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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落的开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My dad helped me build a tree house in our backyard. My sister was at camp for three whole weeks and I was on the best baseball team in town. It was all good until Jeremy Ross moved into the neighborhood. I did not like Jeremy Ross. He laughed at me when he struck me out in a baseball game. He had a party on his trampoline (蹦床) but I wasn’t even invited. Jeremy Ross was the only person on my enemy list. I never even had an enemy list until he moved into the neighborhood. I hung the list up in my tree house, where Jeremy Ross was not allowed to go. My dad told me that when he was my age he had enemies too. But he knew a good way to get rid of them. I asked him to tell me how. “I’ll show you how!” he said. He pulled a really old recipe book off the kitchen shelf. Inside, there was a worn-out scrap of paper with faded writing. “Enemy Pie,” he said, satisfied. I was wondering what exactly is in Enemy Pie. But Dad said the recipe was so secret. I begged him to tell me something or anything. “I’ll tell you this,” he said. “Enemy Pie is the fastest known way to get rid of enemies.” This got my mind working. What kinds of things — disgusting things — would I put into a pie for an enemy? When Dad was preparing for the pic, I brought Dad some weeds, earthworms and rocks, but he didn’t think he needed those. I went out to play alone. I shot baskets until the ball got stuck on the roof. And all the while, I listened to the sounds of my dad chopping and stirring and blending the ingredients of Enemy Pie. I thought the Enemy Pie must be the most awful thing in the world. To my surprise, I smelled something really good. I asked Dad what was wrong. Enemy Pie shouldn’t smell this good. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But Dad told me: “In order for it to work, you need to spend a day with your enemy. Even worse, you have to be nice to him.” _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We played games delightedly until my Dad called us for dinner. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 文章讲述了 “我” 不喜欢新搬来的邻居 Jeremy Ross，因为他在棒球比赛中三振 “我” 还嘲笑 “我”，开派对也不邀请 “我”，“我” 把他列在敌人名单上。爸爸告诉 “我” 他有个去除敌人的好办法 —— 制作敌人派，“我” 好奇敌人派里有什么，还为爸爸找来杂草、蚯蚓和石头，但爸爸没用。制作过程中，“我” 以为敌人派会很难闻，结果却闻到很香的味道。 故事山分析 开头：Jeremy Ross 搬来，成为 “我” 的敌人，“我” 把他列在敌人名单上。 发展：爸爸说有去除敌人的办法，要制作敌人派，“我” 好奇派的成分，为爸爸找材料，制作时闻到香味。 高潮：爸爸告知吃敌人派的条件，“我” 要和敌人相处一天且对他友好。 结局：和 Jeremy Ross 相处后关系改变，吃敌人派化解了矛盾。 尾声：明白友好能消除敌意，收获友谊。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 爸爸说有去除敌人的办法：在续写中通过制作和吃敌人派体现这个办法的作用。 “我” 对敌人派成分的好奇：续写中会揭晓敌人派其实是普通美味的派，回应好奇。 制作时闻到香味：暗示敌人派并非想象中糟糕，为后面与 Jeremy Ross 友好相处吃派做铺垫。 Jeremy Ross 是 “我” 唯一敌人：续写中通过与他相处，改变关系，解决 “敌人” 问题。 爸爸的神秘配方：最后发现配方就是友好待人，化解矛盾。 续写要点 第一段：接到爸爸要和敌人相处一天且友好的要求，内心挣扎后去找 Jeremy Ross，描述见面时的尴尬和如何开始友好交流互动。 第二段：和 Jeremy Ross 玩得开心，回家吃晚餐，发现敌人派是美味的苹果派，吃完后和 Jeremy Ross 成为朋友，领悟友好的力量。 情感线 一开始对 Jeremy Ross 充满敌意，得知要和他友好相处时内心挣扎，相处过程中逐渐放下敌意，玩得开心，最后吃完敌人派后彻底消除敌意，收获友谊，感受到友好带来的温暖和快乐。 故事线 爸爸提出制作敌人派去除敌人的办法。 “我” 好奇敌人派成分并找材料。 制作时闻到香味感到疑惑。 爸爸告知吃派条件，“我” 内心挣扎后去找 Jeremy Ross。 和 Jeremy Ross 友好相处，玩得开心。 回家吃敌人派，成为朋友，领悟友好的力量。 主旨升华句 True friendship can turn enemies into friends, and kindness is the key to unlock the door of the heart.（真正的友谊能把敌人变成朋友，善良是打开心灵之门的钥匙。） Through this experience, I realized that a friendly smile and a warm heart can dissolve any hostility.（通过这次经历，我意识到一个友好的微笑和一颗温暖的心可以化解任何敌意。） Enemies are not born, but created by our own narrow - mindedness. Only by opening our hearts can we build bridges instead of walls.