Unit 1 The secrets of happiness 单元话题写作满分范文16篇（紧贴新教材）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（外研版2024）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit1 The secrets of happiness 单元话题写作满分范文16篇（紧贴新教材） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．学校英语俱乐部将开展以“My Happiness”为主题的征文评比活动。请你根据以下内容，写一篇征文参赛。 Happiness comes from different things in our lives. Everyone has their own ideas about what makes them happy. Some students think that happiness comes from learning about amazing things in the world and seeing new things; some students think that happiness comes from using their skills to help others; some students think that happiness comes from playing outside and enjoying nature; and other students think that happiness comes from taking care of pets and playing with them. Please write an article with the title “My Happiness”, describe one of your happy moments and talk about how you feel. 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 根据所给提示，选择一个观点，并进行适当发挥； 4. 词数80左右，开头不计入总词数。 My Happiness What’s happiness? Different people have different answers. For me, happiness comes from ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．幸福对于每个人来说都有着不一样的定义，在你的生活和学习中，你觉得幸福是什么？是和同学玩耍，还是和父母共处？是看着喜欢的书，还是牵着钟爱的狗？是赚很多钱，还是拥有一个属于自己的梦想？其实幸福一直都在我们的身边，我们应当珍惜。请以“Happiness Around Me”为题，用英语写一篇短文，来真实表达你对幸福的理解。 内容包括： 1. 每个人对幸福的理解不一样，你认为什么是幸福？ 2. 简单讲述自己的某个经历来表达你对幸福的理解。 要求如下： 1. 有理有据且真实地陈述自己对幸福的观点； 2. 结构合理，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数100左右，不得在信中提及真实校名及人名。 Happiness Around Me___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．亲人在身边是最幸福的事，你了解他们吗？选择一个你最想介绍给我们的亲人，根据要点提示，写一篇以“My ________”为题的英语短文。 要点： 1. 介绍一下他或她的年龄、外貌、衣着等； 2. 介绍一下他或她的工作、爱好、日常活动等。 要求： 1. 文中应该包括以上信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等； 3. 词数70左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．在你的学习生活中，一定做过很多让自己感到幸福快乐的事，如帮助别人、读书、志愿服务等。请以“_________ Make(s) Me Happy”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你做某件事的经历和感受。 要求： (1)请补全标题； (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息； (3)语言表达准确，行文连贯，书写规范，词数80-90左右。 ________ Make(s) Me Happy ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．在你成长的道路上，和你相知相伴的朋友，一定留下了许多美好的故事和难忘的回忆！学校以“A Story Between My Friend and Me”为题开展征文比赛，请你根据要点和要求用英语写一篇短文参赛。 要点： (1)分享故事(起因，经过，结果……)； (2)表达感受(幸福，感动，思考⋯⋯)。 要求： (1)故事包括要点内容，可适当发挥。 (2)词数：80词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (注意：文中不能出现考生真实的姓名、校名和老师名，否则不得分) A Story Between My Friend and Me There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．礼物是寄托和表达情感的重要方式。在过去的生活中，你一定收到过不少来自他人的礼物吧。这些礼物给予了你怎样的幸福感和力量呢？请以“The Best Gift I’ve Ever Received”为题写一篇文章，分享你收到过的最好的礼物。 要求： 1. 80——120词； 2. 短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考要点： The Best Gift I’ve Ever Received the introduction of the gift What is it? How do you like it? … the story behind the gift Who gave it to you? How long have you kept it? … the reasons why it’s the best …(at least two reasons) 参考语言: The Best Gift I’ve Ever Received So far, I have received many gifts from people around me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．哈佛大学的一项研究表明，爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感。请你以“Help with Some Housework”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法。 提示： Opinions Pros：develop our independence; take care of ourselves；… Cons: a waste of time; no need to；… Help with Some Housework It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．为庆祝第31个国际家庭日，学校英语社举行“Happier family, Better life”分享会。请你从下图中选择你认为最重要的两项提升家庭幸福感的秘诀，写一篇演讲稿分享你们家的具体做法及理由。 Keys to a Happy Family□Set rules □Eat together □Show thanks □Share housework □Have fun together □Be kind and patient □Share happiness or worries □Have family traditions and celebrations 注意：①词数：100词左右；首句和尾句已给出，不计入总词数； ②文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Good morning, everyone. I’m happy to share the keys to a happy family. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 9．乐于助人是中华民族的传统美德。回忆一下，你曾经帮助过某个人吧？这个人可能是你的亲人、朋友、师长，又或许是陷入困境的陌生人。你帮助他或她摆脱了困境，你是否也获得了幸福感？根据以下提示，适当拓展，写一篇短文，词数在80-100左右。不得在文章中出现真实姓名。男名用Tom，女名用Lily。 提示： 1. When and where did you help the person? 2. Who did you help? 3. Why did you want to help him/her? 4. What did you do for him/her? 5. How did you feel about helping others? