第07讲 书面表达 （讲义）-【上好课】2025年中考英语一轮复习讲练测（安徽专用）

第07讲 书面表达 考点突破·考法探究 一、安徽中考英语评分标准 (一)评分原则: 1.本题总分为20分,按五个档次给分。 2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,结合内容和语言表达,综合给定分数。 3.考生可以根据要点适当发挥,加入自己的观点。 4.词数少于80的,从总分中减去1分。 5.拼写错误多,书写较差以致影响表达,在所确定档次的分数范围内,减去1分。 (二)各档次的给分范围和要求: 第五档(很好):(20~17分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务,涵盖了所有内容要点,或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点;语言基本无误,行文连贯,表达清楚。 第四档(好):(16~13分) 完成试题规定的任务,涵盖了基本的内容要点;语言有少量错误,行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚。 第三档(一般):(12~9分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务,写出了一些内容;语言有一些错误,行文不够连贯。 第二档(较差):(8~5分) 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务,只能写出个别要点;语言错误较多,未能清楚传达信息。 第一档(差):(4~0分) 未能完成试题规定的任务,只能写出与内容有关的一些单词;语言错误很多,未能清楚传达信息。 二、写作技巧 (一)认真审题,明确要求 在写作之前,要认真审题并明确以下几个方面的问题: 1.明确人称 要审清这篇作文要以第几人称的口吻去写,而且要注意保持一致。 2.明确时态 要审清这篇作文应该用何种时态去写。通常有两种情况:有时通篇只用一种时态,有时各个要点所用时态不同。 3.明确要点 要审清一篇作文共包含几个写作要点,这是审题的重中之重,因为中考阅卷评分是以要点为准的。所以“要点全”是书面表达的基本要求。 (二)分析要点,列出提纲 通过审题,弄清文章的主题之后,接着就要考虑文章的内容要点,组织语言材料了。根据题目提示或说明,按事件发生的时间顺序或空间顺序或事理重要性顺序,选取那些典型的、易于表达的材料作为写作的重点,列出提纲。 (三)依纲据点,扩展成文 列出写作提纲之后,就可以着手写作了。要注意把题目要求的要点无一遗漏地写进去,以确保内容的完整。 (四)反复检查,查漏补缺 在写好短文后,要从题目要求上对全文进行检查和修改。反复修改润色,使措辞准确,句子流畅,布局严谨。一般来说,文章的修改可以从以下几方面入手: ⑴用词方面 ①代词的格和指代关系是否正确。 ②名词的单复数是否正确。 ③形容词的比较级和最高级是否正确。 ④副词的位置是否合适。 ⑤动词的搭配是否准确。 ⑵句子方面 ①句型结构是否完整。 ②主谓人称是否一致。 ③时态、语态、语气是否正确。 ④连句方法是否恰当。 ⑶段落方面 ①段落主题句能否概括本段的中心思想。 ②扩展句是否都围绕主题,有无多余的句子。 ③句子之间是否连贯。 ④段落层次是否分明,是否合乎逻辑。 ⑷篇章方面 ①文章主题是否合理自然。 ②段落之间过渡是否合理自然。 ③文章的文体及所用的组织方法是否恰当。 ④文章内容是否充实,有无遗漏。 三、常见写作话题 (一)个人情况 1.高级词句背诵 ⑴谚语 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难朋友才是真朋友。 ②Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 ③Every man has his weak side. 人人都有缺点。 ④Don't judge a man by his looks. 不可以貌取人。 ⑵句型 ①She's a 14-year-old girl from America. ②My mother is of medium height with short brown hair. ③He has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses. ④I often play computer games and watch movies on the Internet. ⑤I'm easy-going and always get on well with others. ⑥He is helpful and he always takes an active part in different activities in his spare time. 2.高分范文展示 典例1　随着外国游客日益增多,未来科技馆决定选拔部分中学生在假期为他们提供英语讲解任务。科技馆需要应征者提交英文自荐信。假如你叫袁新,你有能力并希望成为一名讲解员。请按要求写一封自荐信。参考要点: 1.擅长英语(英语水平,沟通能力……); 2.热爱科学(科学知识,创新能力……); 3.…… 注意:1.必须写出三点及以上的自荐理由; 2.词数:80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear sir, I'm a junior high student from Chongqing Xinhua School. I'd like to become one of your guides.    　　That's all I want to tell you. I wish I can join you. Yours, Yuan Xin 典例2　我们在遇到不如人意的事情的时候,可能会伤心难过。这对身心健康造成伤害。请你结合以下提示,以“How to Deal with Sadness”为题写作。 1.在生活中导致悲伤的一些原因; 2.悲伤情绪对我们有何影响; 3.我们应该如何面对悲伤,请提几点建议(至少3点)。 注意:1.短文内容必须包括全部信息,可适当发挥; 2.条理清楚、语句连贯; 3.文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息; 4.词数80—100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 How to Deal with Sadness There may be too much sadness in our life. (二)校园生活 1.高级词句背诵 ⑴谚语 ①A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。 ②Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。 ③Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 今日事,今日毕。 ④You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success. 你必须相信自己,这是成功的秘诀。 ⑵句型 ①It is very lucky for us to have such a good studying environment. ②In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. ③I am greatly interested in Chinese, and I think it is getting more and more widely used throughout the world. ④To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. ⑤Looking back at the days we spent together, how sweet we feel! 2.高分范文展示 典例1    假如你是李华,就读于一所国际学校,你校将举行一次主题为“我爱中国古典诗歌”的读书活动,你将代表全体学生在启动仪式上发言。请你根据以下提示,准备一篇英文发言稿。要点包括: 1.说明活动的目的; 2.陈述你热爱中国古典诗歌的理由; 3.对学习中国古典诗歌的认识。 注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2.词数80—100; 3.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:押韵 rhyme Good morning, everyone! Welcome to our Poetry Reading Activity.        　　That's all. Thank you. 典例2    假如你是英语广播站的主持人李娟(Li Juan),你的听众钱勇(Qian Yong)在英语学习中遇到了一些困难。他给你发了一封电子邮件向你询问如何学好英语,尤其是听力和语法。另外,他也不敢开口说英语。请你针对钱勇的问题给他回一封电子邮件,提出一些建议。要点提示: 1.多做一些听力练习; 2.多阅读、多做笔记; 3.加入英语俱乐部。 注意:词数80—100 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 Dear Qian Yong, I'm glad to help you.       　　I hope my advice can help you. Yours, Li Juan (三)社会生活 1.高级词句背诵 ⑴谚语 ①Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。 ②All things are difficult before they are easy.万事开头难。 ③When in Rome, do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。 ④Don't put all your eggs in one basket. 别把所有鸡蛋都放在一个篮子里。/别孤注一掷。 ⑤God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助。 ⑥Great minds think alike.英雄所见略同。 ⑦History repeats itself.历史往往重演。 ⑵句型 ①开头句 A.There is an old saying,“Practice makes perfect.”俗话说(常言道):“熟能生巧。” B.Recently, the problem of...has aroused people's concern. 最近,……问题已引起人们的关注。 C.With the development of science and technology,more and more people believe that...随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…… ②过渡词句 A.Everything has two sides.任何事物都有两面性。 B.what's more(更为重要的是)/what's worse(更糟糕的是) C.on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面…… D.last but not least(更强调重要性)最后但同样重要的 ③结尾词句 A.as far as I know据我所知 B.generally speaking 通常来说 C.Taking all these factors into consideration,we naturally come to the conclusion that...把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出……结论。 ④增补句型 A.I am interested in travelling because I think travelling can really open our eyes to other cultures. B. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. C.As we all know, the Silk Road connected China to the West in ancient times. D.Don't throw litter or spit in public places. 典例2　假设你是Lucy,国庆期间你将和你的父母去某城市旅游。你从网上获得了Sun-shine Hotel的部分信息。请你写一封电子邮件给该宾馆的经理,介绍你的行程并咨询如下相关细节: 1.How far is the hotel from the airport? 2.How can we get to the hotel? 3.Do you offer free breakfast? 4.Is there a discount(折扣)for a long stay? 注意:1.覆盖全部要点,补充合理的细节; 2.80—100词。 (四)自然与科技 1.高级词句背诵 ⑴谚语 ①Easier said than done. 说起来容易,做起来难。 ②Easy come, easy go. 来得快,去得快。 ③Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。 ④As you sow, so shall you reap. 种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆。 ⑵句型 ①Many kinds of fishes have been dead because of the serious water pollution. ②By riding a bike, we can not only exercise our body but also protect our environment. ③In my opinion, to protect the environment, the government must take even more measures. ④Instead, we are supposed to plant more trees to protect the animals' living conditions. ⑤As long as we pull together, our city will become nicer and cleaner. 2.高分范文展示 典例1　请你根据下面的提示,以“A Useful Invention—Nubrella”为题,写一篇90词左右的英语短文。 A Useful Invention—Nubrella Name Nubrella:世界上第一款真正的免手持(hands-free)伞 Inventor 艾伦·考夫曼(Alan Kaufman) Features  and uses 1.阻止雨、风和雪,并可以保持用户的头部、面部和头发干燥; 2.很方便:戴着,而不是拿; 3.有肩带(shoulder straps),让人完全不用手; 4.比传统的伞更安全,因为它没有尖锐的点(sharp points)。 Your opinion... 典例2    6月5日是世界环境日, 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕,污染越来越严重。环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等,而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境? 请用英语写一篇短文,表达你的想法。 要点: 1.环境的现状和保护环境的重要性; 2.保护环境的具体做法; 3.自己对保护环境的想法。 注意:词数:80—100。 (五)日常生活 1.高级词句背诵 ⑴谚语 ①Nothing in the world is difficult if you put your mind into it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。 ②A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若无友,就如同生命中没有太阳。 ③Look before you leap. 三思而后行。 ④No pain, no gain. 一分耕耘,一分收获。 ⑤All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马。 ⑥Bad news has wings. 好事不出门,坏事传千里。 ⑦Honesty is the best policy. 做人以诚信为本。 ⑧Many hands make light work. 众人拾柴火焰高。 ⑨Two heads are better than one. 三个臭皮匠,赛过诸葛亮。 ⑩Misfortunes never come alone. 祸不单行。 ⑵句型 ①We should exercise often to stay healthy. 我们应该经常锻炼以保持身体健康。 ②Health is more important than wealth. 健康比财富更重要。 2.高分范文展示 典例1　假如你是李明,上周你收到来自美国的笔友Tom的一封信,信中他向你介绍了他 们国家的一个传统节日——感恩节。现在请你写一封80—100词的回信,也向他介绍一 下我们国家的一个传统节日。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 提示: 1.The name of the festival; 2.The time of the festival and the traditional food; 3.What people do on that day. Dear Tom, I'm glad to hear from you and thank you for telling me so much about Thanksgiving Day. Yours, Li Ming 典例2　假设你是张伟,你的英国笔友Frank来信告诉你,他因长时间打游戏与父母发生了争吵,现在很难过。请你根据以下要点及要求,给他写一封英文回信。 要点: 1.长时间打游戏是错的,父母是对的; 2.打游戏浪费时间,伤害眼睛,不利于学习; 3.理解并尊重父母,向父母道歉(make an apology); 4.不打游戏,努力学习,帮父母做家务。 要求: 1.必须包括以上所有要点,可适当发挥; 2.词数80—100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents.       　　Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei （2024安徽中考） 61. 假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。 要点: 1. 活动目的； 2. 灭火器的使用方法； 3. 你的体会。 注意: 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数） Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. 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假定你是李辉，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。 注意： 1．短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3．词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： poster（n. 海报）； design（v. & n. 设计） My Experience of Making a Poster Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 模拟试题 一 （2024·安徽安庆·三模）上周你参观市科技馆，你对“未来机器人与人类生活”主题展厅的一款家庭医生机器人（Home Doctor）很感兴趣，你打算在本周英语课上向同学们介绍它。提示：1. 外观：像一位可爱的女孩；高1.2米； 2. 材料：再生材料（recycled material），如玻璃、塑料（plastic）等； 3. 功能：在健康方面提建议；治疗普通的疾病；照顾老人和孩子。要求：1. 内容应包括所有的要点提示，可适当发挥；语句要通频、连贯； 2. 词数80～100。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Last week, I went to the science and technology museum for a visit. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二 （2024·安徽马鞍山·三模）假定你是李辉，你的英国朋友Peter将随交流团来安徽研学，向你了解安徽的著名景点，请你用英语给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1.欢迎友人来访； 2.介绍著名景点； 3.提醒出行须知。 注意： 1.短文须包含上面所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80~100(邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：famous scenic spots(著名景点) Dear Peter, I’m glad that you are coming to my hometown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 三 （2024·安徽合肥·二模）如今旅游深受欢迎，但在旅游中我们常会看到一些不文明行为（uncivilized behaviors）。假设你是李华，请结合表格信息，以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题，写一篇短文向某英文报刊投稿，倡导文明旅游。 Uncivilized behaviors Your opinions Your advice throw rubbish everywhere impolite ... ... pick flowers in a park ... ... speak loudly in public places ... ... ... ... ... 注意： 1．词数80～100； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Traveling in Good Manners Dear editor, Nowadays, traveling is getting more and more popular. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li hua 四 （2024·安徽滁州·二模）某英文报征稿《一次难忘的旅行》，请用英语描述你曾经经历的一次旅行，讲述地点、时间、人物和旅行的目的，讲述旅行过程中一、两个印象深刻的活动或经历。并谈谈这次旅行给你带来的收获或启示。 要求： 1.词数80~100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.请在标题补充地点后，展开写作。 An Unforgettable Trip to ________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 五 （2024·安徽阜阳·一模）假如你是李辉，你的外国笔友Sam给你发了一封电子邮件，他表示暑假想要来你的家乡旅游。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封邮件，向他表示欢迎并介绍你家乡的一些情况。 注意： 1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80—100 (书信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：scenery (n. 风景)；whitebait (n. 银鱼)；white shrimp (n. 白虾) Dear Sam, I am very glad to receive your letter and know that you want to visit my hometown—Chaohu. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your visit. Yours, Li Hui 六 （2023·安徽·三模）假如你是李华，你们班将组织研学旅行，你打算邀请外教Mr. Brown 参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。 提示： 1.写信意图和邀请原因； 2.研学旅行的时间和地点； 3.研学旅行的注意事项。 注意： 1.词数80～100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.邮件中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Brown, How are you doing? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 七 （2023·安徽滁州·二模）在每个人的心中都有一位英雄，他的某个行为赢得了我们的赞叹或者他的某种品质让我们由衷佩服。你们学校英文校报以“The Hero in My Heart”为题开展了征文活动，请你根据以下内容提示和要求写一篇英语短文并进行投稿。 内容提示：1.Who is the hero in your heart? 2.What did he/she do? 3.What have you learned from him/her? 写作要求：1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确； 2.可适当增加细节，以便行文流畅； 3.词数80～100词。 The Hero in My Heart ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 八 （2023·安徽安庆·三模）研学旅行作为一种学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动，深受学生的喜爱。