（敌人不是天生的，而是由我们自己的狭隘造成的。只有敞开心扉，我们才能架起桥梁而非筑起高墙。） In the journey of life, friendship is a precious treasure, and we should use kindness to cultivate it instead of hostility to destroy it.（在人生的旅途中，友谊是珍贵的宝藏，我们应该用善良去培育它，而不是用敌意去破坏它。） This encounter taught me that the most powerful weapon against enemies is not revenge, but love and understanding.（这次经历教会我，对抗敌人最强大的武器不是报复，而是爱与理解。） 写作示范一 But Dad told me: “In order for it to work, you need to spend a day with your enemy. Even worse, you have to be nice to him.” I was shocked. Spending a day with Jeremy Ross? Being nice to him? That was impossible! But the thought of getting rid of him as an enemy was so appealing. After much hesitation, I dragged my feet to Jeremy’s house. When he opened the door, he looked surprised. I awkwardly invited him to play with me. At first, we were both a bit stiff. But as we started playing catch, the ice gradually melted. We laughed and joked, and I found he wasn't as annoying as I thought. We played games delightedly until my Dad called us for dinner. When we entered the house, the smell of the pie filled the air. I was still wondering what was in the Enemy Pie. To my astonishment, it was an apple pie, a delicious one. We sat at the table, enjoying the pie. After that day, Jeremy Ross was no longer on my enemy list. We became good friends, and I realized that kindness could turn an enemy into a friend. 写作示范二 But Dad told me: “In order for it to work, you need to spend a day with your enemy. Even worse, you have to be nice to him.” I groaned inwardly. This was going to be the hardest thing I had ever done. However, I really wanted to get rid of my “enemy”. So, I plucked up my courage and went to Jeremy's place. He seemed suspicious at first when I asked him to hang out. But when I showed my friendly smile, he agreed. We went to the park and rode our bikes together. Slowly, I found that we had a lot in common. We played games delightedly until my Dad called us for dinner. As we sat down to eat, Dad served the Enemy Pie. I took a bite, and it was amazing. Jeremy also praised the pie. After finishing the pie, Jeremy and I looked at each other and laughed. From that day on, our enmity was gone. I learned that friendship is more precious than grudges, and a little kindness can make a big difference. 【答案】One possible version： But Dad told me: “In order for it to work, you need to spend a day with your enemy. Even worse, you have to be nice to him.” It sounded incredible and awkward but thinking that I could get rid of this enemy forever, I resolved to meet him. After greeting and chatting, we were able to have fun together. He told me how to play on his trampoline and when we climbed up on the roof to get the stuck ball, Jeremy noticed my tree house. He asked whether he could go into the house. Considering I should be nice to him, I said okay to him. But I climbed up ahead of him and tore the enemy list off the wall. Time passed fleetly in our laughter. We played games delightedly until my Dad called us for dinner. As was predicted Dad brought out the pie. But at this point, I didn’t think Jeremy was my enemy anymore. He was eager to eat the delicious pie. I panicked and shouted: “Jimmy, don’t eat it! I think it’s poisonous or something!” He looked at me curiously. “If it’s so bad,” Jeremy asked, “then why has your Dad already eaten half of it?” I turned to my Dad and he was eating Enemy Pie! Although I was still confused about the pie, what seemed obvious was that from that day on, I had lost my enemy forever and had a new close friend! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$