必修第三册Unit 3 The world online(有关网络用途的调查报告)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(译林版2020)

Unit 3 The world online 单元写作深度指导 有关网络用途的调查报告 ▲关于网络用途的调查报告的句式表达 1.There has been a sharp increase of Internet use in recent years. 2.The number of users has risen from 50% to 70%. 3.The figure has gone up by 20% in the past few years. ▲基础词汇 percentage n.百分率,百分比;提成 entertainment n.娱乐活动;招待,娱乐 mobile adj.可移动的,非固定的;行动方便的;流动的 n.手机 device n.设备,仪器;手段,技巧 I.要点解读 关于网络用途的调查报告属于说明文。这类文章一般以柱状图、饼状图、线状图或图表的形式出现。写此类文章时首先要认真看图,找出里面所隐含的信息,然后通过相关的数据对某一现象进行客观描述。写作时要以事实为根据,避免加入个人的观点。 II.写作框架 写一份调查报告时应注意以下几点:①认真审题,明确写作内容;②时态:现在时(常用); III.常用词块 (1)目的 send/receive e-mail发送/接收邮件 play online games 玩网络游戏 do online shopping 网上购物 look up information 查找资料 chat online 网上聊天 mobile payment 移动支付 ⑦travel booking 旅游预订 (2)好处 benefit from 益于 keep in touch/contact with 与……保持联系 relax one’s mood 放松心情 broaden one’s horizons 开阔某人的视野 improve social skills 增强社交能力 IV.必备句式 (1)开篇句 ①The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. 互联网在我们的日常生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。 ②Recently a survey was conducted about how students make use of the Internet. 最近进行了一项关于学生如何使用互联网的调查。 (2)主体段落句 ①It goes without saying that the Internet does bring about a lot of benefits to us. 毋庸置疑,互联网确实给我们带来了很多好处。 ②There is no doubt that we benefit a lot from the Internet in many different ways. 毫无疑问,我们以许多不同的方式从互联网中受益良多。 ③Being lost in the Internet may affect our study and work. 迷失在互联网可能会影响我们的学习和工作。 ④Doing online shopping has become part of their life. 网上购物已经成为他们生活的一部分。 (3)结尾句 ①All in all, the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages. 总之,互联网既有优点也有缺点。 ②Only if students are given proper guidance can they make the best of the Internet. 只有给予学生适当的指导,他们才能充分利用互联网。 V.优化策略 高中英语应用文写作之调查分析类文体，需要遵循一定的结构和逻辑，注重数据的准确性和描述的客观性，同时提出基于调查结果的观点和建议。 1.文体概述与结构安排‌ 调查报告是针对某一现象、事件或问题进行调查后，对所获材料进行分析，并写成书面报告的一种应用文体。其结构通常为：引出调查背景与目的→详细记录调查结果→分析原因或提出观点→给出建议或结论。在写作时，应注意逻辑清晰，条理分明‌。 2.开头部分‌ 开头应简要交代调查的背景、目的、方法、时间、范围等，使读者对调查的基本情况有所了解。这部分内容应简洁明了，直接切入主题‌。 3.主体部分‌ 主体部分是调查报告的核心，需要详细记录调查结果。作者应运用连接词等，将调查结果一一记录下来，使读者能够一目了然。在记录调查结果时，应注意数据的准确性和描述的客观性，避免主观臆断或偏见。同时，逻辑词的使用也非常重要，它能使文章的逻辑更加清晰明确‌。 4.分析与观点‌ 在主体部分之后，应对调查结果进行分析，找出数据背后的原因或规律。这部分内容可以是对调查结果的深入解读，也可以是对相关问题的探讨。在分析的基础上，作者可以提出自己的观点或看法，这部分内容常常能起到画龙点睛的作用。但需要注意的是，观点应基于调查结果，避免脱离实际。 5.结尾部分‌ 结尾部分通常是对全文的总结，可以概括调查结果、强调观点或提出建议。在提出建议时，应具体、可行，并具有一定的针对性。结尾部分也可以起到呼吁或引导的作用，使读者对调查问题有更深入的思考‌。 【‌范文1】关于中学生急救知识掌握情况的调查报告‌ The first-aid treatment is crucial when people encounter disasters or emergencies. The obtained knowledge of first-aid treatment will decide whether you can handle the matter effectively, or even save a life. Recently, our middle school conducted a survey to understand students' learning and knowledge on first-aid treatment. The survey revealed that a significant portion of students lack adequate knowledge in this area, highlighting the need for more education and training programs on first-aid in schools‌. 【‌范文2】关于加快旅游业进展的民意调查报告‌ Recently, a survey was conducted among local residents regarding the government's plan to accelerate tourism development. The survey shows that while some people believe it will promote cultural exchange, provide more employment opportunities, and enhance local economic growth, others are concerned about potential environmental impacts. In my opinion, we should advance tourism but also take care of the environment by implementing sustainable tourism practices‌. 【‌范文3】关于中学生英语写作能力现状的调查报告‌ This investigation report aims to explore the current status of English writing among middle school students, analyze the challenges faced by them, and provide potential solutions. The survey reveals that despite the increased exposure to written English due to the widespread use of email, social media, and other online platforms, many students still struggle with expressing themselves clearly and coherently in written form. To improve English writing skills, it is recommended that students engage in more reading, use dictionaries effectively, and practice writing regularly‌. 假定你是李华,最近你就高中生网络使用的情况进行了调查并写了一篇报道。请根据下面的要点提示对你的调查作简要介绍,发给报社。 要点提示: 1.主要用途; 2.出现的问题。 注意:写作词数应为80个左右。 As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Recently, I did a survey about how the students in my school make use of the Internet. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 I.读题布局 II.句式建构 1.