Unit 1 Everyone is different 单元话题写作满分范文18篇（分层练习）英语新教材沪教版五四学制六年级下册

Unit1 Everyone is different 单元话题写作满分范文18篇（分层练习） 基础入门训练5篇 1．每个人都是与众不同的，你了解自己吗？请以”Myself in My Eyes”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 你眼中的自己是什么样子的； 2. 你是否喜欢这样的自己； 3. 你想对自己说什么。 要求： 1. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2. 词数 100 左右。 Myself in My Eyes ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Myself in My Eyes Have you known yourself clearly? Actually I have. I have a round face. I’m a tall teenager with two bright eyes and short black hair. In addition, I always wear a friendly smile.   I have some advantages, such as the sense of humor and responsibility. I have some disadvantages, such as carelessness and impatience. However, as the saying goes, “Nobody is perfect.” I want to say to myself, “You’re a special person and there’s no one in the world like you. You should try your best to overcome your shortcomings and be the best of yourself.” 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“你自己眼中的样子、是否喜欢这样的自己、你想对自己说什么等”几个方面重点介绍“我自己”的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语表达“希望成为最好的自己”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①in addition除此之外 ②such as例如 ③try one’s best to do尽某人最大努力做某事 [高分句型] ①Have you known yourself clearly?（现在完成时的一般疑问句） ②I’m a tall teenager with two bright eyes and short black hair.（介词短语作后置定语） 2．做最好的自己，才会让梦想落地开花；做最好的自己，才会让人生与众不同。请以“I can be the best of myself”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇文章。 1.要点：1)你的心目中,最好的自己是什么样的；2)你打算怎样做来成就最好的自己；3)你的感悟。 2.要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2)词数100左右。 I can be the best of myself ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I can be the best of myself As for me, being the best of myself doesn’t mean that I have to make a lot of achievements. I will try my best to overcome difficulties in life step by step—this is the best of myself. To be the best of myself, first of all, I will learn to be confident in my life. When I have confidence, I will have the courage to face all kinds of difficulties and I can believe in myself. What’s more, I will hold the belief that nothing is impossible for a willing heart, which can keep me going on in the face of difficulties. At last, I will never give up whenever I meet difficulties and ask people who have more experience in dealing with difficulties. I believe that I can be the best of myself by doing this. If you believe you can be the best of yourself, then take actions, you will really be someday. 【详解】1.题干解读：该本文是一篇材料作文。要围绕“I can be the best of myself”这个标题进行写作，并根据题中要点和要求用英语写一篇文章。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述事实；时态采用一般现在时为主；写作要注意逻辑通顺，容易理解，必要时可以举例说明；进行写作时，可以把文章分成三段：（1）第一段写你的心目中，最好的自己是什么样的；（2）第二段写你打算怎样做来成就最好的自己；（3）第三段写你的感悟。 3．今天的英语课上，我们学习的话题是“Celebrating Me”。每个人都是与众不同的，我们要了解自己，喜欢自己。假如你叫李明，请你写一篇小短文介绍自己，一定要把自己的独特之处写清楚哦。你可以从以下几个方面来写： 1. What are your strong points and weak points? 2. What do you want to be in the future? 3. What can you do to make yourself better? 要求： 1. 短文必须包括提纲所有内容，可适当发挥。 2. 短文不要涉及真实的人名和校名。 3. 词数：70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. I’m in Grade Eight now. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all about me. I hope we can be friends. 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. I’m in Grade Eight now. I’d like to introduce myself. I am a unique individual with my own strengths and weaknesses. My strong points include my creativity and determination. I always come up with new ideas and am not afraid to take on challenges. However, I also have my weak points. Sometimes, I can be a bit too stubborn and refuse to listen to others’ opinions. In the future, I want to become an artist. I love drawing and painting, and I believe I have the talent to make a career out of it. I want to create beautiful artworks that can inspire and touch people’s hearts. To make myself better, I plan to work on being more open-minded and willing to listen to others. I also want to improve my skills by taking more art classes and practicing regularly. By doing these things, I hope to become a better person and achieve my dreams. That’s all about me. I hope we can be friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山：愿意介绍自己； 第二步，依据提示要点，逐一陈述自己的优点、缺点，适当拓展； 第三步，表达自己将来的梦想； 第四步，介绍如何让自己变的更好； 第五步，书写总结，表达愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①come up with 想出 ②take on challenges 接受挑战 [高分句型] ①I want to create beautiful artworks that can inspire and touch people’s hearts. (that引导的限制性定语从句) ②I hope we can be friends. (宾语从句) 4．