为此, 请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍学校开展过的某一次研学活动并发表看法。内容包括： 体验生活： 学习采茶、手工制作 了解文化：参观名胜古迹、博物馆 感受变化：观看有意义的影视 亲近自然：观察动、植物 1. 词数80词左右；开头已给出, 不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节, 使行文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实的校名、人名。 参考词汇：名胜古迹places of interest The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and it is popular with students. I’m glad to share my experience of a study tour. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 九 （2023·安徽合肥·二模）假设你是李华，你校英文网站正在举办主题为“大美安徽”的宣传短片征集活动。请你结合以下要点，写一篇英语短文，向国外游客介绍一下你的家乡安徽，为短片的制作做准备。 1. 地域广阔，山川秀美； 2. 历史悠久，人文荟萃； 3. 资源丰富，美食云集。 注意：1. 词数80~100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：resource（n. 资源） Anhui, lying in the eastern part of China, is one of the most beautiful places in the world. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 十 （2023·安徽芜湖·一模）今年是学习雷锋六十周年纪念日，雷锋同志说过：“我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”请写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于80字的作文。在作文中，简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情，为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。 Learn from Lei Feng Lei Feng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 十一 （2023·安徽合肥·一模）假如你是来自美国的Nancy，你和你的父母正在中国旅游。请根据内容要点提示，给你的朋友Anna写一封信。要点提示： 1. 写信时你们正在九寨沟国家公园(Jiuzhaigou National Park)； 2. 你与父母于7月26日从纽约飞往北京； 3. 在北京你们参观了颐和园(the Summer Palace)、天安门广场(Tian’an men Square)和紫禁城(the Forbidden City)，还去爬了长城； 4. 你们拍了许多照片； 5. 你已为她买了一些纪念品(souvenir)，希望她能够喜欢。 Dear Anna, I’m writing to you from Jiuzhaigou National Park in Sichuan, China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Nancy 十二 （2022·安徽合肥·三模）假定你是李华。你的英国笔友John对中国茶很感兴趣，请你根据以下要点，写一封邮件，介绍你在中国茶叶博物馆（National Tea Museum）的所见所闻。 1. 时间：五月二日 2.人员：你的一家 3. 主要活动：了解茶叶、学习制茶、欣赏茶艺表演…… 注意：1. 邮件必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； 3. 词数：80—100词左右。邮件格式、开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 茶艺表演 tea art performance Dear John, I’m glad you are interested in Chinese tea. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 十三 （2022·江苏无锡·一模）本届冬奥会是科技的盛会，各种高科技频繁亮相，无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像机，让外国媒体大呼惊艳。不仅如此，科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假如你是九年级一班学生王华，学校正在举办科技节，你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍身边的科技及其优点。 要求：1. 要点齐全，适当发挥； 2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯，书写规范； 3. 词数：80~100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。 Hello, everyone! I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here. The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 十四 （2022·安徽马鞍山·一模）进入信息时代，读书还那么重要吗？有人说“读万卷书不如行万里路”，但是也有人持不同的观点。请你根据下表提示分别阐述这两种意见，并发表自己的观点。 Reading Travelling Your opinion 1. 学到各类知识； 2. 认识世界； 3. 了解历史； 1. 观光，游览名胜； 2. 体验不同的文化； 3. 放松身心； …… 注意：1. 词数80-100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 “It’s better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.” This old Chinese saying has caused heated discussions among students. Some students think …… _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 十五 （2022·安徽·三模）假如你是李华，你校全体师生近期将举行一次徒步活动，请你给外教Jack写一封邮件邀请他一起参加，内容要点如下表： 集合地点 学校大门口 出发时间 本周日上午8点 远足目的地 合肥湿地公园（Hefei Wetland Park）（距离学校约10公里） 活动安排 1.参观景区 2.合影留念 3.…… 注意： 1.词数80-100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, Our school will go on a hike (徒步旅行) to Hefei Wetland Park this Sunday. I am writing to invite you to go with us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ So come and join us. You will have a good time there! Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 21 / 21 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 第07讲 书面表达 考点突破·考法探究 一、安徽中考英语评分标准 (一)评分原则: 1.本题总分为20分,按五个档次给分。 2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,结合内容和语言表达,综合给定分数。 3.考生可以根据要点适当发挥,加入自己的观点。 4.词数少于80的,从总分中减去1分。 5.拼写错误多,书写较差以致影响表达,在所确定档次的分数范围内,减去1分。 (二)各档次的给分范围和要求: 第五档(很好):(20~17分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务,涵盖了所有内容要点,或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点;语言基本无误,行文连贯,表达清楚。 第四档(好):(16~13分) 完成试题规定的任务,涵盖了基本的内容要点;语言有少量错误,行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚。 第三档(一般):(12~9分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务,写出了一些内容;语言有一些错误,行文不够连贯。 第二档(较差):(8~5分) 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务,只能写出个别要点;语言错误较多,未能清楚传达信息。 第一档(差):(4~0分) 未能完成试题规定的任务,只能写出与内容有关的一些单词;语言错误很多,未能清楚传达信息。 二、写作技巧 (一)认真审题,明确要求 在写作之前,要认真审题并明确以下几个方面的问题: 1.明确人称 要审清这篇作文要以第几人称的口吻去写,而且要注意保持一致。 2.明确时态 要审清这篇作文应该用何种时态去写。通常有两种情况:有时通篇只用一种时态,有时各个要点所用时态不同。 3.明确要点 要审清一篇作文共包含几个写作要点,这是审题的重中之重,因为中考阅卷评分是以要点为准的。所以“要点全”是书面表达的基本要求。 (二)分析要点,列出提纲 通过审题,弄清文章的主题之后,接着就要考虑文章的内容要点,组织语言材料了。根据题目提示或说明,按事件发生的时间顺序或空间顺序或事理重要性顺序,选取那些典型的、易于表达的材料作为写作的重点,列出提纲。 (三)依纲据点,扩展成文 列出写作提纲之后,就可以着手写作了。要注意把题目要求的要点无一遗漏地写进去,以确保内容的完整。 (四)反复检查,查漏补缺 在写好短文后,要从题目要求上对全文进行检查和修改。反复修改润色,使措辞准确,句子流畅,布局严谨。一般来说,文章的修改可以从以下几方面入手: ⑴用词方面 ①代词的格和指代关系是否正确。 ②名词的单复数是否正确。 ③形容词的比较级和最高级是否正确。 ④副词的位置是否合适。 ⑤动词的搭配是否准确。 ⑵句子方面 ①句型结构是否完整。 ②主谓人称是否一致。 ③时态、语态、语气是否正确。 ④连句方法是否恰当。 ⑶段落方面 ①段落主题句能否概括本段的中心思想。 ②扩展句是否都围绕主题,有无多余的句子。 ③句子之间是否连贯。 ④段落层次是否分明,是否合乎逻辑。 ⑷篇章方面 ①文章主题是否合理自然。 ②段落之间过渡是否合理自然。 ③文章的文体及所用的组织方法是否恰当。 ④文章内容是否充实,有无遗漏。 三、常见写作话题 (一)个人情况 1.高级词句背诵 ⑴谚语 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难朋友才是真朋友。 ②Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 ③Every man has his weak side. 人人都有缺点。 ④Don't judge a man by his looks. 不可以貌取人。 ⑵句型 ①She's a 14-year-old girl from America. ②My mother is of medium height with short brown hair. ③He has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses. ④I often play computer games and watch movies on the Internet. ⑤I'm easy-going and always get on well with others. ⑥He is helpful and he always takes an active part in different activities in his spare time. 2.高分范文展示 典例1　随着外国游客日益增多,未来科技馆决定选拔部分中学生在假期为他们提供英语讲解任务。科技馆需要应征者提交英文自荐信。假如你叫袁新,你有能力并希望成为一名讲解员。请按要求写一封自荐信。参考要点: 1.擅长英语(英语水平,沟通能力……); 2.热爱科学(科学知识,创新能力……); 3.…… 注意:1.必须写出三点及以上的自荐理由; 2.词数:80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear sir, I'm a junior high student from Chongqing Xinhua School. I'd like to become one of your guides.    　　