高考题型5 应用文写作(知识必备)-2025年高考英语艺术生文化课考前100天

5.that解析：考查强调句。此处为强调句型“1twas十被强调部 5.We are desperately in need of your help;I will e-mail you 分十that十句子其他部分”，被强调的是句中的时间状语。故 our training plan soon,hoping you can offer some 填that。 constructive suggestions regarding it 第三部分 题型策略篇 三、I.l.First,Next:After that:What's more 高考题型五应用文写作 2.As far as I know:For example:Furthermore:Eventually 3.First and foremost:Additionally;Last but certainly not 板块一文章营造亮点 least [对点练] 4.First of all/To begin with:Therefore I.1.Of all the traditional Chinese festivals,I like Mid-Autumn 5.On the one hand;On the other hand Festival best./There are a lot of traditional festivals in 6.In a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief China,of which I like Mid-Autumn Festival best. Il.1.For one thing 2.For another thing 3.Meanwhile 2.Chinese people have been celebrating Mid-Autumn Festival 4.Personally 5.above all 6.Besides 7.In a word for centuries and I like it best. Ⅲ.l,First of all II.1.How I wish I would really have such a superpower. 2.which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings 2.If I had such a superpower,I would do more to help the 3.having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings people on the earth live happily. 4.Last but not least 板块二合理想象、扩充句式 四、L,Dear Fellow Students, [对点练] As we all know,the electric bike is the most -1.To begin with;focusing on the topics appealing to teenagers commonly used and the most practical traffic tool for most 2.As a matter of fact;we are taking advantage of various people in their life. online programs for further study,which allow us to learn At present our city is carrying out a campaign,the knowledge wherever we are at any time,making it easier content of which is that anyone who is riding an electric to earn a degree bike must wear a helmet.The purpose of the campaign is 3.who is crazy about reading,learning and helping other to mitigate the consequence of such a traffic accident and people.There is no doubt that there are many things that I reduce the death rate in an accident. can learn from him My appeal is that all our students riding electric bikes 4.As we all know;many music masterpieces will be played by should wear helmets for the safety of themselves and a famous band other people.After all,life is more precious than any 5.What's more,with a good command of English;which other thing. allows me to communicate smoothly with British Yours sincerely, painting lovers Li Hua 6.which will greatly help us students know the school's Il.Dear Sir/Madam, history better and appeal to us to make contributions to our I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from China, school's development who is studying in London in summer holiday.I'm writing 7.which has become the new landmark in our school:in which to apply to be a volunteer of the exhibition of traditional table tennis,football as well as running competitions enjoy Chinese paintings at the local art museum.Here are my great popularity advantages. 二，l,Seeing the determination in his eyes First of all,I am greatly interested in paintings.I 2.We can not only read news at home and abroad,but also have received some professional trainings in my spare get information,send emails and attend online schools time,hoping that I can work as a painter in the future. 