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满分策略2 7个动作公式 极具画面感
第1组 使用动作链,营造画面感
描写动作时, 避免用一个笼统的动作,而是将动作分解为一连串连贯的动作(2~3个),形成动作链。
公式1 主语+did A, did B and did C/主语+did A, did B, did C and did D
※连词and连接三个或三个以上的动作,构成动作链,动词的时态应一致。
He caught my eye, flashed me a toothy grin and said, “That was easy.” (2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)他看了我一眼,露齿一笑说:“不难。”
I approached Dad, proudly took out my own money and handed it to him. (浙江高考) 我走近爸爸,骄傲地拿出我自己的钱递给他。
公式2 主语+did A+and+did B,非谓语动词
※连词and连接两个或两个以上的动作,构成动作链。非谓语动词作状语,可置于句首或句尾。
Putting his ladder against the wall, he climbed and peered over.(《秘密花园》)
他把梯子靠在墙上,爬上去往外看。
①Putting on his coat, he stormed out and slammed the door shut.
他穿上外套,怒气冲冲地跑了出去,把门重重地关上。
②He stood up and walked to the window, thinking hard.
他站起身,走到窗前,苦思冥想。
公式3 主语+did, 非谓语动词A+and+非谓语动词B
※连词and连接两个或三个非谓语动词,构成动作链,非谓语动词部分可置于句首或句尾。
She hurried in the direction of west London, pushing past people on the pavement, and running across crowded streets without looking.(《雾都孤儿》)
她急匆匆地朝伦敦西部的方向赶去,推搡着人行道上来往的行人,连看也不看一眼就跑步横穿车水马龙的街道。
Mary jumped into the cold water, pulling out the girl and placing her on the ground. 玛丽跳入冰冷的水中,把女孩拉出来,放在地上。
第2组 适当修饰,精准化描写动作
公式4 形容词(短语), 主语+did……/主语+did……,形容词(短语)
※形容词(短语)在句中作状语,表人物做某个动作的原因、结果或状态。
Exhausted, he dropped into the bed.他筋疲力尽,瘫倒在床上。
Fortunately, we got into the helicopter, safe and sound.幸运的是,我们安然无恙地上了直升机。
公式5 主语+did+副词/介词短语
※常用的高频副词有: cheerfully、 curiously、 eagerly、 excitedly、 fiercely、 firmly、 joyfully、 impatiently、 restlessly等。在体现动作的迅速时,可添加:swiftly、 immediately、 without pausing、 without delay/hesitation等。
Helen spoke clearly, slowly, and loudly. (3个副词连用)
海伦讲话的声音清晰、缓慢而且洪亮。
She ran to the mirror and jammed the hat eagerly on her head.她跑到镜子前,急急忙忙把帽子扣到头上。
公式6 主语+did, with+名词+非谓语动词/形容词/副词/介词短语
主语+did,+
My elder sister gazed at the toy car, with a hint of regret and envy in her eyes.
我姐姐看着玩具车,眼里带着一丝遗憾和嫉妒。
When Karina saw it, she hugged it tightly with tears filling her eyes/with her eyes full of tears.当卡琳娜看到它时,她紧紧地拥抱着它,双眸满是泪水。
公式7 主语+did, 独立主格[逻辑主语(heart、 eyes等表身体部位的名词)+非谓语动词/形容词/副词/介词短语]
He tossed from side to side, his head hot to touch.他辗转反侧,头摸着烫手。
①Eyes glued to it, he fell in love with the shiny red car the instant he saw it.
他目不转睛地盯着那辆闪亮的红色汽车,一看到它就爱上了它。
②Reaching down, I touched its head, my heart racing.我心跳加速,伸手去摸它的头。
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