学生们使用互联网主要有三个目的。(there be) There are three major purposes for the students to use the Internet.  2.寻找信息是最普遍的目的。(动词-ing形式作主语) Seeking information is the most popular purpose.  3.此外,网上购物正逐渐成为他们生活的一部分。(besides) Besides, doing online shopping is gradually becoming part of their life.  4.互联网同时给学生带来了一些问题。(bring about) The Internet brings about some problems to the students at the same time.  5.更糟的是,网络上的不健康信息对学生造成了极大的危害。 ①Worse still, unhealthy information on the Internet does great harm to students. (worse still, harm)  ②What’s worse, unhealthy information on the Internet is greatly harmful to students. (what’s worse, harmful)  III.衔接成篇 　　As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Recently, I did a survey about how the students in my school make use of the Internet. There are three major purposes for the students to use the Internet, among which seeking information is the most popular. They also use the Internet for communication and entertainment, such as sending and receiving e-mails, enjoying music and movies and playing online games. Besides, doing online shopping is gradually becoming part of their life.However, the Internet brings about some problems to the students at the same time. Some students spend too much time playing online games. Worse still, unhealthy information on the Internet does great harm to students. Thus, only if students are given proper guidance can they make good use of the Internet. 【范文分析】 1.‌开头引入‌ ‌特点‌：使用“As we all know”这一固定短语，以普遍认可的事实作为开头，既简洁又有效地吸引了读者的注意力，并顺利引出了文章的主题——互联网的重要性。 ‌例如‌：As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. 2.‌调查结果的呈现‌ ‌特点‌：作者通过个人调查，得出了学生使用互联网的主要目的，并以数据（虽然未给出具体数字，但提到了“seeking information is the most popular”）和实例（如发送和接收电子邮件、享受音乐和电影、玩在线游戏等）来支持这些目的。 ‌例如‌：“Recently, I did a survey about how the students in my school make use of the Internet. There are three major purposes for the students to use the Internet, among which seeking information is the most popular.”‌ 3.‌问题的提出‌ ‌特点‌：在阐述了学生使用互联网的好处后，作者笔锋一转，指出了互联网给学生带来的问题，如过度沉迷在线游戏、接触不健康信息等，形成了鲜明的对比，增强了文章的说服力。 ‌例如‌：“However, the Internet brings about some problems to the students at the same time. Some students spend too much time playing online games. Worse still, unhealthy information on the Internet does great harm to students.”‌ 4.‌建议的提出‌ ‌特点‌：在指出问题后，作者没有止步，而是进一步提出了解决问题的建议，即给予学生适当的指导，使他们能够充分利用互联网。这一建议既具体又可行，体现了作者的责任感和解决问题的能力。 ‌例如‌：“Thus, only if students are given proper guidance can they make good use of the Internet.”‌ 5.‌整体结构‌ ‌特点‌：整篇文章从引入主题到呈现调查结果，再到提出问题和建议，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，每个部分都紧密围绕主题展开，没有偏离主题的内容。 1．下面的柱状图（bar chart）显示了你校上周针对“用电脑，手机和纸媒学习方式”的调查结果。请你用英语给21st Century报社写一篇短文，报道你校的调查结果，并对此发表你的看法。开头已给。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, We made a survey about the learning ways in our school last week. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．学校英语报社正在开展以“Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose”为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 调查结果描述； 2. 简单评论； 3. 你的建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．学校英文报正在开展以 “Using fitness apps to monitor health” 为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 调查结果描述； 2. 简单评论； 3. 你的建议。 学生使用健身应用程序监控健康的调查结果 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 Using fitness apps to monitor health _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假定你是李华, 你班在校园英语诗歌大赛中获得一等奖, 外教James打算为此庆祝。他委托你调查同学们喜欢的庆祝方式。请你根据下图所示的调查结果, 给外教写一封邮件, 内容包括: 1. 感谢信任; 2. 简述调查结果; 3. 提出个人建议。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Findings on Preferred Celebration Activities ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法。 内容包括： 1. 简要描述图表； 2. 你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代； 3. 你的理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．你校英文报正在开展学生使用拍照搜题类软件（snap-for-answers applications）的调查。请根据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.软件使用情况描述； 2.分析该现象的原因； 3.简要谈谈你的看法。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 As is shown in the survey conducted by our school’s English newspaper, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．你校英文报正在开展以Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 描述调查结果； 2. 分析其原因并给出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 短文的题目已给。 Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．你校英文报正在开展以“The benefits of online learning ”为题的讨论。