湖北省楚天协作体2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中英语试题续写南瓜故事 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sometimes, I had dirt under my fingernails. Mom said that was OK, as long as I washed hard before dinner. She understood because she was a gardener like me except she said little vegetables tasted best. I might be small, but I liked veggies BIG. Mom grew carrots the size of my little finger. I grew carrots as long as my arm. Mom grew tomatoes that looked like beans, so sweet and tiny. We put them in our mouths by the handful. I grew tomatoes so big that one piece covered a whole pizza. Last summer, Mom was growing tiny pumpkins (南瓜). I was growing the biggest pumpkin ever. I was trying to win at the harvest fair (丰收集市). I chose the best place, right by where Mom grew her zucchini (西葫芦). I planted the pumpkin seed (种子) and I watered it. When the baby plant came up, I fed and protected it carefully. And it grew. The first flower opened and the next day, a baby pumpkin grew at the bottom of the flower. Over the next few weeks, the little pumpkin got bigger. I carefully took off each new flower after it opened so that the plant would grow only one big pumpkin, instead of many little ones. It needed all of its power to make the biggest pumpkin ever. When summer got hot, I gave my pumpkin more water and love. To avoid the zucchini plants being sad, I gave the zucchini water, too. My pumpkin became orange as it became ready. And still it grew. It’s the biggest pumpkin ever. Bright as the late summer sun. Round as a planet, so my friend Kam called it Planet Pumpkin. The harvest fair was the next day, and Planet Pumpkin was going to win. Mom cut my pumpkin from the vine (藤蔓) so I could place it in my truck, but it’s too big to lift by myself. Mom helped. So did Kam. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 After much hard work, we almost got the pumpkin in the truck. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next day at the harvest fair, Mom, Kam, and I won sixth prize in the zucchini competition. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写南瓜故事 文章大意 “我” 和妈妈都是园艺爱好者，妈妈种的蔬菜小巧，而 “我” 追求种出巨型蔬菜。去年夏天，“我” 在妈妈种西葫芦的旁边种下南瓜种子，精心照料，期间摘掉多余花朵，让南瓜全力生长。夏天炎热时，“我” 给南瓜和西葫芦都浇水。最终南瓜长成又大又圆的 “星球南瓜”，收获集市前夕，“我” 和妈妈、朋友 Kam 准备把南瓜运到集市，却遇到了困难 。 故事山分析 开端：介绍 “我” 和妈妈的园艺爱好以及种植蔬菜的不同风格，引出 “我” 种巨型南瓜参加收获集市的事。 发展：详细描述 “我” 种植南瓜的过程，从选地、播种到悉心照料，南瓜逐渐长大。 高潮：南瓜成熟，准备运往收获集市，却在装车时遇到麻烦。 结局：参与收获集市，虽然可能未在南瓜比赛夺冠，但有了别样收获。 五处伏笔以及在续写中的回应 伏笔：“我” 种的蔬菜都很大，而妈妈种的蔬菜小巧。回应：突出 “我” 种的南瓜之大，在搬运和比赛时都因 “大” 产生故事，与妈妈的种植形成对比。 伏笔：南瓜太大，“我” 自己无法抬起，妈妈和 Kam 帮忙。回应：在搬运过程中，因为南瓜巨大导致搬运困难，需要想办法解决，推动情节发展。 伏笔：“我” 对南瓜的精心照料，包括浇水、摘掉多余花朵。回应：体现 “我” 对南瓜的期待和付出，在比赛结果不如意时，更能凸显过程的重要性。 伏笔：朋友 Kam 参与搬运南瓜。回应：在后续经历中，Kam 和 “我”、妈妈共同面对，增加故事人物间的互动。 伏笔：“我” 想在收获集市赢得比赛。回应：在集市上有比赛结果的情节，与前文期待形成呼应，引出对结果的思考。 续写要点 第一段要点：着重描写南瓜装车时遇到困难后的解决过程，如卡车车轮陷坑，南瓜滑落，大家一起想办法，找来木板搭斜坡，齐心协力将南瓜成功装车，可加入人物的语言和动作描写。 第二段要点：细致描绘在收获集市上的情景，得知未在南瓜比赛获奖时的心理，再阐述获得西葫芦比赛第六名后的心情转变，最后通过感悟突出成长和收获，如明白了过程比结果更重要。 情感线 一开始，“我” 对自己种出的大南瓜充满期待，满心欢喜准备参赛，情感积极兴奋。南瓜装车遇困难时，有些焦急和担忧。在集市得知南瓜未获奖，心情一落千丈，十分失落。但在获得西葫芦比赛奖项后，慢慢释怀，认识到种植过程中的付出和与家人朋友的合作更珍贵，情感从失落转为平和、满足。 故事线 准备参赛：“我” 种出巨大南瓜，准备参加收获集市，和妈妈、Kam 一起搬运南瓜。 装车遇阻：搬运南瓜时卡车车轮陷坑，南瓜滑落，装车失败。 解决困难：找来木板搭斜坡，成功将南瓜装车运往集市。 比赛结果：在收获集市，南瓜未获奖，有些失望。 意外收获：得知在西葫芦比赛中获得第六名，心情有所转变。 感悟成长：明白比赛结果不是最重要的，享受过程和与他人合作才是真正收获。 主旨升华句 This experience taught me that the journey of achieving a goal is more precious than the result itself, and the efforts and memories along the way are what truly matter.（这次经历让我明白，实现目标的过程比结果本身更珍贵，沿途的努力和回忆才是真正重要的。） Through the process of growing the pumpkin and participating in the fair, I realized that success is not only measured by winning prizes, but also by the joy of sharing and the growth we experience.（通过种植南瓜和参加集市的过程，我意识到成功不仅仅以获奖来衡量，还在于分享的喜悦和我们所经历的成长。 ） The story of the pumpkin taught me that even if we don't achieve the expected outcome, the time and love we invest in something can bring unexpected rewards and valuable lessons.