内容正文:
Unit1
Animal Friends
SectionB Writing (2a-2b)
A dog is always a part of the family.
A dog is always a part of the family.
Post-reading
2a ❑Complete the passage with the words in the box.
close friendly big great beautiful
big
beautiful
friendly
great
close
...的一部分
相当,非常
help sb. do sth帮助某人做某事
走路去
一点也不
和...一起玩
3
Read and analyze
My dog, Xiaohua, is part of the family. She is quite a big dog, but she is not scary at all! She has beautiful fur. She is really friendly and loves to play with everyone. She is also very special. You see, I am blind. Xiaohua is my eyes. She helps me find my way around. She can see and has great hearing. She helps me walk to school and stay safe. I love her very much. We are close friends.
What does it look like?
What is it like?
What can it do?
What’s it?
Why does she like it so much?
Work in pairs and discuss how the author introduce her favorite animal.
What’s the structure of the passage?
Pre-writing
My dog, Xiaohua, is part of the family. She is quite a big dog, but she is not scary at all. She has beautiful fur. She is really friendly and loves to play with everyone. She is also very special. You see, I am blind, Xiaohua is my eyes. She helps me find my way around. She can see and has great hearing. She helps me walk to school and stay safe. I love her very much. We are close friends.
Beginning
Body
Ending
Finish the outline about your favorite animal.
What’s it(动物种类介绍)
What does it look like(外貌特征)
What can it do(能力)
Why do you like it so much
What is it like(性格特征)
My favorite animal is... They are from...
They live in...
They are... They have...
They can...
They are good at...
They are...
Because...
My favorite animal
Beginning
Body
Ending
【写作目标】
用英语介绍自己最喜欢的动物。
【指点迷津】
介绍自己最喜欢的动物属于说明文,其写作要点如下:
1) 时态:一般现在时;
2) 人称:以第三人称为主;
3) 内容:①可以介绍某一类自己最喜欢的动物或介绍具体某
一只自己最喜欢的动物;
②可以从所属物种、名字、产地、现居住地、年龄、
生日、外貌、性情以及生活习性等方面入手介绍。
My favorite animal is the panda. They have soft black-and-white fur, round faces with black eye patches, and black ears. Pandas are large but move slowly and calmly, giving them a peaceful appearance. They mostly eat bamboo and spend their days eating, resting, and playing. Pandas are gentle and solitary animals. I love pandas because of their calm nature and unique charm. They remind me of the importance of slowing down, enjoying life's simple pleasures, and living in harmony with nature.
My favorite animal is the dog. Dogs are friendly and loyal. They come in different sizes and colors, but all dogs love to play and be with people. Dogs enjoy going for walks, playing fetch, and cuddling. They are always happy to see you and make great friends. I love how dogs are always there for you, giving love and support. They make life better with their fun and caring nature. Having a dog feels like having a best friend by your side.
What’s your favourite animal? I like my pet cat best.
How to write a passage about your favourite animals?
1. What does it look like?
2. What is it like?
3. What can it do?
4. Why does she like it so much?
While-writing
开门见山:引出最喜欢的动物
Beginning
Body
Ending
细节描写:从各方面介绍
情感表达:呼吁保护/表达喜爱…
How to write a passage about your favourite animals?
While-writing
开门见山:引出最喜欢的动物
Beginning
Body
Ending
My favorite animal is my pet cat, Mimi. She’s part of my family.
细节描写:从各方面介绍
情感表达:呼吁保护/表达喜爱…
How to write a passage about your favourite animals?
While-writing
Beginning
Body
Ending
细节描写:从各方面介绍
开门见山:引出最喜欢的动物
情感表达:呼吁保护/表达喜爱…
She has soft fur and beautiful eyes. She is cute and playful. She loves to play with a ball. She can catch mice and keep the house safe. When I come home from school. Mimi always runs to me. We play together and she makes me happy.
How to write a passage about your favourite animals?
While-writing
Beginning
Body
Ending
细节描写:从各方面介绍
开门见山:引出最喜欢的动物
情感表达:呼吁保护/表达喜爱…
I love her very much. We are close friends.
How to write a passage about your favourite animals?
While-writing
Beginning
Body
Ending
细节描写:从各方面介绍
开门见山:引出最喜欢的动物
I love her very much. We are close friends.
She has soft fur and beautiful eyes. She is cute and playful. She loves to play with a ball. She can catch mice and keep the house safe. When I come home from school. Mimi always runs to me. We play together and she makes me happy.
My favorite animal is my pet cat, Mimi. She’s part of my family.
Checklist (写作评价表)
Content Describe what the animal looks like. ___ Yes ___ No
Describe the animal's nature or behavior. ___ Yes ___ No
Explain the animal's abilities.
Explain why you like it. ___ Yes ___ No
Language Use different sentence patterns. ___ Yes ___ No
Use adjectives to describe the animal. ___ Yes ___ No
Use conjunctions and pronouns to make the article more cohesive. ___ Yes ___ No
Level ___ Excellent ___ Good ___ Not bad
___ Need improvement ___ Yes ___ No
Suggestion:
Show Time
Post-reading
❑Watch and think:
Do you know about these animals?
They are all endangered animals!!
18
Many kinds of animals are in great danger or even extinct(灭绝)
now.
19
Post-reading
❑Work in groups and discuss:
What should we do?
No trade, no pains.
No buying, no killing!
(没有买卖,就没有伤害)
ride elephants
Don’t
animal shows
Say “No” to
eat wild animals
Don’t
cut down trees
Plant more trees
As students
20
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