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第三部分　写作 专题一　应用文写作 满分策略1　会审题谋篇,写好衡水手写印刷体 2024新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷应用文分别为介绍公园美术课、自己的美术作品和感想。 2024新课标Ⅰ卷应用文试题形式更加灵活,内容表达更加开放,不仅考查语言表达能力,还考查应用性和创造性能力,引导学生要有批判性思维(critical thinking),创造性地介绍事物和表达感想。 　　以2024新课标Ⅰ卷应用文为例,体会如何审题谋篇和写好衡水体技巧 2024高考阅卷老师的话 1.阅卷的时候,电脑上显示的答题卡上是没有横线的,书写务必工整! 不可书写过小、过密或过虚,甚至字迹潦草,乱涂乱改,标点不清。同样的内容,卷面“漂漂亮亮”的话,至少多给3分! 2.使用恰当词汇:词汇的选择应该合适、得体。 3.言之有物:写出真正有内容有思想有新意的观点,吸引阅卷老师的青睐。 4.衔接连贯:注重点与点之间,句与句之间,段与段之间的衔接和连贯,摒弃框架式的套句和无实质性内容的空句。 5.注重交际功能和读者意识:在尾段询问对方看法或是否有类似经历,强调礼貌性。 6.小错误一定要少:用自己熟悉的地道表达,检查时态、语态、动词过去式、三单这些容易出错的地方。 满分策略2　借鉴19个真题满分模板 模板1 问题+建议信　(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷满分作文) 假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:1.说明问题;2.提出建议。 首段:①说明问题或对方遇到的困难;②说明写信目的 We’re excited about your plan for oral practice, but I’d like to share a different voice. While I appreciate the intention behind random pairings, I see some potential challenges. (写信目的) 中间段:①建议1+理由;②建议2+理由;③建议3+理由或①具体说明问题;②建议1+理由;③建议2+理由 When two students with different backgrounds are paired randomly, finding common topics can be tough. Additionally, if both students struggle with spoken English, they might not effectively help each other, possibly minimizing their motivation to improve. (提出问题) Thus, I wonder if you could allow us to pair up freely and you can make adjustments if necessary. This might increase our motivation to speak and learn. Also, it could be more beneficial to group students with mixed English levels intentionally, thus ensuring our mutual improvement. (提出建议) 尾段:表示愿望 Your understanding and consideration would be greatly appreciated. (表示期待) 模板2 邀请信　(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷满分作文) 假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。 首段:①自我介绍;②发出邀请 I am Li Hua, a student in charge of our Campus Broadcasting Station. I’m writing to sincerely invite you to an interview in our program.(自我介绍+提出邀请) 中间段:①活动时间;②活动安排 Mainly focusing on our varied and colorful campus life,“Talk and Talk”enjoys great popularity among us. Actually, fully aware of your abundant experience in teaching and rich knowledge of literature, we desire a talk concerning how to improve writing ability. Would 3:00 pm this Saturday suit you? (节目介绍+访谈的时间和话题) 尾段:①望应邀;②期待回复 Your presence will definitely impress and benefit us considerably. I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience. (再次邀请、期待回复) 模板3 求助信　(全国甲卷满分作文) 假定你是李华,你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:1.阐明写信事由;2.征求建议;3.表示感谢。 首段:①问候;②说明事由;③提出求助意图 How is everything going? A class meeting is to be held in our school themed“Traditional Chinese Culture”, which will be shown on an English website. I am writing to ask you for some advice on this. (问候+说明写信缘由) 中间段:①描述自己的问题;②希望得到什么帮助 As is known, China has abundant and unique cultures with a long history, like tea culture, Peking Opera, traditional handicraft and Chinese calligraphy. I’m wondering if you could tell me which attracts foreign friends most so that our meeting can gain more popularity. (征求建议) 尾段:①表达感谢; ②盼望回复 Thank you in advance for your suggestions. Looking forward to your earliest reply. (表示感谢+期待回复) 模板4 申请信　(全国卷Ⅰ满分作文) 假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。 首段:①自我简介;②说明信息;③提出申请 I’m Li Hua, a student taking summer courses in London now. Learning volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery, I can’t wait to apply for the position. (自我介绍+写信目的) 中间段:①阐述“语言+交流”能力;②阐述资格、性格特征等;③阐述相关经验 I’m convinced that I’m equal to the job for the following advantages. Firstly, my fluent English enables me to communicate smoothly with British painting lovers. Moreover, with a wide knowledge of Chinese painting, I can introduce the art form better. Better yet, I’ve participated in several similar activities, which equipped me with relevant experience. (介绍个人优势) 尾段:①表达决心;②表达感谢 If accepted, I will spare no effort to introduce those paintings on display and answer questions patiently. I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application.(说明能做的事+表达感谢) 模板5 告知信　(全国卷Ⅱ满分作文) 假定你是校排球队队长李华,请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:1.