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Small tricks to improve happiness” (以“提升幸福感的小妙招”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 3月20日是国际幸福日。快乐、自信、充实、自豪，当你拥有这些感受，你就是一个幸福的人。生活中的一些小妙招可以让我们获得幸福感，请你结合自己或他人的经历和感受描述至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并说明一下理由。 (注意: 1.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践6篇 11．Write at least 60 words on the topic "Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult times"(以"在困难时期，幸福感不一定会消失"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格). 小到个人，大到团队、城市、国家，都会有困难时期，但即便是困难时期，人们还是能感受生活中的小喜悦，感受幸福温馨的片刻，请结合自己或他人的经历，说说困难时期的幸福感。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予计分) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．在成长的过程中，有些日子会让你开心快乐，经久难忘。请以“My happy holiday”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，记述你那天的活动和感受。 要求：1、参考所给提示，可适当发挥； 2、时态正确，语句通顺，语意连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．近日，你班组织了一场关于享受课余时间的分享活动。请你结合表格内容提示，用英语写一篇发言稿进行分享。词数70词左右。 How I Enjoy My Time after Class My Situation (现状) ◆be busy, many lessons ◆spend time, out of class My Activities & Reasons (理由) ◆do sports, be good for ◆do some reading, love reading ◆do chores, be a good way to learn things My Feeling (感想) … 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Hi, boys and girls, I’m so happy to tell you how I enjoy my time after class. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks. 14．假如你们班举行了主题为“A Plan for Mother’s Day”的班会活动，鼓励大家向妈妈表达感恩之情。同学们各抒己见。请你写一篇英文短文作为班会总结，并谈谈自己的计划和看法。 A Plan for Classmates’ plans (buy gifts, do housework, make cards ) Mother’s Day Your plan (what and why) Your ideas (…) My classmates plan to celebrate Mother’s Day in different ways. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．漫漫人生路，只要有父母陪伴，不管走到哪里，都是一场温暖的旅程。父母是我们最熟悉的亲人，请根据以下思维导图的提示，并以“Be Thankful to Our Parents”为题写一篇英文短文。 Be Thankful to Our Parents ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．生日是成长的见证，也是过去所有的你的“合集”。每个人对每次生日都有不一样的感情。请你根据以下提示和写作要求，以“My Great Birthday”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述你印象深刻的一次生日，要点提示： My Great Birthday When is your birthday? Who celebrated it with you? What did you do? What present did you get? How did you feel? 写作要求：（1）文中须包含提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； （3）词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 5 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit1 The secrets of happiness 单元话题写作满分范文16篇（紧贴新教材） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．学校英语俱乐部将开展以“My Happiness”为主题的征文评比活动。请你根据以下内容，写一篇征文参赛。 Happiness comes from different things in our lives. Everyone has their own ideas about what makes them happy. Some students think that happiness comes from learning about amazing things in the world and seeing new things; some students think that happiness comes from using their skills to help others; some students think that happiness comes from playing outside and enjoying nature; and other students think that happiness comes from taking care of pets and playing with them. Please write an article with the title “My Happiness”, describe one of your happy moments and talk about how you feel. 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 根据所给提示，选择一个观点，并进行适当发挥； 4. 词数80左右，开头不计入总词数。 My Happiness What’s happiness? Different people have different answers. For me, happiness comes from ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Happiness What’s happiness? Different people have different answers. For me, happiness comes from my parents’ love. I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll always be beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up.” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的一次幸福时刻，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，语言通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍自己的幸福是什么； 第二步，具体介绍自己的一次幸福时刻； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be afraid to do sth害怕做某事 ②give up放弃 ③make up one’s mind下定决心 [高分句型] ①Remember we’ll always be beside you when you need help. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②We believe you can be better next time. (宾语从句) 2．幸福对于每个人来说都有着不一样的定义，在你的生活和学习中，你觉得幸福是什么？