请你使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.调查现状描述；2.简单评论；3.你的观点 Rich resources 75% Learning time is not limited 43% Other benefits 27% 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右 The benefits of online learning _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假定你是李华，你所在班级举行了How to Develop Good Habits英语主题班会， 班会前进行了不良习惯的调查，结果如下图。班会中针对这些情况进行了讨论并提出了建议。请根据以下提示向英语校报投稿介绍本次英语主题班会。 不良习惯调查结果 1.班会的目的; 2.不良习惯调查结果; 3.建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.首句已为你写好。 Dear Editor, Recently, our class has conducted a class-meeting on how to develop good habits. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．目前网络语言（Internet Slang）在青少年中极为盛行，你校学生会在同学中就对网络语言的看法进行了调查，调查结果见下面饼状图（pie chart）。请根据图中信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍同学们的看法，并表达你自己的观点。      注意：1.词数100左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 The world online 单元写作深度指导 有关网络用途的调查报告 ▲关于网络用途的调查报告的句式表达 1.There has been a sharp increase of Internet use in recent years. 2.The number of users has risen from 50% to 70%. 3.The figure has gone up by 20% in the past few years. ▲基础词汇 percentage n.百分率,百分比;提成 entertainment n.娱乐活动;招待,娱乐 mobile adj.可移动的,非固定的;行动方便的;流动的 n.手机 device n.设备,仪器;手段,技巧 I.要点解读 关于网络用途的调查报告属于说明文。这类文章一般以柱状图、饼状图、线状图或图表的形式出现。写此类文章时首先要认真看图,找出里面所隐含的信息,然后通过相关的数据对某一现象进行客观描述。写作时要以事实为根据,避免加入个人的观点。 II.写作框架 写一份调查报告时应注意以下几点:①认真审题,明确写作内容;②时态:现在时(常用); III.常用词块 (1)目的 send/receive e-mail发送/接收邮件 play online games 玩网络游戏 do online shopping 网上购物 look up information 查找资料 chat online 网上聊天 mobile payment 移动支付 ⑦travel booking 旅游预订 (2)好处 benefit from 益于 keep in touch/contact with 与……保持联系 relax one’s mood 放松心情 broaden one’s horizons 开阔某人的视野 improve social skills 增强社交能力 IV.必备句式 (1)开篇句 ①The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. 互联网在我们的日常生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。 ②Recently a survey was conducted about how students make use of the Internet. 最近进行了一项关于学生如何使用互联网的调查。 (2)主体段落句 ①It goes without saying that the Internet does bring about a lot of benefits to us. 毋庸置疑,互联网确实给我们带来了很多好处。 ②There is no doubt that we benefit a lot from the Internet in many different ways. 毫无疑问,我们以许多不同的方式从互联网中受益良多。 ③Being lost in the Internet may affect our study and work. 迷失在互联网可能会影响我们的学习和工作。 ④Doing online shopping has become part of their life. 网上购物已经成为他们生活的一部分。 (3)结尾句 ①All in all, the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages. 总之,互联网既有优点也有缺点。 ②Only if students are given proper guidance can they make the best of the Internet. 只有给予学生适当的指导,他们才能充分利用互联网。 V.优化策略 高中英语应用文写作之调查分析类文体，需要遵循一定的结构和逻辑，注重数据的准确性和描述的客观性，同时提出基于调查结果的观点和建议。 1.文体概述与结构安排‌ 调查报告是针对某一现象、事件或问题进行调查后，对所获材料进行分析，并写成书面报告的一种应用文体。其结构通常为：引出调查背景与目的→详细记录调查结果→分析原因或提出观点→给出建议或结论。在写作时，应注意逻辑清晰，条理分明‌。 2.开头部分‌ 开头应简要交代调查的背景、目的、方法、时间、范围等，使读者对调查的基本情况有所了解。这部分内容应简洁明了，直接切入主题‌。 3.主体部分‌ 主体部分是调查报告的核心，需要详细记录调查结果。作者应运用连接词等，将调查结果一一记录下来，使读者能够一目了然。在记录调查结果时，应注意数据的准确性和描述的客观性，避免主观臆断或偏见。同时，逻辑词的使用也非常重要，它能使文章的逻辑更加清晰明确‌。 4.分析与观点‌ 在主体部分之后，应对调查结果进行分析，找出数据背后的原因或规律。这部分内容可以是对调查结果的深入解读，也可以是对相关问题的探讨。在分析的基础上，作者可以提出自己的观点或看法，这部分内容常常能起到画龙点睛的作用。但需要注意的是，观点应基于调查结果，避免脱离实际。 5.结尾部分‌ 结尾部分通常是对全文的总结，可以概括调查结果、强调观点或提出建议。在提出建议时，应具体、可行，并具有一定的针对性。结尾部分也可以起到呼吁或引导的作用，使读者对调查问题有更深入的思考‌。 【‌范文1】关于中学生急救知识掌握情况的调查报告‌ The first-aid treatment is crucial when people encounter disasters or emergencies. The obtained knowledge of first-aid treatment will decide whether you can handle the matter effectively, or even save a life. Recently, our middle school conducted a survey to understand students' learning and knowledge on first-aid treatment. The survey revealed that a significant portion of students lack adequate knowledge in this area, highlighting the need for more education and training programs on first-aid in schools‌. 【‌范文2】关于加快旅游业进展的民意调查报告‌ Recently, a survey was conducted among local residents regarding the government's plan to accelerate tourism development. The survey shows that while some people believe it will promote cultural exchange, provide more employment opportunities, and enhance local economic growth, others are concerned about potential environmental impacts. In my opinion, we should advance tourism but also take care of the environment by implementing sustainable tourism practices‌. 