3.what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility More importantly,I consider it a good chance to spread and it makes us stronger and more determined;When faced Chinese culture and develop my ability.So I think I am with the difficulties and failures,I must overcome them highly qualified for the job.I would be very grateful if you 4.It will last two and a half hours;we will be fully absorbed could give me a chance. in the attractive and fascinating performances;we will sit Looking forward to your reply. on the grass and enjoy the tasty food and drinks provided Yours, by sponsors;we also expect to see you on the stage then Li Hua 一9 板块三升级词汇和句式 板块二如何营造高潮 [对点练] [对点练] I.1.difficult-challenging 1.All of a sudden,she hears a bark coming from around 2.develop-promote the corner 3.bear→out up with 2.The coach has posted a list of this year's team members on his 4.fmet→came across office door 5.decided--determined/made up his mind 3.They call Mary and her sister down to talk with them about 6.causes"gives rise to their decision 7.bored with--fed up with 4.She waits anxiously to hear the names of the winners;And first 8.More and more An increasing number of place goes to John 9.didn't listen to-turned a deaf ear to 板块三如何描写情绪与情感 10.I thought of an ideaI came up with an idea/an idea [对点练] occurred to me 1.lit up the whole room II.1.My favorite hobby is reading books and newspapers,which 2.was delighted at have become a necessary part of my daily life. 3.shone like diamonds;in a steady smile 2.What impressed me most was that they had had 4.She burst into tears professional training. 5.hiding her face in her hands 3.Having practiced playing basketball for almost two 6.made me extremely annoyed months,we strongly desired to be the winner. 7.get mad at me 4.It was not until I met you that I knew real happiness. 8.suddenly grew serious 5.So cold was the weather that we had to stay at home. 板块四如何描写心理 6.Not until the river was seriously polluted did the local [对点练] government realize the problem. 1.grew wide with horror 2.greatly annoyed 7.It's time that we took/should take measures to protect 3.looked at me,open-mouthed endangered animals. 4.beyond his expectation 8.Approaching the city center,we saw a stone statue of 板块五如何描写环境 about 10 meters in height. [对点练] 9.They are not only experienced and knowledgeable,but also 1.the rain had stopped patient and understanding. 2.on that stormy night 10.We think it very important to speak more English. 3.Snow covered everything 高考题型六读后续写 4.enjoying the spring sunshine 板块一如何写好读后续写的开头 5.it grew hotter and hotter [对点练] 6.walking alone on the beach 1.Unable to say a word 7.a village among the hills 2.Feeling refreshed 8.stands on a rock 3.At the sight of the snake 9.The lake is situated at 4.The cave was dark 5.Have you ever been on a self-driving trip “课时作业”答案及解析 第一部分词汇复习篇 5.regularly 6.tired 7.helpful 话题一学校生活 II.1.into 2.in 3.in 4.for 5.on 6.with 第一组 II.1.has acquired 2.amused 3.appealed 4.bored 5.decided 6.was devoted 7.Exhausted 8.have gained I.1.preparations 2.amusement 3.energetic 4.exhausted 一10艺术生文化课考前100天英语 高考题型五 应用文写作 板块一 文章营造亮点 3.说明文的常用开头法 一、引人入胜的开头 (1)点明中心法—开门见山点明所要介 开头一般来说要做到开门见山，使读者了 绍的事物 解要写什么，最好能立刻吸引读者的兴趣。下 (2021·新高考全国I卷书面表达)For the 面介绍几种开头的常见写法： 10th Anniversary of Youth,as a fan of Youth, 1.书信的常用开头法 I want to share my reading experience. (2022·新高考全国I卷写作)I am Li 在《青春》十周年之际，作为《青春》的粉丝， Hua,in charge of the English programme 我想和大家分享我的阅读经历。 “Talk and Talk”of our School Broadcasting (2)引入数据法—运用数据引出所要论 Station. 证的主题 我是李华，负责我们学校广播电台的英语 A recent study shows that more than 40% 节目“Talk and Talk”。 of the students don't have breakfast. (2021·全国乙卷书面表达)It's a great 最近的研究表明，有超过40%的学生不吃 honour for me to stand here and address my 早饭。 speech titled“Be smart online learners'” 4.议论文的常用开头法 我很荣幸站在这里发表题为“成为聪明的 (1)点明主题法一提出一个观点或论据 在线学习者”的演讲。 作为文章要阐明或论述的主题 2.记叙文的常用开头法 (江苏卷书面表达)Li Jiang and Su Hua are (1)故事背景法一交代人物、事件、时间、 discussing what to wear when receiving the 地点、背景等 British students next month.Li recommends (北京卷书面表达)A week before Earth the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers Day,posters were put up around our school, the school uniform. calling upon us to join in the actions for a 李江和苏华正在讨论下个月接待英国学生 greener earth. 