必修第三册Unit 2 Making a difference(写人物传记)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(外研版2019)

Unit 2 Making a difference 单元写作深度指导 写人物传记 ▲有关人物传记表达的句式 1. Introduction（引入部分） In/On+时间点/At the age of. . . . . . is known as. . . He/She won great honours. . . 2. Main Body（主体部分） At one point, /Later, . . . He/She was learning in. . . /worked as. . . His/Her team managed to extract. . . 3. Conclusion（结尾部分） By+时间点. . . He/She is a great. . . /one of the most famous. . . He/She has made achievements in. . . ▲基础词汇 CV　简历 title n. 称号, 头衔, 职称 extract vt. 提取, 提炼;摘录 issue vt. (正式)发给, 供给 novel adj. 新颖的, 与众不同的 nominate vt. 提名, 推荐 work as 担任 won the prize 获奖 I.题型要点 　　人物传记体裁一般是记叙文。写作手法多采用时间、空间或逻辑线索。先简单介绍此人, 然后介绍此人的出生、成长过程, 接下来叙述这个人的主要成就和业绩, 反映他的思想、品德和情操, 最后对他进行评论, 表达作者自己对他的看法。 II.结构框架 III.必备语料 1. 常用词块 Family background(家庭背景) (1). . . was/were born in/into a poor/rich family. (2)His/Her family was so poor that. . . (3)His/Her father was very strict with him/her. . . (4)live a happy/hard life Education background(教育背景) (1)be admitted to. . . college (2)graduate from. . . department of. . . university (3)major in. . . (4)receive a doctor’s degree (5)go abroad for further study Big events in one’s life(一生中的大事件) (1)receive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize for. . . (2)be good at. . . /do well in. . . (3)be crazy about. . . /enjoy. . . (4)make rapid progress in. . . (5)set a new world record of. . . (6)overcome many difficulties (7)have a gift/talent for. . . Qualities(品质或个性): committed, kind, determined, gentle, considerate, optimistic, easy-going, warm-hearted, hard-working, responsible, patient, helpful, friendly, generous. . . Evaluation(评价) (1)one of the best/most important. . . (2)set a good example to. . . (3)a model teacher/worker (4)be respected by everyone (5)speak/think highly of. . . (6)be honoured as (an excellent athlete) (7)make great contributions to. . . (8)Consistency/Perseverance is the key to success. (9)be famous/known as/be regarded as 2.必备句式 (1)段首句 ①He/She was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. 他/她是20世纪最伟大的科学家之一。 ②He/She was born in 1911. 他/她出生于1911年。 (2)主体段落句 ①He/She devoted all his/her life to work. 他/她毕生都致力于工作。 ②He/She made great contributions to our country. 他/她为我们国家作出了巨大贡献。 ③He/She was highly thought of by many people. 他/她受到很多人的高度评价。 ④Thanks to her creative work, China is now playing an important role in. . . 由于她的创造性工作, 中国现在在……扮演着重要的角色 (3)结尾句 ①He/She is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her. 他/她是一个如此博学/意志坚强的人, 我们都很钦佩/尊敬他/她。 ②From her, I realize as long as we keep trying, we will achieve our dream. 通过她我意识到, 只要我们不断努力就会实现梦想。 IV.优化策略 1.‌引言‌部分 简要介绍人物，包括其姓名、出生年月（如果适用）、职业或主要成就。提及你为何选择写这篇传记，或者这个人物对你有何启发。 2.‌生活背景‌ 描述人物的早年生活，包括出生地、家庭背景、教育经历等。提及任何对人物成长有重要影响的早期经历或事件。 3.‌成就与贡献‌ 详细描述人物的主要成就，包括他们在职业、艺术、科学或其他领域的贡献。提及任何重要的奖项、荣誉或他们如何影响了他人或社会。 4.‌性格与特质‌ 分析人物的性格特点，如坚韧不拔、创造力、领导力等。通过具体事例展示这些性格特质如何体现在他们的生活和工作中。 5.‌挑战与困难‌ 描述人物在追求目标过程中遇到的挑战和困难。强调他们是如何克服这些障碍的，展现其毅力和决心。 6.‌影响与遗产‌： 讨论人物对后世或特定领域的影响。提及他们的遗产，包括作品、思想或他们对社会的长期贡献。 7.‌结尾‌部分 总结人物的生平和成就。表达你对人物的看法或感受，以及他们对你或社会的启示。 【范文示例】 Steve Jobs, born on February 24, 1955, in San Francisco, California, was a visionary innovator who revolutionized the tech industry. As the co-founder of Apple Inc., Jobs played a pivotal role in the development of groundbreaking products like the iPhone, iPad, and Mac computers. From a young age, Jobs displayed a keen interest in technology and design. His passion led him to drop out of college and co-found Apple with Steve Wozniak in 1976. Despite facing numerous challenges, including being fired from his own company, Jobs never lost sight of his vision. Jobs's innovative mindset and relentless pursuit of perfection resulted in products that not only changed the way we communicate and work but also became cultural icons. His leadership and creative genius turned Apple into one of the most valuable companies in the world. Steve Jobs's legacy is one of innovation, design, and a commitment to pushing the boundaries of technology. His impact on the world will continue to inspire future generations of entrepreneurs and innovators. 