某英文网站正在开展以“寻找身边的小达人”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位你身边的小达人，内容包括他（她）是谁、能做什么，以及是什么让他（她）与众不同的。 提示词语：friend, strong, play basketball well, work hard 提示问题：·Who is the person?             ·What can he/she do?             ·What makes him/her special? I’m glad to share something about a talent. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’m glad to share something about a talent. My best friend Tom is a real talent. He is strong and plays basketball very well. Whenever there is a basketball game at school, he is always the star player. What makes him special is that he works hard. He practices playing basketball every day after school. His efforts make his dream come true. I really admire him. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山。表示很高兴向大家介绍一位小达人，引出下文。(开头已给出) 第二步，具体阐述。根据提示的问题和词语，介绍他（她）是谁、能做什么，以及是什么让他（她）与众不同的。 第三步，书写结语。表达对他（她）的钦佩。 [亮点词汇] ① practice doing sth. 练习做某事 ② effort(s) 努力 ③ make one’s dream come true 实现某人的梦想 ④ admire 钦佩，仰慕 [高分句型] He is strong and plays basketball very well. (and并列结构) 5．每个人的生活方式和习惯都不同，请根据表格提示，比较两个好朋友不同的生活习惯，并简要说明自己的看法，做出评价。70词左右。 Name Exercise Go online Eat junk food Watch TV for 2 hours Bill 一周两次 每天一次 经常 几乎每天 Tina 每天一次 一周两到三次 几乎不 每周一次 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Bill and Tina are good friends. But they have different living habits. Bill exercises twice a week. He goes online every day. And he often eats junk food. He watches TV almost every day for 2 hours. But Tina is different. She exercises once a day. And she goes online two or three times a week. She hardly ever eats junk food. And she only watches TV for 2 hours once a week. I think Tina’s living habits are healthy and Bill should exercise more and eat less junk food. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据表格中的信息提示介绍Bill和Tina的生活习惯，可增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接引入主题——两人有不同的生活习惯； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“锻炼、上网、吃垃圾食品、看电视”几个方面重点对比他们的饮食习惯； 第三步，对他们的生活习惯做出评价。 [亮点词汇] ① twice a week一周两次 ②junk food垃圾食品 ③living habits生活习惯 [高分句型] I think Tina’s living habits are healthy and Bill should exercise more and eat less junk food.（thin后是省略that的宾语从句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．假如你是吉姆（Jim），是一位英国男孩，今年12岁，请你根据情况，以My Family Time为题写一篇文章。 内容包括： 1 你有一个弟弟和一个妹妹，弟弟叫约翰（John），妹妹叫贝蒂（Betty），她只有五岁。你和约翰在同一个年级，但是在不同的班级 2 你的爸爸是一名医生，你的妈妈是一名英语老师 3 介绍家庭活动（例如和家人一起拜访爷爷奶奶，和家人一起打篮球，踢足球，看电视，读书 等等） 作文要求 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名，语言连贯，70词左右 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Family Time I’m an English boy. My name is Jim. I am twelve years old. I have a brother and a sister. My sister is Betty. She is only five years old. My brother is John. He and I are in the same grade, but in different classes. My father is a doctor and my mother is an English teacher. They are very kind to us. On Sundays, we usually play basketball, football, watch TV, read books and so on. Last Saturday, my family visited my grandparents together, and we had a big lunch. I love my family very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容，以My Family Time为题写一篇文章。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己以及家人的信息； 第二步，介绍家庭活动； 第三步，总结，表明很爱自己的爱家人。 [亮点词汇] ①play basketball打篮球 ②have a big lunch有一顿丰盛的午餐 [高分句型] My father is a doctor and my mother is an English teacher.（and引导并列句） 7．每个人都会从不同的经历中获得不同的感受。哪一种感受经常伴随着你呢？请根据下面的图示写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. How do you often feel? 2. What makes you so…? Why? 3. Do you want to make any changes? How? 要求： 1. 内容完整，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 3. 