时穿什么。李推荐中国传统服装，而苏更喜欢 地球日的前一周我们学校贴了很多海报， 校服。 号召我们加入绿化地球的行动中。 (2)引用名言法一一摘录或引用某些名人 (2)往事追忆法一回忆过去发生的某 的名言或常见的习语、谚语作为文章的开头 件事 When it comes to how to succeed,many (2020·新高考全国I卷写作)Last Sunday people may think of the proverb "Where there witnessed an extraordinary cross-country is a will,there is a way. running race,which nearly drew the attention 当谈及如何成功时，很多人或许会想起谚 of every student and teacher of our school. 语“有志者，事竞成”。 上星期天，我们学校举行了一场非同寻常 (3)列举实例法—通过一个实例或现象 的越野赛跑，几乎引起了全校师生的注意。 引出话题 182 第三部分题型策略篇 Three years ago,I failed an important 2.记叙文的常用结尾法 exam in my life and became a student in an (1)主题升华法 ordinary school. My experience tells me that it is not what 三年前，我在人生的一次重要考试中失利， you are given but how you make use of it that 成为普通学校的一名学生。 determines who you are. 5.图画作文的常用开头法 我的经历告诉我：不是你被给予了什么，而 描述图画法一描写图画内容，为下文做 是你怎样利用它决定你成为什么样的人。 好铺垫 (2)问题设问法一一通过问答形式总结 What is illustrated in the picture is that 全文 parents expect too much from their child and Isn't it a pleasure to have great calm in try every means to encourage her to work mind while you are reading? harder.However,the daughter feels unhappy, 你在阅读时，内心非常平静不是一种快 or rather more stressed. 乐吗？ 图画里描述的是父母对孩子怀有很高的期 3.说明文的常用结尾法 望，想尽一切办法鼓励她更加努力学习。然而， 总结全文法—一总结说明的事物，进一步 女儿感到伤心，更确切地说，压力更大了。 说明其特征 二、回味无穷的结尾 In a word,changes in our life in the past 结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调中心思 twenty years have brought us convenience and 想、升华主题的作用。主要有以下写法： comfort. 1.书信的常用结尾法 总之，在过去20年里我们生活中的变化给 (1)表示感谢法 我们带来了便利和舒适。 (浙江卷书面表达)Thanks again and wish 4.议论文的常用结尾法 you a pleasant journey home. (1)得出结论法—结尾总结全文，得出 再次感谢你，祝你回家旅途愉快。 结论 (2)表示期待法 (江苏卷书面表达)So the school uniforms (2022·浙江卷书面表达)At last,I hope are a better choice than the traditional Chinese our friendship will last forever.Looking dress for such an occasion. forward to your early reply. 因此，在这样的场合，与传统的中国服装相 最后，我希望我们的友谊将永远长存。期 比，校服是更好的选择。 待您早日回复 (2)深化中心法一结尾进一步深化主题 (2021·新高考全国I卷书面表达)1 In reality,we should learn from the black sincerely hope that Youth can make new pencil:not to mind what others say so long as progress and that more readers will participate we are confident in what we have done. in the interaction and share their own stories. 事实上，我们应该向这支黑色铅笔学习：只 我衷心希望《青春》能有新的进步，希望更 要我们对自己做过的事情有信心，就不要去介 多的读者参与互动，分享自己的故事。 意别人说什么。 183 艺术生文化课考前100天英语 (3)提出建议法一结尾提出建议以及应 你的打算。 对措施 I have been dreaming of having a I think all of us should mind our behavior superpower since my childhood. in public places.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings. 1.首尾呼应式： 我认为，我们都应该注意自己在公共场合 的行为。只有这样我们才能生活在更舒服和美 2.画龙点睛式： 丽的环境中。 (4)引用名言法—一结尾用名言总结全文 板块二 合理想象、扩充句式 Anyhow,different cultures,different customs.If you "Do as the Romans do when in 一、添加成分 Rome",you will enjoy more your stay here. 高考英语书面表达不仅规定了写作内容， 不管怎么说，不同的文化就有不同的习俗。 还明确规定了词数，并在评分标准中指出，如果 如果你能“人乡随俗”，你就会更好地享受这里 “词数少于60和多于120的，从总分中减去2 的生活。 分”。但在实际阅卷过程中，如果词数过少，扣 (5)照应开头法—一结尾对开头进行照应 掉的不只是2分。因为篇幅过短，不能吸引阅 Different ways of traveling can make 卷老师细看以便查找诸如“高级词汇”“较高级 people happy,but I like traveling by train 结构”等加分点，自然影响得分档次。 most. 在试题“注意”中有明确规定：“1.词数80 不同的旅行方式都能让人愉快，但是我最 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯”。 喜欢乘火车旅行。 这里既规定了词数，又指定了充实文章的方法， 【对点练】 即“适当增加细节”。“适当增加细节”中很重要 I.根据要求，为下面的话题写作设计一个 的一个方法就是—一追加成分。 开头段 在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加 假设你是李华，你们学校校报新开设的栏 成分，如定语（从句）、状语（从句）（如目的、条 目“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Festival” 件、原因、结果、方式等)、非谓语结构、独立主格 正在开展征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文并 结构、举例等，使表达更丰满，内容更充实，主题 投稿。 更突出。 1.开门见山式： 【典例】(2020·全国卷Ⅱ写作) 1.(介绍农场情况)这个农场的农作物种类 2.