请根据以下内容写一篇介绍中国科学家钱学森的文章。 时间 事项 1911年 生于上海 1935年 赴美留学, 受到冯·卡门(Von Karman)的赞誉 1939年 在美国获航空航天科学、数学博士学位 1950年 获悉中华人民共和国成立的消息 1955年 克服了美国政府的百般阻挠, 于1955年成功地回到祖国 1958年 1958年起献身于航空航天研究工作, 为中国的航天事业作出巨大贡献, 被誉为“中国航天之父” 2009年 在北京去世 参考词汇:航空航天科学与研究工作aerospace science and research 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【写作示例】 I.读题布局 II.句式建构 1. 他于1911年生于上海。 He was born in 1911 in Shanghai. 2. 他于1935年赴美深造, 受到冯·卡门的赞誉。(think highly of) In 1935, he went to America for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman. 3. 他于1939年在美国获航空航天科学、数学博士学位。(obtain) In 1939, he obtained his doctor’s degrees in aerospace science and mathematics in the US. 4. 1950年获悉中华人民共和国成立的消息, 尽管美国政府百般阻挠, 但他还是于1955年成功地回到祖国。 →In 1950, he heard the People’s Republic of China had been founded and succeeded in coming back to his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him. (并列谓语)  →In 1950, hearing the People’s Republic of China had been founded, he succeeded in coming back to his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him. (现在分词短语)  5. 他于1958年起献身于航空航天科学与研究工作, 为中国的航天事业作出巨大的贡献。(devote, contribution) Since 1958 he had been devoted to aerospace science and research and made great contributions to the cause of China’s aerospace. 6. 他被誉为“中国航天之父”。(regard) He was regarded as the father of China’s space program. 7. 他于2009年在北京去世。 In 2009, he passed away in Beijing. III.衔接成篇 　　Qian Xuesen, regarded as the father of China’s space program, was born in 1911 in Shanghai. 　　In 1935, Qian went to America for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman. In 1939, he obtained his doctor’s degrees in aerospace science and mathematics in the US. In 1950, he heard the People’s Republic of China had been founded and succeeded in coming back to his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him. Since 1958 he had been devoted to aerospace science and research and made great contributions to the cause of China’s aerospace. In 2009, he passed away in Beijing. 　　Because of the love for his country and the great achievements, he has received the respect and admiration from his people. 1．根据提示信息写一篇关于孔子的人物传记。 概况 孔子（前551~前479），鲁国人，是春秋末期的杰出的富有智慧的思想家、政治家、教育家。 外貌；性格 身材高大；谦虚、聪明 生平 3岁丧父 23岁，开创私人讲学之风，周游各国，思想核心“仁”，儒家学说的创始人 73岁去世后其言行被弟子收录在论语中 评价 尊为“至圣” 论语：the Analects of Confucius儒家学说：Confucianism至圣：the sage of sages 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．罗文·艾金森(Rowan Atkinson)是著名的喜剧大师，在英国和其他国家都拥有众多的粉丝。请根据下表提供的信息，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍Rowan Atkinson。 人物 罗文·艾金森，英国著名的喜剧演员，1955年1月6日出生于英格兰，毕业于牛津大学。 荧幕形象 所扮演的憨豆先生风靡世界；他的荧幕形象有点傻，但是他通过这个角色告诉人们对生活要乐观。 表演方式 通过丰富的肢体动作来展示自己的幽默，使人发笑。 评价 出色的演技为他赢得了许多奖项，被誉为继卓别林之后的又一位戏剧大师。 参考词汇：喜剧演员 (comedian)；牛津大学 (Oxford University)；乐观的 (optimistic) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．请以The Person Who Influences Me Most为题，写一篇关于对你生命产生重大影响的人物的短文。这个人可以是你的家人、老师、导师或公众人物。描述他/她是如何影响你的，你欣赏他/她的哪些品质，他/她的言行如何塑造了你的观点或行为。 注意： 1．词数80左右; 2．请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The Person Who Influences Me Most _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假定你的同学Zhang Liang在上学途中捡到了一个钱包，请结合图片内容给你校英文报“优秀人物故事”栏目写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 描述事情的经过； 2. 谈谈你的看法。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 It was Monday. Zhang Liang walked to school as usual. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．你校英文报“人物”专栏拟向高一学生征集文章，请你写一篇介绍中国著名医学家林巧稚的英语短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 人物简介：(1901- 1983;出生地：厦门市；“万婴之母”等)； 2. 主要事迹及贡献； 3. 你的感悟或评价。 参考词汇：medical scientist;mother of ten thousand babies 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 A Brief Introduction of Dr Lin Qiaozhi _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．你校英文报“Into China”栏目正在征稿。请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位你最喜爱的中国诗人，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 喜爱的原因(至少2个)。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Favorite Chinese Poet _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友吉姆(Jim)发邮件询问你敬佩的科学家，请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 敬佩的原因。