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第16讲 书面表达:五育并举(人与自我)
1.(24-25九年级上·浙江金华·期末)当前,劳动课程已在我国中小学校得以普遍实施。假设你是李华,请结合表格内容,向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的两门劳动课程,并告诉他你所选择的一门,谈谈你的劳动经历和心得体会。
School Labour Courses
Your experience and feelings
Courses
Aims
★ Doing chores (家务):
cooking & recycling the waste
To learn to look after ourselves
and protect the environment
…
★ Vegetable-planting
To study plants and know about
farming
注意:
1. 短文必须包含表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数:100左右;
3. 作文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? This term, our school has offered two labour courses.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.(24-25九年级上·浙江杭州·期中)假如你是李平,英国交换生 Robin 即将来你的学校学习,他对你校的拓展课程 (extended courses) 很感兴趣,请你从以下或其他课程中推荐一种,并结合自身的学习经历,说明推荐理由,并向他介绍该课程的相关信息。
要求:文中需包含所给问题的相关信息,并可作适当想象和发挥;
文中不得出现真实的姓名和班级;
词数100词左右。
Dear Robin,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
3.(24-25九年级上·浙江杭州·阶段练习)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Jenny的学校即将开设特色选修课程(elective course),她正在考虑是否选修汉语,所以来信询问你的建议。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英语给Jenny回信。
注意:
(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2) 语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to hear from you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
4.(2024·浙江·二模)假设你是李华,请结合表格内容,用英语邮件向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的,并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。
School Labor (劳动) Courses
The course you choose and your reason
Courses
Aims
…
Vegetable-planting
To study plants and know about farming
Cooking course:
making dumplings & Zongzi
To learn about traditional Chinese cultures
Chair-repairing
To learn and practice new skills
要求:
1. 必须包括表格中所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
2. 词数:100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?
This term, we have three labor courses at school.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.(22-23九年级下·浙江金华·期中)学校每周将开展“音体美劳教育”相关的课外课程。请你从下表中选择1—2个课程,然后用英语写一篇短文,说明你的选择意向及理由,并分享在学校的英语网站上。
The course you’d like to choose
The reasons why you choose it
▲painting
▲singing
(1) relax oneself;
(2) improve skills;
(3) ...
▲ball games
▲sports dancing
▲planting vegetables
注意:(1)表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
(3)词数:80~100词;
(4)短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
Our school will hold different courses._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.(2023·浙江温州·中考真题)请根据以下征文海报,结合所提示的六类英语作业,写一篇英语短文投稿,分享你最喜爱的一类作业及理由,并例举一次相关作业经历谈谈你从中得到的收获。
English homeworkhelps me LEVEL UP!
What kind of English homework do you like best?
Write and share!
Send it to hoppyhomework@learnEnglish.com
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:110词左右;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
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第16讲 书面表达:五育并举(人与自我)
1.(24-25九年级上·浙江金华·期末)当前,劳动课程已在我国中小学校得以普遍实施。假设你是李华,请结合表格内容,向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的两门劳动课程,并告诉他你所选择的一门,谈谈你的劳动经历和心得体会。
School Labour Courses
Your experience and feelings
Courses
Aims
★ Doing chores (家务):
cooking & recycling the waste
To learn to look after ourselves
and protect the environment
…
★ Vegetable-planting
To study plants and know about
farming
注意:
1. 短文必须包含表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数:100左右;
3. 作文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? This term, our school has offered two labour courses.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? This term, our school has offered two labour courses.
In the chores course, we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings and recycle the waste. As a result, we can practice some basic life skills and help protect the environment. And we also have a vegetable-planting course, which aims to help us study plants and know about farming.
As for me, I choose the vegetable-planting course because I want to know more about farming and get close to nature. Under the guidance of our teachers, we purchased seeds, planted, watered and fertilized them, as well as transplanted them to guarantee the survival of vegetables. No pains, no gains. Through the hands-on experience, not only do I gain a sense of achievement, but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.
Do you have labor courses? Can you tell me something about them? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头,引出主题;
第二步,具体阐述本学期新开的两门劳动课程;
第三步,介绍自己选择的哪门劳动课程,并谈谈自己的劳动经历;
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①as a result因此
②aim to do sth旨在做某事
③get close to接近
④as well as以及
⑤look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①And we also have a vegetable-planting course, which aims to help us study plants and know about farming. (which引导的定语从句)
②As for me, I choose the vegetable-planting course because I want to know more about farming and get close to nature. (because引导的原因状语从句)
2.(24-25九年级上·浙江杭州·期中)假如你是李平,英国交换生 Robin 即将来你的学校学习,他对你校的拓展课程 (extended courses) 很感兴趣,请你从以下或其他课程中推荐一种,并结合自身的学习经历,说明推荐理由,并向他介绍该课程的相关信息。
要求:文中需包含所给问题的相关信息,并可作适当想象和发挥;
文中不得出现真实的姓名和班级;
词数100词左右。
Dear Robin,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文:
Dear Robin,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to our school and interested in our extended courses. Our extended courses include Tea Art, Basketball, Arts and crafts and English speech. Each course is taught by a professional teacher.
