故事续写拥抱心理的故事续写 讲义-山东省新高考联合质量测评2023-2024学年高三下学期3月联考英语试题

故事续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Don’t bug me! Hug me!” Bumper Sticker Lee Shapiro is a retired judge. He is also one of the most genuinely loving people we know. At one point in his career, Lee realized that love is the greatest power there is. As a result, Lee became a hugger. He began offering everybody a hug. His colleagues dubbed him “the hugging judge”, which is opposed to the hanging judge. The bumper sticker on his car reads, “Don’t bug me! Hug me!” About six years ago Lee created what he called his Hugger Kit. On the outside it reads “A heart for a hug.” The inside contains thirty little red embroidered hearts with stickers on the back. Lee will take out his Hugger Kit, go around to people and offer them a little red heart in exchange for a hug. Lee has become so well known for this that he is often invited to keynote conferences and conventions, where he shares his message of unconditional love. At a conference in San Francisco, the local news media challenged him by saying, “It is easy to give out hugs here in the conference to people who self-selected to be here. But this would never work in the real world.” They challenged Lee to give away some hugs on the streets of San Francisco. Followed by a television crew from the local news station, Lee went out onto the street. First he approached a woman walking by. “Hi, I’m Lee Shapiro, the hugging judge. I’m giving out these hearts in exchange for a hug.” “Sure,” she replied. “Too easy,” challenged the local commentator. Lee looked around. He saw a meter maid who was being given a hard time by a traffic police, who was giving a ticket to her for illegal car parking. He marched up to her, camera crew in tow, and said, “You look like you could use a hug. I’m the hugging judge and I’m offering you one.” She delightedly accepted it. The television commentator threw down a more hug challenge to Lee. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 He had never before hugged people who were severely terminally ill as Leonard. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Doctors said it was the first time that they had seen Leonard smile. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 拥抱心理的故事续写 续写要点（两段） 第一段：着重描写 Lee 与 Leonard 拥抱时的具体场景，包括 Lee 的心理变化、Leonard 的反应细节等。比如可以描述 Lee 看到 Leonard 虚弱模样时内心的不忍与坚定，Leonard 从最初的惊讶到逐渐放松接受拥抱的过程。同时，也可以适当描写周围环境，如病房里安静的氛围、仪器的滴答声等，来烘托气氛。 第二段：围绕 Leonard 的微笑展开，讲述这个微笑给周围人带来的影响，如医生、护士的感慨，以及 Lee 内心的触动。还可以进一步阐述这个故事后续的发展，比如医院里其他患者的改变，或者社会对 Lee 行为的关注等。 情感线（150 字） 起初 Lee 面对身患绝症的 Leonard 时，内心充满了犹豫与担忧，不确定自己的拥抱是否能给对方带来慰藉。但当他鼓起勇气拥抱 Leonard 时，紧张感逐渐被温暖和希望所取代。Leonard 从惊讶、抗拒到慢慢接受，他的微笑让 Lee 感受到了爱的力量，也让在场的医护人员为之动容。这种情感从忐忑不安到温暖人心的转变，成为故事的情感主线，传递出爱与希望的正能量。 故事线（6 条） Lee 得知 Leonard 的病情后，决定去医院看望他并给予拥抱，这是故事的新起点。 Lee 在前往病房的途中，回忆起自己之前拥抱他人的经历，更加坚定了自己的想法。 进入病房，Lee 看到虚弱的 Leonard，内心有些犹豫，但还是勇敢地迈出了第一步。 Leonard 最初对Lee 的拥抱感到惊讶和抗拒，但在Lee 的真诚下，逐渐放松并接受了拥抱。 Leonard 的微笑引发了周围人的关注，医生和护士们看到这一幕后深受感动，对 Lee 的行为表示赞赏。 这个故事被传播开来，引发了社会的关注，更多人开始关注绝症患者的情感需求，Lee 也受到了鼓舞，继续传播拥抱的力量。 主旨升华句 5 句英文 A simple hug can light up the darkest corner of a person's heart, bringing hope and warmth.（一个简单的拥抱可以照亮一个人内心最黑暗的角落，带来希望和温暖。） Love is not measured by grand gestures but by the simple acts of kindness like a hug, which can change lives.（爱不是用华丽的举动来衡量的，而是像一个拥抱这样简单的善举，它可以改变生活。） In the face of illness and despair, a hug from a stranger can be the spark that ignites the flame of hope.（在疾病和绝望面前，一个陌生人的拥抱可以成为点燃希望之火的火花。） Through this act of giving a hug, we realize that the power of human connection can overcome even the greatest difficulties.（通过这个拥抱的举动，我们意识到人与人之间联系的力量可以克服甚至最大的困难。） Let us all spread the love like Lee, for a hug has the magic to make the world a better place.