比赛信息;2.赛前准备;3.表达期待。 首段:①开篇问候;②说明信息 How is everything going? I’m excited to inform you our team is to compete in an important volleyball match next week. (问候+告知比赛信息) 中间段:①活动时间、地点、目的等;②活动具体细节;③活动感受或期待等 As scheduled, the event will be held in our school gym at 9 am next Sunday. To make full preparations for it, I have made a specific training plan. All the team members are supposed to take the training punctually. We are expected to practice a lot in an effort to improve our skills and cooperate better with each other. I do hope we can do a good job through joint efforts. (比赛前的准备) 尾段:期盼联系 Eagerly looking forward to your early reply. (表达期待) 模板6 感谢信　(浙江高考满分作文) 假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。 首段:表达感谢之情+说明原因 It’s really hard to say goodbye to you. I even can’t find words to express my appreciation to you who have done so much for me. (道别+表示感谢) 中间段:①描述对方所作所为1;②描述对方所作所为2;③说明对方所作所为的意义 I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral and written English. Additionally, when I was faced with difficulties in English learning, it was your great efforts that motivated me to work harder. Most importantly, without your advice and assistance, I would not have made such unbelievable progress in English. (回顾对方的帮助) 尾段:①再次致谢;②表达回报意愿 My appreciation is beyond words and I’ll be delighted if I can show you around Beijing to repay your kindness. Wish you a happy journey home. (再次致谢+临别祝愿) 模板7 道歉信　(全国卷Ⅲ满分作文) 假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。 首段:向对方表示歉意 I’m writing to apologize to you for not being able to go to the bookshop with you at our appointed time. (表示歉意) 中间段:①说明原因+情真意切;②阐述另一件事的意义;③希望理解并原谅自己;④提出弥补措施 The reason why I am not available is that my grandfather suddenly fell ill yesterday and now he is in hospital. My family are taking turns to care for him and it is my turn that day. Hopefully, you can understand my situation and forgive me. Meanwhile, I would appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another date. I am wondering if we can meet at 8 am next Saturday. (说明不能赴约的原因,另约时间) 尾段:再次致歉 Sorry again for any inconvenience caused. (再次致歉) 模板8 推荐信 假定你是李华,你的朋友Tom要来中国旅游,希望你能给他推荐一个有特色的旅游景点,请你回封邮件,内容包括:1.推荐的景点及原因;2.良好的祝愿。 首段:①引出主题;②说明写信目的 Learning you’ll visit China, I’m delighted to recommend some attractions to you. (说明写信目的) 中间段:①推荐对象1+理由;②推荐对象2+理由 As an old saying goes,“One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a true man.”As one of the world wonders, the Great Wall is regarded as the symbol of China, which you can’t afford to miss. Additionally, with a history of hundreds of years, the Summer Palace shows typical ancient Chinese architectural art. The visit to it is bound to deepen your understanding of traditional Chinese culture. (提出推荐对象及其理由) 尾段:①表达期望;②表示祝愿 Hopefully, my recommendation can be of help to you. May you have a good time during your stay in China! (表达期待+祝愿) 模板9 询问信　(全国卷Ⅰ满分作文) 假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。如图的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。 首段:①自我介绍;②说明写信目的 I’m Li Hua, planning to attend the English course during the summer vacation. I’m writing to ask for some information regarding it.(自我介绍+写信目的) 中间段:①咨询的信息1;②咨询的信息2;③咨询的信息3;④咨询的信息4 Firstly, could you be so kind as to tell me when the course will start and how many periods there are per week? Moreover, what about the class size? I wish there would be fewer students in a class, in which case each student can get more attention. Additionally, I􀆳d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory? (陈述要咨询的事宜) 尾段:①表示感谢;②盼望回复 Thank you for your kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated. (表感谢+期盼回复) 模板10 约稿信　(全国卷满分作文) 假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文,请给美国朋友Peter写信约稿。要点如下:1.栏目介绍;2.稿件内容;3.稿件长度:约400词;4.交稿日期:6月28日之前。 首段:说明事由 I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school English newspaper. (写信目的) 中间段:①栏目介绍；②约稿要求1; ③约稿要求2; ④截稿日期 In the newspaper there is a column called“Foreign Cultures”, which enjoys great popularity among us students. It carries articles written by foreigners about their traditional festivals and customs, as well as their daily lives.