读后续写--弗洛拉和祖父徒步旅行故事 讲义-2025届云南省大理州高中毕业生上学期第二次复习统一检测（二模）英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Flora liked nothing better than to spend time with her grandfather. You see, he was always making something and she enjoyed watching, learning, and sometimes even helping him finish whatever he was doing. Now, the two decided to go on a hike in the woods tomorrow. The next morning, Flora did not need an alarm to wake her. She was up, dressed, and ready to go as the sun rose and the day began. After a great breakfast and a long drive, Flora and her grandfather arrived at the base of a mountain and the beginning of the trail. “This is beautiful, ” Flora said. “Just where are we hiking? ” “To the very top of the mountain where we will have lunch, rest, maybe take a swim, and then hike back down, ” he replied. “Swim! ” Flora said excitedly. “Is there a lake on the top of the mountain? ” “Yes, ” her grandfather replied. “There is a lake surrounded by big flat rocks and it is filled with clear, cold water. ” “Wow! ” was all Flora could say. As they hiked up the mountain, Flora asked many, many questions. “What kind of tree is that? ” “How high are we? ” “Are there bears around here? ” “Are there any other people up here? ” “What do we do if we get lost? ” And of course: “Are we there yet? ” Her grandfather answered all her questions the best he could and explained that they were in a very natural area. Not many people, all sorts of wildlife, even bears. He helped her understand and respect the natural beauty around them, particularly the animals. He taught her how to use a compass, and things to help them be safer while they hiked. Like whistle a song or make some noise to let the bigger animals know you are in their area. In a soft voice, her grandfather said, “The Earth is our mother. All life is sacred; treat all life with respect. Take from the Earth what is needed and nothing more. Enjoy your journey but leave no tracks. 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150左右; (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: As they hiked a little farther, Flora saw the lake surrounded by rocks. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: Flora was sad when she heard her grandfather say, “It’s time to leave. ” _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 弗洛拉最喜欢和祖父共度时光，此次二人决定去树林徒步旅行。第二天一大早，弗洛拉就做好准备，和祖父到达山脚下开始登山。一路上弗洛拉问了许多问题，祖父耐心解答并传授她关于自然的知识以及徒步安全事项，还教导她尊重自然。当他们继续前行，弗洛拉看到了被岩石环绕的湖泊，为后续的经历埋下伏笔。 故事山分析 开头：弗洛拉和祖父计划并开启徒步旅行。 发展：徒步过程中弗洛拉不断提问，祖父传授知识和安全要点。 高潮：弗洛拉看到美丽的湖泊，尽情享受在湖边的时光。 结局：祖父告知要离开，弗洛拉虽不舍但在下山途中有所感悟。 尾声：回到山脚下，弗洛拉感谢祖父，认识到自然的教育意义。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 祖父说山顶有湖可以游泳：续写中弗洛拉看到湖后兴奋地游泳，实现了这一伏笔。 祖父强调尊重自然：续写中弗洛拉下山时反思，意识到保护自然的重要性，回应了这一教导。 弗洛拉喜欢和祖父在一起并参与他的活动：续写中她与祖父在湖边共享时光，下山后表达感谢，体现了这种亲密关系。 徒步过程中对自然景色和动物的描述：续写里在湖边看到鱼，以及感受自然声音，丰富了自然元素。 祖父传授使用指南针等安全知识：暗示了徒步可能遇到状况，虽然续写未直接体现使用，但体现了安全意识贯穿旅行。 续写要点 第一段：重点描述弗洛拉看到湖后的具体反应，如更细致的动作、语言和神态描写；详细描绘在湖边的活动，如午餐时的对话、游泳的具体感受等。 第二段：着重刻画弗洛拉不舍离开的心理活动，下山途中的回忆和思考更加深入，以及回到山下后与祖父进一步的情感交流。 情感线 一开始弗洛拉对徒步充满期待和兴奋，到达湖边时兴奋达到顶点，尽情享受快乐时光。听到要离开时，她满心不舍，在下山途中转为对这次经历的思考和感悟，最后回到山下对祖父充满感激，对自然有了更深的敬畏和热爱。 故事线 弗洛拉和祖父计划并开始徒步旅行。 徒步途中弗洛拉提问，祖父传授知识和安全要点。 弗洛拉看到湖泊，兴奋地亲近湖水、享受午餐和游泳。 祖父告知要离开，弗洛拉不舍。 下山途中弗洛拉反思旅行经历。 回到山脚下，弗洛拉感谢祖父，领悟自然的教育意义。 主旨升华句 Through this hike, Flora not only enjoyed the beauty of nature but also learned the profound truth of respecting and protecting our precious natural world.（通过这次徒步旅行，弗洛拉不仅欣赏到了自然之美，还学到了尊重和保护我们珍贵自然世界的深刻道理。） The journey with her grandfather was not just a physical hike but a spiritual exploration, awakening Flora's love and responsibility for nature.（与祖父的这次旅程不仅是一次身体上的徒步，更是一次心灵的探索，唤醒了弗洛拉对自然的热爱和责任感。） As Flora bid farewell to the mountain, she carried with her not only memories but also a new - found commitment to safeguard the wonders of nature.（当弗洛拉告别这座山时，她带走的不仅是回忆，还有对守护自然奇观的新承诺。） This adventure in the mountains taught Flora that nature is not just a backdrop for our lives but a teacher that imparts valuable lessons of respect and conservation.（这次山中探险让弗洛拉明白，自然不仅仅是我们生活的背景，更是一位传授尊重和保护宝贵经验的老师。） The hike was a transformative experience for Flora, turning her from a mere observer of nature to a passionate advocate for its preservation.（这次徒步旅行对弗洛拉来说是一次变革性的经历，使她从一个单纯的自然观察者变成了一个热情的自然保护倡导者。） 