（让我们都像 Lee 一样传播爱，因为一个拥抱有着让世界变得更美好的魔力。） 写作示范一 He had never before hugged people who were severely terminally ill as Leonard. As he walked into the dimly - lit ward, the smell of disinfectant filled his nostrils. Leonard, with sunken cheeks and weak eyes, was lying in the bed. Lee took a deep breath, trying to calm his nerves. He slowly approached the bed, knelt down beside it, and said softly, "I'm here to give you a hug, Leonard. It might bring you some comfort." Leonard's eyes widened in surprise at first, but then he nodded slightly. Lee gently put his arms around Leonard, and for a moment, the whole world seemed to stand still. Doctors said it was the first time that they had seen Leonard smile. The warm smile spread across Leonard's face like a ray of sunshine breaking through the clouds. The nurses, who were used to the solemn atmosphere in the ward, were deeply moved. One of the doctors said, "This hug has worked wonders. It's not just physical treatment that patients need, but also emotional support." Lee was filled with a sense of accomplishment. This simple act of love had not only brought joy to Leonard but also inspired everyone around. From then on, Lee made it a mission to visit more terminally - ill patients, spreading the power of hugs. 写作示范二 He had never before hugged people who were severely terminally ill as Leonard. Standing at the door of the ward, Lee's heart was pounding. He knew that his hug might be the only source of warmth for Leonard in this cold hospital. Summoning up his courage, he stepped inside. Leonard was sitting in a wheelchair, looking out of the window with a blank expression. Lee walked over and said, "Hi, Leonard. I'm the hugging judge. Can I give you a hug?" Leonard turned his head slowly, his eyes full of suspicion. But Lee's kind smile made him relax a bit. As Lee's arms wrapped around him, Leonard's body stiffened at first and then gradually softened. Doctors said it was the first time that they had seen Leonard smile. The moment Leonard smiled, the whole room seemed to brighten up. The medical staff, who had witnessed the patient's long - term suffering, were in awe of this simple yet powerful act. A nurse said with tears in her eyes, "This is what love can do. It can bring back the light in a patient's life." Lee was deeply touched by the reaction. He realized that his mission of spreading hugs was far more important than he thought. This experience also encouraged more people to join him in showing love and care to those in need. 【答案】 He had never before hugged people who were severely terminally ill as Leonard. Through taking to doctors, Lee learned that Leonard, once an optimistic and happy boy, had suffered from severe leukemia two years earlier. Approaching the ward, Lee took a deep breath, leaned down and gave Leonard a hug. Surprisingly, Leonard began to smile. And some of the other patients in the room began to gather around. Lee turned to the staff for some sort of explanation only to find every doctor, nurse and orderly crying. Lee asked the doctors, “What’s going on?” Doctors said it was the first time that they had seen Leonard smile. Upon hearing the doctor’s words, Lee could not control his emotions. Countless people as he had hugged before, this hug would surely leave the deepest memory for him. Every weekend, Lee made time to hug the boy with the television commentator recording every touching hug movement. Loved by a stranger, the boy was positive to receive treatment and he gradually picked up. If everyone can offer their own hug, the world will become more beautiful. How simple it is to make a difference to lives of others! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$