读后续写--从小镇到纽约：爱与友善的延续 讲义-河北省保定市部分高中2024-2025学年高二上学期开学考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My nine-year-old daughter, Jessica, is a friendly soul. From the time she was tiny, she would march right up to strangers on the street and say, “Hello!” Her brown eyes would twinkle, and she’d be showing a big smile on her face. I wish she weren’t so social. Not only because she is young and female, but also because she has a disability: She has a cognitive (认知的) disability, with a weakened brain disorder and abnormal behavior. That’s why I’ve done my best to control my nervousness. Children with a weakened brain disorder don’t relate well to others, and I don’t want to discourage her attempts. I worry, though, that people will be cold to her or be cruel to her, or that she will trust the wrong person. Happily in our small town, when Jessica strikes up a conversation with someone, that person almost always responds kindly to her. She never expects to be refused, but I am always tense and ready to collect the pieces if it happens. “What’s your name?” she asks total strangers. “Do you have a dog? How old are you?” It always surprises me that people patiently answer her queries. They must sense something about Jessica, as she’s a little bit different. They never seem to expect me to stop her, although I’ve tried. “We don’t ask adults that,” I say. “That’s a rude question, sweetie.” She asks anyway, and people tell her. When she is done with her question, she will turn to me and say, “We know Michelle now,” or “That is Mrs. Crawford.” She moves them easily from one category to another: people we don’t know or people we do know. Strangers are merely people she hasn’t yet asked for their names. I’m less sure that finding out their names means we know them. It’s a small but easy-going town, and I don’t worry too much about it. She doesn’t go around without supervision (监督) or share anything too personal. Talking to strangers in our small town is normal. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I thought in New York City, which we visited last year, it was another thing. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I couldn’t explain the difference between small towns and big cities because everyone was so kind. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 作者九岁的女儿杰西卡性格友善，即便有认知障碍，也喜欢主动和陌生人打招呼、交谈。在他们所在的小镇，人们总是友善回应她的问题，这让作者虽担忧但也稍感安心。杰西卡能轻松将陌生人分类为认识或不认识的人，在小镇与陌生人交流是很平常的事。 故事山分析 · 开端：杰西卡是个友善且有认知障碍的孩子，喜欢和陌生人交谈，在小镇上与人交流很顺利。 · 发展：作者一直担心女儿和陌生人交流的情况，但在小镇人们的友善回应让她稍感安心。 · 高潮：故事可能的高潮是在纽约市，女儿与陌生人交流可能出现和小镇不一样的状况。 · 结局：根据续写内容，最终会以一种积极的方式收尾，体现出不同环境下人性的温暖。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 伏笔 1：作者担心女儿在和陌生人交流时受到伤害 -- 在续写中，到纽约后作者会更紧张女儿与陌生人交流的情况，时刻准备保护女儿。 伏笔 2：小镇人们对杰西卡的友善回应 -- 在纽约的续写中，通过对比，可能会先出现一些让作者担心的场景，再反转出现友善的回应，与小镇的情况相呼应。 伏笔 3：杰西卡的认知障碍和天真行为 -- 在纽约，她依然会像在小镇一样主动和陌生人交流，保持天真的提问方式。 伏笔 4：作者对女儿交流行为的矛盾心理 -- 续写中在纽约作者的这种矛盾心理会加剧，既担心又不想阻止女儿。 伏笔 5：小镇交流的平常性 -- 到纽约后会先凸显纽约的不同，后续又会打破这种不同，展现出人性的相通。 续写要点（两段） 第一段：描述在纽约市的场景，杰西卡像往常一样和陌生人交流，作者紧张不安，担心她会被拒绝或受到伤害，可能会遇到一些让作者担忧的状况。 第二段：转折，描述陌生人对杰西卡友善的回应，让作者感到意外和温暖，进一步阐述作者对这种情况的感慨。 情感线 一开始作者对女儿在纽约与陌生人交流充满担忧和紧张，害怕女儿受到伤害。当看到女儿和陌生人交流时，作者内心矛盾，既担心又不想阻止女儿。随着陌生人友善回应女儿，作者的担忧逐渐转变为感动和欣慰，最后对人性的美好有了更深的感悟。 故事线 杰西卡一家来到纽约市。 杰西卡像在小镇一样和陌生人交流。 作者紧张不安，担心会有不好的事情发生。 陌生人对杰西卡做出回应。 回应出乎作者意料，是友善的。 作者感慨人性的美好，对不同城市的认知有了新的转变。 主旨升华句 This experience in New York City taught me that kindness knows no bounds, whether in a small town or a big city. 这次在纽约市的经历让我明白，善良是没有界限的，无论是在小镇还是大城市。 No matter where we are, the warmth of human nature can always shine through, just like the bright smile on Jessica's face. 无论我们身处何地，人性的温暖总能闪耀，就像杰西卡脸上灿烂的笑容。 It turns out that the friendliness and kindness of people are not determined by the size of the city, but by the purity of their hearts. 事实证明，人们的友善和善良不是由城市的大小决定的，而是由他们内心的纯净决定的。 Through this journey in New York, I realized that the world is full of love and understanding, waiting for us to discover. 