内容正文:
写作
假如你是李华,在英国伦敦一所高中做交换生。上周该校组织了“我眼中的唐诗宋词”演讲比赛,组织者Alisen邀请你谈谈比赛的观感。请你给Alisen写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.对活动的看法;
2.对活动的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alisen,
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Yours,
Li Hua
谈谈比赛“我眼中的唐诗宋词”观感
写作提纲
第一段:开头引入
表达收到邀请分享比赛观感的感谢或喜悦。
总体概括对 “我眼中的唐诗宋词” 演讲比赛的积极看法,如活动很有意义等。
第二段:详细看法与建议
阐述活动的优点,比如加深文化理解、提升语言能力等。
提出具体的改进建议,如增加背景介绍、丰富活动形式等。
第三段:结尾总结
再次强调活动的价值。
表达对未来类似活动的期待。
语言积累
be honored to 很荣幸做某事
deepen one's understanding of 加深某人对…… 的理解
promote cultural exchange 促进文化交流
a great success 巨大的成功
in advance 提前
provide sb. with sth. 给某人提供某物
enhance language proficiency 提升语言能力
add more interactive elements 添加更多互动元素
contribute to 有助于
look forward to 期待
佳句
I'm truly honored to be invited to share my insights on the “Tang and Song Poetry in My Eyes” speech contest.
我真的很荣幸被邀请来分享我对 “我眼中的唐诗宋词” 演讲比赛的看法。
This event not only deepened our understanding of Chinese poetry but also promoted cultural exchange between different countries.
这个活动不仅加深了我们对中国诗歌的理解,还促进了不同国家之间的文化交流。
The participants' excellent performances contributed to the great success of this speech contest.
参赛者们的精彩表现促成了这次演讲比赛的巨大成功。
I suggest providing more background information about the poems in advance so that the audience can better appreciate them.
我建议提前提供更多关于诗歌的背景信息,这样观众就能更好地欣赏它们。
Adding more interactive elements to the event would definitely enhance the audience's engagement.
在活动中添加更多互动元素肯定会提高观众的参与度。
写作示范
示范一
Dear Alisen,
I'm honored to share my thoughts on the speech contest. It was a fantastic event that deepened our understanding of Tang and Song poetry and promoted cultural exchange.
However, I think providing more historical and cultural background about the poems in advance would be better. Also, adding some Q&A sessions could make it more interactive.
I look forward to more such meaningful activities.
Yours,
Li Hua
示范二
Dear Alisen,
I'm really glad to talk about the “Tang and Song Poetry in My Eyes” contest. It was a great success, as it enhanced our language proficiency and broadened our cultural horizons.
My suggestion is to offer more detailed explanations of the difficult words and phrases in the poems. Moreover, we could have group discussions after the speeches.
I believe future events will be even better.
Yours,
Li Hua
示范三
Dear Alisen,
Thanks for inviting me to share my views. The speech contest was highly meaningful, contributing a lot to our appreciation of Chinese poetry.
To make it more engaging, you could provide some audio - visual materials related to the poems. And arranging a small poetry recitation competition within the event would be exciting.
I'm looking forward to the next one.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Alisen,
It is a great honour for me to share my ideas about attending the school’s fantastic speech contest themed “Tang Poetry and Song Ci in My Eyes” last week.
Generally speaking, all the participants were passionate. But there is also room for improvement. First, most participants didn’t quite understand the real meaning of what they were delivering. Besides, many Chinese characters were wrongly pronounced, which made the lines sound a little bit funny.
So I suggest next time before the speech contest you teach the participants the backgrounds and meanings of the poems and Song Ci.
Wish you all the best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
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