读后续写专题之亲情 课件-2025届高三下学期英语二轮复习专项

读后续写 之亲情 立中心 阿甘正传(个人成长类) 从挫折中站起来的励志故事: 毅力perseverence 坚持persistence 耐心patience 梦想dream/ambition/goal决心determination 家有儿女(与家人朋友宠物之间关系) 和谐harmony 有爱love 温暖warmth 感动touch 雷锋故事(好人好事) 助人为乐helpful 被帮助者的感恩gratitude 奥特曼/汪汪队(危险中的救助) 保持冷静keep calm 勇敢brave 抗争struggle/fight 胜利得救manage to be saved 四部电影教会你立中心 亲情无价 亲情类题材的续写 1. 通常包含父母之恩、子女之牵挂、兄弟姐妹之情、夫妻之爱、家人之鼓励、长辈之关爱等内容 2. 也有可能涉及误会、犯错、理念不合等导致亲人之间的冲突的，需要通过解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等来化解矛盾，用感恩、温暖、珍惜亲情、触动心灵等进行主题升华。 续写第一步：读快读准 侦探式阅读 1. 分析所给两段首句内容，获得文章内容提示 2. 段首句中不懂部分，去文章中寻找答案 带着问题有目的去阅读（5W1H) P1:  The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. P2:  We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Possible questions: Why did we forget the brand-new tent? what happened yesterday? What does “we” refer to? Where did we go? A vacation with my mother I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother — loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh … I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections (反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. ____________________________________________ Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.___________________________________________ 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 5 A vacation with my mother I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. 原文分析 标题作用：直观引起主题 惊讶和快乐的童年 健忘的妈妈 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 6 My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten. 原文分析 我和父母出去旅游。 妈妈健忘的具体事件。 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 7 David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:” You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances. 原文分析 讲述妈妈经常忘事的烦恼。 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 8 On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections. If a strange family showed upon her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 原文分析 好不容易找到了旅馆。 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 9 在旅途趣事中的亲情和爱 人与社会 人物分析 情节发展 主题语境 主 旨 续写第二步：立中心 We started our journey driving to visit our grandparents. unhappy We had to returned home and then drove off again. fearful We had trouble finding a vacancy to spend the night. worried 续写部分 续写部分 续写第三步： 析情节 本文情节线 setting 环境 rising action 发展 falling action 结局 climax 高潮 爸爸妈妈带着我和David开车去祖父母外祖父母家。 由于妈妈健忘，我们出发后又回来取钱包。 我们没有找到有空房的旅馆。 妈妈提议露营，爸爸拒绝了妈妈的提议，我们松了一口气。 resolution 解决 ending 尾声 续写部分 续写部分 12 本文情感线 setting 环境 rising action 发展 falling action 结局 climax 高潮 and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. David and I were always a little nervous when ... David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. resolution 解决 ending 尾声 续写部分 续写部分 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 续写第四步：情节构建 14 14 故事类型 矛盾转折式 (给出/没给出需要写出来) 3个词：矛盾 转变诱因 转变 (起因过程结果) 注意：不要负面太多，不要写大吵大闹打架 直线上升式 4个词：行动 进展 结果 升华(起因过程结果) 历年高考英语读后续写真题分析 15 Paragraph 1 Paragraph 1 ：  The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. 起因：妈妈提议宿营。我们同意。 过程：我们找到了宿营地，妈妈却忘了带枕头。 结果：没有枕头睡在了帐篷里。 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 16 Paragraph 2 Paragraph 2 ：  We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. 起因+过程：沿路美好风景 结尾：到了目的地 中心：看到的风景和可爱的妈妈 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 17 模版构思 Paragraph 1: 妈妈提议宿营 (情绪+语言模版) 我们的回应（连动动作模版） 我们找到了宿营地（情节推进） 妈妈又忘了东西（对话模版） Paragraph 2: 美丽的风景（延展句子：概述+例子模版) 结尾（情节推进） 中心（not only but also 并列模版） 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 18 Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. 1. 妈妈提议宿营 (情绪+语言模版) With a thrilled look, Mom insisted that we should make full use of it and find a nice camping place. 2. 我们的回应（动作模版） David and I looked at Dad, who smiled and nodded in agreement. 3. 我们找到了宿营地（情节推进） Then we spent a whole afternoon seeking a nice camping place and finally set up our tent before night fell. 4. 妈妈又忘了东西（对话模版） “Oh, I forgot the pillows!” Mom screamed. With a comforting smile on his face, dad suggested that we sleep in the tent without pillows for a night and perhaps we could an unforgettable night. 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 19 Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. 1. 美丽的风景（延展句子：概述+例子模版) We were amazed at all the gorgeous scenery and attractive sights— the limitless green grass, the wandering sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars at night. 2. 结尾 Eventually, we arrived at our grandparents’ places, all four of us and not a single one left behind. 3. 中心（not only but also 并列模版） Not only did we enjoy the picturesque scenery, but we were also happy to have forgetful and absent-minded Mom around, who brought lots of laughter to our trip. 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 20 Steps 1. 读快读准（读段首两句子 -带着目的问题去阅读 2. 立中心 (四部电影) 3. 析情节与情感线(故事山) 4. 构建情节( 矛盾转折式+直线上升式) 5. 句式描写 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 21 Homework 1. 完成亲情第二篇读后续写 要求：按部就班完成前四个步骤 英语基础中等偏上：全英文 英语基础偏薄弱：可用中文 英语很OK：直接完成五个步骤(only English) 2. 18:35-18:55刷CD阅读(精挑细选) 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 22 $$