写作示范一 Paragraph 1: As they hiked a little farther, Flora saw the lake surrounded by rocks. Her eyes widened in amazement, and she let out a gasp of wonder. "Grandpa, it's like a hidden gem!" she exclaimed, her voice filled with awe. Without hesitation, she sprinted towards the lake, her feet crunching on the gravel path. Reaching the shore, she quickly shed her backpack and shoes, plunging her toes into the icy water. A shiver ran through her body, but the thrill of the coolness was too tempting to resist. Her grandfather followed leisurely, a warm smile on his face. They sat on the rocks, their legs dangling in the water, and Flora chattered non - stop about the fish she spotted darting beneath the surface. After a while, they spread out the picnic blanket and feasted on sandwiches, sharing stories and laughter. Then, Flora dived into the lake, her laughter echoing across the water as she splashed and swam, feeling completely free. Paragraph 2: Flora was sad when she heard her grandfather say, “It’s time to leave.” Her shoulders slumped, and she looked around longingly, her eyes lingering on the lake and the surrounding mountains. "Do we really have to go?" she asked, her voice tinged with disappointment. But she knew there was no choice. On the way down, she was lost in thought, replaying every moment of the adventure in her mind. She remembered the way the sunlight filtered through the trees, the songs of the birds, and her grandfather's wise words. As they reached the base of the mountain, she turned to her grandfather, her eyes shining with gratitude. "Grandpa, this was the best day ever. I'll always remember it, and I'll do my best to protect nature," she said earnestly. Her grandfather patted her head affectionately. "I'm proud of you, dear. Nature will always be here for you to explore, as long as we take care of it." 写作示范二 Paragraph 1: As they hiked a little farther, Flora saw the lake surrounded by rocks. A huge smile spread across her face, and she jumped up and down in excitement. "Finally! We made it!" she shouted, her hands clenched in fists of joy. She ran towards the lake, her ponytail bouncing behind her. Once at the edge, she crouched down and gently touched the water, watching the ripples spread out. Her grandfather joined her, and they sat on a flat rock, taking in the peaceful scenery. Flora pointed to a family of ducks swimming gracefully on the lake and exclaimed, "Look, Grandpa! Aren't they cute?" They had their lunch, savoring the sandwiches while listening to the soft rustling of the leaves in the wind. After lunch, Flora changed into her swimsuit and dived into the lake, feeling the cold water envelop her body. She swam around, exploring every corner of the small lake, feeling like a mermaid in her own little world. Paragraph 2: Flora was sad when she heard her grandfather say, “It’s time to leave.” She bit her lip, trying to hold back the tears. "Can't we stay just a little longer?" she pleaded. But she knew it was getting late. On the way down, she walked slowly, looking at the plants and trees, as if trying to memorize every detail. She thought about how much she had learned about nature today. When they reached the bottom, she hugged her grandfather tightly. "Thank you, Grandpa. This hike has made me realize how important nature is. I'll never take it for granted," she said. Her grandfather smiled warmly. "That's what I hoped you'd learn, dear. Nature is our greatest treasure." 【答案】As they hiked a little farther, Flora saw the lake surrounded by rocks. Marveling at the surroundings, she sped to the lakeside, where her grandfather and she enjoyed their sandwiches. The sunshine, filtering through the branches, danced on the water and warmed Flora’s heart. This natural leisure doubled her childlike delight. “I must be dreaming! ” Flora exclaimed. The brisk breeze patted their cheeks and immersed them in the sounds of nature. Flora was so enchanted that she forgot the time. Flora was sad when she heard her grandfather say, “It’s time to leave. ” A wave of loss swept over Flora. She walked slowly, with her lip dropping. Her grandfather tenderly stroked her hair, “Dear, we can visit this beautiful place next time! ” A question suddenly emerged in Flora’s mind. “Why is the most beautiful scenery always so far away? ” Grandfather’s response resonated with Flora, “in remote areas, beauty often appears more enchanting; because it’s untouched by human presence. That’s why we ought to live in harmony with nature. ” As the twilight approached, they descended the hill with joyful strides, carrying a bag of rubbish to keep the mountain clean. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$