Unit 2 单元作文讲练（精讲课件）-【精品课】 2024-2025学年八年级英语下册同步精品课件（人教版）

I’ll help to clean the city parks. 单元作文讲练 Unit 2 【语境应用】根据汉语意思完成句子。 1) 如果你知道正确答案，请举手。 Please ______________ if you know the right answer. 2) 我们将尽最大的努力为那个生病的女孩筹款。 We will try our best ______________ for that sick girl. 3) 为了能独自抚养孩子们，Green太太一直努力工作。 Mrs. Green always works hard to ____________________ by herself. raise your hand to raise money raise her children/kids 文化意识 语言能力 思维品质 学习能力 Learning objectives 1.能够运用不定式结构和相关短语描述自己的能力。 2. 能用本单元语言点写出“提供志愿者帮助”的话语。 能够综合运用本单元的知识写一封自荐信，报名参加志愿活动。 培养学生热爱公益事业，乐于助人的优良品质。 1.能运用思维方式阐述说明原因。 2.加深为他人提供帮助和服务的意识，学会在能力范围内帮助他人并将爱心传递下去。 I want to be a doctor, volunteering in a hospital is a dream come true for me, I could learn more knowledge about medicine and help me get my future dream job. Why do you want to do volunteer work? Let’s discuss Why do you want to do volunteer work? Let’s discuss Volunteering can help other people live better and make difference to all of us. Where do you want to volunteer at and why? volunteer in an old people’s home volunteer in an after-school program volunteer at a museum volunteer in a park volunteer in the community I’d like to / I'm interested in/ I’m fond of/ I want to… because… /ˈɪntrəst/ What do you think of volunteers? Volunteers can make a difference to both others and ourselves. And everyone can be a volunteer! Would you like to be volunteers? clean up the playground help the teacher give out exercise books keep order at the sports meeting plant trees What could we volunteer to do at school? help clean up the City Parks visit sick children in the hospital help stop hunger raise money for poor people What could we volunteer to do outside school? Welcome to join us and be a volunteer! If you want to come, please write a letter about the place you want to volunteer at and the job you can do to us. How can we write this letter? Here comes the chance! Dear Sir or Madam, I’m a Grade 8 student from XX middle school. I would like to volunteer in an old people’s home. I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. Therefore, I can do a lot for the old people. Firstly, I can help the old people to do some cleaning. Secondly, I can cook delicious food for them. Finally, I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I believe I am good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in an old people’s home because it makes me do what I love to do and help others at the same time As for the working time, I am free to help on Saturdays. From the bottom of my heart, I want to get this job. I hope you can offer me the chance. Yours truly, Li Hua Dear Sir or Madam, I’m a Grade 8 student from XX middle school. I would like to volunteer in an old people’s home. I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. Therefore, I can do a lot for the old people. Firstly, I can help the old people to do some cleaning. Secondly, I can cook delicious food for them. Finally, I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I believe I am good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in an old people’s home because it makes me do what I love to do and help others at the same time As for the working time, I am free to help on Saturdays. From the bottom of my heart, I want to get this job. I hope you can offer me the chance. Yours truly, Li Hua 本单元谈论的话题是“志愿与慈善”。围绕这一话题，主要谈论了如何提供帮助及宣传、倡导公益活动等。针对该话题，考试中常见的考查角度有：介绍自己或者他人某次的志愿者活动；志愿活动的安排；志愿者的招聘启事或者自荐信等。体裁以记叙文、应用文为主，多用第一人称，时态多使用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作此类话题作文，常用的相关句型： 话题分析 Learn the structure （学习结构） Pre-writing How many parts are there in the main part of the letter? three Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to volunteer in an old people’s home. I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. Therefore, I can do a lot for the old people. Firstly, I can help the old people to do some cleaning. Secondly, I can cook delicious food for them. Finally, I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I believe I am good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in an old people’s home because it makes me do what I love to do and help others at the same time As for the working time, I am free to help on Saturdays. From the bottom of my heart, I want to get this job. I hope you can offer me the chance. Yours truly, Li Hua Beginning Body Ending Pre-writing Analyze the content（分析内容） Would you like to be volunteers? The law of palm 手掌定律 Which volunteer job do you want to do? What are your interests and hobbies? How can these help you to do the job? Why do you want to do the volunteer job? When are you free to do the job? express your hope Read and mark the content（内容） Pre-writing Why do you want to do the volunteer job? express your hope How can these help you to do the job? What are your interests and hobbies? Which volunteer job do you want to do? When are you free to do the job? Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to volunteer in an old people’s home. I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. Therefore, I can do a lot for the old people. Firstly, I can help the old people to do some cleaning. Secondly, I can cook delicious food for them. Finally, I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I believe I am good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in an old people’s home because it makes me do what I love to do and help others at the same time As for the working time, I am free to help on Saturdays. From the bottom of my heart, I want to get this job. I hope you can offer me the chance. Yours truly, Li Hua Learn the language Pre-writing Writing tip: make the writing more logic. allow the readers to follow our thoughts. More conjunctions: next, after that, in addition, additionally, also, then... Conjunctions（连接词） Transitional sentences（过渡句） Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to volunteer in an old people’s home. I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. Therefore, I can do a lot for the old people. Firstly, I can help the old people to do some cleaning. Secondly, I can cook delicious food for them. Finally, I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I believe I am good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in an old people’s home because it makes me do what I love to do and help others at the same time As for the working time, I am free to help on Saturdays. From the bottom of my heart, I want to get this job. I hope you can offer me the chance. Yours truly, Li Hua Brainstorm more useful expressions Pre-writing What are your interests and hobbies? I am interested in/I am fond of/I am crazy about… I am strong in/I am skilled at… Why do you want to do the volunteer job? I want to get the job because… …. Therefore,… …. The reason is that… …for the reason that… express your hope I sincere hope that… Could you please offer me the chance? Which volunteer job do you want to do? I would like to/I want to/I hope to volunteer in/at/as… Sincerely, I hope… Think and discuss how to write an application. purpose introduction: interests and hobbies ability reason free time promise/expectation contacts Application 申请书 Body (正文) 陈述 观点 What How Why When Which 你的兴趣/爱好 它们对你工作的帮助 说明你想做这份工作的原因 你做这份工作的时间 引出 话题 Salutation (称呼) Signature (署名) 结束语 表达想做什么样的志愿者工作 Will 表达意愿，感谢 The structure of the letter Draft your letter according to your outline.（起草） While-writing Dear Sir or Madam, I’d like to / I'm interested in / I want to volunteer in______________. I'm good at / I’m strong in / In my free time, I like to_________________, so I think Id be good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in ________________because_______________________. As for the working time, I’m free to help in / on __________________. From the bottom of my heart,_____________. Yours truly, __________ 01 02 03 体裁 应用文 人称 第一人称 时态 一般现在时 审题 While-writing 你在网站看到这篇学生中心公开招募志愿者的招聘启事，你也很想去帮助需要帮助的人，请写一封回信申请一份你喜欢的志愿者工作。 申请内容：1.写明你要申请的志愿者工作是什么； 2.说明你有怎样的能力或兴趣爱好能胜任这份工作。 要求：80字左右，内容充实，结构合理，语言流畅得体。 Task 1 审题 I’d like to/I’m interested in/I want to volunteer as… I’m good at/I’m strong in/In my free time, I like to… so I think I’d be good at the job. I want to help out as a volunteer in your old people’s home / school / museum / group because … I’m free to help in/on … Some patterns for reference: Dear Sir or Madam, Yours truly, ____ While-writing Write a letter for a volunteer job. Beginning Body Ending Outline 点明主题 描述活动 说明感受 I would like to be a volunteer. I hope to volunteer in/at... I'll help to ... I'm sure I will be a good volunteer... I’m strong in/I’m interested in... Salutation (称呼语) Signature(署名) 01 02 03 体裁 应用文 人称 第一人称 时态 一般现在时 一、审题 My First Template 记叙文 体裁 一般现在&将来时 时态 第一人称 人称 写作分析 26 查 美 连 列 审 审题：体裁、主题、人称、时态 列提纲： 开头、中间、结尾、重点词句 连词成句、连句成篇 运用连词、过渡语句美化、丰富篇章 检查：单词拼写、句法连贯、逻辑明确 