概括式： 繁多。 There are a wide range of crops in the Ⅱ.根据要求及首段内容，为下面的话题写 farm. 作设计一个结尾段 -The farm,located in the suburb of our 假如你是李华，你有一种超能力，那么你将 city,has a wide range of crops such as 用它来做什么呢？请用英语写一篇短文，说一下 vegetables and fruit. 184 第三部分题型策略篇 【分析】加黑部分是根据语境所追加的成 也是能否获得评委青睐的因素之一。适当增加 分，“located in the suburb of our city”介绍了农 与所给信息相关的时间、原因、结果、条件、目的 场位于城市郊区；“such as vegetables and fruit'” 等成分来表达细节内容，能够使写作流畅、丰 举例说明农场里有蔬莱和水果，适当增加细节， 满，达到应有的表达效果。 使表达更丰满，内容更充实。 【对点练】 2.(提醒演讲参赛选手)要守时、守纪律、讲 请发挥合理想象，拓展句子（请注意括号内 卫生。 提供的语境) Please arrive there on time,keep quiet and 1.(2022·新高考全国I卷写作)（访谈话 don't litter around. 题介绍)我们的课程致力于提高学生对国内和 -Please arrive there on time,for whoever 国际事务的理解。 is late won't be allowed to enter.It's bad manners to litter around.And always keep our programme is committed to quiet while waiting for your turn. enhancing students'understanding of domestic 【分析】原句虽然没有直译所给要点，且 and international affairs. 灵活化解了难点，但过于直白、语气较为生硬； 2.(2021·全国乙卷书面表达)（举例说明） 而改写后的句子则进行了拓展，具体明确。“or 互联网的快速发展使我们受益匪浅。 whoever is late..”提醒参赛选手迟到后果的 we benefit 严重性；“It's bad manners,.”是用it作形式 a lot from the rapid pace of the Internet 主语的句型，指出乱扔东西为不礼貌行为： development.For example, “while waiting for your turn”是状语从句的省 略形式，对主句进行补充说明。因此，改写后的 3.(2020·全国卷I书面表达)（描述李华 句子更充实，更适宜对参赛选手提建议的语境。 的品质)我身边最值得尊敬的人是我最好的 3.(演讲注意事项)要面带微笑；要讲慢些， 朋友。 讲清楚。 For me,the most respectable person Be sure to wear a smile on your face. round me is my best friend Li Hua,a 17-year Besides,remember to speak slowly and clearly. old teenager currently studying in my class, Be sure to wear a smile on your face when you speak,which will make you relaxed. 4.(2019·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)（告知将举 Besides,remember to speak slowly and clearly 办音乐节)我们学校音乐厅将举办一场中国古 so that you can leave a good impression on the 典音乐会。 audience and judges. there is a Chinese 【分析】加黑部分是根据语境所追加的成 classical music concert that will be held in the 分，“which will make you relaxed”指出演讲时 music hall of our school on November 8th. 微笑的好处；“so that you can..”为“讲慢些， According to the concert poster, 讲清楚”的目的，留下好印象是演讲效果之一， 185 艺术生文化课考前100天英语 5.(2019·全国卷I书面表达)（介绍语言 The plot of the tragic story is about Lady 能力)克服语言障碍。 Meng Jiang and her husband. I can overcome -The plot of the tragic story is about the language barrier, Lady Meng Jiang and her husband,who lived 6.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)（通知学校 more than 2,000 years ago in ancient China. 放映电影)这部英文短片主要与我们学校的发 (背景渲染) 展有关。 ②(2021·浙江卷)我妈妈紧紧地抱着我。 The short English film is mainly related to My mom hugged me tightly. the development of our school, A little surprised at what I said,my mom hugged me tightly.(心理描写) 7.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)（介绍学校 ③(2022·新高考全国I卷)我紧紧地拥抱 新体育馆)新体育馆已经建立起来，可在里面举 着他。 行许多运动项目。 I hugged him firmly. To begin with,a new stadium has been I hugged him firmly,patting his back built up, Moreover,with gently.(动作描写) the stadium set up,a wide range of sports 3.增加相关信息的时间、地点、对象等内容 events are able to be held, ①(2021·浙江卷写作)为了丰富学生的课 二、补加语句 余生活，我校正在举办学生国画展。 1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明 In order to enrich students'after-school ①(2020·新高考全国I卷写作)整个路程 life,an exhibition of students'traditional 非常困难。 Chinese paintings is being held by our school. The whole course was extremely difficult. In order to enrich students'after-school -The whole course was extremely life,an exhibition of students'traditional difficult,especially the part near the mountain, Chinese paintings is being held by our school, narrow and rough. which sparks a growing love for traditional art. ②我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。 (增加对象)》 I'd like to seek a pen pal who is interested ②我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。 