（南瓜的故事让我明白，即使我们没有达到预期的结果，我们投入的时间和爱也能带来意想不到的回报和宝贵的教训。） In the end, I understood that the real victory lies in the hard work we put in and the bonds we build with others during the pursuit of our dreams.（最后，我明白了真正的胜利在于我们在追求梦想过程中付出的努力以及与他人建立的联系。） This adventure at the harvest fair made me see that every experience, whether it's a success or a disappointment, is a part of our growth, and we should cherish them all.（这次在收获集市的经历让我看到，每一次经历，无论是成功还是失望，都是我们成长的一部分，我们都应该珍惜。） 写作示范 示范一 After much hard work, we almost got the pumpkin in the truck. Just then, one of the truck's wheels sank into a small, hidden hole. The truck tilted suddenly, and the huge pumpkin slipped from our hands, rolling back to the ground with a thump. Kam exclaimed in horror, and Mom and I froze for a moment, worried that the pumpkin might be damaged. But we quickly sprang into action. Mom looked around and found some long wooden planks. We placed them against the truck to form a ramp. With a lot of pushing and pulling, and lots of grunts and shouts, we finally managed to roll the pumpkin up the ramp and into the truck safely. The next day at the harvest fair, Mom, Kam, and I won sixth prize in the zucchini competition. When they announced the winners of the biggest pumpkin contest, my heart was in my throat. But our Planet Pumpkin didn't win. At first, I was really disappointed. I had worked so hard for this. But then, as I looked at the zucchini prize and the faces of Mom and Kam, I realized something. The time we spent growing the plants, the fun we had working together, and the memories we created were far more important than a prize. I smiled, knowing that this harvest fair was a success in so many other ways. 示范二 After much hard work, we almost got the pumpkin in the truck. However, as we were about to lift it completely into the vehicle, the weight of the pumpkin caused the truck to shake. The back of the truck hit a rock, and the pumpkin slid off the edge. We all rushed to catch it, but it was too heavy. Just when we were at a loss, Kam had an idea. He ran to the nearby shed and brought back a pulley system. We attached it to the truck and carefully lifted the pumpkin again. With the help of the pulley, we managed to hoist the massive pumpkin into the truck without any damage. The next day at the harvest fair, Mom, Kam, and I won sixth prize in the zucchini competition. When the winner of the biggest pumpkin was announced, I felt a pang of sadness. But then, I thought about all the days I spent taking care of the pumpkin, watering it, and protecting it. I realized that the real value was in the journey. The zucchini prize was a bonus. I was proud of what we had achieved together. This harvest fair taught me that the process of creation and the company of family and friends are the real treasures in life. 【答案】参考范文： After much hard work, we almost got the pumpkin in the truck. But it hit the truck. It fell and made a mess on the ground. We were left feeling discouraged. But then I caught sight of something huge and dark green hiding under the leaves where Mom had grown her baby zucchini. It’s a big zucchini! It suddenly occurred to me that since the pumpkin was already bad, why not enter the zucchini competition? I shared my idea with Mom and Kam, and they could not agree more. The next day at the harvest fair, Mom, Kam, and I won sixth prize in the zucchini competition. As we returned home, excitement hung in the air. We came together in the kitchen and celebrated with pumpkin cakes and toasted seeds. We did not throw all the seeds away. I saved the fattest one to plant because next summer, I was going to grow an even bigger pumpkin. With hearts full of happiness, we look forward to the future and the possibilities that lie ahead in our garden. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$