【‌范文3】关于中学生英语写作能力现状的调查报告‌ This investigation report aims to explore the current status of English writing among middle school students, analyze the challenges faced by them, and provide potential solutions. The survey reveals that despite the increased exposure to written English due to the widespread use of email, social media, and other online platforms, many students still struggle with expressing themselves clearly and coherently in written form. To improve English writing skills, it is recommended that students engage in more reading, use dictionaries effectively, and practice writing regularly‌. 假定你是李华,最近你就高中生网络使用的情况进行了调查并写了一篇报道。请根据下面的要点提示对你的调查作简要介绍,发给报社。 要点提示: 1.主要用途; 2.出现的问题。 注意:写作词数应为80个左右。 As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Recently, I did a survey about how the students in my school make use of the Internet. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 I.读题布局 II.句式建构 1.学生们使用互联网主要有三个目的。(there be) There are three major purposes for the students to use the Internet.  2.寻找信息是最普遍的目的。(动词-ing形式作主语) Seeking information is the most popular purpose.  3.此外,网上购物正逐渐成为他们生活的一部分。(besides) Besides, doing online shopping is gradually becoming part of their life.  4.互联网同时给学生带来了一些问题。(bring about) The Internet brings about some problems to the students at the same time.  5.更糟的是,网络上的不健康信息对学生造成了极大的危害。 ①Worse still, unhealthy information on the Internet does great harm to students. (worse still, harm)  ②What’s worse, unhealthy information on the Internet is greatly harmful to students. (what’s worse, harmful)  III.衔接成篇 　　As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Recently, I did a survey about how the students in my school make use of the Internet. There are three major purposes for the students to use the Internet, among which seeking information is the most popular. They also use the Internet for communication and entertainment, such as sending and receiving e-mails, enjoying music and movies and playing online games. Besides, doing online shopping is gradually becoming part of their life.However, the Internet brings about some problems to the students at the same time. Some students spend too much time playing online games. Worse still, unhealthy information on the Internet does great harm to students. Thus, only if students are given proper guidance can they make good use of the Internet. 【范文分析】 1.‌开头引入‌ ‌特点‌：使用“As we all know”这一固定短语，以普遍认可的事实作为开头，既简洁又有效地吸引了读者的注意力，并顺利引出了文章的主题——互联网的重要性。 ‌例如‌：As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. 2.‌调查结果的呈现‌ ‌特点‌：作者通过个人调查，得出了学生使用互联网的主要目的，并以数据（虽然未给出具体数字，但提到了“seeking information is the most popular”）和实例（如发送和接收电子邮件、享受音乐和电影、玩在线游戏等）来支持这些目的。 ‌例如‌：“Recently, I did a survey about how the students in my school make use of the Internet. There are three major purposes for the students to use the Internet, among which seeking information is the most popular.”‌ 3.‌问题的提出‌ ‌特点‌：在阐述了学生使用互联网的好处后，作者笔锋一转，指出了互联网给学生带来的问题，如过度沉迷在线游戏、接触不健康信息等，形成了鲜明的对比，增强了文章的说服力。 ‌例如‌：“However, the Internet brings about some problems to the students at the same time. Some students spend too much time playing online games. Worse still, unhealthy information on the Internet does great harm to students.”‌ 4.‌建议的提出‌ ‌特点‌：在指出问题后，作者没有止步，而是进一步提出了解决问题的建议，即给予学生适当的指导，使他们能够充分利用互联网。这一建议既具体又可行，体现了作者的责任感和解决问题的能力。 ‌例如‌：“Thus, only if students are given proper guidance can they make good use of the Internet.”‌ 5.‌整体结构‌ ‌特点‌：整篇文章从引入主题到呈现调查结果，再到提出问题和建议，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，每个部分都紧密围绕主题展开，没有偏离主题的内容。 1．下面的柱状图（bar chart）显示了你校上周针对“用电脑，手机和纸媒学习方式”的调查结果。请你用英语给21st Century报社写一篇短文，报道你校的调查结果，并对此发表你的看法。开头已给。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, We made a survey about the learning ways in our school last week. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．学校英语报社正在开展以“Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose”为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 调查结果描述； 2. 简单评论； 3. 你的建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．学校英文报正在开展以 “Using fitness apps to monitor health” 为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 调查结果描述； 2. 简单评论； 3. 你的建议。 学生使用健身应用程序监控健康的调查结果 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 Using fitness apps to monitor health _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假定你是李华, 你班在校园英语诗歌大赛中获得一等奖, 外教James打算为此庆祝。他委托你调查同学们喜欢的庆祝方式。请你根据下图所示的调查结果, 给外教写一封邮件, 内容包括: 1. 感谢信任; 2. 简述调查结果; 3. 提出个人建议。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Findings on Preferred Celebration Activities ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法。 