是和同学玩耍，还是和父母共处？是看着喜欢的书，还是牵着钟爱的狗？是赚很多钱，还是拥有一个属于自己的梦想？其实幸福一直都在我们的身边，我们应当珍惜。请以“Happiness Around Me”为题，用英语写一篇短文，来真实表达你对幸福的理解。 内容包括： 1. 每个人对幸福的理解不一样，你认为什么是幸福？ 2. 简单讲述自己的某个经历来表达你对幸福的理解。 要求如下： 1. 有理有据且真实地陈述自己对幸福的观点； 2. 结构合理，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数100左右，不得在信中提及真实校名及人名。 Happiness Around Me___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Happiness Around Me When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction. But, in my eyes, staying with my families really makes me happy for the simple and sincere love among us can last forever throughout our life. In the sixth grade of primary school, I had a high fever and had to stay in hospital for two weeks. My father sent me delicious food made by my mother every day and talked with me to relax me. My little sister Lucy often called me and cared about my health. When I was awake at night, I found my father sleeping on the chair beside my bed. I suddenly thought that staying with families was the biggest happiness and I was the happiest person in the world. Dear friends, let’s cherish every moment with our family, which worths all. Don’t do it until it is too late. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括两个要点，要适当拓展、补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称和第三人称，介绍过去经历时用一般过去时，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍你眼中的幸福是什么； 第二步，陈述过去的一次经历以及对幸福的理解； 第三步，呼吁大家珍惜与家人在一起的时刻。 ［亮点词汇］ ① the great sense of satisfaction 巨大的满足感 ② have a high fever 发高烧 ③ care about 关心，在意 ［高分句型］ ① When I was awake at night, I found my father sleeping on the chair beside my bed.（when引导时间状语从句） ② Dear friends, let’s cherish every moment with our family, which worths all.（which引导非限制性定语从句） 3．亲人在身边是最幸福的事，你了解他们吗？选择一个你最想介绍给我们的亲人，根据要点提示，写一篇以“My ________”为题的英语短文。 要点： 1. 介绍一下他或她的年龄、外貌、衣着等； 2. 介绍一下他或她的工作、爱好、日常活动等。 要求： 1. 文中应该包括以上信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等； 3. 词数70左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Father Hello! I would like to tell you something about my father. He is 40 years old. He is tall and he has a big nose and big eyes. He is often in a black coat. He is a doctor. He works in a big hospital. He gets up very early in the morning and goes to work by car. Though he is busy, he often takes us for a picnic when he is free. And he likes cooking delicious food for us. Every day he spends an hour doing sports in the gym. So he is very strong. I love my father and he loves me, too. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明要介绍的亲人是谁； 第二步，介绍他或她的年龄、外貌、衣着等； 第三步，介绍他或她的工作、爱好、日常活动等。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth.想要做某事 ②spends some time doing sth.花费时间做某事 [高分句型] Though he is busy, he often takes us for a picnic when he is free.(though引导让步状语从句，when引导时间状语从句) 4．在你的学习生活中，一定做过很多让自己感到幸福快乐的事，如帮助别人、读书、志愿服务等。请以“_________ Make(s) Me Happy”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你做某件事的经历和感受。 要求： (1)请补全标题； (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息； (3)语言表达准确，行文连贯，书写规范，词数80-90左右。 ________ Make(s) Me Happy ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Helping Others Makes Me Happy In my study life, there’s one thing that always brings me great joy and happiness—helping others. Once, I saw a classmate struggling with his math homework. He looked so worried and upset. Without hesitation, I went over and offered to help him. Together, we worked through the problems step by step. After an hour, he finally understood and smiled happily. Seeing his smile, I felt a sense of achievement and happiness. Helping others not only makes them feel better but also gives me a deep sense of fulfillment. It makes me realize that even small acts of kindness can bring big changes and happiness to people’s lives. Every time I help someone, my heart is filled with warmth and joy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示： 写作要点包括做某件事的经历和由此产生的快乐感受，考生需围绕这一中心，详细叙述事件经过，并突出个人的情感体验。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全标题并表明写作意图； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细叙述做这件事的具体经历和感受； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①struggling with与……斗争，努力应对 ②offered to主动提出 ③a sense of achievement成就感 ④a deep sense of fulfillment深深的满足感 ⑤be filled with充满 [高分句型] It makes me realize that even small acts of kindness can bring big changes and happiness to people’s lives.