That's all I want to tell you. I wish I can join you. Yours, Yuan Xin Dear sir, I'm a junior high student from Chongqing Xinhua School. I'd like to become one of your guides. I think I have the ability to do it well. Here are some reasons. On the one hand, it's easy for me to get on well with others. I could communicate with others no matter how old he is. On the other hand, I was interested in English when I was a little boy. I keep practicing English every day. So my English is pretty good. A lot of people say that I'm a creative boy. To be honest, I like science and love to make some new things. And I'm a warm-hearted teenager. I like helping others very much. That's why I want to play a role in the science museum. That's all I want to tell you. I wish I can join you. Yours, Yuan Xin 典例2　我们在遇到不如人意的事情的时候,可能会伤心难过。这对身心健康造成伤害。请你结合以下提示,以“How to Deal with Sadness”为题写作。 1.在生活中导致悲伤的一些原因; 2.悲伤情绪对我们有何影响; 3.我们应该如何面对悲伤,请提几点建议(至少3点)。 注意:1.短文内容必须包括全部信息,可适当发挥; 2.条理清楚、语句连贯; 3.文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息; 4.词数80—100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 How to Deal with Sadness There may be too much sadness in our life. How to Deal with Sadness There may be too much sadness in our life. For example, we will be sad if we meet unlucky things. As we all know, sadness is harmful to our health. We might be ill if we are always sad. So how to deal with sadness? Here are some suggestions. Firstly, we should learn to communicate with others positively, so that we will feel more comfortable. Secondly, smiling is a good way to make us happy. As a saying goes: “If you smile at the world, the world will smile at you, too.” Finally, why not take up some hobbies? We can have more fun by doing sports or playing games. Let's start to smile, and our lives will be much better! (二)校园生活 1.高级词句背诵 ⑴谚语 ①A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。 ②Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。 ③Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 今日事,今日毕。 ④You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success. 你必须相信自己,这是成功的秘诀。 ⑵句型 ①It is very lucky for us to have such a good studying environment. ②In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. ③I am greatly interested in Chinese, and I think it is getting more and more widely used throughout the world. ④To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. ⑤Looking back at the days we spent together, how sweet we feel! 2.高分范文展示 典例1    假如你是李华,就读于一所国际学校,你校将举行一次主题为“我爱中国古典诗歌”的读书活动,你将代表全体学生在启动仪式上发言。请你根据以下提示,准备一篇英文发言稿。要点包括: 1.说明活动的目的; 2.陈述你热爱中国古典诗歌的理由; 3.对学习中国古典诗歌的认识。 注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2.词数80—100; 3.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:押韵 rhyme Good morning, everyone! Welcome to our Poetry Reading Activity.        　　That's all. Thank you. Good morning, everyone! Welcome to our Poetry Reading Activity. It is a great honor for me to tell you something about our activity—I Love Chinese Classical Poetry. The activity's purpose is to help students understand Chinese classical poetry better. I love Chinese classical poetry very much, because it has a certain rhyme and its simple language makes it easy to learn and recite. Besides, it usually expresses true emotions towards family, friends or the country. In my opinion, reading classical poetry can improve our understanding of the Chinese language. As we know, it's part of Chinese culture. If we learn more about it, we will understand our culture better and fall in love with it. I hope the activity will be a great success and everyone can learn a lot from it. That's all. Thank you. 典例2    假如你是英语广播站的主持人李娟(Li Juan),你的听众钱勇(Qian Yong)在英语学习中遇到了一些困难。他给你发了一封电子邮件向你询问如何学好英语,尤其是听力和语法。另外,他也不敢开口说英语。请你针对钱勇的问题给他回一封电子邮件,提出一些建议。要点提示: 1.多做一些听力练习; 2.多阅读、多做笔记; 3.加入英语俱乐部。 注意:词数80—100 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 Dear Qian Yong, I'm glad to help you.       　　I hope my advice can help you. Yours, Li Juan 高分范文 Dear Qian Yong, I'm glad to help you. I'll give you some advice to improve your English learning. I learn that you have some problems in learning English, especially in listening and grammar. I think the best way to improve listening skills is to do more listening practice. Although you may not know the meaning of the words you heard at first, you will make progress by listening again and again until you understand the meaning correctly bit by bit. To make your grammar better, you need to read a lot and make some notes. Aside from these ways, joining an English club is a good way to improve your pronunciation. You can study with the members and learn some good ways from them. I hope my advice can help you. Yours, Li Juan (三)社会生活 1.高级词句背诵 ⑴谚语 ①Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。 ②All things are difficult before they are easy.万事开头难。 ③When in Rome, do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。 ④Don't put all your eggs in one basket. 别把所有鸡蛋都放在一个篮子里。/别孤注一掷。 ⑤God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助。 ⑥Great minds think alike.英雄所见略同。 ⑦History repeats itself.历史往往重演。 ⑵句型 ①开头句 A.There is an old saying,“Practice makes perfect.”俗话说(常言道):“熟能生巧。” B.Recently, the problem of...has aroused people's concern. 最近,……问题已引起人们的关注。 C.With the development of science and technology,more and more people believe that...随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…… ②过渡词句 A.Everything has two sides.任何事物都有两面性。 B.what's more(更为重要的是)/what's worse(更糟糕的是) C.on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面…… D.last but not least(更强调重要性)最后但同样重要的 ③结尾词句 A.as far as I know据我所知 B.generally speaking 通常来说 C.Taking all these factors into consideration,we naturally come to the conclusion that...把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出……结论。 ④增补句型 A.I am interested in travelling because I think travelling can really open our eyes to other cultures. B. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. C.As we all know, the Silk Road connected China to the West in ancient times. D.Don't throw litter or spit in public places. 