内容包括： 1. 简要描述图表； 2. 你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代； 3. 你的理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．你校英文报正在开展学生使用拍照搜题类软件（snap-for-answers applications）的调查。请根据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.软件使用情况描述； 2.分析该现象的原因； 3.简要谈谈你的看法。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 As is shown in the survey conducted by our school’s English newspaper, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．你校英文报正在开展以Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 描述调查结果； 2. 分析其原因并给出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 短文的题目已给。 Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．你校英文报正在开展以“The benefits of online learning ”为题的讨论。请你使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.调查现状描述；2.简单评论；3.你的观点 Rich resources 75% Learning time is not limited 43% Other benefits 27% 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右 The benefits of online learning _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假定你是李华，你所在班级举行了How to Develop Good Habits英语主题班会， 班会前进行了不良习惯的调查，结果如下图。班会中针对这些情况进行了讨论并提出了建议。请根据以下提示向英语校报投稿介绍本次英语主题班会。 不良习惯调查结果 1.班会的目的; 2.不良习惯调查结果; 3.建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.首句已为你写好。 Dear Editor, Recently, our class has conducted a class-meeting on how to develop good habits. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．目前网络语言（Internet Slang）在青少年中极为盛行，你校学生会在同学中就对网络语言的看法进行了调查，调查结果见下面饼状图（pie chart）。请根据图中信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍同学们的看法，并表达你自己的观点。      注意：1.词数100左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． Dear Editor, We made a survey about the learning ways in our school last week. As is demonstrated in the bar chart, those using papers to study occupy 47%, followed by 38% students in my school, who get used to using all the three means of study. 11% of the students surveyed prefer to use computers. Students who think smartphones can help their study account for the rest of 4%. Apparently, the traditional way of study students read books and take notes in pen is still the choice by most students. Computers or phones usage is supposed to do harm to eyesight, which is the reason why a small number of students choose. As far as I am concerned, if used properly, all these means of study can benefit us. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据柱状图数据，写一篇短文报道学校“用电脑、手机和纸媒学习方式”的调查结果，并发表自己的看法。 1.词汇积累 显示：demonstrate→show 认为：think→consider 选择：choice→option 方法：means→way 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：11% of the students surveyed prefer to use computers. 拓展句：11% of the students who were surveyed prefer to use computers. 【高分句型1】Students who think smartphones can help their study account for the rest of 4%. (运用了who引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】Computers or phones usage is supposed to do harm to eyesight, which is the reason why a small number of students choose. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和why引导的定语从句) 2． Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose A survey on food choices among our school pupils showed significant imbalances. Pupils consume less rice, grains, fruits, and vegetables, accounting for just 20% and 18% of their diet, risking nutrient deficiencies. Fat and sugar intake is alarmingly high at 45%, far above the recommended 9%. To address this, I propose the school introduce more healthy food options and educate students on balanced diets. Raising awareness through campaigns can help pupils make better food choices, ensuring a healthier lifestyle. By adjusting diets consciously, we pave the way for improved well-being. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生根据图表中的调查结果，以“Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose”为题，写一篇短文描述调查结果，进行简单评论，并提出个人建议。 1.词汇积累 显著的：significant → notable/remarkable 处理：address → deal with/handle 建议：propose → suggest/advise 选择：option → choice 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：A survey on food choices among our school pupils showed significant imbalances. 