in traveling just like me. I have taken with me the two books you I'd like to seek a pen pal who is asked me to return. interested in traveling just like me.If possible, -I have taken with me the two books you we can travel together or share traveling asked me to return to the City Library.(增加 experiences. 地点) 2.增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理 ③我要和父母一起去超市购物。 描写以及背景渲染等内容 I'm going to do some shopping with my ①(2020·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)这个悲剧故 parents in the supermarket. 事的情节是关于孟姜女和她的丈夫的。 I'm going to do some shopping with my 186 第三部分题型策略篇 parents in the supermarket and won't be back 4.(2019·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)（介绍音乐 until about5:00 in the afternoon.(增加时间) 节的情况)As scheduled,the festival will start 【典例】 at 9:00 am on August 15th. 1.(提醒观众注意)要按时进入电影院。 Additionally, Be sure to enter the theater on time. And at the same -Be sure to enter the theater on time. time Whoever is late will miss the splendid opening. Furthermore, 【分析】要点句为简单句，补加复合句 5.(2018·天津卷书面表达)（邀请他参加 “Whoever is late,.”,通过指出迟到后果的方 比赛的原因) So as 式引起观众的注意，同时，也使得句式多样，表 the group leader,I sincerely invite you to join 达丰富多彩。 us.I am convinced that with our joint efforts 2.(谈论善款用途)慈善募集来的钱将送给 we can undoubtedly get good results.What's 最急需的人。 more, The money collected in the charity sale 三、增加过渡 will be sent to those in great need. 增加过渡是常见的“增加细节”的方法，过 The money collected in the charity sale 渡性词语和过渡性语句的使用是语言连贯性得 will be sent to those in great need.This will not 以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间、段与段 only help them get through difficulties,but 之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡（连接）性 also give them warmth and happiness. 词语，通过合理过渡，可实现语句间的衔接顺 【分析】通过并列句来增加“较复杂结 畅。这就需要考生在日常学习中积累背诵常用 构”，同时也是上一句衍生的“效果”：帮助他们 的过渡词。例如：表示列举的firstly,secondly, 战胜困难，还给予他们温暖和幸福。 thirdly,finally;表示自己看法的as far as I'm 【对点练】 concerned,from my point of view,in my 请适当补加语句，充实下面写作片段 opinion;表示转折的on the contrary,however, 1.(2022·新高考全国I卷写作)（动作描 every coin has two sides等。 写) 【典例】 wiped the tears on his cheeks,promising to 1.(话题：家长用车接送学生引起校门口拥 keep him company until the end of the Our traffic department should strengthen competition. management to make the parents obey traffic 2.(互联网的好处)The Internet is playing rules.Our school should appeal to us students a more and more important part in our daily to walk or ride a bike to and from school, life. which is not only friendly to our traffic 3.(2020·天津卷书面表达)（对成人礼活 environment but also is good for students' 动的感受) health. Through the activity, -In my opinion,the problem can be solved from two aspects.On the one hand,our 187 艺术生文化课考前100天英语 traffic department should strengthen management 【对点练】 to make the parents obey traffic rules.On the I,用过渡性词汇补全句子 other hand,our school should appeal to us 1.(2022·全国乙卷书面表达) students to walk or ride a bike to and from (首先)，l8%of the students prefer to read school,which is not only friendly to our traffic English books. (其次)，listening to environment but also is good for students' English songs is the most popular way.65%of health. the students consider it as their favorite way in 【分析】本段作者使用“In my opinion, English learning. (然后)，half of the the problem can be solved from two aspects." students view watching English movies as the 作主题句，其中from two aspects让读者明白作 most effective way to practice English. 者提供了两个方面的建议，并以on the one (而且)，12%of the students choose to hand,on the other hand进行说明。这些过渡 visit English-learning websites when enhancing 性词语和过渡句的恰当使用，使文章语言连贯、 English skills. 过渡自然、浑然一体。 2.(2021·全国甲卷书面表达) 2.