（that引导的宾语从句） 5．在你成长的道路上，和你相知相伴的朋友，一定留下了许多美好的故事和难忘的回忆！学校以“A Story Between My Friend and Me”为题开展征文比赛，请你根据要点和要求用英语写一篇短文参赛。 要点： (1)分享故事(起因，经过，结果……)； (2)表达感受(幸福，感动，思考⋯⋯)。 要求： (1)故事包括要点内容，可适当发挥。 (2)词数：80词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (注意：文中不能出现考生真实的姓名、校名和老师名，否则不得分) A Story Between My Friend and Me There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: A Story Between My Friend and Me There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. Here is a story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he decided to help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot. In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，分享你和好朋友之间的故事； 第二步，表达感受； 第三步，给出自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ① fall down摔倒 ② be worried about担心 ③ fall behind落后 ④ in my opinion依我看 [高分句型] ①When he knew about that, he decided to help me with my study. （when引导的时间状语从句） ②No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.（no matter what引导的让步状语从句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．礼物是寄托和表达情感的重要方式。在过去的生活中，你一定收到过不少来自他人的礼物吧。这些礼物给予了你怎样的幸福感和力量呢？请以“The Best Gift I’ve Ever Received”为题写一篇文章，分享你收到过的最好的礼物。 要求： 1. 80——120词； 2. 短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考要点： The Best Gift I’ve Ever Received the introduction of the gift What is it? How do you like it? … the story behind the gift Who gave it to you? How long have you kept it? … the reasons why it’s the best …(at least two reasons) 参考语言: The Best Gift I’ve Ever Received So far, I have received many gifts from people around me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Best Gift I’ve Ever Received So far, I have received many gifts from people around me. Among them, the best one is a hand­-made car. My grandfather gave the car to me on my tenth birthday. It was made of wood, and it took my grandfather almost a month to make it. After it was finished, my grandfather painted it blue and red carefully. It looked very cool. When I received it, I was too excited to say a word, because cars are always my favorite toys. I often take it out and have a careful look at it when I think of my grandfather. I will keep it forever because it’s full of my grandpa’s love. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当发挥，语意要通顺，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己收到最好的礼物； 第二步，具体介绍礼物的来历； 第三步，详细介绍自己和礼物之间的故事。 [亮点词汇] ①be made of 由……制做 ②think of 想起 ③be full of 充满 高分句型] ①and it took my grandfather almost a month to make it.（it固定句型） ②When I received it, I was too excited to say a word, because cars are always my favorite toys.（when引导时间状语从句+because引导原因状语从句） 7．哈佛大学的一项研究表明，爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感。请你以“Help with Some Housework”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法。 提示： Opinions Pros：develop our independence; take care of ourselves；… Cons: a waste of time; no need to；… Help with Some Housework It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Help with Some Housework It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I usually sweep the floor, take out the rubbish, wash my clothes and do the dishes at home. Different people have different opinions about this. Some people say that there is no need to do housework. They think it’s a waste of time. In my opinion, it’s quite important for children to do some housework. Firstly, it can develop our independence. Children depend on their parents too much. If we learn to do housework, we can take care of ourselves when we get older in the future. Secondly, it’s not just parents’ job to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home. Everyone should play a part in doing housework. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：注意表明自己的观点，材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当发挥，语意要通顺，无拼写和语法错误。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍自己平时做的家务活； 第二步，自己的看法； ［亮点词汇］ ① a waste of time浪费时间 ② In my opinion 以我的观点 ［高分句型］ ① If we learn to do housework, we can take care of ourselves when we get older in the future. （条件状语从句） 8．