典例2　假设你是Lucy,国庆期间你将和你的父母去某城市旅游。你从网上获得了Sun-shine Hotel的部分信息。请你写一封电子邮件给该宾馆的经理,介绍你的行程并咨询如下相关细节: 1.How far is the hotel from the airport? 2.How can we get to the hotel? 3.Do you offer free breakfast? 4.Is there a discount(折扣)for a long stay? 注意:1.覆盖全部要点,补充合理的细节; 2.80—100词。 高分范文 Dear Sir, I'm very sorry to trouble you. I am going to the city that Sunshine Hotel lies in with my parents, so could you tell me something about this hotel? At first, we will probably arrive there on the morning of October 1st. I wonder how far the hotel is from the airport and how we can get to the hotel. If possible, could you send someone to pick us up? Then I want to know whether you offer free breakfast or not. If you don't, please tell me where we can get some food quickly. At last, we will stay there for about seven days. Is there a discount for a long stay in the hotel? If there is, how much do we need to pay? Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours, Lucy (四)自然与科技 1.高级词句背诵 ⑴谚语 ①Easier said than done. 说起来容易,做起来难。 ②Easy come, easy go. 来得快,去得快。 ③Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。 ④As you sow, so shall you reap. 种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆。 ⑵句型 ①Many kinds of fishes have been dead because of the serious water pollution. ②By riding a bike, we can not only exercise our body but also protect our environment. ③In my opinion, to protect the environment, the government must take even more measures. ④Instead, we are supposed to plant more trees to protect the animals' living conditions. ⑤As long as we pull together, our city will become nicer and cleaner. 2.高分范文展示 典例1　请你根据下面的提示,以“A Useful Invention—Nubrella”为题,写一篇90词左右的英语短文。 A Useful Invention—Nubrella Name Nubrella:世界上第一款真正的免手持(hands-free)伞 Inventor 艾伦·考夫曼(Alan Kaufman) Features  and uses 1.阻止雨、风和雪,并可以保持用户的头部、面部和头发干燥; 2.很方便:戴着,而不是拿; 3.有肩带(shoulder straps),让人完全不用手; 4.比传统的伞更安全,因为它没有尖锐的点(sharp points)。 Your opinion... A Useful Invention—Nubrella With the development of technology and science, more and more kinds of umbrellas appear,including Nubrella, which is the earliest hands-free umbrella around the world. It was invented by Alan Kaufman by accident. It has so many features and uses. It could prevent rain, wind and snow so that people can keep their heads, faces and hair dry. Besides,it is safer than traditional umbrellas because it doesn't have sharp points. What's more, it doesn't need to be taken by hand, because its shape is like a hat with shoulder straps. In my opinion, Nubrella is really a useful invention and I believe it will be improved by people who are creative to make it better. 典例2    6月5日是世界环境日, 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕,污染越来越严重。环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等,而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境? 请用英语写一篇短文,表达你的想法。 要点: 1.环境的现状和保护环境的重要性; 2.保护环境的具体做法; 3.自己对保护环境的想法。 注意:词数:80—100。 高分范文 The environmental problems are very serious these days. In order to make our country more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment. I think we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. And when we brush our teeth, we'd better turn off the taps. Also, we should advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when shopping. Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference. How important it is for us to protect the environment! (五)日常生活 1.高级词句背诵 ⑴谚语 ①Nothing in the world is difficult if you put your mind into it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。 ②A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若无友,就如同生命中没有太阳。 ③Look before you leap. 三思而后行。 ④No pain, no gain. 一分耕耘,一分收获。 ⑤All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马。 ⑥Bad news has wings. 好事不出门,坏事传千里。 ⑦Honesty is the best policy. 做人以诚信为本。 ⑧Many hands make light work. 众人拾柴火焰高。 ⑨Two heads are better than one. 三个臭皮匠,赛过诸葛亮。 ⑩Misfortunes never come alone. 祸不单行。 ⑵句型 ①We should exercise often to stay healthy. 我们应该经常锻炼以保持身体健康。 ②Health is more important than wealth. 健康比财富更重要。 2.高分范文展示 典例1　假如你是李明,上周你收到来自美国的笔友Tom的一封信,信中他向你介绍了他 们国家的一个传统节日——感恩节。现在请你写一封80—100词的回信,也向他介绍一 下我们国家的一个传统节日。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 提示: 1.The name of the festival; 2.The time of the festival and the traditional food; 3.What people do on that day. Dear Tom, I'm glad to hear from you and thank you for telling me so much about Thanksgiving Day. Yours, Li Ming 高分范文 Dear Tom, I'm glad to hear from you and thank you for telling me so much about Thanksgiving Day.Now let me tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival. The Dragon Boat Festival is a special and traditional festival. It is on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month because Qu Yuan, a famous poet, died on that day. On this day, people often do something special and meaningful, such as eating zongzi and holding dragon boat races. Eating zongzi is a very important part of this festival. Zongzi carries people's wishes of cleaning out bad things and having a good life. Today, the Dragon Boat Festival is not only in memory of Qu Yuan but also a time for people to get together with their family. Best wishes! Yours, Li Ming 典例2　假设你是张伟,你的英国笔友Frank来信告诉你,他因长时间打游戏与父母发生了争吵,现在很难过。请你根据以下要点及要求,给他写一封英文回信。 要点: 1.长时间打游戏是错的,父母是对的; 2.打游戏浪费时间,伤害眼睛,不利于学习; 3.理解并尊重父母,向父母道歉(make an apology); 4.不打游戏,努力学习,帮父母做家务。 要求: 1.必须包括以上所有要点,可适当发挥; 2.词数80—100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents.       　　Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei 高分范文 Dear Frank, I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. As a student, you shouldn't play games for too long. Parents are always caring for us and don’t want us to go towards a wrong way. You are supposed to change your mind. Also, playing games not only wastes our time, but also does harm to our eyes. And it will influence our study. What's more, you should understand and respect your parents. You can communicate with them and make an apology to them. Last but not least, stop playing games and study hard. I'm sure that you can become better and better. Don't forget to help your parents do some chores on the weekend. Please be happy and everything will be better. Yours, Zhang Wei （2024安徽中考） 61. 