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：精湛的(exquisite)；坚持不懈的(dogged)；开创性的(groundbreaking) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．你校英文报新增了“榜样人物”专栏，正在面向全校学生征稿，请你以My Role Model为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 人物的简介； 2. 所作出的贡献； 3. 对你的影响。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Role Model ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假定你是李华，你校“英语报”将开设一期名为“新中国成立以来感动中国的人物”专栏，请你积极写信投稿。 1. 人物简介及事迹；2. 意义或启示 注意：词数100左右；题目已为你写好 People Who Inspired China ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．张桂梅，丽江华坪女子高级中学校长。她行善助学，爱生如子，被评为“感动中国2020年度人物。现在请你根据以下信息提示，用英语写一篇人物小传介绍张桂梅老师。 姓名 张桂梅 生日 1957年6月 出生地 黑龙江 主要事迹 1990年开始在云南一所中学任教。 2001年触动于当地女子的不幸生活，计划建立女子中学。 2008年创建全国第一所完全免费的女子高中。 13年米，尽管身体多病，帮助了1800多名山区女子考上大学，走出大山。 写作要求： 1.词数控制在80词左右，所给内容不计词数。 2.内容要包含以上所有内容，可组织信息，也可适当发挥。 Zhang Guimei, who was born in Heilongjiang in June, 1957, began her career as a teacher in 1990 in a middle school in Yunnan Province. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 2 Making a difference 单元写作深度指导 写人物传记 ▲有关人物传记表达的句式 1. Introduction（引入部分） In/On+时间点/At the age of. . . . . . is known as. . . He/She won great honours. . . 2. Main Body（主体部分） At one point, /Later, . . . He/She was learning in. . . /worked as. . . His/Her team managed to extract. . . 3. Conclusion（结尾部分） By+时间点. . . He/She is a great. . . /one of the most famous. . . He/She has made achievements in. . . ▲基础词汇 CV　简历 title n. 称号, 头衔, 职称 extract vt. 提取, 提炼;摘录 issue vt. (正式)发给, 供给 novel adj. 新颖的, 与众不同的 nominate vt. 提名, 推荐 work as 担任 won the prize 获奖 I.题型要点 　　人物传记体裁一般是记叙文。写作手法多采用时间、空间或逻辑线索。先简单介绍此人, 然后介绍此人的出生、成长过程, 接下来叙述这个人的主要成就和业绩, 反映他的思想、品德和情操, 最后对他进行评论, 表达作者自己对他的看法。 II.结构框架 III.必备语料 1. 常用词块 Family background(家庭背景) (1). . . was/were born in/into a poor/rich family. (2)His/Her family was so poor that. . . (3)His/Her father was very strict with him/her. . . (4)live a happy/hard life Education background(教育背景) (1)be admitted to. . . college (2)graduate from. . . department of. . . university (3)major in. . . (4)receive a doctor’s degree (5)go abroad for further study Big events in one’s life(一生中的大事件) (1)receive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize for. . . (2)be good at. . . /do well in. . . (3)be crazy about. . . /enjoy. . . (4)make rapid progress in. . . (5)set a new world record of. . . (6)overcome many difficulties (7)have a gift/talent for. . . Qualities(品质或个性): committed, kind, determined, gentle, considerate, optimistic, easy-going, warm-hearted, hard-working, responsible, patient, helpful, friendly, generous. . . Evaluation(评价) (1)one of the best/most important. . . (2)set a good example to. . . (3)a model teacher/worker (4)be respected by everyone (5)speak/think highly of. . . (6)be honoured as (an excellent athlete) (7)make great contributions to. . . (8)Consistency/Perseverance is the key to success. (9)be famous/known as/be regarded as 2.必备句式 (1)段首句 ①He/She was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. 他/她是20世纪最伟大的科学家之一。 ②He/She was born in 1911. 他/她出生于1911年。 (2)主体段落句 ①He/She devoted all his/her life to work. 他/她毕生都致力于工作。 ②He/She made great contributions to our country. 他/她为我们国家作出了巨大贡献。 ③He/She was highly thought of by many people. 他/她受到很多人的高度评价。 ④Thanks to her creative work, China is now playing an important role in. . . 由于她的创造性工作, 中国现在在……扮演着重要的角色 (3)结尾句 ①He/She is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her. 他/她是一个如此博学/意志坚强的人, 我们都很钦佩/尊敬他/她。 ②From her, I realize as long as we keep trying, we will achieve our dream. 通过她我意识到, 只要我们不断努力就会实现梦想。 IV.优化策略 1.‌引言‌部分 简要介绍人物，包括其姓名、出生年月（如果适用）、职业或主要成就。提及你为何选择写这篇传记，或者这个人物对你有何启发。 2.‌生活背景‌ 描述人物的早年生活，包括出生地、家庭背景、教育经历等。提及任何对人物成长有重要影响的早期经历或事件。 3.‌成就与贡献‌ 详细描述人物的主要成就，包括他们在职业、艺术、科学或其他领域的贡献。提及任何重要的奖项、荣誉或他们如何影响了他人或社会。 4.‌性格与特质‌ 分析人物的性格特点，如坚韧不拔、创造力、领导力等。通过具体事例展示这些性格特质如何体现在他们的生活和工作中。 5.‌挑战与困难‌ 描述人物在追求目标过程中遇到的挑战和困难。强调他们是如何克服这些障碍的，展现其毅力和决心。 6.‌影响与遗产‌： 讨论人物对后世或特定领域的影响。提及他们的遗产，包括作品、思想或他们对社会的长期贡献。 7.‌结尾‌部分 总结人物的生平和成就。表达你对人物的看法或感受，以及他们对你或社会的启示。 