通过这次在纽约的旅程，我意识到这个世界充满了爱与理解，等待我们去发现。 This adventure in the big city made me see that even with differences, people can still connect with each other through kindness and patience. 这次在大城市的经历让我看到，即使存在差异，人们仍然可以通过善良和耐心彼此相连。 写作示范一 I thought in New York City, which we visited last year, it was another thing. As soon as we stepped onto the busy streets of New York, the noise and the crowd made me even more nervous. Jessica, however, was as enthusiastic as ever. She walked right up to a well - dressed lady on the sidewalk and asked, “What’s your name? Do you have a pet?” The lady looked a bit startled at first, and my heart sank. I quickly stepped forward to apologize, but to my surprise, the lady smiled kindly and answered Jessica's questions. Then Jessica moved on to a man sitting on a bench. She asked about his age, and the man, instead of being annoyed, engaged in a short conversation with her. I couldn’t explain the difference between small towns and big cities because everyone was so kind. In New York, I had expected cold shoulders or even rude remarks. But people here were just as friendly as those in our small town. It made me realize that kindness is a universal language that transcends geographical boundaries. Whether in a quiet small town or a bustling metropolis, the warmth of human nature can always touch our hearts. From that day on, I worried less about Jessica's friendly nature. I knew that as long as there is kindness in the world, she would be safe and happy. 写作示范二 I thought in New York City, which we visited last year, it was another thing. The moment we arrived, the city's fast - paced atmosphere made me anxious for Jessica. She didn't seem to notice the difference and immediately approached a group of teenagers standing by a store. She asked them about their favorite music, and for a second, I thought they would just ignore her or make fun of her. My hands clenched tightly, ready to intervene. But one of the girls smiled and started talking to Jessica, sharing her love for pop music. Jessica listened with great interest, her eyes shining brightly. I couldn’t explain the difference between small towns and big cities because everyone was so kind. I had prepared myself for the worst, imagining all sorts of negative reactions. But one after another, the people Jessica met in New York were incredibly patient and kind. They didn't treat her differently because of her disability. This experience not only changed my view of big cities but also made me more confident in Jessica's ability to interact with the world. It taught me that we should never judge a place or its people based on our preconceived notions. Instead, we should open our hearts and see the kindness that exists everywhere. 【答案】参考范文： I thought in New York City, which we visited last year, it was another thing. I wasn’t surprised to hear her saying “hello” to every single person we saw as we walked along the streets of midtown Manhattan, but I certainly wasn’t comfortable. On the first day, I decided not to try to stop her. “This will be a good lesson for her. People may just ignore her — these are New Yorkers, after all,” I thought. And then when we got back to the hotel, she and I talked about the difference between people in big cities and small towns. And maybe she would learn not to talk to strangers. I couldn’t explain the difference between small towns and big cities because everyone was so kind. Every single person she said “hello” to said “hello” right back — the busy businessmen, the tourists with their cameras at the ready or the doormen standing at attention in their uniforms. She even said “hello” to the homeless people. I felt something inside me weaken: a wall, perhaps, I never even knew I had built. Because I expected people to be indifferent to me, or to be judgmental, I never expected kindness, not like Jessica, who always does. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$