词数100左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I often feel angry. I’m angry with myself. I hope to develop some healthy habits like getting up early or taking more exercise, but I still spend most of my time staying up playing computer games. I’m also angry with my best friend Bill. He argued with me several days ago and I don’t want to talk to him any more. But I really want to make a change. Maybe I should be strict with myself and maybe I should say sorry to Bill first. After all, I don’t want to lose my best friend.     I hope my life can be filled with peace and happiness. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：一般现在时、一般过去时； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我经常感到愤怒”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“生活习惯、与朋友相处等”几个方面重点介绍自己愤怒的对象及其原因； 第三步，书写结语。表达“生活充满和平与幸福”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① be angry with 对……生气 ② develop some healthy habits 养成一些健康的习惯 ③ staying up 熬夜 ④ not ... any more 不再…… ⑤ make a change 做出改变 ⑥ be strict with 对……严格 ⑦ say sorry to 对……道歉 ⑧ be filled with 充满 [高分句型] ① I hope to develop some healthy habits like getting up early or taking more exercise, but I still spend most of my time staying up playing computer games.（but连接并列句，spend some time doing sth.句式） ② I hope my life can be filled with peace and happiness.（宾语从句） 8．Alice和Linda都是你的好朋友，她们却有不同的生活习惯和完全不同的身心状态请根据下面表格提示，以“Different Lifestyles of My Friends”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的好朋友Alice和Linda的情况并做简要评价。 姓名 生活习惯 身心状态 Alice 每天锻炼身体 总是帮助父母做家务 几乎从不吃垃圾食品 又高又瘦 每天感觉快乐 Linda 每周吃三或四次垃圾食品 经常看电视，每次看电视都超过两小时 从来不运动 又矮又胖 经常感觉无聊和疲惫 要求：1．字数60词左右； 2．书写工整规范、卷面整洁、语言流畅； 3．文中不得使用真实的人名，校名，否则以零分计。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Different Lifestyles of My Friends I have two good friends, Alice and Linda. They have totally different lifestyles from each other. Alice takes exercise every day, and she always helps her parents with housework when she is free. She seldom eats junk food. She is tall and slim, and she feels happy every day. Linda eats junk food three or four times a week, and she is short and fat. She often watches TV for over two hours every time. And she never plays sports. She often feels bored and tired. I think Alice has a healthy lifestyle, while Linda needs to change her living habits. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头点名主题为“我的朋友们”； 第二步，具体阐述两个朋友的生活习惯和身心状态； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①each other彼此 ②take exercise做运动 ③healthy lifestyle健康的生活方式 [高分句型] Alice takes exercise every day, and she always helps her parents with housework when she is free. (when引导的时间状语从句) 9．每个人都有不同的生活习惯。养成良好的生活习惯，会使我们拥有健康的体魄。良好的生活习惯有哪些呢？如：每天按时起床和睡觉；饭前洗手；多吃水果和蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品；多参加体育锻炼；常开窗通风；不乱扔垃圾和随地吐痰；不要在马路上玩耍；注意交通安全等等。 根据以上提示，以How to Keep Good Living Habits为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：意思连贯、表达准确，词数80个左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：垃圾食品 junk food  吐痰spit  交通规则 traffic rules How to Keep Good Living Habits Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can make us keep healthy. What should we do? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Keep Good Living Habits   Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can make us keep healthy. What should we do? We should get up and sleep on time every day to build us up. It is important to wash our hands before meals to prevent diseases. Eating more fruit and vegetables every day. Regular physical exercise strengthens our body and enhances fitness. We should always open windows to let the fresh air in. Do not litter or spit to keep the environment clean. Avoid playing on the road and remember to follow traffic rules for safety. In brief, developing these habits is key to a healthy and happy life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一和第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出文章主题：每个人生活习惯不同，但良好习惯能保持健康； 第二步，提出具体建议：包括按时作息、饭前洗手、均衡饮食、定时锻炼、开窗通风、保持环境清洁、注意交通安全等； 第三步，结尾强调良好习惯的重要性。   [亮点词汇] ①build sb up强壮某人的体魄 ②keep sth adj使某物处于…… ③avoid doing sth避免做某事 [高分句型] ①It is important to wash our hands before meals to prevent diseases.