【范文示例】 Steve Jobs, born on February 24, 1955, in San Francisco, California, was a visionary innovator who revolutionized the tech industry. As the co-founder of Apple Inc., Jobs played a pivotal role in the development of groundbreaking products like the iPhone, iPad, and Mac computers. From a young age, Jobs displayed a keen interest in technology and design. His passion led him to drop out of college and co-found Apple with Steve Wozniak in 1976. Despite facing numerous challenges, including being fired from his own company, Jobs never lost sight of his vision. Jobs's innovative mindset and relentless pursuit of perfection resulted in products that not only changed the way we communicate and work but also became cultural icons. His leadership and creative genius turned Apple into one of the most valuable companies in the world. Steve Jobs's legacy is one of innovation, design, and a commitment to pushing the boundaries of technology. His impact on the world will continue to inspire future generations of entrepreneurs and innovators. 请根据以下内容写一篇介绍中国科学家钱学森的文章。 时间 事项 1911年 生于上海 1935年 赴美留学, 受到冯·卡门(Von Karman)的赞誉 1939年 在美国获航空航天科学、数学博士学位 1950年 获悉中华人民共和国成立的消息 1955年 克服了美国政府的百般阻挠, 于1955年成功地回到祖国 1958年 1958年起献身于航空航天研究工作, 为中国的航天事业作出巨大贡献, 被誉为“中国航天之父” 2009年 在北京去世 参考词汇:航空航天科学与研究工作aerospace science and research 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【写作示例】 I.读题布局 II.句式建构 1. 他于1911年生于上海。 He was born in 1911 in Shanghai. 2. 他于1935年赴美深造, 受到冯·卡门的赞誉。(think highly of) In 1935, he went to America for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman. 3. 他于1939年在美国获航空航天科学、数学博士学位。(obtain) In 1939, he obtained his doctor’s degrees in aerospace science and mathematics in the US. 4. 1950年获悉中华人民共和国成立的消息, 尽管美国政府百般阻挠, 但他还是于1955年成功地回到祖国。 →In 1950, he heard the People’s Republic of China had been founded and succeeded in coming back to his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him. (并列谓语)  →In 1950, hearing the People’s Republic of China had been founded, he succeeded in coming back to his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him. (现在分词短语)  5. 他于1958年起献身于航空航天科学与研究工作, 为中国的航天事业作出巨大的贡献。(devote, contribution) Since 1958 he had been devoted to aerospace science and research and made great contributions to the cause of China’s aerospace. 6. 他被誉为“中国航天之父”。(regard) He was regarded as the father of China’s space program. 7. 他于2009年在北京去世。 In 2009, he passed away in Beijing. III.衔接成篇 　　Qian Xuesen, regarded as the father of China’s space program, was born in 1911 in Shanghai. 　　In 1935, Qian went to America for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman. In 1939, he obtained his doctor’s degrees in aerospace science and mathematics in the US. In 1950, he heard the People’s Republic of China had been founded and succeeded in coming back to his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him. Since 1958 he had been devoted to aerospace science and research and made great contributions to the cause of China’s aerospace. In 2009, he passed away in Beijing. 　　Because of the love for his country and the great achievements, he has received the respect and admiration from his people. 1．根据提示信息写一篇关于孔子的人物传记。 概况 孔子（前551~前479），鲁国人，是春秋末期的杰出的富有智慧的思想家、政治家、教育家。 外貌；性格 身材高大；谦虚、聪明 生平 3岁丧父 23岁，开创私人讲学之风，周游各国，思想核心“仁”，儒家学说的创始人 73岁去世后其言行被弟子收录在论语中 评价 尊为“至圣” 论语：the Analects of Confucius儒家学说：Confucianism至圣：the sage of sages 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．罗文·艾金森(Rowan Atkinson)是著名的喜剧大师，在英国和其他国家都拥有众多的粉丝。请根据下表提供的信息，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍Rowan Atkinson。 人物 罗文·艾金森，英国著名的喜剧演员，1955年1月6日出生于英格兰，毕业于牛津大学。 荧幕形象 所扮演的憨豆先生风靡世界；他的荧幕形象有点傻，但是他通过这个角色告诉人们对生活要乐观。 表演方式 通过丰富的肢体动作来展示自己的幽默，使人发笑。 评价 出色的演技为他赢得了许多奖项，被誉为继卓别林之后的又一位戏剧大师。 参考词汇：喜剧演员 (comedian)；牛津大学 (Oxford University)；乐观的 (optimistic) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．请以The Person Who Influences Me Most为题，写一篇关于对你生命产生重大影响的人物的短文。这个人可以是你的家人、老师、导师或公众人物。描述他/她是如何影响你的，你欣赏他/她的哪些品质，他/她的言行如何塑造了你的观点或行为。 注意： 1．词数80左右; 2．请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The Person Who Influences Me Most _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假定你的同学Zhang Liang在上学途中捡到了一个钱包，请结合图片内容给你校英文报“优秀人物故事”栏目写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 描述事情的经过； 2. 谈谈你的看法。