拓展句：A survey on food choices among our school pupils revealed that there were significant imbalances in their dietary habits. [高分句型1] Pupils consume less rice, grains, fruits, and vegetables, accounting for just 20% and 18% of their diet, risking nutrient deficiencies. (运用了现在分词accounting for作后置定语和现在分词risking作结果状语) [高分句型2] To address this, I propose the school introduce more healthy food options and educate students on balanced diets. (运用了不定式作目的状语和省略连词that的宾语从句) [高分句型3] Raising awareness through campaigns can help pupils make better food choices, ensuring a healthier lifestyle.(运用了动名词短语作主语和现在分词短语作结果状语) 3． Using fitness apps to monitor health According to a recent survey, 33% of the students involved are currently using fitness apps to monitor their daily steps, heart rate and body weight. 18% used them before, but now they don’t use them. Surprisingly, a significant 45% have never used such technology, and 4% express uncertainty about it. This data highlights a growing interest in health tracking technology, yet also indicates many remain hesitant or unaware of its benefits. It’s crucial to recognize the potential of these apps in promoting overall well-being through personalized tracking and goal setting. For those who haven’t tried, I recommend exploring their features to understand how they can contribute to better health management. Additionally, ongoing research can be done to rid misconceptions and encourage broader adoption of the apps. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。学校英文报正在开展以“Using fitness apps to monitor health” 为题的讨论，要求考生根据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。 1. 词汇积累 包括：involve→include 重要的：crucial→important 此外：additionally→besides 消除：rid→get rid of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：According to a recent survey , 33% of the students involved are currently using fitness apps to monitor their daily steps, heart rate and body weight. 拓展句：According to a recent survey , 33% of the students who are involved are currently using fitness apps to monitor their daily steps, heart rate and body weight. 【高分句型1】 It’s crucial to recognize the potential of these apps in promoting overall well-being through personalized tracking and goal setting.（运用了it作形式主语以及介词短语作状语） 【高分句型2】For those who haven’t tried, I recommend exploring their features to understand how they can contribute to better health management. （运用了who引导定语从句以及how引导宾语从句） 4． Dear James, Thank you for trusting and inviting me to investigate us students’ preferred celebration activities. I’m writing to show you the result and offer my own opinion. According to the survey result, up to 88% of us would like to have an outing at the weekend, while around 59% fancied watching English movies, and 32% preferred sharing food and drinks. Just like the majority of the students, I highly recommend an outing at weekends, as it will build up health and nourish the mind. What’s more, to cater to most of us, we can combine watching open-air movies and eating with the outing, which will enrich our weekend and strengthen the bond. I truly hope my survey and suggestions would be of great help. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教James写一封邮件，介绍针对庆祝方式的调查结果，并提出建议。 1.词汇积累 建议：recommend→suggest 此外： what’s more→besides 增强体质：build up health→improve health 对……有帮助：be of great help→be very helpful 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thank you for trusting and inviting me to investigate us students’ preferred celebration activities. 拓展句：Thank you for trusting and inviting me to investigate the celebration activities that we students might prefer. 【高分句型1】Just like the majority of the students, I highly recommend an outing at weekends, as it will build up health and nourish the mind.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句） 【高分句型2】What’s more, to cater to most of us, we can combine watching open-air movies and eating with the outing, which will enrich our weekend and strengthen the bond.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 5． Recently, our school conducted a survey on the topic of whether teachers will be replaced by artificial intelligence. 10% of respondents were unsure. 34% said they thought teachers would be replaced by artificial intelligence, while 56% said no. Personally speaking, teachers won’t be replaced by artificial intelligence. Because in addition to teaching students knowledge, teachers have a more important mission, which is to educate people. Besides, artificial intelligence is only a partial replacement of teachers’ labor, and cannot replace the role of teachers. This is because although robots have communication functions such as dialogue and movement, they are far from the rich and delicate feelings of human beings. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生就教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题谈谈你的看法。 1.词汇积累 取代：replace→take place of 此外：Besides→in addition 重要的：important→significant 进行：conducted→carry out 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Besides, artificial intelligence is only a partial replacement of teachers’ labor, and cannot replace the role of teachers. 拓展句：Besides, artificial intelligence is only a partial replacement of teachers’ labor, which cannot replace the role of teachers. [高分句型1] Because in addition to teaching students knowledge, teachers have a more important mission, which is to educate people. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] This is because although robots have communication functions such as dialogue and movement, they are far from the rich and delicate feelings of human beings. (运用了although引导让步状语从句) 6． As is shown in the survey conducted by our school’s English newspaper, the usage of snap-for-answers applications is on the rise among high school students, with 40% of freshmen, 60% of sophomores, and 80% of seniors using them. This trend can be attributed to the increasing academic pressure and the convenience offered by these apps. Additionally, some students may lack the necessary study support, leading them to rely on these tools. In my view, while they can be helpful for quick reference, overreliance on them may discourage deep learning and critical thinking skills. Therefore, we should use these tools wisely, balancing their benefits with the need for independent study. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。校英文报正在开展学生使用拍照搜题类软件的调查。要求考生根据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。 1.词汇积累 在增加：on the rise → on the increase 另外：additionally → in addition/besides 依赖：rely on → depend on 我认为：in one's view→from one's point of view 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Additionally, some students may lack the necessary study support, leading them to rely on these tools. 拓展句：Additionally, some students may lack the necessary study support, which leads them to rely on these tools. [高分句型1] This trend can be attributed to the increasing academic pressure and the convenience offered by these apps.(运用了过去分词短语作后置状语) [高分句型2] Therefore, we should use these tools wisely, balancing their benefits with the need for independent study. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语) 7． Students’ Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly Nowadays, many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise, although the time they spend on it varies. It can be seen from the survey that the percentage of students who spend 2-3 hours a week, 3-4 hours a week and 4-5 hours a week is respectively 30%, 40% and 18%. However, there are still12% of students who only spend 1-2 hours a week. The survey shows that a significant number of students are committed to physical exercise. This trend may be due to increased awareness of the importance of physical fitness and promotion of sports activities by the school. As far as I’m concerned, by continuing to promote and support physical activities within the school environment, we can ensure the overall well-being and health of our students. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。考生所在学校校英文报正在开展以 Students’ Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly为题的讨论。要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。 1.词汇积累 展示：show→showcase 重要的：significant→essential 提高：improve→promote 确保：ensure→make sure 2.句式拓展 同义句转化 原句：However, there are still12% of students who only spend 1-2 hours a week. 拓展句：However, there are still12% of students only spending 1-2 hours a week. 【高分句型1】However, there are still12% of students who only spend 1-2 hours a week.（运用了who引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】The survey shows that a significant number of students are committed to physical exercise.