（it固定句型） ②In brief, developing these habits is key to a healthy and happy life.（动名词作主语） 10．根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你及你的好朋友安娜 (Anna) 的相同之处，不同之处和上周末活动。 Name Anna I 不同点 1. 比我高，是班上最高的女生；更文静；喜欢看新闻，因为新闻有教育意义。 2. 学习比我努力，成绩比我好。 1. 更外向；喜欢看喜剧片，因为这让人放松。 2. 更擅长唱歌。 相同点 1. 14岁，瘦，长头发。 2. 都有着健康的生活方式，喜欢吃水果，几乎不吃垃圾食品；喜欢运动，每周锻炼三到四次。 上周末活动 天气晴朗，和Anna一起去了湖滨路，拍了照片，玩得很开心。 要求： 1. 包含表格中所有要点可适当发挥。 2. 语意连贯，具有逻辑性。 3. 书写工整。4. 字数不少于80词。 参考词汇：lifestyle; Hu Bin Road ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Anna and I are best friends, and although we have some differences, we share many similarities. We are both 14 years old, slim, and have long hair. We also lead healthy lifestyles. We both love eating fruit and hardly ever eat junk food. Exercise is a big part of our lives, and we both work out three to four times a week.   However, there are some differences between us. Anna is taller than me—in fact, she’s the tallest girl in our class! She’s also much quieter than I am. She enjoys watching the news because she finds it educational. I am more outgoing and prefer watching comedies to relax. I’m also better at singing than she is. Academically, Anna is a harder worker and gets better grades than me.   Last weekend, the weather was beautiful, so Anna and I went to Hu Bin Road. We took lots of photos and had a wonderful time together. Despite our differences, our friendship is strong, and we always have fun when we’re together. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍朋友Anna及和我之间的相同之处； 第二步，介绍Anna和我之间的不同点； 第三步，介绍上周末活动。 [亮点词汇] ①similarity相同点 ②work out锻炼 ③prefer更喜欢 [高分句型] ①Anna and I are best friends, and although we have some differences, we share many similarities. (让步状语从句) ②She enjoys watching the news because she finds it educational. (原因状语从句) 能力综合实践8篇 11．不同的人喜欢生活在不同的生活环境中。有的人喜欢在城市中生活，有的人喜欢在乡村生活。请以“I like living in the ________”为题写一篇英语短文。 1.要点：1)你喜欢生活在城市还是农村； 2)你喜欢这种生活环境的原因； 3)你将为这种生活环境做些什么。 2.要求:1)请补全标题，city或countryside； 2)要适当使用比较级； 3)词数90左右。 I like living in the ________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I like living in the countryside I prefer living in the countryside to living in the city. Because the air in the countryside is fresh and the environment is beautiful. There are not many cars in the countryside, so there is not much pollution. The water is clearer and the sky is bluer. At night, you can also see the stars in the sky. Besides, life in the countryside is very relaxing. You don’t have to rush to catch a bus or endure the noise of the city. However, in recent years, the environment has been damaged. I hope people know the importance of protecting the environment. I will be a volunteer to take part in environmental protection. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意补全题目，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己喜欢农村生活； 第二步，介绍喜欢农村生活的原因； 第三步，介绍自己将为这种生活环境做的事情。 [亮点词汇] ①prefer doing A to doing B比起做B更喜欢做A ②don’t have to不必 ③take part in参加 [高分句型] ①There are not many cars in the countryside, so there is not much pollution. (There be句型) ②I hope people know the importance of protecting the environment. (省略引导词that的宾语从句) 12．在丰富多彩的初中生活中，朋友是不可或缺的一部分。他们陪伴我们成长，与我们一同分享喜怒哀乐，是我们青春岁月里的珍贵宝藏。假设你是Sally，请根据表格所提供的信息写一篇演讲稿，和同学们分享你对朋友的观点，并介绍你和好朋友Nancy之间的相同之处和不同之处。 要求： 1. 80-120词 (开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称； 参考信息： Opinion (观点) I think… Who Nancy I The same things and different things tall, longhair tall, longhair funny, more outgoing quiet like sports, do sports everyday like reading and cooking like watching movies can’t stand soap opera want to be a pianist want to be a cook … … Hello, everyone, I’m Sally. I am glad to talk something about the good friend. I think ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone, I’m Sally. I am glad to talk something about the good friend. I think friends are an important part of our colorful junior high school life. They accompany us to grow up and share our joys and sorrows. They are precious treasures in our youth. I have a good friend whose name is Nancy. We have some things in common. For example, both of us are tall and have long hair. We both like watching movies. And we both have our own dreams. Nancy wants to be a pianist, while I want to be a cook. However, we also have many differences. Nancy is funny and more outgoing, but I am quiet. She likes sports and does sports every day, while I like reading and cooking. What’s more, she likes watching movies, but I can’t stand soap opera. Although we have differences, our friendship remains strong. We learn from each other and support each other. That’s what true friendship is all about. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍并引出话题，即谈论好朋友； 第二步，先阐述朋友在初中生活中的重要性，然后分别从相同点和不同点介绍自己和Nancy； 第三步，总结尽管有不同，但友谊依然坚固，并且互相学习和支持，点明真正友谊的内涵，最后表示感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①be glad to do很开心做…… ②grow up成长 ③learn from each other彼此学习 [高分句型] ①I have a good friend whose name is Nancy. (whose引导的定语从句) ②Although we have differences, our friendship remains strong. (although引导的让步状语从句) 13．每个人都有兴趣爱好，兴趣爱好使我们的生活更丰富多彩，但是随着年龄增长，我们的兴趣爱好也在改变。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“Change for the Better”为题，谈谈不同时期你的不同爱好。 写作要求： 1）文中须包含下图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校姓名； 3）词数80左右。 Change for the Better ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Change for the Better Different people have different hobbies. I also have many hobbies. They can change with time. In the past, I used to lose myself in watching TV, and playing computer games. They were bad for my eyes. I even didn’t want to study and fell ill easily. I need a change. Now I am fond of collecting stamps and reading books. I know a lot about history and people from stamps and I become interested in studying. A healthy body is important. In the future, I will do more sports to build me up. It will be good for my health. I hope I can live a better life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍自己爱好的变化，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己过去的爱好； 第三步，介绍自己改变之后的爱好； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do sth.过去常常做某事 ②be bad for对……有坏处 ③be fond of喜爱 ④in the future在将来 [高分句型] ①Now I am fond of collecting stamps and reading books.（动名词作宾语） ②I know a lot about history and people from stamps and I become interested in studying.（and连接的并列句） 14．音乐能给人们带来快乐和自信。不同的人喜欢不同的音乐。请根据下表提示，用英语介绍你和你的朋友们对音乐的爱好和理由。 要求： (1) 语言通顺，表达要正确。 (2) 包含多有要点提示，可适当发挥。 (3) 词数：80—100词。 Name What kind of music Reason Tony dance music enjoying dancing Betty jazz music cool Carmon rock music and dance music interesting I ... _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Music is important in our life. If there is no music, our life won’t be so interesting. Music can bring us energy and make us happy. Different people have different ideas about music. Tony loves music that he can dance, too, because he enjoys dancing. Betty likes jazz music. She thinks jazz is really cool. Carmon enjoys rock music and dance music very much. She thinks they are interesting. I like country music because it can make me feel relaxed. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表中提示内容“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“音乐在我们生活中很重要”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——三个人及我喜欢的音乐类型及原因等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①make us happy使我高兴 ②feel relaxed感到放松 [高分句型] ①If there is no music, our life won’t be so interesting. (If引导的条件状语从句） ②I like country music because it can make me feel relaxed. (Because引导的原因状语从句) 15．爱因斯坦说：“兴趣是最好的老师”，有人喜欢唱歌、有人喜欢跳舞、有人喜欢绘画、有人喜欢踢球……兴趣爱好让人快乐、令人放松，不同的兴趣爱好带给每个人不同的感受。近日育才中学广播站正在举行英语征文比赛，请你以“My Hobbies Make Me_________ ”为题，写一篇约80词的征文。 要求：1.征文须包含思维导图中所有信息； 2.重点谈谈你的收获及感悟； 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Hobbies Make Me Happy As we all know, happiness is a feeling in our daily life. I always read in my spare time. I think it can not only improve my knowledge, but also broaden my mind. First of all, there are all kinds of stories in the book. Some interesting, some sad, some wonderful. I can always learn a lot from them. Second, reading books helps me do well in my study. Books are quite useful when I meet with difficulties. In a word, reading has already become part of my life. Just as the saying goes, “Reading makes a full man.” I think doing more reading can really make me better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的爱好是什么； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢阅读的原因； 第三步，总结概括。 [亮点词汇] ①in my spare time在我闲暇时间 ②all kinds of各种各样的 ③do well in擅长 [高分句型] ①I think it can not only improve my knowledge, but also broaden my mind.（“not only…but also”连接并列结构） ②Books are quite useful when I meet with difficulties.（when引导时间状语从句） 16．假如你是Tom，请根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你的好朋友Eric的相同之处和不同之处。 我(Tom) 好朋友Eric 外貌，性格 个子矮，瘦，严肃，安静 高，有点胖，外向 校园生活 学习比Eric努力，各科成绩都比Eric好 不如我努力但体育比我好 饮食习惯 喜欢喝牛奶，喜欢吃蔬菜和水果 喜欢喝牛奶，吃肉 兴趣爱好 喜欢看电视，每周看3到5次；喜欢听音乐 喜欢运动，每天锻炼；喜欢听音乐 要求： 1. 词数：80—100词 2. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容； 3. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。 4. 注意：检查动词第三人称单数形式，名词复数，标点符号等是否准确。卷面分2分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’m Tom. I have a good friend. He is Eric. He is tall but a little fat. I am short and thin. He is an outgoing boy, but I am more serious and quiet. I study harder than Eric and I have better grades than him. But he plays sports better than me. We both like drinking milk. I have vegetables and fruit every day, but he likes eating meat. I like watching TV very much so I watch TV three to five times a week. He likes sports, so he does exercise every day. We both like listening to music because it can make us relaxed. I think a good friend is like a mirror. Staying with friends, we can find our own shortcomings. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，介绍自己和好朋友Eric的相同之处和不同之处，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，具体介绍自己与Eric之间的相同和不同； 第三步，介绍自己对朋友的理解。 [亮点词汇] ①play sports做运动 ②like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ③listen to music听音乐 [高分句型] ①We both like listening to music because it can make us relaxed.（原因状语从句） ②I think a good friend is like a mirror. (宾语从句) 17．Larry和Greg是双胞胎兄弟，他们有一些相同点，也有不同点。 相同点 不同点 1. 都一样高，都有短发； 2. 每周锻炼两到三次： 3. 喜欢去海滩度假； 4. 认为Wanda Cinema是仁寿最好的影院，因为那里离家最近，座位最舒服。 1. Larry更外向，跑得更快； 2. Greg更瘦，在画画上有天赋 3. Larry不如Greg努力，所以Greg总是取得更好的成绩； 虽然他们有很多的差异，但他们总是互相帮助。 both,    as… as,    not as… as,    help each other 要求： 1. 短文内容要包含以上要点，可适当发挥。 2. 语言表达要准确，语义通顺，连贯。 3. 词数90左右；文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Larry and Greg are twin brothers. They have some similarities and differences______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Larry and Greg are twin brothers. They have some similarities and differences. They are both the same height and have short hair. They exercise two or three times a week. They like to go to the beach for vacation. They think Wanda Cinema is the best cinema in Renshou because it is the closest to home and the seats are the most comfortable. But Larry is more outgoing and runs faster. Greg is thinner and has a talent for painting. Larry is not as hard-working as Greg, so Greg always gets better results. Although they have many differences, they always help each other. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章开头，介绍双胞胎兄弟的相同点； 第二步，介绍双胞胎兄弟的不同点。 [亮点词汇] ①have a talent for有……的天赋 ②each other互相 ③go to the beach去海滩 [高分句型] ①They think Wanda Cinema is the best cinema in Renshou because it is the closest to home and the seats are the most comfortable.（省略that的宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句） ②Although they have many differences, they always help each other.（although引导的让步状语从句） 18．Annie，Bobby和Cindy是你的同学，他们三个是好朋友，但爱好和特点却截然不同。下列表格中列出了他们的爱好和特点。请根据表格中的内容写一篇小短文，向大家介绍一下这三位同学，并且选择你想交的一位朋友，说说理由。 注意： 1. 词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 2. 不得透露班级、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 Name Hobbies Characteristic（特点） Which one do you want to make friends with? Why? Annie 每周参加两次学校课后活动 友善，又高又瘦 Bobby 每周末晚上8点到9点画画，喜欢讲故事 聪明，梦想做一名老师 Cindy 每天下午练习拉小提琴、弹吉他 11 岁，大眼睛短头发 Annie, Bobby and Cindy are my classmates. They are good friends, but they are quite different. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Annie, Bobby and Cindy are my classmates. They are good friends, but they are quite different. Annie is a tall and thin girl who is easy-going and friendly. She likes to play basketball. She also likes to play soccer and she is good at it. She takes part in after-school activities twice a week. Bobby likes painting. He usually paints from 8 p.m. to 9 p.m. He also enjoys telling stories. He is very smart. His dream is to be a teacher. Cindy is an 11-year-old girl with big eyes and short hair. She likes to play the violin and guitar. She practices the violin and guitar in the afternoon. I want to make friends with Annie, because I like sports, too. I like to play volleyball. I think we can be good friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作时需根据表格内容展开描写，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出三位同班同学； 第二步，根据表格内容分别介绍三位同学爱好、特点； 第三步，表达自己想交的朋友和原因。 [亮点词汇] ① be good at擅长 ② take part in参加 ③ enjoy doing喜欢做 [高分句型] ① Annie is a tall and thin girl who is easy-going and friendly. （定语从句） ② I want to make friends with Annie, because I like sports, too. （原因状语从句） 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit1 Everyone is different 单元话题写作满分范文18篇（分层练习） 基础入门训练5篇 1．每个人都是与众不同的，你了解自己吗？请以”Myself in My Eyes”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 你眼中的自己是什么样子的； 2. 你是否喜欢这样的自己； 3. 你想对自己说什么。 要求： 1. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2. 词数 100 左右。 Myself in My Eyes ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．做最好的自己，才会让梦想落地开花；做最好的自己，才会让人生与众不同。请以“I can be the best of myself”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇文章。 1.要点：1)你的心目中,最好的自己是什么样的；2)你打算怎样做来成就最好的自己；3)你的感悟。 2.要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2)词数100左右。 I can be the best of myself ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．今天的英语课上，我们学习的话题是“Celebrating Me”。每个人都是与众不同的，我们要了解自己，喜欢自己。假如你叫李明，请你写一篇小短文介绍自己，一定要把自己的独特之处写清楚哦。你可以从以下几个方面来写： 1. What are your strong points and weak points? 2. What do you want to be in the future? 3. What can you do to make yourself better? 要求： 1. 短文必须包括提纲所有内容，可适当发挥。 2. 短文不要涉及真实的人名和校名。 3. 词数：70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. I’m in Grade Eight now. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all about me. I hope we can be friends. 4．某英文网站正在开展以“寻找身边的小达人”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位你身边的小达人，内容包括他（她）是谁、能做什么，以及是什么让他（她）与众不同的。 提示词语：friend, strong, play basketball well, work hard 提示问题：·Who is the person?             ·What can he/she do?             ·What makes him/her special? I’m glad to share something about a talent. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．每个人的生活方式和习惯都不同，请根据表格提示，比较两个好朋友不同的生活习惯，并简要说明自己的看法，做出评价。70词左右。 Name Exercise Go online Eat junk food Watch TV for 2 hours Bill 一周两次 每天一次 经常 几乎每天 Tina 每天一次 一周两到三次 几乎不 每周一次 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．假如你是吉姆（Jim），是一位英国男孩，今年12岁，请你根据情况，以My Family Time为题写一篇文章。 内容包括： 1 你有一个弟弟和一个妹妹，弟弟叫约翰（John），妹妹叫贝蒂（Betty），她只有五岁。你和约翰在同一个年级，但是在不同的班级 2 你的爸爸是一名医生，你的妈妈是一名英语老师 3 介绍家庭活动（例如和家人一起拜访爷爷奶奶，和家人一起打篮球，踢足球，看电视，读书 等等） 作文要求 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名，语言连贯，70词左右 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．每个人都会从不同的经历中获得不同的感受。哪一种感受经常伴随着你呢？请根据下面的图示写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. How do you often feel? 2. What makes you so…? Why? 3. Do you want to make any changes? How? 要求： 1. 内容完整，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 3. 词数100左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．Alice和Linda都是你的好朋友，她们却有不同的生活习惯和完全不同的身心状态请根据下面表格提示，以“Different Lifestyles of My Friends”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的好朋友Alice和Linda的情况并做简要评价。 姓名 生活习惯 身心状态 Alice 每天锻炼身体 总是帮助父母做家务 几乎从不吃垃圾食品 又高又瘦 每天感觉快乐 Linda 每周吃三或四次垃圾食品 经常看电视，每次看电视都超过两小时 从来不运动 又矮又胖 经常感觉无聊和疲惫 要求：1．字数60词左右； 2．书写工整规范、卷面整洁、语言流畅； 3．文中不得使用真实的人名，校名，否则以零分计。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．每个人都有不同的生活习惯。养成良好的生活习惯，会使我们拥有健康的体魄。良好的生活习惯有哪些呢？如：每天按时起床和睡觉；饭前洗手；多吃水果和蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品；多参加体育锻炼；常开窗通风；不乱扔垃圾和随地吐痰；不要在马路上玩耍；注意交通安全等等。 