假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。 要点: 1. 活动目的； 2. 灭火器的使用方法； 3. 你的体会。 注意: 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数） Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety. Among the activities, how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most. When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly. As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire. During the period, we should be careful enough not to get hurt. From the activities I’ve learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety. （2023安徽中考） 61. 假定你是李辉，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。 注意： 1．短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3．词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： poster（n. 海报）； design（v. & n. 设计） My Experience of Making a Poster Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Experience of Making a Poster Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. The purpose of making it is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years. Firstly, I asked my grandparents about their past living conditions. Then, I found some old photos online to compare the past and present of my hometown. Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached. This experience helps me know better about my hometown. With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved. I am very happy to see these changes. As a member of this town, I will contribute my own efforts to its development. 模拟试题 一 （2024·安徽安庆·三模）上周你参观市科技馆，你对“未来机器人与人类生活”主题展厅的一款家庭医生机器人（Home Doctor）很感兴趣，你打算在本周英语课上向同学们介绍它。提示：1. 外观：像一位可爱的女孩；高1.2米； 2. 材料：再生材料（recycled material），如玻璃、塑料（plastic）等； 3. 功能：在健康方面提建议；治疗普通的疾病；照顾老人和孩子。要求：1. 内容应包括所有的要点提示，可适当发挥；语句要通频、连贯； 2. 词数80～100。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Last week, I went to the science and technology museum for a visit. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Last week, I went to the science and technology museum for a visit. I was greatly interested in a new kind of robot Home Doctor. Home Doctor looks like a lovely girl, and it is about 1.2 meters tall. It is made from recycled materials, like glass and plastic. Home Doctor can do all kinds of housework and speak different foreign languages. Home Doctor also has some new functions. It can not only give people lots of advice on health, but also treat common diseases at home. It will save people a lot of time, because they needn’t go to the hospital whenever they feel sick or get hurt. What’s more, it can help take good care of the old people and babies at home. I believe Home Doctor will be very popular with people in the future. 二 （2024·安徽马鞍山·三模）假定你是李辉，你的英国朋友Peter将随交流团来安徽研学，向你了解安徽的著名景点，请你用英语给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1.欢迎友人来访； 2.介绍著名景点； 3.提醒出行须知。 注意： 1.短文须包含上面所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80~100(邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：famous scenic spots(著名景点) Dear Peter, I’m glad that you are coming to my hometown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m glad that you are coming to my hometown. I’m very happy to give you a warm welcome and share some famous scenic spots with you. Anhui has many places of interest full of traditional culure, like Mount Jiuhua, where you’ll see lots of ancient temples. You can talk with the local people about the long history. Besides, Anhui is famous for ancient villages, especially Hongcun. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in the village which smells good and tastes nice! What’s more, you’d better bring light clothes and comfortable shoes since you may take a long walk in the countryside. You are bound to have a fantastic time during your stay here. Yours, Li Hui 三 （2024·安徽合肥·二模）如今旅游深受欢迎，但在旅游中我们常会看到一些不文明行为（uncivilized behaviors）。假设你是李华，请结合表格信息，以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题，写一篇短文向某英文报刊投稿，倡导文明旅游。 Uncivilized behaviors Your opinions Your advice throw rubbish everywhere impolite ... ... pick flowers in a park ... ... speak loudly in public places ... ... ... ... ... 注意： 1．词数80～100； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Traveling in Good Manners Dear editor, Nowadays, traveling is getting more and more popular. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li hua 【答案】One possible version Traveling in Good Manners Dear editor, Nowadays, traveling is getting more and more popular. But we can often see some uncivilized behaviors during traveling. For example, some people throw rubbish everywhere when traveling to places of interest. It’s really impolite and also causes much inconvenience for other people. They should put rubbish into dustbins to protect the environment. Secondly, some people like picking flowers in the park just because they are beautiful. This is uncivilized and selfish. We can put up signs to remind people not to do that. Thirdly, there are people speaking loudly in public places. We should also remind them to lower their voice.   In my opinion, we should travel in good manners so that everyone can enjoy the beauty of the world. Yours, Lihua 四 （2024·安徽滁州·二模）某英文报征稿《一次难忘的旅行》，请用英语描述你曾经经历的一次旅行，讲述地点、时间、人物和旅行的目的，讲述旅行过程中一、两个印象深刻的活动或经历。并谈谈这次旅行给你带来的收获或启示。 要求： 1.词数80~100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.请在标题补充地点后，展开写作。 An Unforgettable Trip to ________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An Unforgettable Trip to Beijing Last summer, I had an unforgettable trip to Beijing, the capital of China. The journey was filled with cultural exploration and personal growth. I went to Beijing with my parents during the summer vacation. Our main purpose was to learn more about China’s history and culture. One of the most memorable experiences was visiting the Forbidden City. Walking in it, I felt a deep sense of respect for the wisdom of ancient Chinese. This trip taught me a lot about China’s history and culture. It also inspired me to love our country. The experience left a lasting impression on me, and I will always cherish the memories of this trip. 