（栏目介绍） I consider it a golden opportunity to share your own experiences with us. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. The length of the article should be limited to 400 words or so. If interested, do submit your article before 28th, June. (约稿要求) 尾段:表达期望 Looking forward to reading your article. (表达期望) 模板11 推荐类短文　(2024·浙江高考1月) 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一个适合课间开展的运动。内容包括:1.介绍这项运动;2.说明推荐理由。 首段:阐述“课间开展运动”的重要性或者原因+引出推荐的课间运动 Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! Everybody, feel tired sitting in class all day? Consider giving physical exercise a shot! Among various choices, I recommend jogging as an ideal one. (阐述开展课间运动的原因+引出推荐的课间运动) 中间段:①介绍这项运动:运动的名称、主要动作或规则、安全提示、器材和场地。②说明推荐理由:释放压力、身心健康、促进友谊、团队合作、无需场地和器械等。 Jogging is a simple sport involving running at a slower pace, which requires neither special equipment nor a specific location. This sport stands out for several reasons. Firstly, jogging makes your heart stronger and increases the flow of blood around our body. Moreover, jogging relieves stress and boosts our mood, allowing us to return to class feeling more energized and focused. (介绍推荐的运动并说明推荐理由) 尾段:发起呼吁:化用标题或者使用其他号召性语言 So, stand up and jog a little. What really matters is not just the sport itself but the joy and fitness it brings. (发起呼吁) 模板12 短文　(2023·全国乙卷满分作文) 学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能,请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.简要描述;2.体验和感受。 首段:①引入要介绍的事件/活动;②介绍其重要性、目的等 Last summer, I learned how to make some home-cooked dishes like Fried Eggs with Tomatoes, which turned out to be a rewarding and fulfilling experience. (提出自己学的新技能) 中间段:简要介绍该事件/活动(或其他方面),注意利用恰当的衔接词汇 Previously, I considered cooking hard so I never thought of learning it. However, under the patient guidance of my mother, I learnt Fried Eggs with Tomatoes by trial and error. The moment I served the dish I made, my parents couldn’t wait to take a bite of it and gave me a thumbs-up. (简要描述经历、体验) 尾段:简要评价/感想/感受 Overall, not only did acquiring the skill give me the joy of success, but it also encouraged me to embrace new challenges. (感受) 模板13 人物介绍类短文　(2023·全国甲卷满分作文) 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹;2.意义或启示。 首段:说明要介绍的历史人物 Among the Chinese historical figures, Fan Zhongyan stands out as the most influential one in my opinion. Here are the reasons. (开门见山引出历史人物) 中间段:简要介绍该人物的生活年代、身份、主要事迹等 Fan Zhongyan, a distinguished Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, left a permanent mark due to his significant contribution to society. His dedication to a series of reforms aimed at national prosperity earned him admiration. Notably, he proposed establishing a national school system, which had a far-reaching influence on the Chinese educational system. (人物简介及事迹) 尾段:产生的影响或带给自己的启示 What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life:“Be the first to worry about the troubles across the land, the last to enjoy universal happiness.”Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character. (启示) 模板14 发言稿　(2024·全国甲卷) 英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以“Development of Transport in China”为题写一篇发言稿。 首段:提出演讲主题——中国的交通发展 Development of Transport in China Good morning class, today we’ll look at some developments in transport in China. (引入演讲主题) 中间段:结合图片详细说明中国的交通发展状况及影响;可以发表感悟,如为国家的富强和民族的复兴感到自豪等 Firstly, shared bicycles, a convenient and environmentally friendly option for short trips, have not only eased traffic jam but also fostered a culture of shared responsibility for the environment. Especially amazing is the high-speed rail system that showcases China’s great engineering skills, connecting the vast expanse of the country with unprecedented speed and efficiency. Moreover, the rise of new energy vehicles is leading China in a global sustainable transportation revolution. (具体介绍三个方面的发展和影响) Overall, these achievements reflect our nation’s strength and commitment to building a greener and more efficient transport system. (总结) 尾段:致谢 Thanks for your listening. (致谢) 模板15 报道　(新高考Ⅰ卷满分作文) 假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3.