根据以上提示，以How to Keep Good Living Habits为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：意思连贯、表达准确，词数80个左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：垃圾食品 junk food  吐痰spit  交通规则 traffic rules How to Keep Good Living Habits Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can make us keep healthy. What should we do? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你及你的好朋友安娜 (Anna) 的相同之处，不同之处和上周末活动。 Name Anna I 不同点 1. 比我高，是班上最高的女生；更文静；喜欢看新闻，因为新闻有教育意义。 2. 学习比我努力，成绩比我好。 1. 更外向；喜欢看喜剧片，因为这让人放松。 2. 更擅长唱歌。 相同点 1. 14岁，瘦，长头发。 2. 都有着健康的生活方式，喜欢吃水果，几乎不吃垃圾食品；喜欢运动，每周锻炼三到四次。 上周末活动 天气晴朗，和Anna一起去了湖滨路，拍了照片，玩得很开心。 要求： 1. 包含表格中所有要点可适当发挥。 2. 语意连贯，具有逻辑性。 3. 书写工整。4. 字数不少于80词。 参考词汇：lifestyle; Hu Bin Road ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践8篇 11．不同的人喜欢生活在不同的生活环境中。有的人喜欢在城市中生活，有的人喜欢在乡村生活。请以“I like living in the ________”为题写一篇英语短文。 1.要点：1)你喜欢生活在城市还是农村； 2)你喜欢这种生活环境的原因； 3)你将为这种生活环境做些什么。 2.要求:1)请补全标题，city或countryside； 2)要适当使用比较级； 3)词数90左右。 I like living in the ________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．在丰富多彩的初中生活中，朋友是不可或缺的一部分。他们陪伴我们成长，与我们一同分享喜怒哀乐，是我们青春岁月里的珍贵宝藏。假设你是Sally，请根据表格所提供的信息写一篇演讲稿，和同学们分享你对朋友的观点，并介绍你和好朋友Nancy之间的相同之处和不同之处。 要求： 1. 80-120词 (开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称； 参考信息： Opinion (观点) I think… Who Nancy I The same things and different things tall, longhair tall, longhair funny, more outgoing quiet like sports, do sports everyday like reading and cooking like watching movies can’t stand soap opera want to be a pianist want to be a cook … … Hello, everyone, I’m Sally. I am glad to talk something about the good friend. I think ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．每个人都有兴趣爱好，兴趣爱好使我们的生活更丰富多彩，但是随着年龄增长，我们的兴趣爱好也在改变。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“Change for the Better”为题，谈谈不同时期你的不同爱好。 写作要求： 1）文中须包含下图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校姓名； 3）词数80左右。 Change for the Better ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．音乐能给人们带来快乐和自信。不同的人喜欢不同的音乐。请根据下表提示，用英语介绍你和你的朋友们对音乐的爱好和理由。 要求： (1) 语言通顺，表达要正确。 (2) 包含多有要点提示，可适当发挥。 (3) 词数：80—100词。 Name What kind of music Reason Tony dance music enjoying dancing Betty jazz music cool Carmon rock music and dance music interesting I ... _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．爱因斯坦说：“兴趣是最好的老师”，有人喜欢唱歌、有人喜欢跳舞、有人喜欢绘画、有人喜欢踢球……兴趣爱好让人快乐、令人放松，不同的兴趣爱好带给每个人不同的感受。近日育才中学广播站正在举行英语征文比赛，请你以“My Hobbies Make Me_________ ”为题，写一篇约80词的征文。 要求：1.征文须包含思维导图中所有信息； 2.重点谈谈你的收获及感悟； 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．假如你是Tom，请根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你的好朋友Eric的相同之处和不同之处。 我(Tom) 好朋友Eric 外貌，性格 个子矮，瘦，严肃，安静 高，有点胖，外向 校园生活 学习比Eric努力，各科成绩都比Eric好 不如我努力但体育比我好 饮食习惯 喜欢喝牛奶，喜欢吃蔬菜和水果 喜欢喝牛奶，吃肉 兴趣爱好 喜欢看电视，每周看3到5次；喜欢听音乐 喜欢运动，每天锻炼；喜欢听音乐 要求： 1. 词数：80—100词 2. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容； 3. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。 4. 注意：检查动词第三人称单数形式，名词复数，标点符号等是否准确。卷面分2分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．Larry和Greg是双胞胎兄弟，他们有一些相同点，也有不同点。 相同点 不同点 1. 都一样高，都有短发； 2. 每周锻炼两到三次： 3. 喜欢去海滩度假； 4. 认为Wanda Cinema是仁寿最好的影院，因为那里离家最近，座位最舒服。 1. Larry更外向，跑得更快； 2. Greg更瘦，在画画上有天赋 3. Larry不如Greg努力，所以Greg总是取得更好的成绩； 虽然他们有很多的差异，但他们总是互相帮助。 both,    as… as,    not as… as,    help each other 要求： 1. 短文内容要包含以上要点，可适当发挥。 2. 语言表达要准确，语义通顺，连贯。 3. 词数90左右；文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Larry and Greg are twin brothers. They have some similarities and differences______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．Annie，Bobby和Cindy是你的同学，他们三个是好朋友，但爱好和特点却截然不同。下列表格中列出了他们的爱好和特点。请根据表格中的内容写一篇小短文，向大家介绍一下这三位同学，并且选择你想交的一位朋友，说说理由。 注意： 1. 词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 2. 不得透露班级、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 Name Hobbies Characteristic（特点） Which one do you want to make friends with? Why? Annie 每周参加两次学校课后活动 友善，又高又瘦 Bobby 每周末晚上8点到9点画画，喜欢讲故事 聪明，梦想做一名老师 Cindy 每天下午练习拉小提琴、弹吉他 11 岁，大眼睛短头发 Annie, Bobby and Cindy are my classmates. They are good friends, but they are quite different. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$