二、写作分析 记叙文 体裁 一般现在&将来时 时态 第一人称 人称 Let’s think. introduction & ability reason 1 2 3 4 purpose free time promise / expectation contacts application I'm good at... I am strong in... In my free time, I like to... so I think I'd be good at this job. I can I want to help out as a volunteer in your old people's home because... help people make them happy make me a better man enrich my experience sing and dance talk to… read tell jokes 28 Dear Sir, I’m a middle school student. My name is Li Hua. I want to volunteer as a teacher in an after-school program. I can read storybooks to kids there. In my free time, I like to read books and I think I’d be good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in the after-school program because I like spending time with kids. And I like reading very much. I’m free to help on Sunday. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours truly, Li Hua 引出话题 Salutation (称呼语) 结束语 How Why When Signature(署名) One Possible Version What Beginning Body Ending Outline 点明主题 描述活动 说明感受 I would like to be a volunteer. I hope to volunteer in/at... I'll help to ... I'm sure I will be a good volunteer... I’m strong in/I’m interested in... Salutation (称呼语) Signature(署名) Point Analysis I’m free to help in/on … I’m looking forward to your reply. 30 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you about volunteering at the library. I’m interested in computers and teaching, and I want ... I’m free to help on weekends and sometimes in the evenings. Your truly, Jiang Hua Salutation Body Closing Signature 篇章方面 词语方面 代词的主格、宾格等形式使用是否正确？ 名词单复数是否准确？ 动词搭配、动词的形式正确？ 形容词、副词的使用是否达?与修饰的对象是否相符？ 。 句子方面 主谓是否一致？时态、语态是否正确？连词使用是否正确？句式是否多样？是否用到好词好句？ 细节方面 单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等是否正确？ 布局是否完整？ 逻辑是否合理？ 要点是否齐全/丰富？ After-writing Task 1: Self-check Edit（修改）your draft according to the checklist. Checklist (标准清单) Scores (1-5) Structure & content Beginning Which volunteer job do you want to do? Body What are your interests and hobbies? How can these help you to do the job? Why do you want to do the volunteer job? When are you free to do the job? Ending Express your hope Language Use conjunctions and transitional sentences No grammar or spelling mistakes Let’s practice. 文 体裁 一般 时 时态 第 人称 人称 . 话题 ①审 应用 现在 一/三 志愿活动 假设你是李华。想成为一名志愿者，请你用英文给志愿者协会写一封邮件，谈谈你能做的志愿者工作。 要求： 1. 词数60-80，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容可适当发挥，使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。 查 美 连 列 审 审题：体裁、主题、人称、时态 列提纲: 开头、中间、结尾、重点词句 连词成句、连句成篇 运用连词、过渡语句美化、丰富篇章 检查：单词拼写、句法连贯、逻辑明确 35 I’d like to/I’m interested in/I want to volunteer as… I’m good at/I’m strong in/In my free time, I like to… so I think I’d be good at the job. I want to help out as a volunteer in your old people’s home / school / museum / group because … I’m free to help in/on … Some patterns for reference: The structure of the letter 引出话题 陈述观点 表达想做什么样的志愿者工作 What How Why When Which 你的兴趣/爱好 它们对你工作的帮助 说明你想做这份工作的原因 你做这份工作的时间 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you about volunteering at the library. I’m interested in computers and teaching, and I want to volunteer as a computer teacher for people who lack computer skills. I love working with computers and I'm good at explaining how to use software to younger students at my school. I've taught my grandparents how to use e-mail and word processing software. One Possible Version 引出话题 What Salutation (称呼语) Dear Sir or Madam, I'd like to help kids in your after-school program. I'm a middle school student and I want to be a teacher when I grow up. I'm good at singing and drawing. I can sing for the kids and play games with them. In my free time, I like to read. I can help the kids to read. So I think I'd be good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in your after-school program because it can help me get my future dream job. I'm free to help on weekends. Yours truly, Li Ming 想做什么工作 what—兴趣爱好 how—对工作的帮助 why—做这份工作的原因 when—做这份工作的时间 Beginning Body Ending Outline 点明主题 描述活动 说明感受 I would like to be a volunteer. I hope to volunteer in/at... I'll help to ... I'm sure I will be a good volunteer... I’m strong in/I’m interested in... Salutation (称呼语) Signature(署名) Point Analysis I’m free to help in/on … I’m looking forward to your reply. 40 Homework 基础型作业： 复习unit 2，整理笔记本，清理错题本，和同桌抽一抽词汇积累本（做好小结，不把问题留到下一单元哦）。 实践型作业： 参加一次志愿活动并且用英语记录下自己的经历和感受。 拓展型作业 ： 搜索更多志愿渠道和方式并和同学们分享。 Lavf58.46.101 $$