为庆祝第31个国际家庭日，学校英语社举行“Happier family, Better life”分享会。请你从下图中选择你认为最重要的两项提升家庭幸福感的秘诀，写一篇演讲稿分享你们家的具体做法及理由。 Keys to a Happy Family□Set rules □Eat together □Show thanks □Share housework □Have fun together □Be kind and patient □Share happiness or worries □Have family traditions and celebrations 注意：①词数：100词左右；首句和尾句已给出，不计入总词数； ②文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Good morning, everyone. I’m happy to share the keys to a happy family. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】参考范文： Good morning, everyone. I’m happy to share the keys to a happy family. I think sharing housework is the most important. In my family, we have a rule that everyone helps with housework. My sister and I help clean the house. My father cooks meals and my mother does some washing. By working together, we finish faster and have more time to have fun. Being kind and patient is another key. Sometimes we may get annoyed with our family members, but it’s important to stay calm and communicate. We always try to listen to each other and understand how everyone feels. This helps us solve problems and stay happy. By doing these simple things, we create a warm and happy family. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出幸福家庭的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从两个方面讲述提升幸福家庭秘诀的具体做法； 第三步，书写结语。总结这样做的理由及意义。 [亮点词汇] ①help with帮助解决 ②get annoyed with sb.生某人的气 ③try to do sth.尝试做某事 [高分句型] ①Sometimes we may get annoyed with our family members, but it’s important to stay calm and communicate. (it为形式主语) ②We always try to listen to each other and understand how everyone feels. (并列句) 9．乐于助人是中华民族的传统美德。回忆一下，你曾经帮助过某个人吧？这个人可能是你的亲人、朋友、师长，又或许是陷入困境的陌生人。你帮助他或她摆脱了困境，你是否也获得了幸福感？根据以下提示，适当拓展，写一篇短文，词数在80-100左右。不得在文章中出现真实姓名。男名用Tom，女名用Lily。 提示： 1. When and where did you help the person? 2. Who did you help? 3. Why did you want to help him/her? 4. What did you do for him/her? 5. How did you feel about helping others? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Everyone needs help and I’ve learned a lot from helping others. From one of my experiences of helping others, I know that helping others can make me happy. Last Saturday afternoon, I saw a girl who was crying when I was taking a walk. I asked her why she was crying. She told me that she was new here and couldn’t find her way home. I comforted her and asked her what she could see around her house. Then I knew where her home was. Later, I succeeded in taking her back home. Both she and her parents were happy. Seeing their smiles, I felt very happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示问题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出帮助他人的经历； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从事情发生的时间、地点、人物和原因几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①learn a lot from从中学到很多 ②take a walk散步 ③succeed in doing sth成功地做成某事 [高分句型] ①From one of my experiences of helping others, I know that helping others can make me happy.（that引导的宾语从句） ②Last Saturday afternoon, I saw a girl who was crying when I was taking a walk.（who引导的定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句） 10．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Small tricks to improve happiness” (以“提升幸福感的小妙招”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 3月20日是国际幸福日。快乐、自信、充实、自豪，当你拥有这些感受，你就是一个幸福的人。生活中的一些小妙招可以让我们获得幸福感，请你结合自己或他人的经历和感受描述至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并说明一下理由。 (注意: 1.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The feeling of happiness is very important. We are no longer satisfied with only enough food and clothes. Instead, we need happiness. Now I will share some tips to increase our sense of happiness. The first is friendship. Friends can share our feelings and help to make us happy when we are sad. They can provide us with help when we are in need. They can also keep us company when we are lonely. The second is being thankful. Sometimes we can’t get what we want and we will be unhappy. But if we focus on what we already have, and be thankful to everything around us, I believe our life will be a lot happier. Try to make some friends and be thankful to everything. I am sure we will be much happier. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，以“Small tricks to improve happiness”为题参照所给提示中要点信息进行分析。写作时需选定至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并陈述理由。 2.写作指导：本文以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题；第二段介绍小妙招及原因；第三段总结全文；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。 能力综合实践6篇 11．Write at least 60 words on the topic "Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult times"(以"在困难时期，幸福感不一定会消失"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格). 小到个人，大到团队、城市、国家，都会有困难时期，但即便是困难时期，人们还是能感受生活中的小喜悦，感受幸福温馨的片刻，请结合自己或他人的经历，说说困难时期的幸福感。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予计分) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult times Everyone may have difficult times. Even in difficult times, people can still feel the small joys in life. One day, it was raining hard when I was on my way home from school. I didn’t take an umbrella, so I was wet. Suddenly, a stranger came toward me. He passed me an umbrella and said he could drive me home. I didn’t know him but I was very thankful he helped me. Although the weather was cold, I felt very warm in my heart. 【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以“Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult times在困难时期，幸福感不一定会消失”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应发挥想象力，结合自己的实际生活，写一篇切题的文章。这是一个难点，学生所选取的生活中的事例应合情合理。 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以一般过去时态、第一人称为主来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语句式结构和表达习惯，写完整的句子，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句、非谓语结构等复杂句式，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯、表达流畅。 12．在成长的过程中，有些日子会让你开心快乐，经久难忘。请以“My happy holiday”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，记述你那天的活动和感受。 要求：1、参考所给提示，可适当发挥； 2、时态正确，语句通顺，语意连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My happy holiday I went on a holiday with my family last Spring Festival. We went to Sanya because it was very cold in my hometown. But in Hainan it was warm. We went there by plane. It was the first time for me to take a plane. I was so excited. We stayed in a hotel near the beautiful beach. It was not the best hotel in Sanya but clean and tidy. We had so much delicious seafood, too. My dad and mom got up early and had a walk along the beach. I had fun with my brother. My brother and I played with the white soft sand. Also, we swam in the cool sea. A lot of fish swam around us. We stayed in Sanya for a week. We had a good time there. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：根据题干要求完成写作，适当添加细节，上下文联系紧密，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总的说和父母去三亚度假； 第二步，详细介绍全家的度假过程。 [亮点词汇] ①go on a holiday去度假 ②take a plane乘飞机 ③have a good time玩得高兴 [高分句型] We went to Sanya because it was very cold in my hometown. (because引导原因状语从句) 13．近日，你班组织了一场关于享受课余时间的分享活动。请你结合表格内容提示，用英语写一篇发言稿进行分享。词数70词左右。 How I Enjoy My Time after Class My Situation (现状) ◆be busy, many lessons ◆spend time, out of class My Activities & Reasons (理由) ◆do sports, be good for ◆do some reading, love reading ◆do chores, be a good way to learn things My Feeling (感想) … 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Hi, boys and girls, I’m so happy to tell you how I enjoy my time after class. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks. 【答案】例文： Hi, boys and girls, I’m so happy to tell you how I enjoy my time after class. Like most junior high students, I’m busy with many lessons. But I still spend time doing many things out of class. After school I usually do sports because doing sports is good for our health. In the evening, I often do some reading as I love reading. Very often I help my parents do chores at weekends, for it’s a good way for me to learn things. In short, I enjoy my life after class. It’s really colorful. That’s all. Thanks. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步：介绍自己的现状、自己从事的活动及理由； 第三步：介绍自己的感想并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be busy with 忙于 ②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事 ③be good for 有益于 ④at weekends 在周末 ⑤in short 总之 [高分句型] After school I usually do sports because doing sports is good for our health.  (because引导原因状语从句) 14．假如你们班举行了主题为“A Plan for Mother’s Day”的班会活动，鼓励大家向妈妈表达感恩之情。同学们各抒己见。