(话题：去美国学习英语询问具体问题) (据我所知)，traditional Chinese culture, I'm concerned with how far it is from the host including paper-cutting,guzheng and so on, family to my school.I'm wondering whether a has its unique characteristics. (比如)， Chinese knots are a symbol of good luck and private bedroom will be offered to me.I tend to best wishes. (而且)，guzheng is of know if there are any special customs that I great significance to Chinese folk music leading should pay attention to.Would you please give you to a fantastic world of music. (最 me some more suggestions on how to get along 后)，I am strongly eager to know which well with the host family?I'm sure your advice aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse will benefit me a lot. your curiosity most. Firstly,I'm concerned with how far it is 3.(2020·全国卷I书面表达) from the host family to my school.Secondly, (首先)，he is good at English,for he has lived I'm wondering whether a private bedroom will in Detroit for half a year as an exchange be offered to me.Furthermore,I tend to know student. (此外)，no one can deny he if there are any special customs that I should gets along well with all our classmates,enjoy a pay attention to.Last but not least,would you harmonious interpersonal relationship and is please give me some more suggestions on how always ready to help others. (最后但 to get along well with the host family?I'm 也是最重要的是)，he has a lot of life sure your advice will benefit me a lot. experience,considering that he has been 【分析】本段作者使用了firstly, serving as a vice monitor for many years. secondly,furthermore,last but not least,使文 Hopefully,I could become an outstanding 章层次清晰连贯，彰显了作者的语言功底。 person like Li Hua. 188 第三部分题型策略篇 4.(2019·全国卷I书面表达) 4. in order to protect us (首先)，I'm a big fan of traditional Chinese students,5. we should strengthen paintings (因此)，I am capable of our security awareness.6. when offering visitors detailed explanations on the accidents occur,we should calm down and turn stories of famous Chinese painters. to teachers or parents for help.The government 5. (一方面)，they can sweep the also plays a leading role in protecting students. tombs for the dead. (另一方面)，they 7. only by the combined efforts of can go for a walk in the country in spring when every side involved can we live and study in the grass has just turned green. harmony. 6. (总之)，success is important, Ⅲ.请在下面的段落内加上适当的词语或 and so is failure,because it's the mother of 句子，以充实文章 success (2019·全国卷I书面表达)（话题：申请成 Ⅱ.阅读下面短文，从方框中选择适当的过 为伦敦一家美术馆举办中国画展览的志愿者) 渡性词语填空 1. having lived in China for 近来，中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识这一 sixteen years and having learnt English since I 问题备受关注，请你用英语写一篇短文： was a child,I have a good command of English 1.概括中学生懂得自我保护的重要性； and Chinese,2. Besides, 2.就如何保护自己谈谈你的看法（至少 3. I can get foreigners and the 两点)。 locals to know more about them.4. above all,besides,meanwhile,for one I think I am qualified to be a volunteer. thing,for another thing,personally,in a 四、详加描述 word 详加描述是常见的“增加细节”的方法，这 Recently,it has been a great public 可以使文章词数达标、内容充实、结构连贯、语 concern that the students lack self-protection 意顺畅。根据提示要求，首先确定主要点和次 awareness. 要点，然后在主要点上着笔泼墨。除了前面提 There is a lack of social experience among 到的采用“追加成分”以扩展句子的方式外，还 students and therefore learning how to protect 可把一些主要点分开详述，从而提升这些要点 ourselves is of great significance to us all. 的分量。 1. security comes first.Without 【典例】 security,we can achieve nothing and cannot 下面是一位考生的习作，请进行修改，以充 live up to parents'expectations.2. 实文章、突出主题 protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy 家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“我理 development of us students,which is 想的大学生活”，请根据下列要求和你的畅想完 associated with the happiness of every family. 成短文。 3. it also helps to build a more 1.专业与课程； harmonious society. 2.老师与同学； 189 艺术生文化课考前100天英语 3.学校活动。 