I took part in Tea Art. I think it’s a part of Chinese culture. The teacher who taught tea art is a great tea culture lover. I took lessons in our school hall every Friday afternoon. From this course, I learned the history and development of tea and how to make a perfect cup of tea. What impressed me most was that we wore ancient costumes to perform in the tea art competition.
I hope you take part in Tea Art. It will show you the charm of Chinese tea culture. I’m sure you’ll be interested in it.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:材料图片所给内容不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,注意书信格式要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍拓展课程种类;
第二步,讲述茶艺课程及自己的学习经历;
第三步,书写结语,发出邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②take part in参加
③the charm of……的魅力
[高分句型]
I think it’s a part of Chinese culture. (宾语从句)
3.(24-25九年级上·浙江杭州·阶段练习)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Jenny的学校即将开设特色选修课程(elective course),她正在考虑是否选修汉语,所以来信询问你的建议。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英语给Jenny回信。
注意:
(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2) 语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to hear from you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. Chinese is spoken widely in the world. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture. In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误,行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,提出观点——建议选修汉语课程;
第二步,说明学习汉语的重要性;
第三步,给出学习汉语的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①not only … but also …不仅……而且……
②what’s more而且
③be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
①Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course.(省略that的宾语从句)
②Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.(动名词作主语)
4.(2024·浙江·二模)假设你是李华,请结合表格内容,用英语邮件向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的,并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。
School Labor (劳动) Courses
The course you choose and your reason
Courses
Aims
…
Vegetable-planting
To study plants and know about farming
Cooking course:
making dumplings & Zongzi
To learn about traditional Chinese cultures
Chair-repairing
To learn and practice new skills
要求:
1. 必须包括表格中所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
2. 词数:100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?
This term, we have three labor courses at school.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?
This term, we have three labor courses at school. In the cooking course we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on. In each kind of Chinese traditional food lie rich Chinese cultures. And we have chair-repairing course. It’s very interesting to learn new skills and practice them.
There is also a vegetable-planting course this term. I choose it this term. My classmates and I can plant tomatoes and have a lot of fun. We study plants and know about farming and get close to nature. I really enjoy vegetable-planting course as they not only enrich our school life but also offer us basic life skills.
Do you have labor courses? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的;
第二步,介绍自己选择的劳动课程。
[亮点词汇]
①have a lot of fun玩得开心
②get close to亲近
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①In the cooking course we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on.(疑问词+动词不定式结构)
②It’s very interesting to learn new skills and practice them.(动词不定式作主语)
5.(22-23九年级下·浙江金华·期中)学校每周将开展“音体美劳教育”相关的课外课程。请你从下表中选择1—2个课程,然后用英语写一篇短文,说明你的选择意向及理由,并分享在学校的英语网站上。
The course you’d like to choose
The reasons why you choose it
▲painting
▲singing
(1) relax oneself;
(2) improve skills;
(3) ...
▲ball games
▲sports dancing
▲planting vegetables
注意:(1)表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
(3)词数:80~100词;
(4)短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
Our school will hold different courses._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Our school will hold different after-school activities. I hope to participate in one of them.
I love sports, especially basketball, so the activity of “ball game” is my first choice. I think there must be more coaches and players, so if I join the activity, it will be a great chance to improve my basketball skills. Also, I’m out going and always hope to make friends with those basketball lovers. We can play together and learn from each other. Another reason is that we students need rest after a long time of studying. To me, playing basketball no doubt is the best way.
Therefore, the idea of holding an event sounds great. I am eager to attend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:本文主要以描述和表达观点为主,写作时可选其一或其二的课程,选其一的话,为达到题目的字数要求可增加理由的数量,也可对单一的理由进行更加详细地陈述;理由的陈述可参考表格的提示,也可适当地自我发挥;写作完成后应保证文章内容齐全,行文流畅,语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,表达自己的想法;
第二步,具体阐述自己的意向及理由;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①participate in参加
②make friends with和……做朋友
③learn from向……学习
④each other互相
[高分句型]
Another reason is that we students need rest after a long time of studying.(表语从句)
6.(2023·浙江温州·中考真题)请根据以下征文海报,结合所提示的六类英语作业,写一篇英语短文投稿,分享你最喜爱的一类作业及理由,并例举一次相关作业经历谈谈你从中得到的收获。
English homeworkhelps me LEVEL UP!
What kind of English homework do you like best?
Write and share!
Send it to hoppyhomework@learnEnglish.com
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:110词左右;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
English Homework Helps Me Level Up______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文:
English Homework Helps Me Level Up
My favourite kind of English homework is acting out a play. It can help improve my language skills and make me confident.
When I was in Grade 8, my teacher asked us to act out the play Romeo and Juliet in a group of six. It was a big challenge. Firstly, I read the play with group members and we shared our understanding of the play. Then, we chose our roles and practised the lines a lot. My spoken English has improved. In the end, we put on a great show and won praise. Now I’m interested in acting and feel brave enough to show myself in front of the public.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据海报中的内容讲述自己最喜欢的英语作业是什么,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,介绍自己最喜欢的英语作业是什么;
第二步,讲述自己做这项英语作业的示例;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事
②in the end最后
③put on上演
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade 8, my teacher asked us to act out the play Romeo and Juliet in a group of six.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Now I’m interested in acting and feel brave enough to show myself in front of the public.(and连接的并列句)
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