五 （2024·安徽阜阳·一模）假如你是李辉，你的外国笔友Sam给你发了一封电子邮件，他表示暑假想要来你的家乡旅游。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封邮件，向他表示欢迎并介绍你家乡的一些情况。 注意： 1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80—100 (书信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：scenery (n. 风景)；whitebait (n. 银鱼)；white shrimp (n. 白虾) Dear Sam, I am very glad to receive your letter and know that you want to visit my hometown—Chaohu. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your visit. Yours, Li Hui 【答案】例文： Dear Sam, I am very glad to receive your letter and know that you want to visit my hometown—Chaohu. Chaohu Lake is the fifth largest freshwater lake in the country. I live in a small village by the lake. The lake is famous for its beautiful natural scenery. The Mushan Island and Crape Myrtle Cave attract thousands of tourists from all over the country every year. Generally speaking, the weather here is as warm and wet as that in other cities in South China. So there are many wetland parks around the lake. As for delicious food, Chaohu whitebait and its white shrimp are known far and wide. I’ll cook some for you by myself when you come. I’m looking forward to your visit. Yours, Li Hui 六 （2023·安徽·三模）假如你是李华，你们班将组织研学旅行，你打算邀请外教Mr. Brown 参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。 提示： 1.写信意图和邀请原因； 2.研学旅行的时间和地点； 3.研学旅行的注意事项。 注意： 1.词数80～100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.邮件中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Brown, How are you doing? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文 Dear Mr. Brown, How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to join our study tour. We believe that your presence will make the educational experience more meaningful to us. The study tour will take place on October 10th and we are going to visit a historical place in the nearby city. We will travel by bus. And we will meet at the school gate at 8:00 that day. If you’d like to join us, please let me know as soon as possible so that we can make necessary preparations. Thank you for considering our invitation. We look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 七 （2023·安徽滁州·二模）在每个人的心中都有一位英雄，他的某个行为赢得了我们的赞叹或者他的某种品质让我们由衷佩服。你们学校英文校报以“The Hero in My Heart”为题开展了征文活动，请你根据以下内容提示和要求写一篇英语短文并进行投稿。 内容提示：1.Who is the hero in your heart? 2.What did he/she do? 3.What have you learned from him/her? 写作要求：1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确； 2.可适当增加细节，以便行文流畅； 3.词数80～100词。 The Hero in My Heart ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Hero in My Heart As we all know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr. Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Canada. Dr. Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938, he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn’t stop to take care of his own injured hand and died. I am deeply moved by his stories. So I will work hard and do my best to help others. 八 （2023·安徽安庆·三模）研学旅行作为一种学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动，深受学生的喜爱。为此, 请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍学校开展过的某一次研学活动并发表看法。内容包括： 体验生活： 学习采茶、手工制作 了解文化：参观名胜古迹、博物馆 感受变化：观看有意义的影视 亲近自然：观察动、植物 1. 词数80词左右；开头已给出, 不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节, 使行文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实的校名、人名。 参考词汇：名胜古迹places of interest The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and it is popular with students. I’m glad to share my experience of a study tour. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and it is popular with students. I’m glad to share my experience of a study tour. First, we went to pick tea in person and made some interesting things by hand to experience life. Secondly, we got close to nature and learned more knowledge by watching many real plants and animals. Then, we learned more about Chinese history and culture after visiting some museums and places of interest. Finally, we watched some meaningful movies and felt the great changes in our country. In my opinion, the study trip is good for us and I hope we can have more chances to take part in these kinds of activities. 九 （2023·安徽合肥·二模）假设你是李华，你校英文网站正在举办主题为“大美安徽”的宣传短片征集活动。请你结合以下要点，写一篇英语短文，向国外游客介绍一下你的家乡安徽，为短片的制作做准备。 1. 地域广阔，山川秀美； 2. 历史悠久，人文荟萃； 3. 资源丰富，美食云集。 注意：1. 词数80~100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：resource（n. 资源） Anhui, lying in the eastern part of China, is one of the most beautiful places in the world. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Anhui, lying in the eastern part of China, is one of the most beautiful places in the world. It is large in area and full of beautiful mountains and rivers. You can enjoy the beauty of nature in different seasons here. Anhui has a long history. As a result, different cultures developed and talented people appeared in many fields. Hua Tuo and Tao Xingzhi still have a deep influence today. What’s more, Anhui has rich natural resources, which bring us wealth as well as delicious food. Anhui dishes are popular with people for the special tastes. They can help you learn more about Hui culture as well. Welcome to Anhui and you are sure to fall in love with it. 十 （2023·安徽芜湖·一模）今年是学习雷锋六十周年纪念日，雷锋同志说过：“我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”请写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于80字的作文。在作文中，简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情，为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。 Learn from Lei Feng Lei Feng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Learn from Lei Feng Lei Feng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all his life to his beloved career as well. I was totally shocked by his character. Such is human nature: people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his spirit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “learn from Lei Feng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict. To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of math to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them. I strongly suggest that if each of us takes Lei Feng as our role model and copies his spirit, we shall see a better world. 