broaden my horizons.In addition,I'll have 注意：1.词数80左右； lovely and caring classmates.We'll compete in 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； our study and be close friends in our daily life.In 3.开头语已给出，不计人总词数。 our free time,various activities will be held to I often imagine what my life will be like in build up our courage and experience,such as my dream university. parties and competitions. I'm sure my college life will be rich and colorful. 【分析】修改后的文章篇幅适中(120词)， 【考生习作】（得分7分） 要点齐全、内容充实、语言丰富、句式多样、行文 I often imagine what my life will be like in 连贯，而且详略得当、主题突出。文中“详加描 my dream university.I'll be admitted to Peking 述”合情合理（见加黑部分），尤其是最后一句与 University and major in English.I can choose a 文章首句照应，结构显得非常紧凑。 variety of courses,such as English Literature. 【对点练】 The professors there will be friendly and I,下面是一位考生的习作，请进行修改， devoted to their teaching.Besides,I'll have 以充实文章、突出主题 lovely and caring classmates.In our spare time, 目前你们市正在开展骑电动车必须戴头盔 various activities will be held. 的行动。假如你是高中学生李华，你打算给你 【分析】该文虽然把题千中给出的三个要 校英文报投稿，呼吁同学们响应这项行动，内容 点一一列出，结构清晰，还使用了一些高级词 包括： 汇，如be admitted to,a variety of,be devoted 1.电动自行车为何是人们日常生活中最常 t0等。然而由于简单罗列要点，全文只有约70 见且最适用的交通工具； 词，且缺少连贯性，未能完全完成试题规定的 2.为何要开展该项行动； 任务。 3.你的呼吁。 下面是修改完成后的作文，请注意加黑句 注意：1.词数80左右； 子对充实文章、突出主题的作用。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 I often imagine what my life will be like in 参考词汇：减轻mitigate my dream university.As far as I can imagine, 【考生习作】 I'll be admitted to Peking University,where Dear Fellow Students, I'll major in English.I can choose a variety of As we all know,the electric bike is the courses,which will help me improve my spoken most commonly used and the most practical English and have a better understanding of traffic tool for most people in their life. foreign cultures. The purpose of the campaign is to mitigate The professors there will be friendly and the consequence of such a traffic accident and devoted to their teaching,with whose help not reduce the death rate in an accident. only can I enrich my knowledge but also I can I appeal to all our students to wear 190 第三部分题型策略篇 helmets for the safety of themselves and other paintings.More importantly,I consider it a people. good chance to spread Chinese culture and Yours sincerely, develop my ability.So I think I am highly Li Hua qualified for the job. [升格作文] Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua [升格作文] Ⅱ.下面是一位考生的习作，请进行修改， 以充实文章、突出主题 (2019·全国卷I书面表达改编)假定你是 李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办 板块三 升级词汇和句式 中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容 一、升级高级词汇 包括： 1.写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到 1.写信目的： 的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。 2.个人优势； DI am very glad to hear from you. 3.能做的事情。 I am exceedingly delighted to hear from 注意：1.词数80左右： you.(全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)》 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2My job application form and personal 3.结束语已为你写好。 resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me correct them. -My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them,(全国卷I书面 Yours, 表达) Li Hua 3I should be free any time after school [考生习作们 next week. Dear Sir/Madam, I should be available any time after I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from school next week.(全国卷Ⅲ书面表达) China.I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer of 2.写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词 the exhibition of traditional Chinese paintings 语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。 at the local art museum. 用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。 First of all,I am greatly interested in DOn hearing the news,some of my 191