请你写一篇英文短文作为班会总结，并谈谈自己的计划和看法。 A Plan for Classmates’ plans (buy gifts, do housework, make cards ) Mother’s Day Your plan (what and why) Your ideas (…) My classmates plan to celebrate Mother’s Day in different ways. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My classmates plan to celebrate Mother’s Day in different ways. Some of them plan to spend their pocket money buying gifts for their mothers. Some plan to do housework for their mothers because they think their mothers need a rest on the special day. And others plan to make cards. I plan to design a dress for my mum. My mum likes beautiful dresses but she thinks they cost much. I can buy materials and make one for her. I think all my classmates’ plans are great. Showing our love to our mothers is important. We should always love and help our mothers. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述同学们及自己母亲节的计划； ③提示：涵盖同学们不同的母亲节庆祝方式以及“我”个人的计划，全面且不要遗漏要点，还可适当增添细节，如妈妈喜欢漂亮裙子但觉得贵，所以“我”打算自制裙子。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，引出同学们计划以不同方式庆祝母亲节这一话题； 第二步，分别阐述同学们的计划，包括买礼物、做家务、制作贺卡，以及“我”计划为妈妈设计制作一条裙子的详细打算，还提及妈妈的喜好作为“我”计划的缘由； 第三步，总结升华，表达“我”认为同学们的计划都很棒，强调向母亲表达爱的重要性，呼吁大家始终爱和帮助母亲。 [亮点词汇] ①celebrate庆祝 ②pocket money零花钱 ③design设计 [高分句型] ①I plan to design a dress for my mum. (动词不定式作宾语) ②I think all my classmates’ plans are great. (宾语从句) 15．漫漫人生路，只要有父母陪伴，不管走到哪里，都是一场温暖的旅程。父母是我们最熟悉的亲人，请根据以下思维导图的提示，并以“Be Thankful to Our Parents”为题写一篇英文短文。 Be Thankful to Our Parents ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Be Thankful to Our Parents Our parents love us more than anybody else in the world. They try to take good care of us in our daily life and help us with our lessons. They communicate with us and cheer us up when we are upset. They encourage us when we fail in the exam. When we meet difficulties, they are the first to come up and stand with us to solve the problems. Thanks to them, we grow up healthily and happily. Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we are supposed to study hard and try not to make them worry about us. All in all, we should always be grateful to our parents and do what we can to thank them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。文章开篇直接点明父母对我们的爱超过他人，引出下文对父母付出的阐述及感恩父母的讨论。 第二步，具体阐述。先详细描述父母在生活、学习、心理等方面对我们的付出；后从家务、态度、学业三方面提出感恩父母的措施，分析各措施对让父母开心及感恩的意义。 第三步，书写结语。总结呼吁要感恩父母并付诸行动，升华主题，强化感恩父母的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①take good care of 照顾 ②communicate with 与……交流 ③cheer up 使高兴 ④upset 沮丧的 ⑤encourage 鼓励 ⑥solve the problems ⑦be supposed to 应该 ⑧ be grateful to 感激 [高分句型] When we meet difficulties, they are the first to come up and stand with us to solve the problems.（时间状语从句） 16．生日是成长的见证，也是过去所有的你的“合集”。每个人对每次生日都有不一样的感情。请你根据以下提示和写作要求，以“My Great Birthday”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述你印象深刻的一次生日，要点提示： My Great Birthday When is your birthday? Who celebrated it with you? What did you do? What present did you get? How did you feel? 写作要求：（1）文中须包含提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； （3）词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Great Birthday My most memorable birthday falls on the 15th of June. That year, I was fortunate enough to have my family, including my grandparents, fly over to be with me. We went to a picnic to the countryside. We played games, sang songs, and enjoyed each other’s company there. In the afternoon, my parents surprised me with a birthday party at home, inviting some of my closest friends. I received many presents, but the one that stood out was a handmade photo album by my sister, filled with pictures from our childhood up until that day. That night, I felt a sense of contentment and happiness. I didn’t forget that nice day forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该回答五个问题，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称和第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己生日是哪一天； 第二步，具体阐述过生日的情况，包括人物，做了哪些事，得到了哪些礼物； 第三步，最后介绍自己过生日的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①including包括 ②fill with充满 ③a sense of一种……感 [高分句型] In the afternoon, my parents surprised me with a birthday party at home, inviting some of my closest friends.（现在分词作状语） 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$