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 It was Monday. Zhang Liang walked to school as usual. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．你校英文报“人物”专栏拟向高一学生征集文章，请你写一篇介绍中国著名医学家林巧稚的英语短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 人物简介：(1901- 1983;出生地：厦门市；“万婴之母”等)； 2. 主要事迹及贡献； 3. 你的感悟或评价。 参考词汇：medical scientist;mother of ten thousand babies 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 A Brief Introduction of Dr Lin Qiaozhi _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．你校英文报“Into China”栏目正在征稿。请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位你最喜爱的中国诗人，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 喜爱的原因(至少2个)。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Favorite Chinese Poet _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友吉姆(Jim)发邮件询问你敬佩的科学家，请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 敬佩的原因。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：精湛的(exquisite)；坚持不懈的(dogged)；开创性的(groundbreaking) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．你校英文报新增了“榜样人物”专栏，正在面向全校学生征稿，请你以My Role Model为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 人物的简介； 2. 所作出的贡献； 3. 对你的影响。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Role Model ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假定你是李华，你校“英语报”将开设一期名为“新中国成立以来感动中国的人物”专栏，请你积极写信投稿。 1. 人物简介及事迹；2. 意义或启示 注意：词数100左右；题目已为你写好 People Who Inspired China ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．张桂梅，丽江华坪女子高级中学校长。她行善助学，爱生如子，被评为“感动中国2020年度人物。现在请你根据以下信息提示，用英语写一篇人物小传介绍张桂梅老师。 姓名 张桂梅 生日 1957年6月 出生地 黑龙江 主要事迹 1990年开始在云南一所中学任教。 2001年触动于当地女子的不幸生活，计划建立女子中学。 2008年创建全国第一所完全免费的女子高中。 13年米，尽管身体多病，帮助了1800多名山区女子考上大学，走出大山。 写作要求： 1.词数控制在80词左右，所给内容不计词数。 2.内容要包含以上所有内容，可组织信息，也可适当发挥。 Zhang Guimei, who was born in Heilongjiang in June, 1957, began her career as a teacher in 1990 in a middle school in Yunnan Province. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． Confucius (551-479 BC), a towering figure from Lu State, epitomized wisdom as a philosopher, statesman, and educator in the warring years of the Spring and Autumn period. He is tall, humble, and intelligent. At three, he lost his father. By 23, Confucius pioneered private education, traveling widely, advocating for “Ren”, the core of Confucianism. Though Confucius passed away at 73, his legacy lived on. Disciples recorded his words and deeds in the Analects of Confucius, ensuring his wisdom endured. Revered as the sage of sages, Confucius’ impact transcends generations, which shaped ethical and philosophical thought across East Asia and beyond. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生根据提示信息写一篇关于孔子的人物传记。 1.词汇积累 杰出的：towering→outstanding 聪明的：intelligent→smart 提倡：advocate→promote 尽管：though→although 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Disciples recorded his words and deeds in the Analects of Confucius, ensuring his wisdom endured. 拓展句：Disciples recorded his words and deeds in the Analects of Confucius, which ensured his wisdom endured. 【高分句型1】Though Confucius passed away at 73, his legacy lived on. (运用了Though引导的让步状语从句) 【高分句型2】Revered as the sage of sages, Confucius’ impact transcends generations, which shaped ethical and philosophical thought across East Asia and beyond.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2． Rowan Atkinson was born in England on January 1, 1955 and graduated from the famous Oxford University. He won many fans both in the UK and many other countries. Mr. Bean, played by Rowan Atkinson, is popular all over the world. The characters are a bit silly, but through these roles, he tells people to be optimistic about life. He shows his humor through rich body movements, which makes people laugh. Having excellent acting skills, Rowan Atkinson won many awards and he was hailed as one of the greatest comedians after Chaplin. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达是一篇图表作文，要求考生根据提供的信息写一篇关于罗文·艾金森的英语短文。 1.词汇积累 著名的：famous → well-known 风靡：be popular → enjoy great popularity 对某事持乐观态度：be optimistic about → be positive about 展示：show → display 2.句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：He won many fans both in the UK and many other countries. 