十一 （2023·安徽合肥·一模）假如你是来自美国的Nancy，你和你的父母正在中国旅游。请根据内容要点提示，给你的朋友Anna写一封信。要点提示： 1. 写信时你们正在九寨沟国家公园(Jiuzhaigou National Park)； 2. 你与父母于7月26日从纽约飞往北京； 3. 在北京你们参观了颐和园(the Summer Palace)、天安门广场(Tian’an men Square)和紫禁城(the Forbidden City)，还去爬了长城； 4. 你们拍了许多照片； 5. 你已为她买了一些纪念品(souvenir)，希望她能够喜欢。 Dear Anna, I’m writing to you from Jiuzhaigou National Park in Sichuan, China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Nancy 【答案】例文 Dear Anna, I’m writing to you from Jiuzhaigou National Park in Sichuan, China. It is a world-famous National Park in China. My parents and I flew to Beijing from New York on 26th July. We visited the Summer Palace, Tian’an men Square and the Forbidden City. We also climbed the Great Wall. We took a lot of beautiful photos. What’s more, we ate delicious food such as Beijing Roast Duck. I bought some small souvenirs for you and I’m sure you will like them. Yours Nancy 十二 （2022·安徽合肥·三模）假定你是李华。你的英国笔友John对中国茶很感兴趣，请你根据以下要点，写一封邮件，介绍你在中国茶叶博物馆（National Tea Museum）的所见所闻。 1. 时间：五月二日 2.人员：你的一家 3. 主要活动：了解茶叶、学习制茶、欣赏茶艺表演…… 注意：1. 邮件必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； 3. 词数：80—100词左右。邮件格式、开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 茶艺表演 tea art performance Dear John, I’m glad you are interested in Chinese tea. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear John, I’m glad you are interested in Chinese tea. I hope my trip to National Tea Museum can interest you. On May 2nd, my family and I went to National Tea Museum. It is one of the most interesting museums that I’ve ever been to. At the museum, 1 learned some information about tea and I knew who had invented the tea. When I saw there are many different kinds of tea, 1 just couldn’t believe my eyes. We also learned how to make tea there. At last we watched a tea art performance. It was enjoyable to watch the tea preparation as well as drinking the tea. I’ve finally realized why my grandpa loves drinking tea so much! Why don’t you come to China and experience it yourself? Yours, Li Hua 十三 （2022·江苏无锡·一模）本届冬奥会是科技的盛会，各种高科技频繁亮相，无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像机，让外国媒体大呼惊艳。不仅如此，科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假如你是九年级一班学生王华，学校正在举办科技节，你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍身边的科技及其优点。 要求：1. 要点齐全，适当发挥； 2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯，书写规范； 3. 词数：80~100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。 Hello, everyone! I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here. The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here. The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. The smart phone brings both convenience and pleasure to our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through it. As for the robot, it can help us with housework, help our children with their homework and so on. It saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed train has greatly improved our travel speed. It travels at high speed. It’s very fast and comfortable. The electric car has also changed our life. It can not only save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent. It is convenient and green. China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 十四 （2022·安徽马鞍山·一模）进入信息时代，读书还那么重要吗？有人说“读万卷书不如行万里路”，但是也有人持不同的观点。请你根据下表提示分别阐述这两种意见，并发表自己的观点。 Reading Travelling Your opinion 1. 学到各类知识； 2. 认识世界； 3. 了解历史； 1. 观光，游览名胜； 2. 体验不同的文化； 3. 放松身心； …… 注意：1. 词数80-100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 “It’s better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.” This old Chinese saying has caused heated discussions among students. Some students think …… _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：        “It’s better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.” This old Chinese saying has caused heated discussions among students. Some students think reading books is the more important to us. They think they can learn about all kinds of knowledge by reading so that they can know about our world and our history better. But some students disagree. They think traveling is more important than reading. According to them, people can go sightseeing and visit places of interest when they go on a trip. Also they can touch different cultures and relax themselves. But in my opinion, both reading and traveling are important, we should connect them to make them the most effective. 十五 （2022·安徽·三模）假如你是李华，你校全体师生近期将举行一次徒步活动，请你给外教Jack写一封邮件邀请他一起参加，内容要点如下表： 集合地点 学校大门口 出发时间 本周日上午8点 远足目的地 合肥湿地公园（Hefei Wetland Park）（距离学校约10公里） 活动安排 1.参观景区 2.合影留念 3.…… 注意： 1.词数80-100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, Our school will go on a hike (徒步旅行) to Hefei Wetland Park this Sunday. I am writing to invite you to go with us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ So come and join us. You will have a good time there! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Jack, Our school will go on a hike to Hefei Wetland Park this Sunday. I am writing to invite you to go with us. Almost all the teachers and students will attend it. We will meet at the school gate at 7:30 and set out at 8:00 on Sunday morning. It is about 10 kilometers away from our school and the whole trip will take us about 2 hours. We’re going to visit the park at about 10:00. There are lots of activities that you are interested in. We can visit some places of interest and take beautiful photos there. After lunch, we’ll pick up rubbish in the park to protect the environment. The trip will help us relax ourselves as well as build up our bodies. So come and jioin us. You will have a good time there! Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 21 / 21 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$