活动反响。 首段:简要概括事件 Last Sunday witnessed a 5 km cross-country running race, in which both students and teachers of our school participated.(引入比赛和参加人员) 中间段:①具体介绍活动细节;②介绍活动结果 The route started from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. The whole course was extremely challenging, especially the part near the mountain, narrow and rough. Challenging though it was, no participants gave up halfway. In the end, all the runners held on to the finish line.(具体介绍比赛过程) 尾段:活动感受或评价 The activity was highly thought of, because not only did it provide an opportunity for us to exercise, but it was also of great benefit to our health, physically and mentally.(活动反响) 模板16 通知　(全国卷Ⅱ满分作文) 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。 首段:说明事宜 A short English film, Growing Together, will be shown this Sunday. (说明看短片) 中间段:①具体事项;②参与人员;③通知要求 The film mainly focuses on the development of our school, which will greatly help us students know about the history and development of our school. Anyone interested in the film is welcome to enjoy it in the lecture hall of the teaching building. The film will last 2 hours, from 5:20 pm to 7:20 pm. To get a good seat for seeing, you’d better arrive twenty minutes earlier. (介绍短片内容) 尾段:欢迎提意见 If you have any opinion about the film, please send emails to studentunion@126.com. Looking forward to your valuable advice. (欢迎提意见) 模板17 倡议书　(2022·全国甲卷满分作文改编) 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇倡议书投稿。内容包括:1.海洋的重要性;2.保护海洋的倡议。 首段:引入要介绍的事物/活动,说明其重要性、目的等 As is known, not only is the ocean the largest ecosystem on Earth, but it is the planet’s life support system. However, the past years have seen increasingly serious ocean pollution. (说明海洋的重要性和存在的问题) 中间段:简要介绍该事物/活动内容(或其他方面),注意利用恰当的衔接词汇 Fortunately, we can do our bit to help. First of all, attach great importance to protecting the ocean by neither throwing garbage nor pouring waste water into the ocean. Besides, more campaigns should be launched to appeal to more people to prevent the ocean from being polluted. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.(介绍保护海洋的做法) 尾段:简要评价并发出倡议 Each of us can make a difference, so take action and be an ocean guardian. (发出呼吁) 模板18 宣传稿　(浙江高考) 昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿。内容包括:1.展览的时间、地点、目的;2.观展感受;3.推荐观展。 首段:介绍要宣传的展览的时间、地点 Yesterday witnessed an extraordinary Chinese painting exhibition in the school hall, which was intended to further our understanding of traditional Chinese culture. (介绍展览的时间、地点、目的) 中间段:介绍展览的详情,阐述观展感受 A great many artworks created by our fellow students are on display, ranging from figure paintings to landscape ones. Moreover, what appealed to me was the combination of painting, poetry and calligraphy. The paintings on show held my attention through. (详情介绍+观展感受) 尾段:推荐观展 The exhibition will last for one week, and whoever wants to feast your eyes on the beauty of diverse Chinese culture definitely cannot miss it.(推荐观展) 模板19 图表作文　(2022·全国乙卷满分作文) 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.学习活动状况描述;2.简单评论;3.你的建议。 学生英语学习活动调查结果(人数百分比) 首段:介绍调查主题,陈述图表内容,列出具体数据 There are many things we can do to learn English well. According to our recent discussion on learning English beyond the classroom, appreciating English songs accounts for 65%, followed by watching English movies 50%, while, browsing English learning websites is the least, only 12%, together with reading English books, which takes up 18%.(介绍调查+具体数据) 中间段:简要总结图表内容,可进行比较,注意利用表“比较”的衔接词汇 Obviously, as is shown from the statistics, students show a great interest in entertaining English activities beyond the classroom, which not only enable them to learn English effectively, but relieve them of the study burden. Moreover, compared with reading, students prefer more relaxing visual and auditory activities. (总结四种英语学习方式) 尾段:简要评价/感想或发表个人建议 In my view, any way that suits us best is a good choice. However, more importance should be attached to students’self-discipline. Only in this way can students cultivate a positive attitude to learning English.(个人观点+建议) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$