拓展句：Not only did he win many fans in the UK, but he also gained a large following in numerous other countries. 【高分句型1】Mr. Bean, played by Rowan Atkinson, is popular all over the world.（使用了过去分词短语作后置定语） 【高分句型2】He shows his humor through rich body movements, which makes people laugh.（使用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句，先行词为body movements） 3．                                                                          The Person Who Influences Me Most Many people do have a great influence on me, but I think no one can be compared with my mother. Her attitude towards life will never stop influencing my thoughts and actions. It is my mother who teaches me to be curious, kind, optimistic and persistent. Working as a government official, she doesn’t appear to be extraordinary in any way, but just works faithfully and devotedly; at the same time, she never puts her family aside. Today, when I come across someone in need, I’m willing to give a helping hand within my ability; when I see something odd or unfamiliar, I am eager to find out what it is; when I encounter difficulties in life, I always have a positive attitude and constantly seek for approaches to addressing them. She is not only my mother, but also my life mentor. Indeed, she is just the person affecting me greatly. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放类写作，要求考生写一篇短文，描写生命产生重大影响的人物，描述他/她是如何影响你的，你欣赏他/她的哪些品质，他/她的言行如何塑造了你的观点或行为。 1.词汇积累 影响：influence→impact 乐观：optimistic→positive 坚持不懈的：persistent→untiring 此外：besides→additionally 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Indeed, she is just the person affecting me greatly. 拓展句：Indeed, she is just the person who affects me greatly. 【高分句型1】It is my mother who teaches me to be curious, kind, optimistic and persistent.（运用了强调句型） 【高分句型2】Indeed, she is just the person affecting me greatly.（运用了现在分词作后置定语） 4． It was Monday. Zhang Liang walked to school as usual. Just after he turned around the corner, he found a wallet. He picked it up and checked. There was much money and a business card in it. Zhang Liang immediately took out his cellphone and made a call at the number on the card. Soon the owner of the wallet arrived and thanked him. Returning lost money is a traditional virtue in China. There is no doubt that Zhang Liang has set a good example to us all. Let’s all learn from Zhang Liang and promote the traditional Chinese virtue. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。你的同学Zhang Liang在上学途中捡到了一个钱包，请结合图片内容给你校英文报“优秀人物故事”栏目写一篇短文投稿。 1.词汇积累 发现：find→ discover 立即：immediately → instantly 感谢：thank → be grateful to 归还：return → give back 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：He picked it up and checked. There was much money and a business card in it. 拓展句：He picked it up and checked, discovering that there was much money and a business card in it. 【高分句型1】Just after he turned around the corner, he found a wallet.（运用了after引导时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】There is no doubt that Zhang Liang has set a good example to us all.（运用了that引导同位语从句） 5． A Brief Introduction of Dr Lin Qiaozhi Dr. Lin Qiaozhi, born in Xiamen in 1901 and passed away in 1983, was a renowned Chinese medical scientist. She is widely known as the “Mother of Ten Thousand Babies” for her exceptional contributions to obstetrics and gynecology. As a pioneer in modern obstetrics in China, she devoted her life to improving women’s health and saving newborn lives. Her achievements are remarkable, which include pioneering research in fetal intrauterine respiration, gynecological diseases, and gynecological tumors. Her dedication and compassion for patients inspire me to pursue a career in medicine, aiming to serve and heal like Dr. Lin. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生写一篇文章介绍中国著名医学家林巧稚的英语短文参赛。 1.词汇积累 著名的：renowned→celebrated 致力于：devote…to…→work on 激励某人做某事：inspire sb. to do sth.→encourage sb. to do sth. 追求：pursue→go after 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Dr. Lin Qiaozhi, born in Xiamen in 1901 and passed away in 1983, was a renowned Chinese medical scientist. 