying that it was the best brakfast she had ever had.Hearing what the mom said, the twins felt like they were on top of the world.
Summarize what we have learned using a mind-map for help.
Summary
Assignment
1.Read and review what we have learned.
2. Micro continuation writing (choose one to write.)
(1)Your efforts finally paid off after 3 years’ hard work. On a sunny day, you received the offer from your dreaming college.(侧重描写拿到录取通知书的情感,续写2-3句话。)
(2)Inside the bag were some fruit. I was also surprised to find the $20 bill.(描写收到陌生人帮助后的情感细节,续写2-3句话。)
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