（that引导的宾语从句） 8． The benefits of online learning Nowadays, with the growing popularity of technology, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn online. It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who thinks online learning can bring them rich resources is 75% and 43% of students think that learning online will not restrict time. Meanwhile, those finding online learning has other benefits account for 27%. As far as I’m concerned, it is good to learn online due to these advantages. For students, what benefits most to their study is the rich resources and flexible time. However, we should make good use of online learning. Because of lack of self-discipline, some students are more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. Our students need to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校开展的“The benefits of online learning ”调查，使用图表中的调查结果撰写短文投稿。 1.词汇积累 如今：nowadays→ at present 有益处的：good → beneficial 因为：due to→ owing to 利用：make use of→ take advantage of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Nowadays, with the growing popularity of technology, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn online. 拓展句：Nowadays, as the popularity of technology grows, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn online. 【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who thinks online learning can bring them rich resources is 75% and 43% of students think that learning online will not limit time. （运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is the rich resources and flexible time. （运用了what引导的主语从句） 9． Dear Editor, Recently, our class has conducted a class meeting on how to develop good habits. As is shown in the chart, the bad habits among students include staying up late (65%), computer game addiction (45%), lacking physical exercise (28%) and unhealthy eating (12%). To deal with the above problems, we had better turn off our phones before bed. Besides, it makes sense to take regular exercise. Finally, having a balanced diet is beneficial to our health. Hope the class meeting will be of benefit to you all. Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。假定你是李华，你所在班级举行了How to Develop Good Habits英语主题班会， 班会前进行了不良习惯的调查，结果如下图。班会中针对这些情况进行了讨论并提出了建议。请根据以下提示向英语校报投稿介绍本次英语主题班会。 1.词汇积累 关闭：turn off→switch off 处理：deal with→cope with 此外：besides→in addition 有益的：beneficial→rewarding 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Recently, our class has conducted a class meeting on how to develop good habits. 拓展句：Recently, our class has conducted a class meeting, whose theme is how to develop good habits. [高分句型1] As is shown in the chart, the bad habits among students include staying up late (65%), computer game addiction (45%), lacking physical exercise (28%) and unhealthy eating (12%). (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Finally, having a balanced diet is beneficial to our health. (运用了动名词作主语) 10． Internet slang such as LOL (laughing out loud) enjoys great popularity among teenagers nowadays. Students’ opinions on this issue are divided. Students who are in favor of it are in the majority. 35 percent of them hold the view that Internet slang is vivid and fashionable. 33 percent of them decide that they can enjoy its humor and intelligence when using it. In addition, 25 percent of the students believe it makes chatting on the internet more convenient. On the contrary, a small number of them think Internet slang lacks depth of thought, and it’s too casual. Besides, it is hard for most people to understand and accept this kind of slang. If used too much in a passage, it may confuse readers and even cause misunderstanding. In my opinion, now we are living in the Information Age, so if we are not familiar with internet slang, we’re likely to fall behind. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生就“学生对于网络语言的使用的看法”的调查，写一篇文章，介绍同学们的看法，并表达自己的观点。 1.词汇积累 受欢迎：enjoy great popularity among → be popular among/with 观点：opinion → viewpoint 此外：besides → what’s more 智慧：intelligence → wisdom 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：If used too much in a passage, it may confuse readers and even cause misunderstanding. 拓展句：If it is used too much in a passage, it may confuse readers and even cause misunderstanding. 【高分句型1】35 percent of them hold the view that Internet slang is vivid and fashionable. (运用了that引导的同位语从句) 【高分句型2】33 percent of them decide that they can enjoy its humor and intelligence when using it. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和状语从句的省略) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$