拓展句：Dr. Lin Qiaozhi, who was born in Xiamen in 1901 and passed away in 1983, was a renowned Chinese medical scientist. [高分句型1] Her achievements are remarkable, which include pioneering research in fetal intrauterine respiration, gynecological diseases, and gynecological tumors.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] Her dedication and compassion for patients inspire me to pursue a career in medicine, aiming to serve and heal like Dr. Lin.（运用了现在分词短语作状语） 6． My Favorite Chinese Poet The long history of China has witnessed the flourishing of poetry and the brilliance of many exceptional poets, among whom I admire Du Fu most. Born in a wealthy family in the Tang dynasty, Du Fu showed an outstanding aptitude for composing poems at a young age. However, he did not have a successful career as an official and struggled with poverty later. Yet these experiences contributed to his unique writing style. I admire Du Fu for his talent as well as his personality. It is widely acknowledged that Du Fu was blessed with superb literary skills, which earned him the title “the Poetry Sage”. Moreover, despite his own misery, many of his poems reflected concern and sympathy for the poor, showing his kindness and patriotism. With his literary achievements and noble spirit, Du Fu is always an inspiration and guide for me. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生介绍一位最喜爱的中国诗人，内容包括：人物简介；喜爱的原因。 1. 词汇积累 繁荣：flourish→boom/thrive ……的天赋：aptitude for→talent for 促成：contribute to→bring about 承认：acknowledge→admit 2. 句式拓展 简单句改为强调句 原句：Yet these experiences contributed to his unique writing style. 拓展句：Yet it was these experiences that contributed to his unique writing style. 【高分句型1】The long history of China has witnessed the flourishing of poetry and the brilliance of many exceptional poets, among whom I admire Du Fu most.(使用了“介词+whom”引导非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】It is widely acknowledged that Du Fu was blessed with superb literary skills, which earned him the title “the Poetry Sage”. (使用了It作形式主语、that引导主语从句的句型It is widely acknowledged that…，还使用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 7． Dear Jim, In response to your letter inquiring about the scientists I admire, I’m more than delighted to brief you on the one I respect most—Zhong Nanshan. Born in Nanjing in October 1936, Zhong Nanshan is a leading model of society as well as an academic acknowledged universally. Without his exquisite medical skills and dogged persistence, China couldn’t have made groundbreaking achievements in the battle against the deadly COVID­19. Such is Zhong Nanshan, who is definitely worthy of my heartfelt admiration and respect. How about yours? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生给英国朋友吉姆写一份回信，告诉他自己所敬佩的科学家以及敬佩的原因。 1.词汇积累 询问：inquire→enquire 高兴的：delighted→glad 开创性的： groundbreaking→innovative 成就：achievement→accomplishment 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Born in Nanjing in October 1936, Zhong Nanshan is a leading model of society as well as an academic acknowledged universally. 拓展句：Zhong Nanshan , who was born in Nanjing in October 1936, is a leading model of society as well as an academic acknowledged universally. 【高分句型1】Without his exquisite medical skills and dogged persistence, China couldn’t have made groundbreaking achievements in the battle against the deadly COVID­19.（运用了含蓄虚拟条件句） 【高分句型2】Such is Zhong Nanshan, who is definitely worthy of my heartfelt admiration and respect.（运用who引导的非限定性定语从句） 8． My Role Model Tu Youyou, the first female Chinese scientist to receive a Nobel Prize, is the role model in my heart. After graduating from university, she acquired a broad knowledge of both Chinese and Western medicine through constant learning. Determined to find a cure for malaria, she referred to numerous ancient books of traditional Chinese medicine. After working tirelessly and going through many failures, she eventually discovered artemisinin, the world’s most effective drug for fighting malaria, thus saving millions of lives all over the world. Tu Youyou’s life story tells me that under no circumstances shall we acknowledge defeat and that success will belong to those who insists on trying. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。校英文报新增了“榜样人物”专栏，要求考生以My Role Model为题写一篇短文投稿。 1.词汇积累 获得，得到：acquire→obtain/gain 持续不断的：constant→continuous 最终：eventually→ultimately/finally 决不：under no circumstances→by no means 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Tu Youyou, the first female Chinese scientist to receive a Nobel Prize, is the role model in my heart. 拓展句：Tu Youyou, who is the first female Chinese scientist to receive a Nobel Prize, is the role model in my heart. [高分句型1] Determined to find a cure for malaria, she referred to numerous ancient books of traditional Chinese medicine. (运用了形容词作状语) [高分句型2] Tu Youyou’s life story tells me that under no circumstances shall we acknowledge defeat and that success will belong to those who insists on trying. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 9． Zhang Guimei was listed as one of the top 10 people who inspired China in 2020. In 2002, Zhang was a rural teacher. Seeing the backward and unequal distribution of educational resources in China’s poor mountainous areas, she devoted herself to working in the mountainous areas and founded a free girls-only high school, from which many girls graduated. Despite illness and pain, Zhang continued her work and has donated most of her money to poor children. She is so selfless and has changed so many girls’ lives. She devoted all of her energy to doing one thing that benefits others, which is worth learning. 【写作分析】本文是开放作文。假定你是李华，你校“英语报”将开设一期名为“新中国成立以来感动中国的人物”专栏，请你积极写信投稿。1. 人物简介及事迹；2. 意义或启示。 1.词汇积累 致力于做某事：devote oneself to doing sth.→be devoted to doing sth. 建立：found→establish 尽管：despite→in spite of 继续：continue→go on 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Despite illness and pain, Zhang continued her work and has donated most of her money to poor children. 拓展句：Although she was ill and painful, Zhang continued her work and has donated most of her money to poor children. 【高分句型1】 Seeing the backward and unequal distribution of educational resources in China’s poor mountainous areas, she devoted herself to working in the mountainous areas and founded a free girls-only high school, from which many girls graduated. (运用了非谓语动词作状语和介词+关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】She devoted all of her energy to do one thing that benefits others, which is worth learning.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 10． Zhang Guimei, who was born in Heilongjiang in June, 1957, began her career as a teacher in 1990 in a middle school in Yunnan Province. Touched by the hard life of the girls in the mountainous area, she came up with the idea of starting a girls’ senior high school, providing free education to the poor girls. She believes that education can change the fate of these girls, helping them to step out the mountains to the outside world. Through many difficulties and with poor health, she never gave up, and started her school in 2008, the first free high school for girls in China. In the past thirteen years, Zhang Guimei has helped more than 1,800 girls from poor families achieve their university dreams. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。张桂梅，丽江华坪女子高级中学校长。她行善助学，爱生如子，被评为“感动中国2020年度人物。现在请你根据以下信息提示，用英语写一篇人物小传介绍张桂梅老师。 1.词汇积累 感动：touch→move 想出：come up with→put forward 实现：achieve→make sth. come true 命运：fate→destiny 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：She believes that education can change the fate of these girls, helping them to step out the mountains to the outside world. 拓展句：She believes that education can change the fate of these girls, which helps them to step out the mountains to the outside world. [高分句型1] Zhang Guimei, who was born in Heilongjiang in June, 1957, began her career as a teacher in 1990 in a middle school in Yunnan Province. (运用了who引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Touched by the hard life of the girls in the mountainous area, she came up with the idea of starting a girls’ senior high school, providing free education to the poor girls. 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